Yeah post-worm Kariya is ugly as fuck.
Pre-worm Kariya, though...
Aw poor Sakura
Still it's a really cool Servant, the ones that just show up and then go off to do their own things instead of the Holy Grail War are especially interesting servants
Odin/Kischur Zelretch Schweinorg: I was not expecting this combo at all, it's still nice though. I do like Gungnir Jewel as a fusion and it's my fav NP of Odins quickly followed by Vísdómr Yggdrasil. though to be honest, I'm not a particular big fan of the second one. Minor nitpicks are lowering his physical parameters so he's more in the line of Quetzalcoatl. Also Primordial Runes has never been depicted with a rank either by Scathach or Brynhildr so you may want to follow suit.
Herbert George Wells: Time travel is on par with True Magic, I don't really think that 'C' rank is appropriate given how hyped up The Five Magics are in the nasuverse. Other than that it's a very nice sheet.
Pele: Reminds me that I never ended up seeing Moana, I wonder if it's out on dvd yet. Anyways, the sheet is pretty baller, I could easily see her showing up in Grand Order.
Helgi Hundingsbane Volsunga: Isn't Ultra Violence basically a renamed version of Masochistic Constitution?
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Lucius Tiberius would be pretty good.
You could make a few changes to him and say he's just a 'non-prototype verse version' of him, and you're right there isn't much on him in Le Morte d'Arthur at all aside from him being mentioned as Emperor and getting super-killed by Arthur..
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Since the version of Lucius depicted in Prototype was so cool I decided to stick as closely as possible to that depiction, using as much of his description in the LN as possible. And just to go the whole way with his depiction as "what Arthur could have been had he been less virtuous", I gave Lucius very similar but still different Skills to what Arthur had for maximum foil potential.
I think this sheet is coming together quite nicely, look forward to it soon.
I have been away for awhile but I finally have some time to make sheets again. In order to back into things I decided to make a quick sheet. An NP was hard to come up with so the one I have isn't very fleshed out.
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Source:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horati...iscount_Nelson
Servant: Rider
Alternate Classes:
True Name: Horatio Nelson
Alias: Britannia’s God of War
Alignment: Lawful Good
Place of Origin: Britain
Strength: C
Endurance: C
Agility: C
Mana: E
Luck: B
NP: B+
Lore:
A British flag officer in the Royal Navy. He was noted for his inspirational leadership, superb grasp of strategy, and unconventional tactics, all of which resulted in a number of decisive naval victories, particularly during the Napoleonic Wars. He was wounded several times in combat, losing most of one arm in the unsuccessful attempt to conquer Santa Cruz de Tenerife and the sight in one eye in Corsica. He was shot and killed during his final victory at the Battle of Trafalgar in 1805.
Personality:
Admiral Nelson is a man who is very charismatic and enjoys getting to know people. He is enthusiastic, eager, patriotic and often reckless. Besides for the love he has for Emma Hamilton, the most prominent desire is his great hunger for glory and honor, with a dream to die a glorious death in a glorious battle. This serves as the strongest motivation for all that he does, he is known for saying “my greatest happiness is to serve my gracious King and Country and I am envious only of glory; for if it be a sin to covet glory I am the most offending soul alive.” Probably one of the only struggles of getting along with him is that he is very tenacious and expects other to be well disciplined with no tolerance for slackers.
Likes: Emma Hamilton
Dislikes: Slackers
Talent: Commanding
Class Skills:
Riding (-)
This skill is lost because of the personal skill The Nelson Touch.
Magic Resistance (E)
grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Having not dealt much with magic Nelson has this skill at a very low rank.
Personal Skills:
The Nelson Touch (B)
This skill represents Nelsons talent for leadership and the ability to foster admiration in his men. The skill serves as Nelsons personal version of Voyager of the storm.
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Battle Continuation (C)
a skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. During an attack at Tenerife Nelson was shot in the arm by a musket which was amputated immediately without anesthetic but Nelson returned to commanding 30 minutes later with no bad symptoms. Nelsons was also able to overcome a very large number of other aliments throughout his life from constant sea sickness to contracting malaria.
Bravery (C+)
the ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination. It also has the bonus effect of increasing melee damage. Nelson is known for his constant bravery in battle often leading the charge into a fight and facing enemies into hand to hand combat as well as ignoring commands in order to increase the moral of his men or win battles. Even when he was young he often fought bravely for glory to point that he tried to fight a polar bear. Nelsons tendency for rash tactics and seemingly unwavering bravery comes from his incredibly strong desire for fame and glory. If a situation has an opportunity for achieving glory this skill increases in strength.
Noble Phantasms:
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John Paul Jones says hello
I've had my own Pseudo-Servant Sakura in the works for awhile now.
Class: Berserker
Alternate Classes: Caster, Shielder, Saber, Lancer, Rider
STR: B+
END: B+
AGI: B+
MGI: EX
LCK: A+
Class Skills
Madness Enhancement (A): Ranks up all parameters, but most of her sanity is gone. Though she is a
goddess of nurturing, her particular class and host body have forced her into an aspect representing
destruction, menace and perversion. She is an avatar of the merciless retribution of the downtrodden.
Goddess' Divine Core (B): Berserker is a perfected goddess from birth, and even though this nature is
lessened in her host body, she still maintains an absoluteness of mind and body, preventing change or
interference from any effect of an equivalent rank.
Personal Skills
Abhaya-Mudra (A): Named for a symbolic hand gesture meaning "fear not", this skill greatly increases
defenses against attacks from demonic or evil-aligned enemies. When expressed in her normal state,
Berserker is depicted as a benevolent, maternal and nurturing protectress.
Blessings of the Holy Grail (False) (EX): If she were summoned in another class, this skill would appear
as her original Manifestation of Beauty, giving her charm and beauty beyond any mere mortal. However, the
presence of fragments of a corrupt Grail within her body have altered this skill, and along with it, her
class and Noble Phantasm. Instead of expressing the charismatic nature of a goddess of love, it is inverted
to increase her own carnal desires. MGI and LCK are significantly boosted while in such a state, and allows
regeneration at an impossibly fast rate, overriding any limitations of the flesh for her casting magecraft.
Imaginary Numbers (B): The magical affinity of Sakura Matou, Berserker's host body. One would think that
her madness would serve only to seal this skill, but Sakura's upbringing as a mage, if one could call it
that, taught her magecraft to the body and not the mind, allowing Berserker to use it instinctively. A
power highly effective against spiritual beings, but much less potent against corporeal targets.
Noble Phantasm
Bhramari Devi~O Shakti, Release the Swarm (A+, Anti-Army)
The aspect of Berserker most suited to Sakura Matou. Though not associated with evil, the form of Bhramari
connotes a detachment from Berserker's healing and nurturing nature and a re-imagining as a warlike behemoth.
In simple terms, it is "the allegiance of all six- and eight-legged creatures". Upon invocation, Berserker summons
forth countless bees, hornets, wasps, flies, termites, mosquitoes and spiders, appearing as though numerous dark
clouds are descending from the sky to wrap around her. Clinging and merging with her, they allow Berserker to grow
to a massive, four-armed size, wielding a mace, trident, sword and shield. This form boasts enormous offensive and
defensive power with her weapons alone. The insects that cling to her emanate out in waves over her enemies, capable
of destroying entire armies and shredding individual targets no matter what divine protection they may possess. As if
that wasn't terrifying enough, Berserker's host body is able to apply the effects of her own Magic Crest contained within
worms in her body to the massive swarm, turning her infinite army into a sort of perpetual motion machine to create
magical energy, should they be fed adequately enough, either on Berserker's own flesh or the flesh of her enemies. A
single weak insect is no threat, but all of them outnumber humanity by orders of magnitude.
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Eugh, spiders. But seriously that's a really good servant. I really don't understand why all of these Servants are being forced onto Sakura though
A Servant automatically fails if the author is incapable of writing its name properly. So, no, it's not a good Servant.
Sounds like an exotic cheese to me.
Oh shit, I've been spelling and saying it wrong my entire life and never noticed. Welp.
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Alright it's fixed. Do I deserve real feedback now?
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How was it written before? I didn't noticed it was wrong earlier
Pavarti instead of Parvati. I blame the Harry Potter movies.
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