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    Quote Originally Posted by 4score7years View Post
    After. It's another nice twist, I think, and with that he's going full Orochimaru from Naruto. (Weird dude who can transform into a monster and body-snatches guys? Somehow the lovecraftian monster is the less creepy weirdo of the two though)

    I was talking about Item Construction. The marvels of glass and metal.
    Ah. That's good to hear. Regarding the second part... I admittedly didn't give it much thought.

    Probably something to do with electricity though, based on how his inventions are described in the original short story.

    - - - Updated - - -

    I actually have a pretty clear image on how the final battle(s) against Nyarla would go at this point. First time he'd unleash
    Crawling Chaos King
    Nyarlathotep
    and turn into a giant chaos-monster, then eventually get blown to bits by some Excaliblast-style NP all the while screaming in rage at how "filthy humans" could've beaten him. Then when he reincarnates, he's far more openly crazed and psychotic over having been humiliated, but with his greater experience manages to wreck the heroes in round 2.

    He nearly wins before his "host body" (who'd be a sympathetic secondary character or even one of the main heroes for maximum drama) manages to break free of his control for a moment and stabs/otherwise severely wounds themselves to give the heroes enough time to blast him again.

    Just before dying (again) he tries to get in the last laugh by saying that even now he can still reincarnate again in any one of the heroes due to having seen his stone, and will they really be willing to all kill each other off just in the chance of getting rid of his potential host? Then the heroes take the stone and somehow (not sure how but it'd be a super badass moment) deposit it in the heart of the sun through some spatial warping shenanigans, thus insuring it's perpetually consumed in light and can never be activated again for untold millennia.

    Nyarla then totally freaks out and basically has a full-on psychological breakdown over being beaten by such insignificant creatures. As in, convinces himself he must be dreaming the entire time because there's no way humans could've ever possibly bested him. Our heroes have now officially turned a Lovecraftian super-deity into a quivering mind-broken wreck. Omega good job, protagonist-kun!

    ...I probably put way more thought into that scenario then I ever should've, but whatever.

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    Then you realize that Lovecraft can summon Nyarlathotep using the Shining Trapezohedron that he pulled out of Nekronomikon a la Medea.

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    Assassin
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    True Name:Oda Kipposhi
    Also known as: Demon Archer Assassin Santa Lily, Oda Nobunaga Lily, The Big Fool of Owari, King of Festivals
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Likes: Her father, her brother, Her teacher, Monkey, Parties
    Dislikes: Rules, Being ordered around, not being invited to parties
    Parameters and Skills
    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: A+
    MGI: C
    LCK: C

    Class Skills

    Presence Concealment
    D - The class skill of the Assassin class. This the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. With this rank Assassin is suitable for Spying

    Personal Skills

    Charisma
    E- - This is the natural talent to command an army. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. With this rank sadly, the only thing Assassin can do is convince people that she was truly invited by the party.

    Evaporation of Sanity
    EX - Normally this skill would make one reveal their weakness casually, forget important things and etc. And while some parts of it remain true in Assassin's case like casually chatting with enemies, forgetting important things and generally acting like an idiot, meanwhile Assassin has actual no idea that she is fighting an death match against legends. To her everything is a party and the other servants and masters are just other participants of said party. It's close to Mad Enhancement EX. On the other hand, this makes her at first just seem like a normal girl to other servants, an idiot girl, but an normal girl nonetheless.

    Gatecrashing
    EX - This skill represents Assassin's ability to enter crash parties like no one else. Castles, Fortresses, Bounded Fields, Mazes, Reality Marbles, you name it, Assassin can gatecrash through them all. She can enter and leave locations without being invited in or out and isn't detected when she does it so. When asked about it, she will produce an fake id; a fake invitation card; say she was invited by a friend of a friend; change the subject; say that you are his long lost niece and so on. She also gains some minor Transformation abilities, being able to change her appearance to one that better matches those descriptions
    Biography & Lore
    Oda Nobunaga, the Demon King of the Sixth Realm, is quite possibly the most famous japanese historical figure. A key figure on the Sengoku Period and one of the Three Unifiers of Japan, Oda Nobunaga was responsible for some of the greatest military achievements of the land. She brought western techniques to Japanese Warfare, and improved them, innovating the Volley Fire to bring down the mighty Takeda Cavalry. She waged war against Religious Warriors, defeating Ikko Ikki buddhist sects of Nagashima, Mt. Hiei and Hogan-ji; She bested the Formidable Naval Army of the Mori in Kizuwagate; She defeated the treacherous armies of the Mino Three and Matsunaga Hisahide; She overcame the armies of her Sister's Husband, Azai Nakamura & the Asakura Clan. Until the day she died, betrayed by one of her generals, Oda Nobunaga was the closest person to reach the dream of Unification of the Land, and the two other unifiers that followed her, the Sagacious Monkey Toyotomi Hideyoshi and the Crafty Tanuki Tokugawa Ieyasu, were previous followers who used much of what she achieved to continue the dream of unification, even if through much different means. But before the ruthless conqueror who conquered japan through superior might, before the genius warlord who outmaneuvered them all, before the one who kicked japan screaming, bleeding and burning through modern warfare, before the Demon King of the Sixth Realm who waged war against the Heavens, there was only Kipposhi, the Fool of Owari.

    Born as Kipposhi, the second child of Oda Nobuhide, a minor lord of the province of Owari, Oda was a unusual child for its time. She played with kids of all ranks & ages, forgetting her higher rankings. It was during those times that Oda created bonds with people like Hiyoshi-maru, the peasant kid who liked to play in trees much like a monkey, Inuchiyo, the loyal little page who followed him like a puppy, and Takechiyo, the timid political hostage who often showed the craftiness of a tanuki. Kipposhi took those and some more kids by storm, leading them into multiple adventures and parties, having the times of their lives.

    But while she had much fun with them, this was not the expected behavior from the eldest daughter of a military governor like Nobuhide, and so from childhood she was also given strict learning by her father and her personal Hirate Masahide. Masahide specially was important to the young daughter, who learned much under him and who confided to him. Even though her behaviour did not change much, remained erratic throughout her life, Masahide taught her well in all manners of skills like waka, sado including those who weren't usually taught to a daughter, like warfare and gunnery for which Kipposhi fell in love with. Kipposhi's love for gunnery was apparent from the start. As a lover of festivals the guns were not only an deadly weapon they were also resembled in her mind, fireworks.

    Though she wished to live in peace, playing with her friends, the Sengoku Period was a period of chaos, and that peaceful life could never last long. Soon her father died of natural causes and Kipposhi in just one of her usual jokes, sprayed some incense in the ceremonial altar, just trying to lighten the mood:Her father wouldn't want seeing everyone so gloomy. But people didn't understood that, and that was the last draw. She was a disgrace to the family, her brothers who she loved very much now actively ignored and plotted against her, and, perharps more importantly, without saying anything to her, her loved mentor, friend and confidant, commited Seppuku without warning her.

    This drove her into a breaking point. For the first time in the world, people would see the awakening of the one who would become the future Devil King. She took matters by her own hand, and crushed her brothers unifying not only her clan, but the entire province of Owari. And with the province unified, Kipposhi tried for the last time, to return to her peaceful days of fireworks and festivals. But soon, Imagawa Yoshimoto marched to Owari looking to crush the small clan of the Oda to continue his path to Kyoto, the old capital, with an army of 25,000 which vastly outnumbered Oda's 2,000 soldiers. When Kipposhi heard the news, while her retainers bickered on what to do, she could only laugh. And so she played for the last time:

    "A man's life of 50 years under the sky
    is nothing compared to
    the age of this world.
    Life is but a fleeting dream, an illusion --
    Is there anything that lasts forever?"

    Under the cover of thunderstorms, Kipposhi attacked the Imagawa armies who were partying an early victory. The battle was quick and decisive. Imagawa Yoshimoto was beheaded, thinking he was being attacked by his own men, and the Oda laid a decisive blow on the Imagawa who never managed to recover. By ending that party Kipposhi ended herself and now only Oda Nobunaga, the Demon King of the Sixth Realm remained. Clearly the Age of War was not a time for parties.

    But life takes strange paths, and much after the death of Nobunaga, this young version of the warlord is managed to be summoned as an Heroic Spirit. Here, stuck in her delusions, she tries to revive her dream of an eternal festival with her friends and enemies.

    On a side note, when shown her younger self, Oda Nobunaga can only blush and scream in embarrassment while screaming something about drowning her in her ideals. I guess some things are just better left in the past.
    Noble Phantasms
    The Fool's Intoxicating Dream
    Owari's Endless Yoimatsuri

    This is a constant active, but slow Reality Marble that changes the entirety of the city that the grail war is being held. At first it starts slow and nearly unnoticeable: Kids will star playing around more than normal, adults will be less likely to grow angry or sad, and there will be a suddenly grow in vending stalls. After that though, the changes will start to become more noticeably. Nights will start to grown longer, and the architecture of the city will begin to morph in one that resembles the architecture of the cities of the Sengoku Period. Those changes will begin subtle with only the moon lasting a few seconds longer than normally and the habitants just changing the architecture of their houses through normal fashion. But soon the Moon will last for entire days, and whole buildings and castles will raise seemingly from out of nowhere. If the city doesn't has one, then suddenly a River will cross the town in two while lanterns float through them. Fireworks will be constantly being lit and exploded. The city will grow in size almost resembling a maze. Every corner has an stall with many kinds of different games. This is the Internal World inside of the Fool of Owari. An eternal matsuri resembling half of Tsushima Tenno Matsuri, which was Nobunaga's favorite festival. Normal human beings will slowly lose their will and simply join the fun. Additionally the Noble Phantasm will also take hold on Spirits and Wraiths who will take the shape of human beings and join the fun.

    It's not an offensive Noble Phantasm by any means. Any of the people being brainwashed will suffer no damage when the Noble Phantasm finally ends. But it's not like Kipposhi wants to fight. She will be completely enthralled by her own Noble Phantasm, trying all stalls, eating all foods and playing with all the kids. She will not actively engage the Enemy Servants who now have to deal with an seemingly eternal noble phantasm, that can take all the punishment they can throw, being able to regenerate the damage in seconds. The only way to break the noble phantasm is either through an Anti-World Noble Phantasm, Killing the girl or convincing her to give up on partying. Additionally while not an offensive Noble Phantasm, the world will actively conspire against those who try to go against the festival. The streets will intentionally move themselves creating maze-like scenarios, the fireworks will be shoot directly at the enemies as C-rank Noble Phantasms and eventually the habitants will move directly against them.
    Anti-Boredom - EX
    The Raid of Okehazama
    Crashing this Party with no Survivors

    The trump card of Kipposhi, that crystallizes the raid of Okehazama, the first great victory of Oda Nobunaga's long and illustruous career. It also symbolizes the death of Kipposhi's lifetime of partying, so this is an Noble Phantasm that the girl hates using it. At the end of the day is a simple of NP: It's an Anti-Party(Anti-World) Noble Phantasm that disrupts the flux of leylines in a area that she uses as an assassination method. She overflows the leylines with her own prana, and disrupts them, sending the leyline directly to the one linked with them. The enemy will be overflowed by the Prana that carries an intoxicating substance to it, thanks to his Internal World, essentially killing them by overdose. The attack is more effective the most strong and complex the Bounded Field is: If is just a simple bounded field, then the opponent will just get a simple dizzy spell but if it is an complex Bounded Field and even a Reality Marble, then the effects will be dramatic.

    Heres the thing though, as her first Noble Phantasm is always active, when she first uses Okehazama, she will automatically cancel her first Noble Phantasm, essentially attacking herself. She doesn't suffer any damage, but when she sends her intoxicating prana to herself it somehow cancels it. It's an effect somehow close to one's Jack the Ripper situation. After she recovers from the initial shock her personality will suffer from a massive change. She is no longer Kipposhi, but now she has the personality of the Demon Archer, Oda Nobunaga. An Oda Nobunaga with an incredibly Hangover, but the Devil Saber nonetheless. Through out the rest of the war, she will remain with that personality. She loses the Evaporation of Sanity skill, she gains the skill Migraine with an B-rank in it. She can still bring some of her first Noble Phantasm effects, like summoning fireworks and walls to fight the opponent when necessary, but she honestly just wants a drink of coffee and get out of the sun
    Rank A - Anti-Party
    Remember when is said my next servant was going to be a BR one? I lied.(Actually i'm just stumped on Mystic Feets of Something)
    Here, an alternate version of an existing servant. One of my favorites Oda Nobunaga.
    These are remnants of an very old Nobunaga servant that tried to fit the "many classes" role. The joke with that sheet was that theres so many new animes with based around Nobunaga with multiple interpretations the world doesnt know who Nobunaga is, so he would change every day between Classes. Archer Nobunaga would be Demon Archer, Saber Nobunaga would be a serious warlike conqueror with Tenka Fubu as a Sword, Berserker Nobunaga would be a literal demon and so on. Assassin Nobunaga would be based on his "Fool of Owari" moniker with Okehazama as a Noble Phantasm. I left that in the bin a long time a go, and suddenly i had the urge to revisit that idea(it was because of the fake Imperial Grail War teaser...fuck u typemoon i want that). Before Okehazama was going to be a either a bounded field that made everyone want to party or a party-wide presence concealment. I dunno if i went with is better, but i think this has more charm.
    I'm also easily amused by servants with Longer Titles so heres Demon Archer Assassin Lily Santa

    ARE YOU READY
    PUT YA GUNZ ON
    LETZ PARTY
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    >Gatecrashing
    Also known as Liz's unique brand of Battle Continuation from Extra.
    Bane/10

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    Kipposhi: Nobu Lily, huh? As well as being damn hilarious (and adorable) it also ties in quite well with Nobunaga's own legend with some typical Nasuverse style extrapolations, rather then being a total invention of memery like Jeanne Santa Lily. Only critique is that you seem to have messed up the spoiler tagging on her second NP.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    >Gatecrashing
    Also known as Liz's unique brand of Battle Continuation from Extra.
    Bane/10
    You're absolutely right about Liz, i just forgot about her.
    I'm seriously too lazy to change it now, but lets go with "Minor Transformation bonus allows for some difference between skills and it isn't JetKinen being a lazy bastard"

    t-the fire rises, r-right?

    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Kipposhi: Nobu Lily, huh? As well as being damn hilarious (and adorable) it also ties in quite well with Nobunaga's own legend with some typical Nasuverse style extrapolations, rather then being a total invention of memery like Jeanne Santa Lily. Only critique is that you seem to have messed up the spoiler tagging on her second NP.
    Yeah, i fixed it.
    Also wrote some more background on my servant creation idea, if anyone is interested on that nonsense.
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    not enough kanjispam imo

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nuclear Consensus View Post
    not enough kanjispam imo
    As in "not enough japanese characters?"
    It can't be helped if so, i can't read the language

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    Quote Originally Posted by JetKinen View Post
    As in "not enough japanese characters?"
    It can't be helped if so, i can't read the language
    It's not that; I just think that a Japanese character like Nobunaga who has NPs named in Japanese should have... NPs named in Japanese.

    kotaro and kintoki dont count because theyre chuu2

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    Quote Originally Posted by Nuclear Consensus View Post
    It's not that; I just think that a Japanese character like Nobunaga who has NPs named in Japanese should have... NPs named in Japanese.

    kotaro and kintoki dont count because theyre chuu2
    I understand
    I wish i could translate those terms to japanese, but i'm already butchering Japaneae History
    Butchering the language with google translate is a step too far for me

    I guesa "Crashing this Party with no survivors" is too memey

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    Quote Originally Posted by JetKinen View Post
    Nobu Lily
    This sheet is great! Makes me a bit interested in making a certain Japanese Servant's Lily version...

    On an unrelated note, an Oda Nobunaga Berserker Lily Servant should be called Oda Nobunaga Alter Santa Lily.

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    Quick question, but what does the Miracle skill actually do?
    I tried looking on Chaldeum and other places but didn't find anything concrete.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Quick question, but what does the Miracle skill actually do?
    I tried looking on Chaldeum and other places but didn't find anything concrete.
    EDIT: Sorry. Wrong skill.

    Hmm... I don't know. The wiki described it as 'the skill to make the impossible possible.'
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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    If I'm not mistaken, the Servant, upon summoning, chooses either a Rank-Up in Charisma, automated HP recovery, the skill to create a holy shroud, aaaaand I forgot the rest.
    That's the Saint skill, and this question is probably better addressed to the Questions thread.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Quick question, but what does the Miracle skill actually do?
    I tried looking on Chaldeum and other places but didn't find anything concrete.
    Unexplained at the moment. It's stated to be a skill in the same nature as Pioneer of the Stars in it's ability to make the impossible possible, but it's fundamentally different because it can be applied to different things than the latter. I used the skill for my Romanus sheet and just made it so that Miracle works by achieving the impossible through supernatural means - i.e. quite literally a ''miracle'' - such as magically reconstructing a broken vase and it's content, praying for the river to fall back before it creates a flood, etc. while Pioneer of the Stars is different because making the impossible into possible is a result achieved through the owner's own skill and sheer talent rather than just unexplained magic means.

    That's just my headcanon/made up description of the skill until further notice though, but you can go along with it if you really want to.

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    I love wank, I really-really do. I once disliked Scathach because personally I feel that she is a total wank of a character, then I started to warm up to her because I realized I love wanking myself. Not to mention most of my favorite Servants (that isn't a cute girl) are total wank. (ex: Tesla, Edison, Babbage and King Hassan)

    So enter the most wanked (serious) Servant I ever created, Uesugi Kenshin. She is my first Servant, but I guess I don't know shit about Nasuverse back then. When remaking this, I thought to myself to nerve her but still make her as an OP Servant, I'm sorry I ended up wanking her even more. Meta-cally speaking, this Servant is created under my vision of "Japanese Artoria, act like Artoria, but actually a total opposite of her." Confused? Hopefully the lore and profile part (which I changed a lot from my original) successfully explain my intention.

    I should updated my Atlantes sheet because Illusionism is revealed as a separate Skill from Magecraft, which originally separate Skills in my original sheet. I actually can be a clairvoyance for once!

    As usual, I encourage you to read the sheets in chronological order.

    "Saber, Uesugi Kenshin on your service. So you are my Master?
    I might be a military commander, but please treats me well and fair.
    "
    Class : Saber
    True Name : Uesugi Kenshin
    Origin : Historical facts (Japan)
    Height/Weight : 157 cm/ 53kg
    Gender : Female
    Master : Gudao
    Alignment : Chaotic Good
    Attribute : Man
    Trait : Dragon (As long her NP is active)

    Parameter
    STR : B MGI : D
    AGI : A LUCK : B
    END : D NP : EX

    Appearance
    Spoiler:

    The clothing are based on her depictions from this painting. The reason why I choose the color navy blue is because she often associated with white and blue (which I fuse them), while purple is to reinforce her might while retaining her femininity. The pattern in her chest armor modeled after Chinese dragon's head. The simplistic katana is my inability (and lack of interest) to draw weapons.


    She took her appearance as the young commander during her early ascension as the head of her family (19 years old). She has neck length-silky black hair and yellow skin. She wear her Uesugi's Warlord clothing- holding the crest of her clan in the front and the letter "毘" (Bi) in her back, representing justice. Sometimes she wears Buddhist hat, but it is a hindrance during combat.

    Combat
    She wield the sword Himezuru Ichimonji, a 1 meter length odachi. it was considered to be impractical to use due to its length. The sword has spirit of a princess dwell inside it- Tsuru, which she able to communicate with Saber telepathically. While it's carry a small amount of mystery in it, it's not considered to be a Noble Phantasm, similar with Medea's Argon Coin. The sword itself also used as the catalyst for her summoning.

    Saber's fighting style involve fast and parrying slashes that confuse her opponent, then quickly fall back to her original position to readjust her stance- the same tactic she implemented on her army. Since Japanese swords isn't suited well for clashes and Tsuru always complaining whenever the sword is damaged , she developed a technique that bounce her blade upon contact with another weapon. Enemy confused enough would think that she aiming for particular limb, which she quickly exploited by slicing any area that isn't guarded.

    Profile and Lore

    Uesugi Kenshin is one of the most famous Warlord during the Sengoku era. She is best known as a young military genius and effective administrator, earning the title "Avatar of God" or "God of War". Her rivalry with Shingen Takeda was infamous for being a symbol of good sportsmanship and romance.

    Born as Nagao Kagetora, she willingly alienated herself from the warring conflict until the age of 14, which she spend 7 years of studying Buddhism. However, she was forcefully dragged into the conflict for the sake of her clan, which in the middle of destruction. She quickly proven to be a capable warrior and leader, dragging her even more to the conflict she never ask.

    When she was trying to take a break to Mount Koya for prayers, Her people demand her to abandon such interest and devoted her to the clan even more. At this point, she realized that her people doesn't care for her well being, treating her as a mere device to gain prosperity.

    A diligent worker and natural genius, she will give her best effort on any work she given with. It is not because she love to do so, but she was under a self impression of "should finish my work perfectly so nobody will complain and done with it", then she can relax and enjoy herself without hindrance. This ironically satisfy her people so much that they ended up expected her to do something more- becoming an endless cycle. She ended up continuously increasing her stress, unable to do any enjoyable activity.

    Even so, she enjoy her rivalry with Takeda Shingen, something that they mutually feel. A famous story says that Kenshin helped Shingen by sending salts in an economical crisis, claiming that war should won by swords, not salts. The death of Shingen hurt Kenshin so much, as once again she lost another source of joy.

    The Demon King of Six Heavens- Oda Nobunaga's unstoppable warpath and advanced weaponry ended up on halt during her clash with Kenshin. During the siege on Nanao Castle, by employing handful of unorthodox and clever tactics, Kenshin successfully score a solid victory to Nobunaga despite lacking in numbers. It is said that as long Kenshin exist, Nobunaga will never be able to unified Japan. In the end, Kenshin dies from an unknown symptoms, perhaps she tired with the endless demand from her people- slowly crippling her body by sheer stress.

    Originally, she wish to redo her life as a normal girl. However, her past summoning ended up to make her reconsider her wish upon the sight of modern Japan, something that might not happen if she changes the past.

    "The world today is very beautiful, I will answer any summons as long I summoned in this era. Thank you Master, for saving our future. If only you summoned me earlier, I will personally help you in those troublesome Singularities."

    Personality
    A well mannered and polite young woman- a Japanese lady's role model. She speaks using the most polite way, rarely throwing any needless insult, even to those who offend and disgust her, which make people judge her as emotionless. Despite her cold and indifferent front, she seems able to show a very snarky and lively side around Tsuru, something that she will never show even to her trusted Master.

    While she view war and bloodshed is necessary to gain peace, she will quickly reconsider doing such if there is any alternative to do so. As a faithful Buddhist, she practice all of it teaching and uphold justice through the heaven. As a human, by her very nature she is a city girl that only care about happiness.

    She likes doing any mundane activities that didn't require thinking, but that's because she already tired from overwork for doing anything. She hates ungrateful and demanding people the most- but she will not display such emotion towards other people. Her hobby is poetry and literature- especially Sun Tzu's Art of War, she has been released few numbers of it under the pen name- Soushin.

    "What I likes? I think I spend my time on poetry a lot. But relaxing while doesn't doing anything meaningful is surprisingly relaxing."
    "What I hates? Umm, I don't think I can hate people so much to be mentioned. Eh? Why I specifically mentioned people? I-It's not like what you think of!"
    "My wish? I do once have something like that... but now, walking through the modern street, viewing those magnificent architecture and viewing people doing their earnest is a joy in itself."


    Class Skill

    Riding B
    An ability to ride mounts in high expertise. Allowing the user to handle most vehicles with above average skill. However, the likes of Phantasmal Beast is beyond its capability.

    Magic Resistance C+
    Cancel spells with a chant below two verses. Cannot defend against Magecraft on the level of High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals. Gain higher advantages to Curses and similar type of Magecraft. As a Buddhist monk, various mantras and enlightenment has been developed by Kenshin to dispel Japanese Curses from demons.

    Personal Skill

    Knowledge of Respect and Harmony C+
    A Skill that prevents any decrease in the effectiveness of a technique, regardless of how many times it is used against the same opponent. All of her attack cause the enemy to roll a perception check, failing them will decrease their ability to analyze the battle slightly. Those with C rank Instinct or other similar Skill can bypass the check.

    The art of swordsmanship, surrounding herself in a serenity, a harmony between rage and calmness- such is a skill that developed by warrior monks. In practice, her attacks confuse her enemy making them heavily guarding particular area, while leaving another limb defenseless, which at that moment her true strike has been decided.

    Military Tactic C
    A Skill that display one expertise in mobilizing an army, rather than a dueling combat. Allow Saber to chose the best course of actions during combat with numerous forces. To win a war, it is not only decided by the tactics that deployed in battles- administrations, organizing and training troops, economy, agriculture, network and morale were instrumental factors. In a way, Saber is in her best under a long term and grand scale battle.

    However, she possessed a weakness that she rarely considered the lives of her army. If it's mean gaining a certain victory, sacrificing 35% of her total forces is not a big loss. This is the reasons why her army able to defeat Takeda and Oda's superior army, in a way it's an advantage in itself.

    Himezuru (姫鶴)
    Princess Tsuru is a spirit that dwell inside Saber's sword. A very chatty spirit that also complain a lot, which often annoy Saber. Their not-so-fated meeting started when Saber ordered a blacksmith to shorten the sword for practical reasons. Shortly after that, she materialized herself to stop her from doing so. After that, she persistently annoy Saber ever since. Not every great men can communicate with a spirit, Saber able to do so because her devotion towards Bishamonten heighten her spiritual awareness.

    While somewhat useless, Tsuru can provide various advice (snark comment) during combat. Since she is a spirit born from man made sword, she possess the ability to read the "intent" of other man made swords, working similarly with the skill- Instinct. Despite being treated as a hindrance, Saber actually enjoy her company and treated her as a close friend, balancing her state of mind which worked as a mental resisting ability.

    Tsuru : Don't put me in your back like those typical nodachi, okaaaaay? I can't see anything there and looking at your stupid kanji 3 minute long make me question my life choice!
    Kenshin : Fine, fine! Just shut up already!
    Tsuru : Yay, Kenshin-chan is the best!

    Divine Spirit's Avatar
    A Skill that define a person aptitude to be a Divine Spirit's vessel. After becoming a Buddhist monk, Saber's body and mind has been developed to serve Bishamonten, becoming one of the most devoted human to his cause. Normally, this skill provide zero merits to a Servant, as she has the danger to be possessed by a hostile Divine Spirit that match her in some degree.

    However, that is not the case to the mighty Uesugi Kenshin...

    NOBLE PHANTASMS

    Dragon of Echigo (越後の龍) : Heaven and Earth Crossed Rivalry
    Rank C+++ (A)
    Anti Unit
    Range : 1 Unit
    Maximum targets : 1 Person

    Dragon and Tiger- the two beast has been fighting in eternity without triumphing each other, that is the most famous anecdote possessed by both Uesugi Kenshin and Shingen Takeda. It wasn't their superb military prowess that define them, it wasn't their powerful warriors that make them well known, but their never ending rivalry- a medieval romance that echoes across Japan.

    "If the Uesugi army were spotted marching to a battle, it is definitely the Takedas they are up against!"or "The Dragon of Echigo is coming!" such are, the most common view people has to her. Her enemies feared her so much that, they started to treat her like an actual disaster.

    An always active type Noble Phantasm, taking form as an aura with an appearance of a Chinese dragon shrouding Saber. Saber has the physical power of a dragon as long as it active, receiving a Dragon trait in the process. Saber gain the ability to fly and her slash become as damaging as a dragon claw. Unlike the Western dragons that synonymous with fire breathing disasters, a Chinese dragon is often depicted as a guardian deity, as such- Saber didn't gain the fire breathing ability that most dragons has.

    Since Saber isn't actually related to a dragon in any form, the optimal power she gain is weaker to those related to a dragon. At her highest peak, its power can be comparable to those of boosting type A Rank NPs. The power is also fluctuates based on how they perceive Saber's might. The more she feared and threatened her opponents, higher the dragon power she received. On the other hand, this NP will rendered as useless to those who possessed high Charisma.

    The draconic aura can be released at once, firing a horizontal wave taking form of a dragon, becoming an attack that comparable with D Rank Anti Army NP, this move dubbed by Saber as "Dragon Blade (龍の剣) : Descend of The Dragon from Heaven to Earth". During this time, she lost her Dragon trait and will be reactivated once her magical energy is recharged.

    However, the true might of the Heroic Spirit- Uesugi Kenshin, lies on her second Noble Phantasm...


    "Even a life-long prosperity is but one cup of sake;
    A years of life is passed in a dream;
    I know not what life is, nor death.
    Year in year out-all but a dream.
    Both Heaven and Hell are left behind;
    I stand in the moonlit dawn,
    Free from clouds of attachment!
    On Beishiramanaya Sowaka!
    "
    On Beishiramanaya Sowaka (オム・ビシシムラナヤ・ソワカ) : O War God, Hear My Prayer
    Rank EX
    Anti Unit
    Range : 1 Unit
    Maximum targets : 1 Person

    The Avatar of God or God of War himself, that is how allies and foes refer to Uesugi Kenshin. A symbol of fear, authority and absoluteness that Saber possess in the battlefield. Whatever or not she is really the Avatar of Bishamonten is no longer important, for anyone not lucky enough to encounter her in the battlefield, she is indeed a godly being that can't be surpassed by ordinary men.

    By sacrificing her life (metaphorically) to Bishamonten, Kenshin invite the Divine Spirit to possess her. Allowing the Divine Spirit to fuse with her body and soul. A perfect synchronization of man and god, in other word- becoming the Pseudo Servant Bishamonten.

    Her parameter, Skills, Alignment, Attribute and even her Saint Graph changed into Bishamonten's. Her eye color become red like those possessed by demi gods and her other NP is sealed. At this moment, the Servant Uesugi Kenshin is no more...

    Bishamonten

    "The bravest warriors surpass all others at the front of the battleline."

    Class : Saber
    True Name : Bishamonten
    Origin : Japanese Buddhism
    Height/Weight : 157 cm/ 53kg
    Gender : "Female"
    Alignment : Lawful Good
    Attribute : Sky
    Trait : Divine

    Parameter
    STR : A MGI : EX
    AGI : A+ LUCK : EX
    END : C NP : -

    Profile and Lore
    Bishamonten is a god of war and justice, thought to be the punisher of evildoers and protecting those that fighting for justice. Bishamonten was Japanese adaptation of the Buddhist god, Vaisravana- one of the Four Heavenly Kings. Like Vaisravana and Mesoamerican gods, Bishamonten is essentially a Divine Spirit that live by jumping across many body of mortals. Kenshin was simply one of them.

    Bishamonten's action is driven on his will to destroy and to protect: those who he contempt as evil will be hunted until he successfully erase them, those who he consider as good will be protected until they free from harm; In a way, he is a machine that work under a program he assigned to.

    While normally Bishamonten's weapon of choice isn't a sword, Kenshin aren't accustomed with spear and pagoda, doubled with the fact that Kenshin is summoned under Saber Class Container. Nevertheless, it isn't an issue that will reduce the performance of a Divine Spirit.

    Class Skill

    Riding B
    An ability to ride mounts in high expertise. Allowing the user to handle most vehicles with above average skill. However, the likes of Phantasmal Beast is beyond its capability.

    Magic Resistance A
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what high-thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi.

    Personal Skill

    Military Tactic A+++
    It is no longer a skill of an expertise in rallying forces, but rather- a divine authority on art of war. A mere presence of a god will heighten the morale, intellect and physical ability of an army to their highest peak, allowing said army developing their own effective tactics without reliance on a commander.

    Tamonten (多聞天)/Listener of Teaching A
    A composite Skill between Territory Creation and Guardian Knight. Bishamonten can create a Bounded Field around those who he choose to protect, any harm entering the field will be instantly dispatched. It is not a Skill that raise one's power to protect another, but it remove any harming intention on the Bounded Field as long as it active. In practice, any attack inside it will be rendered as useless.

    Goddess's Core B
    A skill that express the perfectness of a goddess. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels mental interference and prevents the body from disadvantageous changes.

    While normally Bishamonten is a male god that didn't come with this Skill, the female body that he possessed allow him to access this Skill as a Servant. However, the potency of this Skill is lower than those owned by a real perfect goddess.


    Once Bishamonten take control of a body, it is nearly impossible to separate Kenshin's soul. However, it might be possible to do so with super high amount of magical energy and the willingness of Bishamonten himself.


    Interaction with other Servants
    Nobunaga Oda- You might be a terrible person, but Japan wouldn't become such beautiful nation today without your effort.

    Okita Souji-Reduced Earth? Such a graceful technique. My swordsmanship looks barbaric in comparison...

    Sasaki Kojiro-
    Kenshin : It must be nice having the freedom to put your sword in the back.
    Kojiro : Excuse me?
    Tsuru : EXCUSE ME?

    Artoria Pendragon- How could you devoted yourself for your people like that?

    EMIYA- If being a hero of justice hurt you so much, why not slacking off from your duty for once?

    Xuanzhang- Umm, are you really Sanzou?! You are joking right, RIGHT?

    Sun Tzu- *GASP* It-it's an honor to meet you, sir! Eh, Stop shaking your hand? Ah... I'm sorry! Umm...

    Baybars- You remind me of my dear friend, Shingen.

    Trivia

    -The sword spirit Tsuru and Tsuruhime is not the same person.
    -Her height is accurate with Koei's claim as a historical description, I don't find their source tho.
    -The first NP is based on Hanzo and Genji's Ultimate.
    -One of many famous genderbent victim in other Japanese media. Mostly because he never married nor having any children, also to make his rivalry with Shingen more romantic. (Read: It justified to genderbent him!)
    -The ruby text "Heaven and Earth Crossed Rivalry" is named after the movie "Heaven and Earth." Which retell the rivalry between Kenshin and Shingen.
    -Her 2nd NP's line is her infamous death poem that I modified a bit.
    -If there is a Bond 10 CE, it would be about her routine with Tsuru.
    -Please Epic of Remnants, add Kenshin and genderbent her!
    Last edited by Spartacus; February 19th, 2018 at 03:21 AM. Reason: update faceclaim with a newer version, bishamonten got one too

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    Kenshin: Pretty nice sheet. I like how the duality between Kenshin and Bishamonten is dealt like Hyde and Jekyll. I assume that Bishamonten does not have access to Echigo no Ryuu, and Himetsuru becomes unresponsive.

    And what is it with Japanese Sabers and sword beams?

    Execute C:\local\lib\toh.exe?
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    people who have waifus are necessarily mentally ill


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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    And what is it with Japanese Sabers and sword beams?
    king arthur

    memes aside, okita doesn't have one

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    sigh

    I want to do a sheet with Omphale as a "heel boy!" dominant type, but I can't find the energy.

    Plus there hasn't been an Omphale sheet yet and that's just wrong.
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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
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    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    Kenshin: Pretty nice sheet. I like how the duality between Kenshin and Bishamonten is dealt like Hyde and Jekyll. I assume that Bishamonten does not have access to Echigo no Ryuu, and Himetsuru becomes unresponsive.

    And what is it with Japanese Sabers and sword beams?
    Its work similar with Jekyll and Hyde but Its more permanent, unless there is final episode asspull miracle going on. Yes, Echigo no Ryuu and Himezuru is gone.

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