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    General exchange for Christmas, no theme.
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    A world where tragedy is the only measure by which a narrative holds value is not one I am going to live in even where the circumstances in a particular work are tragic.
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    If an adult themed work can have graphic slaughter and the like, it can have sex. Just do it competently if you want to go explicit.
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    No but why ask him to pull out right before the end tbh
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    The only one character allowed challenge idea was better.

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    General, I guess.

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    I'll go with General as well.

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    So I've kinda fucked over a portion of canon in my fic by stating that Kiritsugu knew the Fujimuras (or at least, Taiga to a casual extent) before the end of the 4HGW.

    I could retcon it but I'm already into the fic itself proper. Is it worth changing?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Levnekov View Post
    So I've kinda fucked over a portion of canon in my fic by stating that Kiritsugu knew the Fujimuras (or at least, Taiga to a casual extent) before the end of the 4HGW.

    I could retcon it but I'm already into the fic itself proper. Is it worth changing?
    if that's the worst you've done so far, you're doing p well
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    Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
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    how do i git gud at porn
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    uhhhh literary devices both sides participating emphasis on emotions and feelings I dunno Mr. PUA you tell me you have more experience
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    canon finish apo vol 3

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    im a machine without emotions thats why i have to use PUA to compensate
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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    how do i git gud at porn
    how do you get good at sex
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    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    read Ecclesiastes

    then keep going
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    Expresses the exceeding size of one's library.
    Books are extremely many, loaded on an oxcart the ox will sweat.
    At home piled to the ridgepole of the house, from this meaning.
    Read out as 「Ushi ni ase shi, munagi ni mitsu.」
    Source: 柳宗元「其為書,處則充棟宇,出則汗牛馬。」— Tang Dynasty


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    Quote Originally Posted by SeiKeo View Post
    how do you get good at sex
    vibrate
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    Quote Originally Posted by I3uster View Post
    vibrate
    same thing, leon
    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    That time they checked out that hot guy they were just admiring his watch, yeah?


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    all that does it make me hit the wrong keys dude
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    By complete coincidence I just read up to this part

    Quote Originally Posted by Buddha's Little Finger
    You know, if I had to write a genuinely powerful erotic scene, I would merely provide a few hints and fill in the rest with an incomprehensible conversation like the . . . Oh, my God, Anna . . . Like the one which you and I are having now. Because there is nothing to depict, everything has to be filled in by the mind.
    かん
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    Expresses the exceeding size of one's library.
    Books are extremely many, loaded on an oxcart the ox will sweat.
    At home piled to the ridgepole of the house, from this meaning.
    Read out as 「Ushi ni ase shi, munagi ni mitsu.」
    Source: 柳宗元「其為書,處則充棟宇,出則汗牛馬。」— Tang Dynasty


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    lots of spacing, got it

    What happened, people loved to give genuine lemon advice.
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    the death of the 'genuine'

    now boi lemme tell u about s i m u l a c r a
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    Expresses the exceeding size of one's library.
    Books are extremely many, loaded on an oxcart the ox will sweat.
    At home piled to the ridgepole of the house, from this meaning.
    Read out as 「Ushi ni ase shi, munagi ni mitsu.」
    Source: 柳宗元「其為書,處則充棟宇,出則汗牛馬。」— Tang Dynasty


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    [04:55] Lianru: i3uster is actuallly quite cute

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