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    Quote Originally Posted by Imperial View Post
    Thank you for saying so

    Who knows? The story proper might be dead, but I may try to repackage these ideas somewhere down the road. Most of my pitches are chimeras in the first place, cobbled together from other story seeds with themes I already wanted to explore.
    Yeah, I definitely wouldn't throw the ideas away. You might find a way to utilize them in this next project of yours.

    Though, like Vagrant posted, it's a shame. But, such is life. Good luck on the next one.

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    When I think about the wastehole of the unsalvageable that is the Ermelo dime novel series, distinct areas of squandered potential stand out. The debasement of the magus and magical institutions as foundational concepts is a big one, but it's not what rustles my jimmies the most. That would be how El Melloi II's preexisting character which informed his depiction in Volume 1 was swiftly discarded, his conflicts and motivations excised, his major plot thread swept under the rug so that a toothless caricature could fit the insipid role assigned to it. I can easily understand how 10 years of writing 17 novels would yield no tangible progress in developing the main characters, as that is expected of light novel slop, and the ultimate provenance of the drivel the writer spews is as irrelevant as the ideas themselves. I find the refusal to engage in meaningful dialogue with the source material on the matter of its most pivotal and plot-essential character to be more indicative of the writer's priorities, as a result of which the protagonist of Elmo's world tour is by now a completely different character from Lord El Melloi II. Which I think, if you're writing a fanfic, is a bad thing.

    After this diatribe I'm sure you're tingling with excitement for my enlightened interpretation of the character, but I'm afraid that was just the standard Sanda shittalk quota. Recent conversations on the novels reminded me of an old RP character, which then reminded me that I wanted to use him in a grail dismantlement type fanfic thing but with Actual Payoff to the what-we-leave-behind emotional baggage of the Fuyuki wars, which finally reminded me that life is too short to sustain delusions of writing fateshit in 2024. So instead I'll dump it here.

    Things to consider on the outset:
    >Waver Velvet is bound to serve Reines Archisorte until material reparations have been made for the loss of Lord El-Melloi's magic crest and estate
    >Lord El-Melloi II is a highly influential figure who commands the loyalty of powerful up-and-coming figures in the Clock Tower
    >Waver Velvet remains ambitious as a magus, and therefore resentful of his current role
    >Reines Archisorte is a born-and-bred aristo and a nasty piece of work
    >If you've got a competent person coerced to work for you, it would be a waste to just let them walk away
    >Solve for politics, feelings of inferiority and resentment, and the very brief trend of Reines/Waver A/B/O porn

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    There was a longstanding joke which always seemed to find its place in the banter of affiliates to the Clock Tower and its 12th Department in particular. A kind of jest which did not in itself contain a humorous quality so much as reflect a reality so bizarre that its mere reminder was entertaining in itself, and one so enduring that it passed through the lips of students, faculty, and alumni past and present without any alteration in either its content or its accuracy. An in-joke if there ever was one, and a perennial feature which in a way contributed to the dynamics of the Department and the sense of identity of its members.

    In short, it asserted that for all his idiosyncratic pride and prickly demeanour, the only difference between Lord El-Melloi II, eminent lecturer and head of Norwich, and the Volumen Hydrargyrum, the prized mystic code developed by his predecessor, was that the former did not wear a maid's outfit. In all other respects they were equally subservient to the whims of their master, the Lady Archisorte.

    The details of how the Lord reconstructed the ruined El-Melloi estate are not known to the general public, yet the understanding among the participants in the Clock Tower's infamous rumour mill was that a debt had been invoked by the heiress to the fortune of the late Kayneth Archibald against the man that she had deemed responsible for his untimely passing. This obligation was thought to be the source of the newly dubbed Lord El-Melloi II's perpetual state of consternation; the man had been chained to the title until the monumental task of restoring the family's lost fortune was achieved, or so the rumour went.

    Years went by in this manner, and the El-Melloi classroom's fame grew as it flourished under his guidance. Through fortuitous and peculiar circumstances it came to pass that even the Archibald family's magic crest was pieced together at great expense, with centuries of accumulated work thought forever lost coming into the hands of the unlikely heiress, now finally poised to assume the mantle of lordship and claim her legacy. When the Lord El-Melloi II passed over his title to Reines El-Melloi Archisorte, it was thought that the man had finally fulfilled the promises that bound him to her. Certainly he must have thought so himself. Alas, his habit of underestimating his former pupil was also the stuff of Clock Tower legend.

    Lady El-Melloi had once lost everything; it was natural that she was not in the habit of letting go of what she owned. And if the ties binding Waver Velvet to her were gone, she would simply have to make some new ones.

    After all, he could never really say no to her.
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    Glenn Alexander Velvet

    Scion of the Velvet Family


    Magus. 17 years old. The heir apparent to the former Lord El-Melloi II, the Clock Tower's legendary lecturer. A young man proud of his parentage, yet no prestigious title crowns his name. The root of the contradictions that define Glenn Velvet cannot be traced to a single source. Every single aspect of his life dating back to his conception is rife with ambiguity, the circumstances in which he was raised hiding uncertainty in all filial notions and double meanings behind things others take for granted.

    It is a near certainty that his mother is Lady Reines El-Melloi Archisorte, one of the Clock Tower's twelve ruling Heads, insofar as his father has never outright denied it when asked. It is also a fact that Lady El-Melloi does not have an official heir to the family title, being quite young and relatively new to her position, considering that the length of a magus' lifespan. Nobility is sustained by pedigree, and as such the matter of inheritance is not taken lightly. Many factors pertaining to magical compatibility and potential determine the match that produces the optimal heir to a family's magic crest, not to mention the negotiations necessary to achieve a successful marriage even after a suitable match has been found. It is therefore agreed that although preliminary inquiries are underway, the Lady still has years in front of her before the need becomes pressing. The heir to the name El-Melloi cannot be anything less than perfect, after all. And perfect is not what anyone in aristocratic circles would call a child born from a union with a third generation magus of middling circuit quality, no matter what fame he has otherwise accrued.

    Aristocracy finds roles for those useful to it, so long as they know their place. The Velvet line, of which the former Lord El-Melloi II was the 3rd head, is officially a branch family of the Archisorte, current owners of the prestigious title, and though the latter currently number only one member the division of the two families is crystal clear. Waver Velvet remains a first-class lecturer in charge of managing the classrooms belonging to the El-Melloi, a position that Glenn Velvet aspires to inherit, or at least prove worthy of to begin with. His childhood dream of becoming a Lord, a hope he held since he pieced together the truth about his parentage from the rumours surrounding his father rather than anything the man himself had said, was something he only shared with another person once. The response dissuaded him from putting faith in the possibility that this hope might one day be realised.

    It is not that he did not receive affection from his father. Waver Velvet was a stern and oftentimes unrelenting teacher who had little patience for fools, but the care that underlay his grudging interactions with those under his charge was made apparent when it came to his son. Certainly a man as perceptive as him understood his position, and so he endeavoured to employ the formidable methods which had produced many a prodigy of the Clock Tower in order to create, as he put it, a magus that would render him obsolete. The teachings he imparted, both of a general nature and pertaining to his particular brand of magecraft, found fertile ground in the keen mind of a young man eager to prove himself. Sensing this, Waver Velvet offered to pass on his crest and name Glenn Velvet the new family head not in order to rid himself of the obligation, but to give Glenn the opportunity to prove himself which he so dearly wished for.

    However, the young man did not accept. For all the nurturing and grooming there were seeds of self-doubt deeply embedded into his mind which had only spread their roots as he grew up. His birth was a political move, of that he had no doubt; a means for Reines Archisorte to bind an illustrious and well-respected lecturer to her service even after their personal contract had run its course. Though Waver never spoke of it, the chances that the man who was slandered as a slave to the woman's every whim was a willing part of her schemes were low. No matter how Glenn spun it in his mind, despite the teachings which hammered into his head the tenet that a magus was defined by his own deeds rather than his name or the achievements of his ancestors, his whole life carried on under the shadow of deep-seated doubts.

    Why was he denied his rightful heritage? How could his father stand for having his services repaid with injustice? Was he always intended to be a political tool? Did his parents even see him as anything else? Telling himself again and again that such questions did not matter in the slightest, he continued to dwell on them. For a man of his intellect - for a magus - to be crippled by these emotions was frustrating beyond measure, too proud to voice them to others yet clueless as to how he could resolve them.

    His father, no fountain of emotion himself, refused to speak of the matter, and Glenn knew better than to ask for the one thing that the man who had raised him could not bring himself to give.

    The first time he met his mother, two days after he had been received second-class accreditation - the youngest lecturer to achieve it in decade -- he barely managed to form a coherent question which reflected a fraction of his swirling thoughts. Lady Reines El-Melloi Archisorte merely smiled, patted him on the cheek, and said only this:

    "I knew all that trouble would pay off."

    Glenn did not try to speak with her again. Three weeks later, with the classrooms in holiday recess, he packed his suitcase and booked a ticket to the farthest possible place from London. Officially, it was a vacation. To his acquaintances, it was a breath of fresh air away from the Clock Tower. His father merely got a note informing him of his absence.

    It was only when his feet touched solid ground that Glenn admitted to himself the reason he had come to Japan. The city of Fuyuki was where a young unproven man had once gone through the experiences that would forge one of the greatest lecturers the Clock Tower had ever seen. If there were any answers to be found in the world which would put his doubts to rest - if he was to come into his own as a magus who could take pride in his accomplishments and become a worthy successor to his father - Glenn Alexander Velvet could think of no other place to seek them.


    Ah, but what's a grail dismantlement without the things that by all accounts shouldn't be there? For that we need another old RP character, adding a wish that stirs the ashes of the Fuyuki Grail War, someone who can facilitate and reciprocate the protagonist's emotional journey, and TIES TO ALEXANDER THAT ACTUALLY SERVE A FUCKING PURPOSE JESUS FUCK

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    I can’t speak as a seeker of eternal life, but generally very few people live as long as they would want. I suspect that it is not so much the allure of shaking off the shackles of mortality that drives those seekers but that of a choice, of control over that mysterious and inexorable thing — fate.

    My brother once said that seeking immortality is a fool's quest. That true immortality is that of one’s great deeds inscribed forever in the hearts and minds of men, where they will live forever. I suspect that at his last moments he may have revised that statement.

    Me, I lived long after his death. I lived to see all that he had built throughout his life - his legacy - crumble. His generals tearing the empire apart and squabbling for the pieces like rabid dogs. His siblings used as pawns, his mother slaughtered, his throne usurped, his wife and son humiliated for years before being put to the sword. I watched his beautiful dream collapse — and I did nothing.

    Just like when I watched his retreating back when he left for his life’s grand adventure. Just like when I did not force him to drink the potion and become one of the immortals as he rightly should have been. “Only the lives of mortal men truly hold meaning”. Hah, such drivel! As if dead men would find that a comfort. Hades is filled with regret, not fulfillment. And yet I dared not force him. Perhaps because in my eyes, he was already a God.

    A hero’s regrets might be a love lost, a life cut short, a deed that can’t be undone. But I am no hero. I don’t regret my actions, but my lack of them. I stood by powerlessly while the usurpers destroyed my home and family, let myself be used by them, warmed their bed and bore their accursed seed. And until the very end, even as guilt ate me from within, I remained a coward and refused to acknowledge it, clinging to some delusion that it would all become better somehow, as if hope alone would mend anything.

    That kind of selfish hope is only born of powerlessness. When even that was shattered, when my own child tried to kill me, I had nothing. I was empty. I thought that this was the end simply because I had nothing more to lose and no more tears to shed. But that was another selfish hope, you see. The powerless don’t get to decide their own fate.

    I finally realised when I threw myself into the sea, when the waves battered me against the rocks and sank me into the depths, when despite that all I failed to die. To witness all that my brother created be destroyed and be unable to stop it, to not even be able to atone but only to bear that endless grief and guilt for eternity.... What else could that be but my deserved punishment?

    He hadn’t known, back then. He’d said that he loved my hair most of all because they reminded him of Okeanos, of a beautiful ideal that set his heart alight with passion and hope. By bathing them with the water of immortality, he said he would preserve this ideal forever, so that it would never be tarnished or forgotten. The Fates are very poetic in their cruelty, aren’t they?

    And yet, that was the one thought that kept me from madness in those long years. I was the final emblem of his legacy. Even when the last of the empires raised by the usurpers fell, his dream lived on. The thought that I existed for him, and that he survived through me comforted me. I wished with all my heart that this was true, and that one day my worthless, endless life could be exchanged for a miracle - for his sake. And eventually, my very first selfless hope was answered.

    ---Kind Master, do not fret for me. I have found my resolve in something I must do. If there is something that you are willing to lay your life for as well, I will pledge my all to you so that you will achieve it. After all, I’m not quite a goddess of victory, but perhaps the next best thing!
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    Thessalonike of Macedon

    Class: Berserker
    Alignment: Neutral Good

    A princess of Macedon born to King Philip II and a Thessalian noblewoman, her name itself a commemoration of the king's conquest of the region. Out of all of Philip's children she has been recorded to have had the least eventful life, enjoying the leisurely life of the court only to be swept up in the tumult of the scramble for succession and the will of her stepmother with little agency or initiative of her own, and she outlived all her siblings even though it is noted that she did not escape a violent death. Indeed, compared to her sisters, the capable queen-regent of Epirus and the fierce Illyrian battle-princess, she is barely a footnote in history. A girl who received the affection of great men but always lived in their shadows, her figure nonetheless acquiring greater dimensions through the lens of myth.

    In the medieval Alexander Romance, one of the fantastic feats attributed to Alexander the Great is the discovery of the Fountain of Youth. It is said that after acquiring a phial of the wondrous liquid, he bathed his half-sister's hair with it, rejecting immortality himself. When in time he died, that same sister despaired at his death that could have been preemptively avoided and flung herself into the raging sea to join him, but having become immortal she instead took the form of a mermaid and from that day roams the seas asking each ship she comes across: "Does King Alexander live?" Soothing her grief by saying that he is alive and still continuing his conquest of the Earth will appease her; telling her that he is dead will throw her into a rage and she will transform into a monstrous Gorgon, sinking both ship and crew to the bottom of the ocean. The story has survived in this form in the tales of sailors and travelers and the ethnic folklore until the present day.

    The degree to which history and myth overlap cannot be known, as myth that has gathered more belief than history becomes history itself. What is certain is that Thessalonike was not an existence that would qualify as one of mankind's premier souls, the Heroic Spirits, on her own. To begin with, the law of the World concerning the immortals dictates that they eventually give up their human nature to become things akin to phenomena. At most, she could materialise as a composite wraith formed from the phantoms of other similar tales of women entangled with love, despair, eternal life and the waters, such as Melusine, Yao Bikuni, and Hans Christian Andersen’s Little Mermaid. For her to be summoned into a Servant container as her own complete being, something must have compensated for the considerable gap in her eligibility as a Heroic Spirit.

    It was a wish. A prayer to the World for another's sake, a pledge of eternal servitude in exchange for a chance to overturn fate. A desolate girl traded away oblivion to grasp at a single shining hope from the abyss of her despair.

    You realise, don't you. The mermaid roams the seas to this day. Whether she will succeed or fail in a time distant to her she is already paying the price, forever.




    Statistics

    Height: 1,57m
    Weight: 49kg
    Theme Song: 豚乙女- 暗夜航路

    Parameters:
    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: B
    LCK: B



    Class Skills

    Mad Enhancement

    • E: Costs 25 prana per turn for the Master to maintain. At this rank, the Servant gains a rank up to STR for the duration of the skill. However, the mental state of Servant somewhat deteriorates, resulting in emotional instability. Defense against mental interference spells is reduced. Activation is required to make full use of the Constitution of the Gorgon skill. However deep her anguish, Thessalonike did not fall into madness; in truth, madness would have been a mercy for her. As such, this skill exists purely because of the folkloric image of the raging Gorgon and the Class container itself.



    Personal Skills

    Constitution of the Gorgon

    • B: The sublimation of a dominant myth that has overshadowed the historically recorded figure. A composite skill of Innocent Monster and Monstrous Strength that embodies the nature of a mermaid, it allows for the replenishment of magical energy through proximity with large bodies of water and the temporary rank-up to physical parameters. The longer Berserker is under the influence of this skill, the more she transforms into the monster of legend, a Monstrous Beast of the waters with sharp claws and an armour of tough scales. At that extreme point, a loss of reason befitting a true Berserker occurs.

      At this rank, Berserker is in posession of a physique that is not fully human. Once activated, STR is boosted by a single rank. When close to large bodies of water (rivers, seas, etc) she also gains one rank in END. When in water, she furthermore gains one rank in AGI. In addition, under these circumstances the Servant’s body takes on the characteristics of an Elemental, reducing the cost of Mad Enhancement to zero and allowing for the automatical replenishment of magical energy at a rate of 20 units per turn.

      However, the longer the period of time spent under effect of this skill, the more significant the degradation of the Heroic Spirit into that of a Monstrous Beast. Mental capacity is progressively lost in a similiar fashion to the Mad Enhancement skill, culminating in a final transformation into a mindless monster of legend, completely unheeding of all reason. A Command Seal, at the very least, is necessary in order to restore sanity to the Servant. The speed of onset for this effect is dependent on Berserker's proximity to water.

      Interestingly enough, the word "gorgon" acquired a meaning beyond specifically denoting the infamous trinity of Medusa, Stheno, and Euryale, enduring throughout the ages in the Greek language to finally come to mean "mermaid".


    Emblem of Victory

    • B: A skill possessed by those who embody or herald the concept of victory. At this rank, the Servant can be said to have served as the inspiration to a grand figure who shaped his or her age. Checks and saving throws acquire plus effects both for the Servant and her allies. In addition, when a clash of equivalent powers occurs, the Servant and her allies are considered to possess the upper hand.

      Thessalonike was named in celebration of Philip's decisive victory in Thessaly, and that name in turn was given to what would for the next two millennia be one of the most important cities of the Balkans. But most of all, she herself embodies a certain conqueror's ideal and dream that spanned continents, across the hearts of men and even time and space itself.


    Mana Burst (Water)

    • A: The capability to infuse weapons with magical energy. Said magic energy is infused with Berserker’s own element, causing additional damage. At this rank, the Servant’s attacks are accompanied by tidal waves and roaring bursts of water. By paying 20 units of prana, the user can increase his STR or AGI by one rank. In addition, basic water-based ranged attacks and skills can be used by paying 50 units. The scale of these effects is one rank lower than the user’s skill rank.



    Noble Phantasms

    Mermaid's Tears
    The Potion of Immortality


    Type: Support
    Rank: C
    Range:
    Targets: 1

    Description: A glass phial containing water from the Fountain of Youth, or so it is said. A few drops will heal even grisly wounds, and imbibing it can truly bring someone back from death's doorstep - if a Servant consumes it, it is as if they have gained an extra life. However, Berserker cannot use it on herself in any way.

    In truth this was one of the treasures looted from the vaults of Babylon when the city was taken by Alexander. Whether it is the same potion as the one found in a certain ancient king's treasury which found its way from one royal vault to another throughout the millennia or merely a pale imitation of the philter created from the Herb of Immortality is a mystery lost to the ages.


    The King Lives On
    Dream of Okeanos


    Type: Barrier
    Rank: A
    Range: 1~99
    Targets: 1

    Description: The shared dream of two hearts forever separated. If Aionioi Hetairoi is the actualisation of the experiences shared by each and every soldier of the King's army, then this Noble Phantasm is the manifestation of the ideal that drove the King to the ends of the Earth. It is a Reality Marble born from the image indelibly etched in the hearts of the Conqueror King and his Muse. Within it is recreated the farthest shore at the end of the world, the edge of boundless Okeanos, and it is there that Alexander the Great will live once more to rule and conquer the world.

    Under the same principle as the Army of the King he is as much a Servant as any, with access to his armaments and his abilities, but the burden of the bounded field's upkeep for each turn lies entirely on Berserker, and by extension her Master. As the world within the barrier is in essence a vast body of water, Skills dependent on proximity to water will activate inside the Reality Marble. Once the battle is concluded or he himself is vanquished Alexander will fade away, but that too is only temporary. As long as Thessalonike lives, Alexander will never truly die.

    Thessalonike's cherished miracle. At its core, a sister's love for her brother. Perhaps the King turned away from the Far East for the road back home because he realised where Okeanos truly lay all along.



    ---My wish? Only that my King be granted a second life for the one he left unfinished. My only happiness would be that he might stand upon this world again and fulfill his dreams to the utmost. If I could claim to know one thing of him, it is that he would want this too.

    For that I do not mind my eternal servitude. Because he will always be with me.





    Sheets presented unaltered from the time of RP submission. There were ideas on how to people the story with the known variables, but they are not worth digging up - this duo would've communicated the basic ideas on the enduring allure of Fuyuki's wars as proving grounds for the troubled and the lost to find answers and purpose, the emotional detritus of the previous wars, FSN's message on living up to someone else's memory and coming to terms with the past so as to embrace the future, and the meta fixation of a myriad fics on Running It Back for HF6. Alas, fateshit by any other name would still be fateshit.

    PS: I may have gone on record recently saying that fanfics about OCs are not really fics about Type-Moon. That was to say, a fanfic which employs the trappings of the Nasuverse (templates, mechanics, magic systems) to adapt extraneous ideas to a TM-type story context, or a fanfic written primarily to showcase precious beans and donut steels in the smashing-action-figures-together sense, does not interface with the source material on a particularly meaningful (read: interesting) level. This, insofar as the narrative thrust is concerned, would have been "about" the grail dismantlement premise actuated through a character concept derived from the known circumstances of the most relevant canonical actor. Or, OCs ought to be spun from ethically sourced TM lore and grounded in an established setting element, character relation, or plotline, because extrapolation and elaboration in dialogue with the source material - imagining the story that canon merely implies - is the way to write good TM fanfic. Sometimes you need OCs because the implication of the story is all you've got. Only, in reality the creative impetus was simply that I had some characters left over from dead RPs and hated to waste them, which wasn't a good enough reason to write anything, obviously.

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    I remember those characters. A shame to not see more, but compelling concepts nonetheless. Very interesting extensions of canon.
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    I like this, no surprise. That being said,

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    the very brief trend of Reines/Waver A/B/O porn
    there was a what now?
    IYKYK

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    Quote Originally Posted by tsugumi View Post
    there was a what now?
    one writer can be a trend, right

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    there was another too, now deleted



    eyy, good taste fearboss

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    Ohhhh, them. I've read their other Reines/Waver stuff, but not that. A/B/O is something of a poisoned well for me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Leftovers View Post
    one writer can be a trend, right
    I hope so.
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    Had a concept for a Nasuverse Continuity where the joke was the fineline between urban fantasy and Capes were crossed. Something about the first magic being different from other timelines and causing Psychics to be the dominant form of Mystery rather than Magecraft. (Which still exists albeit not as prolific.)

    It centered around this Timeline's Shirou and Shinji being a Ted Kord and Booster Gold style superhero duo running into a parallel Miyu who was sent into this universe rather than the Prisma one. It was going to be a riff on your classic "Crisis on Infinite Earths" style multiverse event comics.

    Edit: Other highlights include:
    Waver Velvet as a John Constantine Occult Detective Expy, with (inspite of a nail) Gray as his adopted daughter and assistant.

    Kiritsugu and Maiya being 90s Darkage Edgelord Heroes (akin to like Youngblood Characters) named Axcel and Kronos Rose who accidentally killed this Timeline's Shirou's parents in crossfire and felt bad enough to adopt him to make up for it.

    A UN Weapon X/Suicide Squad style Military Superhero Team made up of Enhanace, Beryl Gut, Ryuunosuke (who in this timeline has psychic abilities), Celenike Icecolle, and Flat Escardos (Who without Waver, has accidentally tripped into comical harmless silver age supervilliany with his now psychic reality warping powers). A younger Dan Blackmore (former SAS) is their assigned leader.
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    Day 3092 and Counting of Asking "Avenger John Brown When Lasengle ?"

    In the forefront of the battle,
    All is struck down by you—
    O winged Lady, Like a bird
    You scavenge the land.
    Like a charging storm, You charge,
    Like a roaring storm, You roar,
    You thunder in thunder, Breath in rampaging winds.
    Your feet are continually restless.
    Carrying your harp of sighs, You breathe out the music of mourning.

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