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    Fate/Big Brother Complex

    Well, here's what we were talking about. For those who don't know, go here and read the next few pages.

    Only the teaser for now, since I want to put something up tonight. I am still working on the first part of the actual story, though.

    However be warned, I foresee smallish updates and longish amounts of time between them. Everything that people hate, in other words! So without further ado...



    *commences blatant near-plagiarism of KnK 6 intro*




    I, Kokutou Azaka, am a 16 year old magus apprentice.

    I have a brother named Kokutou Mikiya, a master named Aozaki Touko, and a rival in love named Ryougi Shiki.

    I'm what you would call a troubled young lady. I'm going to explain myself so there won't be any misunderstandigs. I'm not troubled by the fact that I love my own brother. I seriously love Kokutou Mikiya to the point where I can't believe it myself. I got adopted by my uncle, entered a boarding school called Reien, and lived away from Mikiya so he woudl forget about me being his younger sister.

    So there's only one problem I'm facing right now. It's that woman who came barging in and took my prize! I need to get that woman to break up with Mikiya as fast as possible and get him away from dangerous things. I even became an apprentice magus so I could match her mentally and physically and become her rival.

    This is a story about such an admirable girl: Me, and my quest to prove once and for all that I'm the only one for Mikiya.

    This is the story of the 5th Holy Grail War!



    Index

    Prologue:
    Part 1
    Part 2
    Part 3
    Part 4
    Part 5
    Part 6
    Part 7
    Part 8

    Chapter 1:
    Part 1
    Part 2

    FFN Link

    Various Pics:
    Alternate/Prologue Cover Pic

    Archerko's outfit



    Shirou's Servant
    Last edited by Spooky; February 19th, 2014 at 02:17 AM.

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    What monstrosity have you unleashed on the world!

    Big brother run in fear for Taboo GIrl is here!

    Anyway nice prologue.

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    Oh mother of all fuck. This will be awesome. Or she'll fall to the BAR, like so many before her. Either way, fuck yes.
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    says the hater, you keep on hating, i'll be around ignoring your invalid, incorrect opinion.
    [18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.
    [18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
    [16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafreak7793 View Post
    What monstrosity have you unleashed on the world!

    Big brother run in fear for Taboo GIrl is here!

    Anyway nice prologue.
    Prologue, hahahahahahaha. I only wrote like one sentence in that myself, lol.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neir View Post
    Oh mother of all fuck. This will be awesome. Or she'll fall to the BAR, like so many before her. Either way, fuck yes.
    Screw Mikiya, I have the bone of my sword?

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    The big question is... Will Archerko try to beat out the other girls, or form them into a harem? The Sword Dancer Doujinshi tend to portray her as Bi, and she was trying to get Saber AND Shirou at the same time. 8D

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    She'll try to bag her master and the enemy master (aka Shirou) and since both of them are sort of taboo Azaka might accept the foursome (if you include saber)

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    >:3
    McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
    My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.



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    I like where this is going...
    Quote Originally Posted by lantzblades View Post
    says the hater, you keep on hating, i'll be around ignoring your invalid, incorrect opinion.
    [18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.
    [18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
    [16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafreak7793 View Post
    (if you include saber)
    Lolololol, you don't know of what you speak.

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    Is he, since archerko and azaka will disrupt the original story a bunch of new things will happen.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mangafreak7793 View Post
    Is he, since archerko and azaka will disrupt the original story a bunch of new things will happen.
    Including Lancer's crush on Archerko. This promises to be an... entertaining Grail War >:3

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    Archerko you say?



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    Damn it, Randy Savage

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    Most of that was shamelessly ripped from the opening of KnK 6, but...it has my interest regardless.

    ...will Fujinon be making an appearance?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neir View Post
    I like where this is going...
    Fuyuki? Me too.

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    Quote Originally Posted by alfheimwanderer View Post
    Most of that was shamelessly ripped from the opening of KnK 6, but...it has my interest regardless.
    Yep, as I flat out admitted!

    ...will Fujinon be making an appearance?
    Hmm, probably not, but I haven't really thought about that.

    EDIT: Went back and added a title picture. Damn, I forgot how long pic editing takes.
    Last edited by Spooky; May 22nd, 2011 at 03:51 AM.

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    This is going to be gooooooooooooooooooooooooooood.

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