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    Fixing DEEN FSN

    As a person who has not watched DEEN FSN I was curious, if you were to cut out all the UBW and HF merging content would you still have a coherent story and if so, how decent of an adaptation could you make of the DEEN adaptation. Also, what else should be cut from DEEN FSN to improve overall quality of the show? What's beyond saving?

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    Nothing needs to be removed, you just need more Night of Fate.
    Ragnarok, come day of wrath
    That fallen souls might bear our plea.
    To hasten the Divine's return.
    O piteous Wanderer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Siriel View Post
    Nothing needs to be removed, you just need more Night of Fate.
    While I will admit that song is awesome, this disagrees with you.


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    Please explain the issue with it.
    Ragnarok, come day of wrath
    That fallen souls might bear our plea.
    To hasten the Divine's return.
    O piteous Wanderer.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Skyler View Post
    While I will admit that song is awesome, this disagrees with you.

    almost suicide pic
    ....That dagger can't cut shit.
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    She almost solved the entire HF route's conflict right there!

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    I honestly didn't have any problems with the inclusion of some of content from the other routes, since it was mostly to give Rin and Sakura more characterization than "the mage that helps out and has no real reason to stick around" and "that girl that comes over sometimes." It was more the fact that Shirou comes across as a two-dimensional character (which to some extent ufo FSN still suffers from) and a lot of the visuals were generic and didn't quite carry the weight of what was going on (Servant fights besides Saber vs Assassin were boring, Excaliblast is lame). The atmosphere is still good, the music is good, and it told the story itself adequately, if not spectacularly.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    She almost solved the entire HF route's conflict right there!
    If only that dagger wasn't so shit.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    I honestly didn't have any problems with the inclusion of some of content from the other routes, since it was mostly to give Rin and Sakura more characterization than "the mage that helps out and has no real reason to stick around" and "that girl that comes over sometimes." It was more the fact that Shirou comes across as a two-dimensional character (which to some extent ufo FSN still suffers from) and a lot of the visuals were generic and didn't quite carry the weight of what was going on (Servant fights besides Saber vs Assassin were boring, Excaliblast is lame). The atmosphere is still good, the music is good, and it told the story itself adequately, if not spectacularly.
    A lot of monologues would've solved both adaption's problems.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost132435 View Post
    If only that dagger wasn't so shit.
    Well, we know that dagger is for poking, not cutting.

    But even a poke would have solved it all!

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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    Well, we know that dagger is for poking, not cutting.

    But even a poke would have solved it all!
    Avenger would've been banished from her soul!
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    Just watch KNK, read fate and tsuki then just never bother with another nasu thing again but continue to use BL regardless.

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    Obviously I come from a bit of a position of ignorance, but Fate route is plenty crowded with it's own things without trying to shoehorn in UBW or HF plot points and spoilers. Fate plays out more or less as a straight up Grail War with a few twists that get you a good feel of the land for the more rule breaker UBW and HF routes. Keeping it simple and focusing on quality seems like how a Fate route should go down. Also I heard that internal monologues were poorly adapted over, so Shirou just comes off as a total retard without the interal characterization that made him interesting in the VN.

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    I like the DEEN anime for what it is. No need for any changes.

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    That being said, I am completely fine with development of characters but they should be handled in a manner that isn't just doing copy-pasta from other routes

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    Yes but as a medium in which you have to maintain pace, episodes of Shirou talking inside his own head would be drastically boring. ufo UBW has pacing problems by including some of that, and if they did even more then boy would it be a slow show on top of already being relatively slow in the first season.

    Fate may have things to cover, but they're mostly internal things. If you cut out the bloated amount of exposition, it really wouldn't be surprising to see it cut all the way down to a single-cour show. Making Caster a viable threat and using the UBW material for her appearance really isn't that bad, especially in making Shirou look a little more pro-active as a protagonist, giving Rin and Sakura something of an arc, paying off the Assassin-Saber rivalry, and not making Caster's appearance the anticlimax of "and then Gil shows up and stabs her." All of which Fate does not do.

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    Gotta finish that one of these days.

    I just stopped watching after it got weird.

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    Quote Originally Posted by mewarmo990 View Post
    Gotta finish that one of these days.

    I just stopped watching after it got weird.
    Sakura bondage weird or extremely convoluted weird?
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    As others have said, the DEEN anime's main problems are more in presentation and characterization.

    FSN's three routes are not really meant to be stand alone. You get characters who get painfully minor roles in some routes who get greatly expanded on in others. The DEEN anime gives all servants some time for you to get to know them. If you're only going to adapt one route (or make it one route with edits), some of the value of the story is lost.

    Look at Rider in Ufo!UBW for example. She pops in, and is gone, in a matter of 2-3 episodes. You never learn of her. She seem like little more than a villain of the week, if not less than one.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janx View Post
    As others have said, the DEEN anime's main problems are more in presentation and characterization.

    FSN's three routes are not really meant to be stand alone. You get characters who get painfully minor roles in some routes who get greatly expanded on in others. The DEEN anime gives all servants some time for you to get to know them. If you're only going to adapt one route (or make it one route with edits), some of the value of the story is lost.

    Look at Rider in Ufo!UBW for example. She pops in, and is gone, in a matter of 2-3 episodes. You never learn of her. She seem like little more than a villain of the week, if not less than one.
    Her neck spun right round baby right round baby.....I'll go to the corner.
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    Just watch KNK, read fate and tsuki then just never bother with another nasu thing again but continue to use BL regardless.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost132435 View Post
    Her neck spun right round baby right round baby.....I'll go to the corner.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Ghost132435 View Post
    Sakura bondage weird or extremely convoluted weird?
    It was one of the best things that ever come out of the DEEN anime.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Renko View Post
    Hehehehe!

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    It was one of the best things that ever come out of the DEEN anime.
    Sakura isn't into bondage though.....But Saber is!
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    Quote Originally Posted by black1blade View Post
    Just watch KNK, read fate and tsuki then just never bother with another nasu thing again but continue to use BL regardless.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dullahan View Post
    I hope you love purple prose, pretentious dialogue and oblique references to Hegelian philosophy too motherfucker 'cause that's what's up

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