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    Mind of Steel (Rin, HF Superhero ending)

    Another old short of mine, imported from ASuki because I enjoy punching people right where it hurts: the soul. A short piece focused on Rin during the infamous Mind of Steel/Superhero ending, while Kirei and Shirou have their conversation.

    (Yes, most of my pieces are about Rin. This seems to be a trend.)

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    Her hands are shaking.

    Dimly, Rin can hear muffled voices behind her as she makes her way into the small room; it seems Kirei has come out to keep Shirou company. She is sure they are saying something important, something she should pause and listen to, because deep down she knows she needs to understand this new Shirou, grasp what makes him tick, if she wants to win the War.

    If you want to live.

    But that isn’t important right now, and she keeps walking.

    The room in the back, the place that serves as Kirei’s home within the church, seems laughably small at the moment when compared to the place that houses it. Rin closes the door behind her without a sound, pauses, and locks it behind her.

    The sound of the lock clicking into place rings in her head like a gunshot.

    “Rin.”

    Archer’s voice is soft, right by her ear, but she ignores him. On the bed, she sleeps; Matou Sakura is blissfully unaware of the fate that awaits her. There is some small, small comfort in that; at least right now, she has no idea of what is coming.

    How the man she loved betrayed her.

    How the sister she idolized will kill her.

    “Rin.”

    Archer’s hand is on her shoulder now. She ignores the warm, rough weight of it, stopping beside the bed. For a long moment, she gazes down at her sleeping sister. Her vision blurs, her throat burns, and she has to swallow hard, hastily swiping at her eyes so the tears won’t fall, won’t wake Sakura.

    “Rin.”

    When her hand lowers, her eyes are cold, focused. The Crest in her arm bursts to life, brilliant sparks of light blue against the red of her sweater. “Be quiet, Archer.” Her voice is tight, pained; she sounds on the verge of tears, even as she composes herself.

    Archer’s hand falls away. The loss of it allows her to focus.

    The knife is in her hand before she can think, but her arm won’t move. She simply stares at the younger girl, as if trying to memorize every piece of her, as if she is trying to burn this moment into her memory so that even in death, she can never escape it.

    After a moment, she presses the knife against Sakura’s throat. For an instant, she thinks she feels the younger girl stiffen.

    She trembles.

    The tears are falling again, and she can’t even feel them. She lowers her head; black hair spills around both of them like a curtain, as if to briefly shield them from the world. She presses a soft, warm kiss to Sakura’s forehead as she sobs.

    “I’m sorry, Sakura. I’m so, so sorry.”

    For just an instant, she can swear she sees the younger girl smile.

    It just makes her cry harder.

    She kills her sister in a single motion, and when Sakura dies, Rin’s heart dies with her.

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    ...thankfully I lack a soul, or this would have killed it.
    Everything I say is a lie.
    LIKE A KING


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    She doesn't kill the soul. She just punches it.

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    Killing the soul is no fun. I just enjoy hurting it.

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    Sad#.

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    I'd forgotten this one - I liked it, but then, I have a taste for the tragic. *shrugs*

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    Glad you liked it, and it's fine if you have a taste for the tragic. I seem to have a talent for writing it, so it fits well together.

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    You remain one of a handful of writers, professional or fan, who has ever made me cry. It wasn't this particular story, but... it came closer than I care to admit. ^^;;;;

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    You've told me. ^^;;;;;

    I don't really mean to be tragic. It's just something I seem to be good at writing.

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    We all have our niche. Yours just happens to be taking the soul and hurting it. Hurting it bad. XD

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    The soul is strong enough to recover. XD

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    Just in time for your next story. XD

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    Exactly. XD

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    ... ... ... well, at least you admit it. That counts for something. XD

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    I see no reason to deny the obvious. XD

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    You're such a considerate Flayer of Souls. XD

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    Okay, this is not something to read before my first final. ;~;

    If I fail, you have to take responsibility!

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    I'm sorry if you fail the final because of this short. D:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Techlology View Post
    Okay, this is not something to read before my first final. ;~;

    If I fail, you have to take responsibility!
    You won't fail. You will be strengthened by grief, and your mind will grow from the trauma. That which does not kill you, and all that.

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    Hey, I'm not that bad. ^^;;;;

    ...

    Am I?

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