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    the older sister

    For some reason, i decided to try the whole "brother and sister" again, but this time with a different aproach
    This is the first of a pair of sheets, the second will come tomorow(maybe).


    Name: Elene Bianchi

    Alias: the blue demon
    Age: 18
    Element: eletricity
    Origen: truth
    Circuit quality: D
    Circuit quantity: C
    Circuit composition: Avarage

    Talents: driving, sports, economics
    Weakness: social interactions, card games, cooking
    Natural enemies: her brother

    Backstory: the bianchi are a family of magus from italy with a long but uneventful history, their only special characteristic is the their pre-disposition to a magic trait, but even this does not manifest every generation and when manifests, its with a variation in quality most of the time.
    Case in point: Elene, the older of a twins couple, did manifest the special trait of the bianchi, but at a lower quality than her brother. As such, she recieved much less training and was eventualy abandoned by her parents.
    Elene, however, decided to keep studying on her own and manage to earn a certain level of respect inside the mage association. She is now a enforcer and has earned the nickname "the blue demon"

    Personality: described as a "hard girl", Elene is very a serious and centered person. She is very methodical in actions and decisions and even when confronted with unexpected situations, she mantains herself calm and focused.
    But the trait most people notice at first when interacting whit Elene is her complete and brutal honest, she always says what needs to be said and never holds anything back, a completly open person.

    Abilities:

    Mystic eyes of intention detection:
    The special trait of the Bianchi, Elene's eyes are on the weaker side and as such, have several limitations
    This mystic eyes have the power to detect "human intention", that is, the idea that is formed before an action. Elene can only see on a superficial level, only the consient intentions, and need to see the target directly.
    This eyes also make her capable of knowing when someone is lying, however, it works based on the targets beliefs, so if he fully belives on what he is saying despiste it not being real, the eyes cannot detect and vice-versa.

    Lux Caerulea: aura of the blue demon
    Elene's personal magecraft and main way of combat, it is also the reason for her nickname.
    It uses low voltage eletric currents to estimulate her muscles, allowing her to performe feets of almost superhuman strenght and agility. The currents will also affect the oponent when in contact, causing effects like numbness, dizzyness and even paralizys.
    When this spell is active, Elene will be envolved on a thin blue light that ocasionaly releases eletric sparks, akin to a "power aura". This is actualy her body discharging the excess of static on the air, a totaly unplanned aesthetical effect.

    Items

    Cursed nails of dioscuri:
    A pair of thin nails, one black and one white, that are embedded with a curse that punishes distance.
    To activate, first she stings herself with the white nail, then she must sting a target with the black nail. Once done, if the target goes more than 7 meters away from her, they will suffer from terrible headaches, weakning of the body and great reduction of the mana generation.
    A mystic code she uses to ensure that her oponents stay at range for her attacks, it can also be used to keep captured enemies from escaping.
    Last edited by the god of world-0; January 26th, 2018 at 02:19 PM.


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    Nice to see you revisiting an old concept and brushing up on it, shows you've come a good distance.

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    the younger brother

    Wow, this took longer than what i think it would, and is kind of annoying because i alredy knew exactly how i wanted this sheet to be, i just could not write it down!
    Whatever, here is the other sibling, the one i think came out more interesting.


    Name: Andrea bianchi

    Alias: the red demon
    Age: 18
    Element: wind and earth
    Origen: lies
    Circuit quality: B
    Circuit quantity: C
    Circuit composition: Good

    Talents: fashion sense, lying, making riddles
    Weakness: physicaly weak, bad cooking skills, easily swayed into a bet
    Natural enemies: his sister

    Backstory: Andrea is the younger of a twins couple. he manifest the special trait of the bianchi at a higher quality than his sister. As such, she recieved much more training with the purpose of becoming the head of the bianchi family.
    And so he did. Right after his training was over, história parents misteriously disappeared and the elder who was the head suffered from a unfortunate accident. Under Andrea's leadership, the Bianchi family grew in influence in the magus community very quickly, earning him the nickname of "the red demon".

    Personality: Usually the first impression that someone gets from Andrea is "she must have a multitude of suitors"
    The second is "wait, it is a guy?"
    Andrea carries himself with a very polite yet very dignified attitude, this is a lie. Almost everything that he says is a lie, to the point that you should actualy fear if he says something that is true, as it may be a bad sign. Is not like Andrea lies for self-profite, Self-profite is just a product of lying, he lies because thats the what he was taught, his nature.
    While he dresses and acts like a female, it is not because of a desire to be of a diffente gender. He simply finds entertainment on the various reactions of people when they learn the truth. Like everything, his apearence is also a lie.

    Abilities

    Mystic eyes of intention detection
    The special trait of the Bianchi, Andrea's eyes are on the stronger side and as such, have several advantages
    This mystic eyes have the power to detect "human intention", that is, the idea that is formed before an action. Andrea can see both the conscient and inconscient, and can be used by seeing the target directly or indirectly.
    This eyes also make him capable of knowing when someone is lying, however, it works based on the targets beliefs, so if he fully belives on what he is saying despiste it not being real, the eyes cannot detect and vice-versa.

    Tenebris rubra: shadow of the red demon
    Andrea's personal magecraft and main way of combat, it is also the reason for his nickname.
    It apears to be several black and red, shadowy tendrils that circulate around him, protecting and attacking without any apparent command.
    They are actualy formed by micro-crystals that Andrea controls using a combination of earth and wind magecraft. They are not automatic and rely on motion imputs, but Andrea make so the moviments are all suddle and easy to hide, like licking his lips or tapping his fingers.
    The shadowy apearence is given by the fact that the crystals are in constant vibration. This was not accidental, Andrea made sure to select especific types of crystal with the right color and characteristcs to match his style of clothing.

    Familiars

    Murininae
    Simple Bat familiars that serve as Andrea's eyes, thay are capable of passing as normal bats very easly and can transmit visual information to their master at live, allowing Andrea to use his eyes even more efficiently.
    They take, however, a fair well of time to mature. So Andrea cannnot easly replace then if they are killed. The fact that they have very low combat capabilites does not help either.
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    Random thoughts

    Riku Arastan:
    I like some of her abilities, but I feel like it’s just a smorgasboard of “anything that has to do with wind”. Outside of the common element of wind, she just seems to be able to do anything as long as wind is involved. Also, a better version of invisible air? Damn, Merlin eat shit. You just got one-upped by a 16 year old girl.

    Bianchis: Pretty neat characters. I like the mystic eyes of intention detection. What is the Bianchi family magecraft, by the way? Like outside of their personal magecraft, what does the family do? I’m asking since the two have pretty different forms of magecraft, although I suppose Elene would be the outcast. Also, considering she’s an enforcer, is Elene actually stronger than Andrea!? Also, Andrea is totally a girl’s name; you can’t tell me that’s a man.


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    Quote Originally Posted by zikari8 View Post
    Also, Andrea is totally a girl’s name; you can’t tell me that’s a man.
    Andrea actually originated as a man's name (unsurprising since Andros literally means man), and still is in several languages.

    Like a lot of names that started off neutral or masculine and are considered almost exclusively feminine nowadays.

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    "Allow me to teach you.
    Allow me to show you.
    Allow me to remind you.
    The true meaning of war."




    Android 33

    Affiliation: German Army / Reiter Family
    Rank: None
    Classification: Super Soldier

    Gender: Male
    Age: 2 months or 67 years
    Birthplace: Berlin, Germany
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil

    Elemental Affinity: Fire
    Origin: Violence
    Circuit Quantity: D
    Circuit Quality: C
    Circuit Composition: Slightly Abnormal

    Background:
    A homunculus created by the German Army around the time of World War II. Produced and raised by the Third Reich magi division directly under the orders of Major Reiter, he is one of the army’s secret projects, a man-made super soldier created with both magecraft and science.

    In their typical pursuit of mysticism and arcane artifacts, the army had been exploring ways to increase their military might when they happened on ancient documents containing part of Georg Faust’s alchemic research. Part of these notes pertained to Faust’s homunculus creation, which led to the birth of the servant known as Mephistopheles. Faust was man whose gifted engineering helped advance homunculus technology by several generations, so even those notes were decent for modern times.
    They planned to use this newfound power to mass produce an army of highly trained, physically superior homunculi, creating an effectively endless supply of warriors at their disposal. Android 33 was thus created as the prototype for the plan, the first success in a line of 32 other failures.

    However, the inexperience of the army’s magi raised the cost of creating a single homunculus drastically. In the end, they realized that mass production would be impossible after all. The project was abandoned and Android 33 was kept in stasis, a forgotten artifact of a failed ambition. He would be kept this way until a little bit later when the army was given a tip by a certain silver-tongues magus about the Holy Grail War.

    Android 33 was recycled and taken out of storage, with the hopes that he could be used as an elite fighter who would obtain the grail for the army. The scientists/magi began to upgrade him into a true one-man army, implanting both powerful mechanical weaponry and extensive knowledge of warfare. They had hoped that his specialized abilities could overcome the magi that would try to stop him. To ensure his victory, his creators implanted a fervent will and determination to obtain the grail at all costs. However, 33’s upgrading process took longer than expected and he was not completed in time for the third Holy Grail War. So, once again, the homunculus became useless and was put back into stasis.

    In the end, the man-made soldier was never put on the battlefield. There were some other plans to utilize him, but they never came to fruition and before he could be brought out, the war ended. Either way, he likely wouldn’t have made too much of a difference on that chaotic deathscape. Buried under a collapsed German laboratory, the homunculus slept for years, never once awakening. That is, until now.

    More than 6 decades later, a German magus discovered the abandoned homunculus and brought him out of his decades long slumber. Recognizing his fighting potential, the magus decided to recruit the homunculus towards her cause. With nowhere to go, 33 readily agreed and acknowledged the magus as his new commander. After several failed attempts, the man-shaped weapon is finally able to enter the battlefield!

    Personality:
    To summarize 33’s demeanor in a single word, he is rigid. Given any order, he will follow it absolutely, no matter what harm it brings to himself. He is strict on his comrades and even stricter to himself. Concepts such as morals and ethics do not apply to the man who has only been awake for a total of two or so months. As long as the orders he is given are followed, he will use any means necessary to accomplish them.

    33 does not have any particular emotional states. There is no difference between him being happy and him being sad; he remains as stoic and frigid as ever. This is not because he lacks the capacity to feel emotion or because he has discarded his feelings, but simply because he has not had the time to develop feelings. Instead, he simply has rules and order to love by. His decision-making depends solely on the commands of his current commander, an individual he recognizes as his direct superior.

    Personally, he considers himself a hero of justice. He believes that the actions he is carrying will bring happiness to the world and any lives lost in the process are a necessary sacrifice. He trusts entirely in the orders he is given by his commander and similarly thinks that his commander is also a hero of justice. Naturally, he prioritizes the well-being of Germany above other countries, but there is a general sense of benevolence.

    Given enough time, Android 33 may one day develop his own emotions and reflect upon what it means to better the world. That said, his lifespan outside of his stasis pod isn’t very long so perhaps he’ll die before he becomes a true hero of justice.

    As a side note, his previously implanted desire to obtain the grail was never removed so if he were ever to be put in a situation where a Holy Grail is involved, he will automatically fight to retrieve it.

    Combat
    Tactics
    Android 33’s form of combat can only be called violent. Rather than underhanded, it’s more apt to consider his tactics merciless. With an eternally cold expression, he instantly discovers the enemy’s weakness and immediately crushes it with all his force. There are no limits to what he will consider as an appropriate form of attack and he will not stop no matter how far he has gone. To completely crush your enemy in the quickest and most efficient way possible, so that there is no chance of future retaliation, is his motto. This is what he considers the true form of warfare.

    His arsenal of weaponry and tactics include direct confrontation, guerilla tactics, espionage, and assassination, all of which he is instinctively a master of. His available weaponry includes a small collection of firearms of varying firepower, explosives, knives, and poison gas. Built into his body are a few mechanical weapons such as a finger gun, attachable gatling mount, and an elbow blade. He would normally utilize mustard gas as well, but it seems that his current commander draws the line there.

    When all is said and done, however, Android 33’s true specialty is close quarters combat. His fighting style is a form of overly brutal wrestling, that is further reinforced by his magecraft. His expertise in grappling techniques is almost alarming. For most people, once he has gotten his hands on you, the battle may as well be over.

    Magecraft
    Being a homunculus, Android 33 has an instinctive knowledge of magecraft, but he is far from a master in terms of finesse and wisdom. He can operate his magic circuits and use simple spells, but cannot perform large scale rituals. However, considering his form of combat, simple effective spells are probably better for him than rituals that cannot be used in the heat of battle.

    33’s form of magecraft lies in material transmutation, manifesting specifically in alteration and reinforcement. He is able to manipulate the properties of a material to some degree, reinforcing one of its properties or even giving it a new property. Due to his lack of expertise, though, he limits his spells to simple concepts, such as making himself stronger or turning his skin harder. Although that may not be an impressive form of magecraft, it is effective enough for 33’s purposes. When combined with his close combat fighting techniques, these simple spells can cause great effects. His signature spell is one where he alters the properties of something or someone he touches to make it incredibly brutal and then breaks it with pure brute force.

    Windmill Generator
    A special energy generator installed into Android 33 during his upgrade phase. It is a core that uses elemental conversion magecraft to turn the surrounding wind into magical energy for 33 to expend. As a physical combat-focused homunculus, 33’s magical circuits aren’t as high as they could be so the generator helps to remedy that problem. If he is fighting on an especially windy day, he will be able to use magecraft as freely as he pleases.

    Special Techniques
    Special Techniques

    Rain of Berlin
    A special attack where 33 uses transmutation to make his hand both as hard as steel and as sharp as a blade. He then executes a high-speed karate chop that decapitates his enemy. The resulting fountain of blood from the wound resembles a crimson rain.

    Fog of Hamburg
    An underhanded move where he uses a black Asian mist attack with poison gas. Out of nowhere, he quickly expels the gas from his mouth right into the opponent’s face, when they’re not expecting it. More often the not, the surprise causes them to instinctively breath in the gas.

    Bremen Sunrise
    A one-two boxing combo that is almost a guaranteed finishing move. The first jab applies a transmutation spell that alters the target’s skull to be more brittle, and then the following punch shatters the head entirely. In order to use it efficiently, some time is needed to understand the target’s body structure, but once the preparations are finished, the attack is a super one hit K.O.

    Stuttgart Revolution
    33’s ultimate secret technique he relies on whenever he faces an unbeatable opponent. Increases his own speed and then performs a swift strategic retreat. Never fails.


    Creator's Remark: Another unused RP idea. I've changed a bit of his background to make him more generally applicable, but the basic idea is the same. Was this entire sheet just an excuse to make a Brocken Jr. expy? Yes.


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    I saw the name and thought it was DBZ OC for a moment.

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    Now we just need an Android 34

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    Android 33: wow, his fighting style is brutal. Like, i feel Like he could be a mortal kombat character, its preaty cool

    About the Bianchis, than you for your feedback! The Bianchi family is very unaccomplished, they know a bit about familiar creation, but only simple stuff, and they fumble around with jewel magecracft but are way under the tohsakaand the edelfet.
    About strength, Elene would indeed win on a fight. Thats not because she is stronger, but because she is more combat capable. Andrea acts like he is invencible but that is also a lie.
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    Adamska: Bloble, man, what the hell are you? You're too awesome to be a human
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    And bird of hermes, you wrote "Criarino" wrong in the index
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tobias View Post
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    ^^Fixed

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    May the migthy holy healer watch over our prince

    Voruzhonnije sily Rossíyskoj Federátsii
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    Spetsnaz Sorcery Division


    Password: ******
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    Ivansky Romanov


    Profile
    Height/weight: 1,89m, 86kg
    Birthplace: Pokrovskoye, Siberia
    Age: 29
    Talent: Mana and od manipulation
    Circuit composition: Usual
    Elemental aligment: Earth
    Circuit quality: B+
    Circuit quatity: C++

    Lieutenant in the 1869º sorcery squad. Had major role in Ptitsa offensive and Izhevsk incident.
    Error. Insuficient authorization
    Said to be the ''hero'' of Yefimovich disaster

    All his officials and subordinates pointed out his ''hot-headedness'' and ''impatience'', in what they described as ''a rude old scumbag". Yet, all of them also described him as a "good lad". For any motive, the subject had several wives.
    Talented in manipulating the mana around himself, his experience and leadership earned him several condecorations such as Geroj Rossijskoj Federatsii and Orden Svjatogo Georgija I Stepeni medals. Yet, his disobedience prevented him to attain a highter rank.

    Main abilities
    insert password
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    Zazhimnyy: In short, this spell ''locks'' the mana within 100 meters, making it impossible for another mages to use it. The time limit is 1 minute. This was the used mean to fight the association's Enforcer Richard Melios and the sealing designated Andrei Bóris in the Ptitsa offensive.
    Sifon:Literally burns all od inside a mage. The effect is close to when a beginner mage lose control of his magic circuits, dying in pain. This was the last blow that killed the Enforcer Richard Melios and many of the outlaw mages in Izhevsk incident.
    Error. Unconfirmed source
    [-----]: A spell said to read the flow of mana to 'scout' the terrain, locating any atelier or mage around 2 kilometers.


    The subject's voice diary was anexed to future consults:
    insert библиотекарь ID: ***************

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    Army Officer Voice diary #14: 06/12/2012
    Recorded after the first operation of Ptitsa offensive
    -BEGINING RECORDING-
    I'M FUCKING TIRED! HOLY SHIT, WHY I HAD TO DO ALL THAT?!
    Shit, I half of predicted it. I mean, everyone was too quiet about all that. "it's only a rescuing mission" everyone said, but no one said even WHO we were going to rescue! Luckly my squad was only ordered to search around for enemies while another squad searched the village. And what they found? A FUCKING ENFORCER AND A GODDAMN SEALING DESIGNATED! The result? The other squad was all killed and MY squad had to deal with BOTH! THEY AT LEAST COULD TELL ME THAT THE TARGET WAS A SEALING DESIGNATED!
    But man, that was a hell of a fight. I don't even know how we didn't lose anyone... well, except for Dimitri's squad, but that scumbag deserved it.
    -ENDING RECORDING-

    Army Officer Voice diary #15: 07/24/2012
    -BEGINING RECORDING-
    Shit. Shitshitshitshit I'M SO MAD!!
    After that fucking rescue mission I thought I would at least get some rest... I even already thought what to do during the vacation... but NOOOOO, "We need your squad for the Ptitsa operation" WHAT THE HELL IS THAT OPERATION, ANYWAY? WHY IS EVERYONE SO SECRET ABOUT IT? I WAS FORCED TO PARTICIPATE IN AN OPERATION WITHOUT KNOWING ITS OBJECTIVE!
    Please click to continue

    (3 seconds of silence)
    But the worst of all... I have a bad feeling about all this. I hope all my men get through it.
    -ENDING RECORDING-

    Army Officer Voice diary #18: 12/24/2012
    Recorded after the end of Ptitsa offensive
    -BEGINING RECORDING-
    (10 seconds of silence)
    It's christmas. I never really paid atention to it, but Fernando talked so hapilly about... Ah, Fernando is a new recruit in my squad. He came from Bolivia. Well, was the new recruit.
    The last phase of Ptitsa operation ended a few days ago... and, err, didn't go so well. I tried to warn the HQ before the last mission, but no one heed me. I think they knew everything, and that was their objective.
    So...
    (the voice begins to fail) in the end...(crying)
    -ENDING RECORDING-

    Army Officer Voice Diary #19: 09/02/2013
    Recorded before Izhevsk incident
    -BEGINING RECORDING-
    It's been some time since I've done this. Well, I was too busy training the new recruits and when I finally finish their training the HQ send a new mission to us... What the hell are they thinking?
    -ENDING RECORDING-

    Army Officer Voice diary #20: 10/05/2013
    Recorded after Izhevsk incident
    -BEGINING RECORDING-
    It was horrible. I did all these... things for the army, for my country... and what they give me as reward? A PIECE OF SCRAP METAL!
    (sound of a small metalic object hiting the floor)
    (silence)
    I... can't take it anymore
    -ENDING RECORDING-


    Curent status: MISSING
    Few days after Izhevsk incident, the subject deserted the army. Some reports say he was sighted in a frozen wasteland with an unknown girl.

    End of the profile.
    Loging out...
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    Attachments:

    Information about Sealing designated Andrei Bóris

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    Information about Ptitsa offensive

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    Information about Izhevsk incident

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    Information about Yefimovich disaster
    ID: *************

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    Creator remarks: YOOOOOOO minna. After so many lame sheets, I'M BACK!
    I had this idea when reading Bloble's sheet, and spent all this time developing it. Criticism is appreciated.
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    This might be a controversial tip, but might I suggest a spell checker?

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    What?
    I mean, the word's "mighty", for one thing. "Apreciated" is written with two p's: appreciated. Acces ought to be Access. "Had" a role, not "took" (although this one's debatable). Wives, not wifes. Et cetera.

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    Oh, yes. Thanks
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    Can you tell me where are the errors?
    And any thoughts about the sheet itself?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tobias View Post
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    the sheet has a very cool unusual format, as always, you are realy good with the names and details and the atmosphere the sheet creates with the passwords and loadings is quite awesome

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    also, do you guys think i need to change formats in my magus sheets like i did with my servants?


    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Oh, thanks for that!
    And your new format is better than the previous one, but the previous isn't bad either... So, if you're willing to improve your previous mage sheets, I think it's better just remake the firsts, now that you have more abilities and experience
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tobias View Post
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