Good sheet! As a Lancer, I think he could have his spear as a second NP based around betrayal? Other than that, it's pretty darn solid.
Also, did you draw that picture?
Good sheet! As a Lancer, I think he could have his spear as a second NP based around betrayal? Other than that, it's pretty darn solid.
Also, did you draw that picture?
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Hagen: Interesting take on the guy that goes for the more sympathetic approach Nasu/Higashide envisioned, rather then making him a Shinji-style spineless dick. I like how you managed to work in various lesser known anecdotes about him into the sheet, and not just the most famous stuff surrounding Siegfried's betrayal. I have a couple questions though.
First, is there any particular reason Magic Resistance is so high? Second, I'm not sure if Eye Of The Mind (False) and Veteran Knight's Wisdom are really both necessary, since they seem to cover pretty similar ground both mechanically and in conceptual basis. Then again, the same could be said about Diarmuid's EOTM and Knight Tactics, but still... something to consider. Lastly, I second Hermes that he could use an NP involving his "betrayal" of Siegfried, since it's kind of an important part of his legend even if you're not making it the be-all and end-all.
VKOW sounds like Instinc plus EoTMT
is that meant to be composite skill or smth
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Source: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.p...st_id=24777678
Class: Caster
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Origin: Historical
Region: America
Parameters
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: E
Mana: EX
Luck: A
NP: C
Height/Weight: 181cm/77kg
Gender: Male
Likes: America, educated youth, Ben Franklin
Dislikes: Illiterates, Andrew Jackson
Talents: Language
Natural enemy: Shakespeare
Attribute: Man
Traits: Male, Servant, Human
Class Skills:
Territory Creation: (B)
Territory Creation is a Caster-class Skill. It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
As a teacher, creation of a School becomes possible.
Enchant: (B)(A+)
Caster is able to add powerful functions to other people's important items. Basically an ability which strengths the Master's fighting abilities. He himself is the audience, spectating the battle, changing the course of the fight as it progresses.
Raises to A+ when using his Noble Phantasm.
Personal Skills:
Conceptual Improvement: (C)(EX)
Conceptual Improvement is the special right and unfair advantage of improving any tool, from any given time or place. A bow becomes stronger, a sword becomes sharper, an axe becomes heavier, etc.
The amount by which something can be improved depends on the rank of the Skill. While Caster’s unmodified rank is C, when summoned by an English-speaking person inside an English-speaking country, it jumps extraordinarily to EX. Empowered by the same patriotic force given to a certain lion-headed individual, even Divine Constructs can be slightly altered when these conditions are met.
Linguist: (EX)
Linguistics is the scientific study of language, and involves an analysis of language form, language meaning, and language in context. Linguists traditionally analyse human language by observing an interplay between sound and meaning. Phonetics is the study of speech and non-speech sounds, and delves into their acoustic and articulatory properties. The study of language meaning, on the other hand, deals with how languages encode relations between entities, properties, and other aspects of the world to convey, process, and assign meaning, as well as manage and resolve ambiguity. While the study of semantics typically concerns itself with truth conditions, pragmatics deals with how situational context influences the production of meaning.
Grants bonus modifiers when making a check against any kind of verbal event or attack. Caster’s method of magecraft functions by reducing all functions in the universe to linguistic mathematical equations. This allows him to grasp concepts far more quickly than most other Heroic Spirits, especially ones of his class. The applications of “a vision of language” are diverse. Although completely useless in straightforward combat, by visualizing a duel as a “conversation between individuals” (by way of body language), Caster gains a degree of survivability akin to Eye of the Mind (True). Any concept that could be said to have a language, no matter how slight, can be exploited.
High-Speed Incantation: (E+++)
High-Speed Incantation is the ability to speak magical incantations at an accelerated speed.
While Caster’s magic level is as nil as possible outside of what’s allotted to him by his class container, the speed at which he’s able to recite incantations is comparable to a first class magus due to verbal shortcuts and other helpful techniques he can devise for himself on the spot. These lessen the complexity of the incantation, and in essence shortens all thaumaturgy to Single-Action incantations because of his mastery over language itself.
While not explicitly helpful in the general orthodox sense, it does make using his Noble Phantasms that much easier.
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
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Skull Face+Death Note
Linking directly from pixiv this time because imgur is bunk for this particular pic right now. Sorry if it's too huge.
Also it turned my gif into an mp4. What the fuck.
Last edited by Ail Don; January 30th, 2017 at 08:14 PM.
Pixiv doesn't allow for direct image linking. I recommend reverse google searching it to find a copy (there'll probably be one on pintrest and link that one.
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Imgur just randomly started working again so we all good now
Sweet, the sheet itself is pretty good - you're developing a high standard. Though I may ask why Enchant is a class skill? (But if you're going by Extella where they're inconsistent then why not)
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He's pretty close to Will in terms of combat, I thought. Since he's not much of an author and more of a linguist, Enchant is basically a product of his NP.
I could have mentioned it replaced Item Construction like it did with Will though. Woops.
I don't think this guy's actually been done before, at least not that I've seen. I think he's a pretty interesting figure though, so here he is. The NP is a little tenuous, but I think it works, at least.
Class: CasterWho ever turn'd upon his heel to hear
My warning that the tyranny of one
Was prelude to the tyranny of all?
My counsel that the tyranny of all
Led backward to the tyranny of one?
This power hath work'd no good to aught that lives
And these blind hands were useless in their wars.
- Tennyson, 'Tiresias'
Gender: That depends
Alignment: Chaotic Good
True Name: Tiresias
Appearance:
Parameters:
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: B
Luck: C
Class Skills:
Territory Creation: C+ - Since Caster was a wanderer in life, his personality is not suited to the creation of personal terrain. As a woman and a priestess, however, Caster is far more content to remain in one place, and the territory that she constructs approaches a 'Temple' in power.
Item Construction: D - Caster has simply no skill in the creation of magical items.
Personal Skills:
Mystic Eyes of Foresight: EX - Eyes that have the power to unfailingly glimpse the future. As an Oracle, Caster almost completely unmatched. However, this ability comes at the cost of Caster's regular sight, leaving him unable to see the present. It can be considered similar to sensory overload, and can be immensely distracting, particularly in a direct fight.
Animal Dialogue: C - The ability to communicate with animals. Typically, Caster only talks to birds, since he finds their song pleasing. He has the ability to communicate with other animals, but since they often rely more on body language, his understanding is hindered.
Necromancy: B- - Magical spells that call up the spirits of the dead. Usually, the spirits are called simply for the information that they impart - a way to view the past, in addition to the future that Caster can see. The spirits can be used offensively, though they have very little power individually, and Caster finds using them this way distasteful.
Noble Phantasm:
Lore:
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