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    Because of school stuff I worry I wouldn't be able to write anything for it, so I'd have to pass. Something a little later with a romance/lemon theme would be nice though, if you could find a good date to base it around.
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    I'm getting into writing again so I'd be down for it myself but if the burnout is affecting people, perhaps push it off for a couple of months?
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    I didn't enter the Secret Santa and I've already been pressing for another run of the Lemon Contest soooo yeah. Run it.
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    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Resolute?

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    For inanimate objects? Sorry, but that doesn't seem right.

    Also, would "fidget and swallow nervously" be redundant? Should I just leave it as "fidget and swallow"?
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.

    I'd call that redundant. When else would you be fidgeting and swallowing unless you were nervous?

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    Who swallows cocaine?

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    ^smugglers, maybe
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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Resilient seems the best of those choices then.
    Thanks!
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SpoonyViking View Post
    I'm drawing a blank, but what would be a good adjective to use to refer to a stone statue (maybe marble) that withstands the passage of time? Strong? Enduring? Resilient?
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    Adamant, unyielding, eternal
    Hmmm... A bit more poetic than I wanted for this passage, but I might use them in a different context. Thanks!
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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    I've felt both.
    My fanfics:
    The Gift (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot)
    - A duel between Cú Chulainn and Scáthach.
    Passion Acknowledged (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) (Lemon) - Shirou and Shinji finally acknowledge their feelings.
    He Was a Good King (a Fate/Stay Night one-shot) - A short exploration of Beowulf's character as a hero and a king.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
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    No but why ask him to pull out right before the end tbh
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    Quest of Fate (Update: 10/10/2018)

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    ...Are you the protagonist of a YA novel? Perhaps an otome game?




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    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Anyone ever go back over their old work, ready for cringe, only to realize that the piece was actually pretty decent?
    It'd be great if I could do that with what I worked on five minutes ago, but it never happens.

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    Happens with all sorts of creative work, I come back to it later and fall in love with myself all over again.

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