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    For no reason, eh? :3
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    The voice acting is nice enough to get parts.

    The art however can do with some work, for the lineart stage, I think.

    I wouldn't hire whoever did the UI/color arrangement, but that's just because living in a mobile phone era, we've become spoiled with simple yet luxurious UI.

    I'm not a writer and I don't know anything about stories so I'm not going to comment on that part. It's good enough, I suppose.

    All in all, this is damn nice stuff for a fanmade.

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    To all the people who have critiqued the prologue and given us comments on areas to improve: Thanks for the reviews!
    Our lil team is completely amaterurish and when we begun this we had very little idea of what we were doing. we have learned a lot from this project and of course, we will continue to improve the art, UI and those pesky sound glitches and volumes.

    Now that we've begun working on the common route, I've started working on new sprites (which I showed in some previous posts)
    Here's a little timeline to show how much my art style/level has changed throughout this year.
    We will hopefully re-release the prologue with new sprites and updated visual effects. Just not soon welp.

    But looking at the sprites' change hrough thiss year is a little surprising even for me haha



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    Looks super good man, good luck.
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    Yup, that looks really good. You've improved a damn lot.

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    Wow, that progression is amazing!
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    I agree, that's some amazing progression. I wish you guys well!
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    I almost like the 2nd to last drawing more, but I'd have to see the newest one in game.

    Still, great art!
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    I finally took the time to go through the prologue recently, it certainly surpassed my expectations of a fan project.

    The new sprites look really good too, keep going!
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    Out of curiosity, are you still accepting writers?

    And are there still Servant slots to be filled? If so, I have an idea...

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