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June 7th, 2016, 04:23 PM
#41
後継者 Successor
I made the changes. They are marked with a -> and all of them are in the last track. Also about the piece of translation that didn't fit in, the only thing that I would change would be:
Her defeat wasn’t what made her sore,
Rather she was sore about her own weakness.
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June 7th, 2016, 11:39 PM
#42
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
There are Chinese translation with Japanese sub, you may want to look into.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2ojk63_6F_4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I432WmgWsAg
I mostly use it and spanish video to sync the line but this part is not really clear.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wtGJQaD6ssY
Last edited by bulldog; June 13th, 2016 at 10:27 AM.
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June 8th, 2016, 12:21 AM
#43
後継者 Successor
Oh wow, haha. Yeap, the chinese translation won't be of much help for my end. Maybe someone else can take a look.
I tried to be as precise as posible with the base translation. This is what I got:
- When discouraged, she quickly lifts his head
- Limitless when walking forward ... and because of that easily hurt
- Maybe because she was too obedient she couldn't ignore certain things. ( No changes really)
Hopefuly it works.
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June 8th, 2016, 01:09 AM
#44
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
Nah, what I mean is I'm not sure the sound line match with the right text because I don't understand Jap mostly. I usually get them match easily by using Chinese and Spanish video but this part is so confused to me.
Last edited by bulldog; June 8th, 2016 at 01:12 AM.
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June 8th, 2016, 10:04 AM
#45
後継者 Successor
Mmm, with the portuguese subs, it seems that it matches normally.
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June 13th, 2016, 10:41 AM
#46
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
Last edited by bulldog; June 14th, 2016 at 03:26 AM.
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June 13th, 2016, 07:40 PM
#47
後継者 Successor
Awesome. Great work in the Merlin and Arturia dialogue. The antepenultimate pic was great. Just one thing, Is that Arcueid in the begining? A reference to the twilight?
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June 20th, 2016, 06:29 AM
#48
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
I thought Arcueid would perfectly fit Guinevere, she is princess afterall.
Track 9 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQao37T8ULA
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June 20th, 2016, 11:00 PM
#49
後継者 Successor
Great work again. Nice choice of pictures. This track, especially the end, its so well acted.
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June 23rd, 2016, 06:45 AM
#50
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
Last edited by bulldog; June 23rd, 2016 at 02:34 PM.
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June 23rd, 2016, 06:10 PM
#51
後継者 Successor
As always, Great work with the Lancelot one.
But the last one... I really have to commend you. The CGs, the transition, specially the last one... Did you add lighting effects for the last CG? I'm almost certain but it is so well done that it blends perfectly.
Either way, it seems that you are approaching the end. Thanks for everything so far.
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June 27th, 2016, 07:53 PM
#52
So as i pray... Unlimited Bug Works!
Thank you very much for the new videos, great work!
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June 28th, 2016, 08:02 AM
#53
死徒（下級）Lesser Dead Apostle
Last edited by bulldog; June 29th, 2016 at 05:46 AM.
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June 30th, 2016, 06:03 PM
#54
So as i pray... Unlimited Bug Works!
Congratulations and thank you very much!
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October 22nd, 2017, 07:13 AM
#55
Does anyone still have the Japanese script for the drama cd? I'd like to use it for a school project.
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October 23rd, 2017, 08:37 PM
#56
Thanks for the translation, and thanks to bulldog for the YT videos!
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November 14th, 2017, 08:34 AM
#57
Thank you for translation <3
Can I use your works as a source to translate Garden of Avalon Vietnamese sub?
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June 7th, 2018, 12:18 AM
#58
many2 thanks, this story was beautiful
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