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    I knew we got along so well for a reason.
    Mutual non-exploitation spiced with evil laughter. The basis of any bizarre friendship. XD

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    This was depressing and excellent.

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    Glad you enjoyed!

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    I can appreciate a good tragedy and how it messes with the characters involved. Ergo, I appreciate this.
    McJon01: We all know that the real reason Archer would lose to Rider is because the events of his own Holy Grail War left him with a particular weakness toward "older sister" types.
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    Y-You're a cruel, cruel person RB. ;~;

    And after I made you an avatar too.

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    Pfft, you won't get me the second time RB! My soul, it feels nothing! *puffs out chest*

    *walks out*





    *sobs outside*



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    There, there. *Hugs Altima.*

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    Finished my first final.


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    Very nice. Sakura's smile at the end was a good touch.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    Another old short of mine, imported from ASuki because I enjoy punching people right where it hurts: the soul. A short piece focused on Rin during the infamous Mind of Steel/Superhero ending, while Kirei and Shirou have their conversation.

    (Yes, most of my pieces are about Rin. This seems to be a trend.)

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    Her hands are shaking.

    Dimly, Rin can hear muffled voices behind her as she makes her way into the small room; it seems Kirei has come out to keep Shirou company. She is sure they are saying something important, something she should pause and listen to, because deep down she knows she needs to understand this new Shirou, grasp what makes him tick, if she wants to win the War.

    If you want to live.

    But that isn’t important right now, and she keeps walking.

    The room in the back, the place that serves as Kirei’s home within the church, seems laughably small at the moment when compared to the place that houses it. Rin closes the door behind her without a sound, pauses, and locks it behind her.

    The sound of the lock clicking into place rings in her head like a gunshot.

    “Rin.”

    Archer’s voice is soft, right by her ear, but she ignores him. On the bed, she sleeps; Matou Sakura is blissfully unaware of the fate that awaits her. There is some small, small comfort in that; at least right now, she has no idea of what is coming.

    How the man she loved betrayed her.

    How the sister she idolized will kill her.

    “Rin.”

    Archer’s hand is on her shoulder now. She ignores the warm, rough weight of it, stopping beside the bed. For a long moment, she gazes down at her sleeping sister. Her vision blurs, her throat burns, and she has to swallow hard, hastily swiping at her eyes so the tears won’t fall, won’t wake Sakura.

    “Rin.”

    When her hand lowers, her eyes are cold, focused. The Crest in her arm bursts to life, brilliant sparks of light blue against the red of her sweater. “Be quiet, Archer.” Her voice is tight, pained; she sounds on the verge of tears, even as she composes herself.

    Archer’s hand falls away. The loss of it allows her to focus.

    The knife is in her hand before she can think, but her arm won’t move. She simply stares at the younger girl, as if trying to memorize every piece of her, as if she is trying to burn this moment into her memory so that even in death, she can never escape it.

    After a moment, she presses the knife against Sakura’s throat. For an instant, she thinks she feels the younger girl stiffen.

    She trembles.

    The tears are falling again, and she can’t even feel them. She lowers her head; black hair spills around both of them like a curtain, as if to briefly shield them from the world. She presses a soft, warm kiss to Sakura’s forehead as she sobs.

    “I’m sorry, Sakura. I’m so, so sorry.”

    For just an instant, she can swear she sees the younger girl smile.

    It just makes her cry harder.

    She kills her sister in a single motion, and when Sakura dies, Rin’s heart dies with her.




    BAD END





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    T_T

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    Rin: I was always considered heartless. *trollface.jpg*


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    Quote Originally Posted by Radiantbeam View Post
    Well, it depends on how much you like Rin. Because Rin will not be very happy in chapter 5.
    Well, it's going to be heartwarming in the end, and most of it's been heartwarming. Unlike this fic, which is just... *cries*

    And, yes, I can feel for Rin a little, although I feel a lot more for Sakura. The whole situation is just tragic, and even if Rin doesn't need to make that decision, it's still horrible that she feels that she does, and goes through with it despite what her heart is telling her.

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    Hey, Archer was trying to stop her, just Rin didn't listen and he ultimately didn't try hard enough.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elf View Post
    Hey, Archer was trying to stop her, just Rin didn't listen and he ultimately didn't try hard enough.
    I never claimed he didn't....

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    Quote Originally Posted by Techlology View Post
    Finished my first final.

    There, there. Your soul will recover in time.

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    Very nice. Sakura's smile at the end was a good touch.
    I like twisting the knife.

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    BAD END





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    I would like to visit the Tiger Dojo!

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    Look to my review, you soul crushing witch you.

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    I would like to visit the Tiger Dojo!
    Welcome to my BDSM torture club. Oh, you wanted Tiger Dojo? That was my trap.... oh well... *closes door and locks it*


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    Quote Originally Posted by Keyne View Post
    Welcome to my BDSM torture club. Oh, you wanted Tiger Dojo? That was my trap.... oh well... *closes door and locks it*
    Hey, I wanna help

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