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    What exactly is the flow of a joke?

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    The thing I sleepily explained earlier. If I can find it I'll link Arashi's post.

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    Sorry, I've never written a joke in English or studied their structure, so I'm having trouble connecting that to writing smut.

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    http://forums.nrvnqsr.com/showthread...50#post2440150

    I found it. And oh, that makes sense. It hadn't occurred to me that'd be a language issue since you know English so well.

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    Ah, I see what you both meant now. It does feel like a good way to 'ground' things, in a sense.

    Thanks!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    What exactly is the flow of a joke?
    First comes pun, then comes head, then comes desk.

    alternately replace part two and three with face and palm, respectively
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    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.
    Just be glad you don't Japanese

    or that Toby can't Japanese

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    or that Toby can't Japanese
    YET

    But on topic more seriously, Arashi's advice in that post is on point. There's a difference between writing plain, ordinary smutting and writing an interesting lemon, and it's all in the flow.
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    What's interesting to me is that we're still scandalizing citrus fruits in this part of the internet. In AO3 land, smut has obtained a more forgiving and broad definition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.
    I love this, BTW.

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    the only people who hate puns have never had a good one
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    puns just love Tobias

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    What exactly is the flow of a joke?
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    People have been bugging me about it, so I guess I'll start asking here.

    Any more interest in more exchanges? I'm not sure if putting so many exchanges back-to-back would be wise, lest we start tiring of them, but people seem to be interested.

    On another note, if we were to start another one, would you rather it be themeless (like Secret Santa) or themed (like White Day and lemons)? As for possible themes, I was thinking of doing pairings (anything focusing on two char's relationship, be it romantic or friendly or antagonistic) for Tanabata. Thoughts?
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    hey make them do more porn
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    I'd rather do non-porn the next time around
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    I'm all for more exchanges, especially ones of the romance type.
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    My sense of the vague fanfic writers' buzz, on and off forum, says that burnout isn't approaching yet.

    I generally feel themed exchanges are more interesting, and I think it does help people to get some guidance for their prompts in that way. They're not always easy to come up with. And, when they've done that, they're probably also in a mindset more attuned to the prompts that they're going to be getting too.
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