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    전부 나의 노예 Snow's Avatar
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    Ah, I see what you both meant now. It does feel like a good way to 'ground' things, in a sense.

    Thanks!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    What exactly is the flow of a joke?
    First comes pun, then comes head, then comes desk.

    alternately replace part two and three with face and palm, respectively
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    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.
    Just be glad you don't Japanese

    or that Toby can't Japanese
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    or that Toby can't Japanese
    YET

    But on topic more seriously, Arashi's advice in that post is on point. There's a difference between writing plain, ordinary smutting and writing an interesting lemon, and it's all in the flow.
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    What's interesting to me is that we're still scandalizing citrus fruits in this part of the internet. In AO3 land, smut has obtained a more forgiving and broad definition.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    Puns are not jokes, they are an unfortunate byproduct of civilization.
    I love this, BTW.

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    the only people who hate puns have never had a good one
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    puns just love Tobias
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    Quote Originally Posted by Snow View Post
    What exactly is the flow of a joke?
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