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    Quote Originally Posted by Strife View Post
    Really though, it's the story of Atlas testing our their electronic Laplace's Demon. Which is a canon thing.
    Which I can sorta get after reading the datapoint info at the start and thinking about it, but, like, stories usually carry their own weight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bridgeburner View Post
    Replace DP with arashi, this contest is meaningless without some eccentric judging
    Sure, just let me get on converting "pretty good, but I'll dock you anyways," "it's shit," and "FUCK OFF - C H A L D E A -" into numbers.

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    So far I'm thinking 79, 0, and -51, respectively.
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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Easier than converting nothing into numbers

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    that's horrific, I want it
    Oh, I know very well. How the secrets beckon so sweetly.
    Only an honest death will cure you now.
    Liberate you, from your wild curiosity.

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    nice
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Strife View Post
    Easier than converting nothing into numbers
    But that's just 0.

    Unless this is one of those weird scenarios in which 0 itself is paradoxically a number, then welp, consider my brains smashed in by a lemon wrapped round a large gold brick.
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    I liked it
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    On You's tombstone it will read
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    That's exaggerating my point.

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    I liked it
    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...=1#post2294951

    ~Keo Today at 11:17 PM
    that's horrific, I want it
    Oh, I know very well. How the secrets beckon so sweetly.
    Only an honest death will cure you now.
    Liberate you, from your wild curiosity.

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    Yeah, no, this isn't judging because I'm deliberately not looking at rating anything. This is me just reacting as a reader and doing what I did in a university job helping people revise papers. Only this time I also get to be a little mean about it.

    But I mean seriously even if it was the best story knowing that it's Strife's means I have to publicly hate it, it's in the contract

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    Quote Originally Posted by ItsaRandomUsername View Post
    consider my brains smashed in by a lemon wrapped round a large gold brick.
    Reference understood and appreciated.

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    Don't @ me if your fanfic doesn't even have Shirou/Illya shipping k thnx ItsaRandomUsername's Avatar
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    The spiral of darkness that is my Monday has been made a little brighter.
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    THE LEGENDARY

    DARK_PULSE
    The Manhattan Project: Is it a sin to kill for your country? In an age of nationalism, where do you draw the line between right and wrong? In the 1960s, eight people seek peace amidst war and tragedy.

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    And so the contest ends, I think. Looks like Corral won?
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    Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.

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    And with Darples's judging, the contest is finished in record time!

    Title IRUn Alf Dark Pulse Total
    A Last Request 39/100 33/100 60/100 132/300
    A Magnificent Feast 70/100 42/100 58/100 170/300
    Build a City and Call it Babylon 96/100 95/100 80/100 271/300
    Defibrillator 76.5/100 64/100 82/100 222.5/300
    Disorder 77/100 50/100 55/100 182/300
    Hands. 47/100 38/100 53/100 138/300
    I’LL MURDER YOUR CAT 50/100 63/100 66/100 179/300
    Moon’s Corral 99/100 97/100 98/100 294/300
    PSEUDOMONARCHIA
    33
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    79/100 68/100 IT'S SHIT180/300
    Sigma Zero 88/100 94/100 89/100 271/300
    True Apocrypha 82/100 89/100 98/100 269/300
    Judge Leniency Averages 68.9/100 67.6/100 73.4/100 209.9/300
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    canon finish apo vol 3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirby View Post
    And so the contest ends, I think. Looks like Corral won?
    It sure did, and it wasn't even close.



    Dark Pulse AlfheimWanderer IRUN
    Total Average First Second Third
    FANFIC








    A Last Request 60 33 39
    132 44


    A Magnificent Feast 58 42 70
    170 56.66


    Build a City and Call it Babylon 80 95 96
    271 90.33
    2
    Defibrillator 82 64 76.5
    222.5 74.166

    1
    Disorder 55 50 77
    182 60.66


    Hands 53 38 47
    138 46


    I'll Murder Your Cat 66 63 50
    179 59.66


    Moon's Corral 98 97 99
    294 98 3

    PSEUDOMONARCHIA 68 79 33
    180 60


    Sigma Zero 89 94 88
    271 90.33
    1 2
    True Apocrypha 98 89 82
    269 89.66 1











    Average Judges' Score 73.3636 67.6363 68.86363
    209.86363 69.95454



    Hot fight for 2nd-4th though!

    Thanks to all the entrants. Here's to hoping next year has similarly good competition!
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    unluck

    ~Keo Today at 11:17 PM
    that's horrific, I want it
    Oh, I know very well. How the secrets beckon so sweetly.
    Only an honest death will cure you now.
    Liberate you, from your wild curiosity.

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    Well, Moon's Corral really deserved it, imo. It's one of the few fanfics that I've read that gripped me from the start and made it impossible to put down. The setting/premise was just great. I'd love to see more Nasuverse fics like it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kirby View Post
    And so the contest ends, I think. Looks like Corral won?
    Seeing the fic you beta'd win is a happy feeling. I'm so glad I contributed, even in some small way, to Moon's Corral's success.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nuclear Consensus View Post
    Seeing the fic you beta'd win is a happy feeling. I'm so glad I contributed, even in some small way, to Moon's Corral's success.
    agreed; seeing the other fic i beta'd come in second is also a good feeling.



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    Oh. So it's over now.

    So who wrote what.

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