Originally Posted by
EDreamer
Well, I took a quick look at the chapter 2 scanlation, and it requires barely any modifications, so I decided to go ahead and do it right away. Here are the changes:
-The title is “#2–Day 2 / Omen” on page 1 and page 4-5. Ignore all the side text from the magazine version.
-On page 18 when Shirou is talking to Ayako, the small speech bubble should say “Ah, it’s about Shinji...”
-On page 23 when Shirou is looking for Sakura, the thought at the end is incomplete. It should say “I’ll just see if Sakura’s feeling any better.”
-On page 34 when Sakura is recounting the past, there is an incomplete sentence. It should says “and trying again every time the pole fell.”
-On page 35, there is a missing word in one of Shirou’s sentences, “to”. It should say “The normal thing to do would have been to move the pole down a notch...”
-On page 36, the first sentence is missing “been”. It should say “he should have been exhausted”.
-On page 41, in the last sentence, it should be “is it”, not “it is”.
-On the second to last page, change Gilgamesh’s lines to “Die now while you still can, girl. // Once you become familiar with it, even death will be lost to you—”