Oh wow, I did miss a line at the end. And it is a really interesting one, it seems that there are "people" or spirits in there that share stories and such. Thanks for the heads up.Originally Posted by bulldog
I made some changes in some parts, mostly typos. There are just a couple of big changes on some sentences and the addition of the one that I missed.
Last edited by Owlz; June 2nd, 2016 at 10:58 AM.
I have check all the line again and update the script, from now if you edit or change anything please do highlight it.
Yeap. Thanks and sorry for your trouble.
I finally took the time to read it and that was worth it.
Thank you very much for your efforts, Owlz.
I really enjoyed Arturia's point of view in FSN and Mordred's in Apo on Arturia's life, and it was interesting to have Merlin's and other knight's pov too this time. We've got quite a great overview of her reign.
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Thanks! Indeed, it is really interesting to see all those perspectives of Arturia's story. I really enjoyed doing this. Look forward to the video format thanks to bulldog.
Track 1, what do you think about font, background, etc.
Oh man, its awesome. The backgrounds and transitions are great. Thanks for the work. This way it will be much more immersive.
Last edited by Owlz; June 4th, 2016 at 09:49 PM.
Great! Thank you very much!
Track 5
Awesome! Thank you very much!
Yes! I knew this track as a video would be hype. Great work with the backgrounds and that Rhonogmiad. Also, the font for the initial tittle looks great. It was awesome. Thanks.
Track 2
Great work! Please keep it up! Thank you very much!
Track 3
Last edited by bulldog; June 7th, 2016 at 07:53 AM.
I like it very much the novel illustrations, great work as always, thank you very much Bulldog! I will see it now.
Last edited by Kariya; June 7th, 2016 at 07:44 AM.
There are 3 At the garden which one extracly?
Track 4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8B5fp7JJJM
Last edited by bulldog; June 14th, 2016 at 03:33 AM.
Yeap, The enumeration was quite weird. Thanks for the work! And just a heads up, I got a mail pointing out some posible changes for the latter parts (thankfully nothing about that what already worked on). I'll update it in about 4 hours. Sorry for the trouble. And thanks to the mystery man that sent me the email.
This part I couldn't really match the voice and translation, somewhat seem really out. Could anyone check it for me please. time 1:50
Track 3
The fact of winning or losing to someone other wasn’t what made her sore,
Rather she was sore about her own weakness.
When faced with defeat, she would quickly lift her head and continue.
Adamant while walking forward, but because of that she was hurt easily.
Maybe because she was too obedient she could not ignore certain things.
Will be on it in aprox 4 hours. Gonna use the university computer labs, for a good cause of course.
All of them! He he. Awesome, chapter 4 already! Thank you very much!
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