Update: Gave Meleager another Skill- Projectiles (Spears) since he was apparently known for spear throwing. Any feedback on the guy? I can see seven people are here...
Update: Gave Meleager another Skill- Projectiles (Spears) since he was apparently known for spear throwing. Any feedback on the guy? I can see seven people are here...
Last edited by RoydGolden; August 31st, 2016 at 07:28 PM.
I don't actually read most profiles anymore, I just come here so the thread is marked as read.
...Not quite sure why you're coming by just to say that you have no interest in reading anything here, but okay.Originally Posted by Arha
Posting here to make Arha come here again
I just want Arha to notice me
Arha-senpaaaaaaai~~~~~~
Because you keep fishing for comments and my original comment was 'I don't read your profiles anymore because you keep spamming them out and I don't like the fundamental concept behind most of them' but that sounded mean so I softened it.
Okay okay I'll ignore everything you three have to say too, happy?
I don't think I have to say "no comment" everytime I see a profile I have nothing to comment on.
...That wasn't directed at you, and in fact I had no idea you were even browsing the thread at all.
Really, there's only like two or three people that give decent feedback around here, so it's just a matter of waiting until they happen to be online.
In which case you might just wait rather than beg for commentary, which you sometimes do all of an hour or two after your post, which is pointless, which you apparently know, so why do it and invite others' ire?
Legitimately I think more people might chime in if you wouldn't actually come across as so desperate for attention.
Localizationing stuff
so basically, a microcosm of the Fanfic forum
Definitely something to keep in mind. Though, in this case, each of my 'beg for feedback' posts did at least include genuine updates as to the sheet itself.
Thanks for the advice, in any case.
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Tell me about it.
The deeper problem is that all your sheets feel uninspired and thrown together in 10 minutes so there's really nothing to comment on.
or a macrocosm since sometimes this thread more active than it
wow I don't think I've ever used macrocosm in a sentence before
Localizationing stuff
That so? Well, you're about right on the ten minutes part, at least.(Well, not quite that, maybe about a half hour or so, give or take...)
Though, I generally have the ideas bouncing around in my head for weeks or even months before actually writing them up. Say, how long does it take most people here to make sheets?
'Uninspired', hmm? Well, that's a rather vague criticism. Regarding Meleager in particular, in what ways do you feel he wasn't fleshed out adequately?
you should post thereTell me about it.
kill me
Linger: Complete. August, 1995. I met him. A branch off Part 3. Mikiya keeps his promise to meet Azaka, and meets again with that mysterious girl he once found in the rain.
Shinkai: Set in the Edo period. DHO-centric. As mysterious figures gather in the city, a young woman unearths the dark secrets of the Asakami family.
The Dollkeeper: A Fate side-story. The memoirs of the last tuner of the Einzberns. A record of the end of a family.
Overcount 2030: Extra x Notes. A girl with no memories is found by a nameless soldier, and wakes up to a world of war.
Here's the thing: if you can't be arsed to do more than a wiki skim and twenty minutes on google before coming up with the character, generally speaking a lot of people are not going to be interested in giving the five minutes required to read your creation and come up with helpful criticism.That so? Well, you're about right on the ten minutes part, at least.
Though, I generally have the ideas bouncing around in my head for weeks or even months before actually writing them up. Say, how long does it take most people here to make sheets?
'Uninspired', hmm? Well, that's a rather vague criticism. Regarding Meleager in particular, in what ways do you feel he wasn't fleshed out adequately?
A lot of the previous servants that got a lot of talk, arguments, or discussion before are usually ones where people actually have a deep or passionate affection or interest toward a particular figure, whether because they're from the country where that myth is told, or they've studied about them in school, or happen to just a mythboner toward them from their general interests or whatever, not because they looked at some random internet page, said "that's cool" then decided to throw them into the type moon wikia's skills and NP pages blender and come up with something.
You want us to care, make Servants of stories you actually care about, rather than this McServant production you seem to do just for the sake of a weekly quota because the thread is quiet.
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McServant production.
So, has Ronald McDonald been made into a sheet yet?
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Would he be a Caster, I wonder?
modern fiction right
Though abandoned, forgotten, and scorned as out-of-date dolls, they continue to carry out their mission, unchanged from the time they were designed.
Machines do not lose their worth when a newer model appears.
Their worth (life) ends when humans can no longer bear that purity.
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