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    Because of school stuff I worry I wouldn't be able to write anything for it, so I'd have to pass. Something a little later with a romance/lemon theme would be nice though, if you could find a good date to base it around.
    The Manhattan Project: Is it a sin to kill for your country? In an age of nationalism, where do you draw the line between right and wrong? In the 1960s, eight people seek peace amidst war and tragedy.

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    I'm getting into writing again so I'd be down for it myself but if the burnout is affecting people, perhaps push it off for a couple of months?
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    I didn't enter the Secret Santa and I've already been pressing for another run of the Lemon Contest soooo yeah. Run it.
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    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
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    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Resolute?

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    For inanimate objects? Sorry, but that doesn't seem right.

    Also, would "fidget and swallow nervously" be redundant? Should I just leave it as "fidget and swallow"?
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    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
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    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.

    I'd call that redundant. When else would you be fidgeting and swallowing unless you were nervous?

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    ADHD, cocaine
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    Who swallows cocaine?

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    ^smugglers, maybe
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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.
    Thanks!
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    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
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    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
    Hmmm... A bit more poetic than I wanted for this passage, but I might use them in a different context. Thanks!
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
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    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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    Oh, fun! How often does a story actually leave the Idea Thread?
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    I've felt both.
    My fanfics:
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    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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    A world where tragedy is the only measure by which a narrative holds value is not one I am going to live in even where the circumstances in a particular work are tragic.
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    If an adult themed work can have graphic slaughter and the like, it can have sex. Just do it competently if you want to go explicit.
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    How dare you she's a married woman
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    You think people would just do that, say stupid things on the internet and claim victory when they're told that's stupid?
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    No but why ask him to pull out right before the end tbh

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    Quest of Fate (Update: 18/04/2018)

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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
    It'd be great if I could do that with what I worked on five minutes ago, but it never happens.

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    Happens with all sorts of creative work, I come back to it later and fall in love with myself all over again.

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