*claps*
My my, I rather enjoyed this.
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My my, I rather enjoyed this.
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Glad you enjoyed. ^^
Honestly, I was nervous about bringing this fic over. I wasn't sure how it would be received. I'm even debating if I should put it up on FF.net at this rate.
That was very nice. But the thought of a Shirou/Sakura/Rin love triangle makes me sad.
A Shirou/Sakura/Rin threesome on the other hand...
This was excellently written. Very nice. And even better before the Mikestorm.
[18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.Originally Posted by lantzblades
[18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
[16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?
He already gave his opinion of it on AS, so I doubt he'll bring it up again. He's made it clear he doesn't like the story and doesn't think it would ever happen. XD
its great. bittersweet is bitter but sweet. I like those stories.
and this is where it gets worse....
and I seem to be becoming a fan of unrequited love(or NTR I think, im not sure of the term). or at least where love has an obstacle that will remain forever even if they do break through.
AS much as I like ShirouxRin I felt the same as Theocrass. It's beautiful, and very well-written, but Sakura doesn't deserve this so...
*tackle hug the group*
HU~~GS!
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Yeah, that's basically how I think about it. I don't see it happening (neither Rin nor Shirou would do such a thing) and I dislike the way it describes her as the "light" to Sakura's "dark".
that was an interesting read.
....A Shirou/Sakura/Rin threesome on the other hand...
Don't tempt me to continue this, I swear.
Bad Ends for all!
YAY! *HUGS FOR ALL**tackle hug the group*
HU~~GS!
Meh, don't think on it too deeply. It was just a line I put in to keep up with the whole theme of Rin sort of being like sunlight, to Shirou, in comparison to Sakura, who would probably be, at my best guess, the equivalent of moonlight. Or something. I don't know.
Basically, throwaway line is throwaway, don't let it bug you too much.
How about that any light from the moon is just reflected from the sun?
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But 4 srs, liked it. Bring over any other stuff you got.
[18:00] Spinach: Because I don't like Saber's personality but boy oh boy does she make my dick turn to diamonds when I see her getting tentacled.
[18:01] Leo: feeling superior to EU makes me hard
[16:16] <Bloble> Drakengard? Is that a rhythm game?
I dont think a threesome can work in this fic.
since its aimed to be kinda bittersweet and dramatic.
you can start it in a diff fic though.
And?
It's quite possible for the "tone" of a fic to change between chapters.
Personally, though, I don't much like the idea of a threesome post-HF, and I don't see it forming very easily due to Sakura's insecurities (which will vanish over time, but probably rather slowly). But, then again, I'd quite happily see one post-UBW, and I'm sure Rin fans would be equally opposed to that, so....
As Mike said, it would be easy enough to change the tone of the piece and make it work from there. I could even do a timeskip after this particular point and develop the possibility if it's obvious Rin and Shirou are doing their damned best to avoid each other after the whole thing, but are still attracted to each other.
Considering it's two years or so post-HF and Shirou went through hell and back for her, I'm sort of assuming that if Sakura still has any insecurities over the matter, they've either vanished or have become rather small, especially if she's been getting outside help to guide her in dealing with the abuse she suffered at Shinji's hands for so many years. I definitely see her in the beginning maybe not being completely willing at the thought, but the more she thinks about it, the more appealing it seems, or whatever.
I was thinking of something like this, but not only did you beat me too it, but the emotional ambiance was better presented too. Excellent piece in any event, and perhaps I should get back to restarting mine.
Not sure about that, it is not really a facet of being "considerate" by sharing your lover. Even Rin was jealous of Saber a little in UBW Good.
Besides, this 'just happened', these feelings discussed, nor was it forewarned. And now they have some to be secretive over. This is a totally different situation from a willing threesome. What you are looking at would be more of a reluctant compromise.
That would be hypocritical. No one should be forced to compromise in a situation like that.But, then again, I'd quite happily see one post-UBW, and I'm sure Rin fans would be equally opposed to that, so....
Doubtful, and this isn't me saying it could never happen, but at the situation they have here. Sure, Sakura will e stronger now, but if she did agree to it(which has a good chance to not happen), you can be sure that she would do it purely for Shirou and Rin, and still feel like the third wheel imo. Like the feelings Shirou seems to be expressing here, it seems like Sakura just "wasn't enough", there was a shining beacon of awesome he just had to get. That is what it kinda sounded like. Not to rain on the parade, but the likely way she'd feel about it is that she couldn't really capture his heart. It's easy to contemplate multiple partnerships, but harder to view them from a realistic viewpoint.Considering it's two years or so post-HF and Shirou went through hell and back for her, I'm sort of assuming that if Sakura still has any insecurities over the matter, they've either vanished or have become rather small, especially if she's been getting outside help to guide her in dealing with the abuse she suffered at Shinji's hands for so many years. I definitely see her in the beginning maybe not being completely willing at the thought, but the more she thinks about it, the more appealing it seems, or whatever.
Though yes, it is very well written,the question is, how do the two explain themselves? Plus, how did Rider feel about it? A load of questions. *grins*
"Fate/stay night: not really an eroge, and not really a cooking sim, but actually an RPG wherein everyone’s primary stat is “self-loathing” and the goal is to level it up beyond all the other characters."
You know how this is solved?
Find some way to summon Archer and give him to Rin.
Now everyone's happy.
Too bad SUPERJUSTICA!Illya's dead. :<
/not sure what he meant by this post, nor is he entirely that serious about what he wrote
My Fanfics. Read 'em. Or not.McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
Except Rin's fans. Being paired with Archer is a punishment for characters you hate, remember?
I think you've mistaken Archer for Shinji. It's okay, we still love you.
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