I mean, for my Seth sheet I just took the lazy route and solely emphasized the 'evoking names of God' aspect of Kabbalah...
I mean, for my Seth sheet I just took the lazy route and solely emphasized the 'evoking names of God' aspect of Kabbalah...
Do you guys know any sites for a good english-irish dictionary/translation site? I'm making a Servant of Irish origins, and I think I need a reliable source.
Which is fine. You basically made it Divine Words and Runecraft: The HebrewingOriginally Posted by RoydGolden
Since Seth, though the first user of Kabbalah aside from Adam and Yahweh, wasn't really all that well known for using it , it makes sense that he doesn't really have an Np related to its esoteric functions.
Now, a renowned Kabbalist would have an esoteric Np that would make anyone's head spin.
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Do you mean Gaelic?
The Irish language doesn't exist. Gaelic, the Irish derivative of the Celtic Proto-language that got smashed together with Latin, German, and French on the mainland, does exist however.
Sorry, yes, indeed I am talking about Gaelic, I didn't mean to call it the former.
Last edited by SleepMode; March 18th, 2017 at 12:19 AM.
It's one of my pet peeves, because it's like calling the language Hindu "Indian", or Latin "Roman", or Yiddish "Jewish".
But I don't actually have a good translator for you. Sorry.
I should apologize for that earlier, I wasn't exactly familiar with this language.
No dictionary site either?
Jewgle Translate is not recommended.
http://learngaelic.net/dictionary/in...holeword=false
The search engine, however, is your friend.
Thanks for the link!
But unlike Hindustani and Latin, Irish Language isn't an uncommon term, and you can find books and other things calling Irish Gaelic as "Irish" (probably to not mix with Scott Gaelic). Even the main page of Wikipedia for it is called "Irish Language".
And theorically, Yddish means Jewish (and apparently there was a time that it was called like that in English).
I'm pretty sure Irish is a very common shorthand for Irish Gaelic. Better than running the risk of confusing Irish and Scottish, which definitely will get you murdered.
Doubly so if you're English.
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I don't think so.
*spittake*
Yes, but the proper name is Irish Gaelic, thank you very much.
Then you risk confusing it with Hebrew, and Yiddish is predominantly spoken by a very specific subset of the Jewish population, hailing from Eastern Europe.
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(Currently a WIP, but this is the NP for the Servant I'm currently making, thoughts about it so far?)
Ňran-Nŕdair - I Sing to thee, Earth, to Turn the Tide - B+ - Anti-Country/Thaumaturgy -
A Noble Phantasm formed from Caster’s “Biggest Hit,” a poem that changed the course of the Milesians’ lives when they invaded Ireland.
During the battle for occupation of Ireland, the Milesian navy was being blocked off by a magical storm stretching around Ireland’s shores, while the three kings’ druids and archers bombarded them. To even the odds, Caster poured all that he had into a single poem; in turn, he was able to summon the spiritual manifestation of the island, or “Spirit of Ireland,” and ushered it to disable and expel all magic on its shores. With this, the Milesians were able to advance and conquered the land for themselves.
To activate the NP, Caster must sing through a song/poem dedicated to the land he’s currently on. And upon finishing the song, the collective will of the nature spirits, or the “Spirit” of the land will be conjured, and Caster can command it to supply himself with mana from the land, greatly strengthening his magical capabilities. Another is to temporarily nullify all absorption of mana and functioning magecraft in the country, disabling magi and forcing them to use the Od within their bodies to cast. Also, this greatly restricts any Skills or Noble Phantasms of Servants that require drawing large amounts of prana from their Masters or the mana around them.
Unfortunately, because all use of magecraft is disabled, this also leaves Caster’s magic useless - making him a sitting duck in the ways of combat. Additionally, if Caster were to use the NP again, he must think of another song to call upon the spirit, for the same proses won’t work on the fickle spirits of the earth. Note that this NP is only used to even the odds, so it can’t be used when Caster isn’t at a disadvantage. Also, if Caster is in a country other than Ireland, then he has to create a new song in the country’s native language, which would slow down the activation sequence by a considerate amount. Thus, it’s recommended that he should prepare the song before engaging opponents.
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behold, master here is what i have ploughed for 3 days
Class:rider
True name: Prince marko
Place of origin: Serbia
Height: Unknown
Weight: Unknown
Likes: Riding His horse, Destroying evil
Talents: Horse Riding, Skills with various weapons, Great Strenght
Alignment: Chaotic/Lawful good
Natural Enemies: Anyone with evil Alignment
Strenght: A++
Agility: C-
Endurance: B+
Mana: C
Luck: D
NP : A++
Appereance
Rider is a tall man with a very muscular build.
He has black hair Black eyes and always wears armor that somewhat hides his muscular build.
He has a large moustache,
He has a damascus sword around his hilt and a Giant mace around his back
Backround
As a child Rider was no different from other children, as he began to mature he became headstrong doing whatever he wanted, often getting into fights which he more often than not won.
During a peacful forest ride with his blood brother miloš he ecountered a fairy named ravijojla that forbid miloš from singing.
He told miloš to not hold back and sing as loud as possible assuring him that as long as he was there nothing could possibly harm them.
Ravijojla then fired an arrow that scrapped miloš's throat knocking him unconcious.
Marko then proceced to chase Ravijojla down and defeated her, she then told him that he could always call on her when he needed and she became his blood sister.
Afterwards he ecountered Musa Kesedjia a warrior that was nearly as powerful as him Rider challenged him to a fight
During his fight Rider was losing hard but Ravijojla came in last moment and helped him win.
Personality
Stoic and slightly uninterested but extremly Agressive in battle with a honorable and just attitude.
He absolutely hates injustice as he is always ready to fight those who would commit it.
And is also a gentleman seeing as he hates to see women suffer he also seems to be boastful about his accomplishments.
Class skills:
Riding A
He rode his 160 year old horse for 300 years and by that time it became his best friend.
He could gallop at extremly fast speeds and jump a height equal to three spears.
Magic resistance: C+
He can Can cancel most spells which are Five Verse and other Types of magic But he cannot protect against Curses.
Rider Faced with many foes who were users of one or other type of magecraft.
Personal skills:
Slayer of injustice: C
He absolutely hated injustice and brutaly murdered anyone who commited it as such he deals deadlier damage to enemies with evil alignment and Halfes the damage they do to him.
Natural body: B-
his strenght was almost unmatched by any warrior at the time, His body is rumored to be hard as steel .
The only one able to challenge him was musa kesedjia and Rider defeated him only by a close margin.
Noble Phantasm:
Ravijojla the guardian of a warrior: B-
Summons his blood sister fairy ravijojla to protect him during a dire situation, She restores all his Prana and heals all his injuries
The fairy, at first seems to appear out of nowhere but this is not the case, Ravijojla is Nigh-Omnipresent, She can appear everywhere where nature is.
due to being powerful, This noble phantasm cannot be used for 23 days once it has been used.
Šarac, the steed of might: A++
Summons his 160 year old horse he rode for 300 Years This NP brings his endurance and agility to A++
This Horse, Was Rumored to be immortal, Rider even gave him to drink wine.
Rider considered his horse to be his best friend, without him rider wouldnt have been a legend at all.
This noble phantasm drains his prana rapidly he can only ride for around 2-5 minutes assumimg he is on full prana.
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just to add if he ever gets into grand order he should be voiced by NORIO WAKAMOTO
Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; July 22nd, 2017 at 05:30 PM.
Prince Marko: It's somewhat barebones for a sheet, and I would recommend that you can at least add a bit more regarding Marko's Noble Phantasms. IMO the background is a bit lacking, and there's quite a amount of information recorded on the web too, so don't hesitate to research more on the bloke. He's pretty cool guy from what I've searched.
Although, I'll admit this is a good start for a Servant sheet.
Oh, and remember add periods to the end of your sentences.
I had this idea for months now and i decided to write it down here too see what people think.
Thanks for the kind words im gonna try and improve the sheet.
Also im on mobile im not used to typing periods here and i would have written in much more detail if i was on pc which should be repaired tomorrow.
Last edited by massive_jojo_reference; March 19th, 2017 at 09:22 PM.
Monstrous Strength is only for people who are actually part monster. And I don't think a literally-who would have it at EX, if at all.
Magic Resistance is a Class skill for Riders.
The NPs are pretty lame for a guy with so much epic poetry written about him.
Good first try imo
Well, that's not quite true. Astolfo had it after all, though to be honest the justification for that feels pretty flimsy and I wouldn't recommend using it as a baseline personally.
Regardless, an EX rank is definitely way too much. And if you're having a Skill to represent his preternaturally strong and tough physique, then I think Natural Body (at C~B rank) would be a lot more fitting.
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His NPs are also quite generic, though I know pretty much nothing about his legend and hence am not really in the place to suggest anything more creative. Maybe flesh out a bit what the nature spirit's personality is and how she acts once summoned? Unless it's a literal "appears, heals Rider and then poofs away again" effect like the faeries from Legend Of Zelda...
It has precedent. His name is Soujuurou Shizuki.
Localizationing stuff
Since Mahoyo doesn't work by an RPG format like Fate, all you can really say is that he's superhumanly strong through training up in the mountains, not how exactly that strength should be classified.
I just think the Skill with "Monster" in the name should be kept limited to actual monstrously aligned beings, rather then those that just happen to be stupidly strong for whatever reason.
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