Grimm: Wow, way to make my own Brothers Grimm sheet look kind of lame in comparison. Seriously though, this is a really good sheet. His NP is a fairly simple "summons stuff from his literary works" idea but the reference to him taking other stories and refining them into NPs definitely helped flesh it out. I'm actually kind of curious as to how he'd get along with other storyteller Servants from canon, like Scheherazade or Andersen.
Thanks for the feedback!Originally Posted by RoydGolden
Anyways, Grimm would respect them to the point of fanboying over Scheherazade and Anderson. Though he would try hide it...well some of it. Although Grimm appears to be a well-mannered sophisticated gentleman, he is actually a child at heart. He is obsessed over stories, partly because he never had much of a childhood, since he had to take care and support his family at the age of 11. Ignoring the two's personalities, Grimm would practically beg them to tell him their stories...in a sophisticated manner of course. In a way, due to his Noble Phantasm, it could be interpreted that Grimm has an ulterior motive, wanting to know their stories so he can add them to his collection. But in reality, that's not true. He only does so out of passion and respect of the source material. Wanting the whole world to acknowledge and learn from the tales.
Your Grimm is really well done. Congrats!
F/GO SUPPORT
Even disregarding the rest of the (good) sheet, this is really really clever and cool. Creative, interesting stuff like this always makes me smile when I read these, and I think I should stop and note that. I really like this design choice, and the justification is very well written.
By the way, I didn't even notice to begin with but when looking back over your Grimm sheet I just realized you included a reference to my Rumpelstiltskin Servant in his NP description.
I appreciate you liked my sheet enough to do that (particularly since I'd kind of forgotten about it).
I think I just found the perfect NP for my Soekarno sheet...
I hope I can finish this shit today... (17 August, Indonesian Independence Day)
Grimm and Gilgamesh fight when?
Why Gil in particular? Because they both have NPs that summon stuff?
I think Grimm's NPs is still limited compared to Gil's
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Also, is it possible that Gil would also have Grimm's NP or something similar in his GoB?
In before Gil turns out to have the Epic of Gilgamesh itself stored in there.Cue meta recursion.*shot*
GoB in itself is a paradox
Wow, I actually never thought of Grimm fighting Gilgamesh before.
And Gilgamesh wouldn't have Grimm's NP...well not all of it. I mean, 3/4 of it uses German Legends, so any item from that Gil would probably have. The other 1/4 are from Fairy Tales, so he wouldn't have those. Keep in mind though that Grimm isn't limited to just items. He could summon the characters too, which would probably give him an advantage over Gil.
Still a Reality Marble tho. The question is whether or not Gil would pull Ea...
Yeah. The fight depends on whether or not Gil pulls Ea. If he doesn't then Grimm wins. If he does then Gil wins. Though I suppose it is technically possible for Grimm to escape in time if he uses the right abilities with his NP.
Please someone remind me to finish my damned Kusuma Bangsa sheet.
Execute C:\local\lib\toh.exe?
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Dreams of swallow cuts.
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summs up a lot of my ironic weeaboo circles
Please finish it.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
Now Revamped!
Selamat Hari Merdeka!!
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Class : Rider
Alternate Class : Ruler, Caster
Identity : Soekarno
Origin : Indonesia (20th Century)
Alignment : Lawful Neutral
Sukarno, also spelled Soekarno (born June 6, 1901, Surabaja [now Surabaya], Java, Dutch East Indies—died June 21, 1970, Jakarta, Indonesia), leader of the Indonesian independence movement and Indonesia’s first president (1949–66), who suppressed the country’s original parliamentary system in favour of an authoritarian “Guided Democracy” and who attempted to balance the Communists against the army leaders. He was deposed in 1966 by the army under Suharto.
PARAMETER
STR : E
END : E
AGL : D
MGI : A
LCK : B
NP : A++
CLASS SKILLS
Riding : C++
A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Though he is a Rider, his Riding skill is rather low, and Rider can only ride several animals or vehicles with slightly above average skill, he gained 2 plus modifier so that he can use his mount Noble Phantasm.
Magic Resistance : E
A skill that grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Rider cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat. Although he is a modern Heroic Spirit, Rider has some degree of magic resistance due to the reverence of the people of Indonesia towards him.
PERSONAL SKILLS
Presidential Privilege : A
A skill that's similar to a limited version of "Imperial Privilege", denoting one's authority and leadership as a President of a nation. At this rank, skills such as "Charisma", "Golden Rule", "Military Tactics" and other similar skills that are within the (limited) authority of a president can be displayed at C rank, though his Charisma is B-ranked. As the first president of Indonesia that has once been titled "President for Life" and has reigned for 22 years, Rider possesses a high-rank of this skill.
Incitement : A
A Skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack. Rider's numerous motivational and nation-rallying speeches that he conducted as the president and war leader of Indonesia has manifested as this skill at A rank.
Librarian of Stored Knowledge : C
A skill that denotes the ability that makes it possible for a clear recall of knowledge from memory with a successful Luck Check, even if the information perceived in the past was not consciously acknowledged at the time. Thanks to Rider's precocious mind and photographic memory, he is capable of remembering a wide range of knowledge. He was also fluent in several languages, Indonesian, English, Japanese, Arabic, German, French, Balinese, Sundanese, Javanese, Dutch and possibly some other languages.
Noble Phantasm
Personality
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I was thinking to make a Caster!Soekarno, but then this idea struck me...
Please forgive this ridiculous and wanked up sheet...
Last edited by 34; August 17th, 2017 at 05:47 AM.
Finish it today, bro.
"An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, and evil for evil. That is the law of this world."
Servant Ruler:
Appearance:
Official art from Eiyuu Senki
True Name: Hammurabi "King of Laws"
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Alternate Classes: Lancer, Caster
Strength- C
Agility- C
Endurance- D
Mana- B
Luck- A
NP- B++
Personality
Class Skills:
God's Resolution- N/A
The privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Seals for every Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War. Due to being overwritten by her Personal Skill- Architect Of Divine Laws, the God's Resolution of the Ruler Class has been sealed.
True Name Discernment- C+
Status information such as true name, Skills and parameters are instantly revealed to Ruler upon encountering a fellow Servant. At this rank, Ruler can instantly grasp all relevant information on a Heroic Spirit with a successful Luck check. In the case where the Servant is one with anecdotes of lawbreaking, then Ruler can bypass the need for a Luck check and glean their identity directly, for not even the most furtive criminal can escape her prying eyes.
Magic Resistance- A
Confers protection against magical effects. All spells below A-rank are nullified, making the Servant virtually untouchable to modern Magi. With this level of defense against sorcery, it would scarcely be an exaggeration to call the Servant a "Magus Killer". The naturally high resistance of her Class, combined with the fact that sorcery was amongst the evils forbidden in her Code of Hammurabi, has endowed Ruler with the greatest rank in this Skill.
Personal Skills:
Architect Of Divine Laws- A+++
A Skill for those famous for bringing laws to humankind. As Ruler is widely considered the first in history to establish a truly universal code of law (though this is not in fact true), she wields an absolutely peerless rank in this Skill. Chosen by the gods Shamash and Marduk to bring knowledge of the laws down to humanity, Ruler's precepts and authority are affirmed both by the collective will of all mankind (Alaya) as well as the World itself.
Every law Ruler creates is enforced as divine authority, bringing drastic consequences to those foolish enough to defy it. The punishment for breaking a given law is entirely up to Ruler's discretion, ranging from temporary rank downs to parameters to sealing Noble Phantasms or even death. However, the law only holds power so long as the individual in question is aware that it exists and of the consequences for violating it- as a law known by no one is surely no law at all. The law must also be "fair"- meaning that it applies equally to all participants in the Holy Grail War (including Ruler herself) and does not unfairly advantage one party over any other.
It is unknown if the latter condition is a true restriction on this Skill or a self-imposed limit born from Ruler's impartiality as a judge, but seeing as it is Ruler's very mentality as a divine lawgiver which has granted her this Skill in the first place the difference between those two things might be viewed as hair-splitting.
The penalties imposed by this Skill are unavoidable against those of a Lawful alignment, while Chaotic aligned individuals will be granted a chance of evasion through a successful Luck check. Ruler's laws hold no power whatsoever over beings that exist conceptually apart from human law and morality, such as monsters and true gods.
Charisma- B
The ability to inspire others, and lead armies. At this rank, one's charisma is sufficient to lead an entire country. Ruler was a famous king of ancient Babylon, whose fair and just rule and devotion to the prosperity of her kingdom brought the unquestioned adoration of her subjects. As the so-called "King of Laws", a plus correction is applied to this Skill while leading those of a Lawful alignment- for anyone who swears fealty to the law will naturally come to see Ruler as an absolute authority. On the other hand, a minus modifier is dealt with regards to Chaotic aligned individuals, who instinctively balk at Ruler's authority.
Human Observation- C
The talent to observe and understand people. At higher ranks, it is not mere observation but hypothesizing the entire life and preferences of a given individual. An ability furnished to Ruler by her current role as a judge of humanity; she is naturally able to see into the hearts of humans and glean their deepest desires. Any crimes that they have committed, even those that lurk only within the target's heart, will certainly be known before Ruler's prying gaze.
Noble Phantasm
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True name: Ajax
class: berserker.
Alternate classes: shielder, lancer, and saber.
Armament: leather armor, and an Greek style helmet.
Likes: battle, honor, and conviction.
dislikes: treachery, dishonor,lying, and fighting with words over strength.
Gender: male.
Parameters:
strength: A+(almost killed hector with a single rock throw so I'm gana give him this.)
endurance: B
mana: D
luck: E
agility: B
backstory: he was a man of great importance during the Trojan war, born as one of those heroes with super human strength, he imediently searched for Chiron who trained him for a majority of his life allowing to be a hero comparable ,to Achilles or Hercules, during the war he filled in Achilles absence and dueled hector as an equal for an entire day requiring zuez to send heralds and call the duel a draw, after words Ajax gave hector a magic purple sash wich gives incredible resistance to magic, and hector gave him the sword he used during a the duel, a sword equal to durandale but not as useful. upon Achilles death Ajax and Odysseus charged the Trojan camp to recover Achilles body, after the war ended Odysseus and and had a dispute over who would gain Achilles armor which and lost and committed suicide.
Personality: as a berserker his abilty to talk is greatly reduced thou he can comprehend most camands and can understand most forms of verbal communication thou not written forms, he also expresses great anger when faced with an opponent who uses trickery, and will litterly kill his mast should his master partake in any form of trickery him/herself.
aperance: he his Giant hulking monster with a muscle type frame wearing leather armor and Greek style helmet popularized during Trojan war, he stands 8'9 and has face that one could say would be buetfull if not held by his corrupted form.scars line his body and are likely from his duel with hector.
class skills:
mad enhancement, B.
the Class Skill that characterizes a Berserker, raising basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.[1]
while mad enhancement is not active he retains the ability to speak and comprehend commands, but when and enhancement is activated most abilty to reason is taken and speech becomes impossible, although he retains all skills he possessed in life allowing him to use all three phanatsms, thou skill with said weapons does become slightly dulled. In exchange all his parameters are ranked up by + modifiers with the exception of luck.
Personnel skill:
battle continuation, A+
is a Skill that allows for the continuation of combat after sustaining mortal wounds. It will also reduce mortality rate from injury. This Skill represents the ability to survive and/or the mentality of one who doesn't know when to give up, consisting of one's strength of vitality in predicaments. Do to haveing fought hector for an entire despite Lethal injuries he has been given a rank equal to that achieve elment allowing him to fight despite be given lethal and killing blows with his will alone.
Berserk, A.
a composite skill of mad enhancement mixed with bravery, at this rank Ajax can fight like a monster utilizing the boosts given to him by mad enhancement and his bravery to fight with a ferocity that most servants could not handle.
instinct, B.
a skill that reflects ones abilties to sense incoming attacks and to since an opponents blood lust allowing increased reaction time in any situation, at this rank Ajax can sense most incoming attacks and react to most attacks.
Blood lust, N/A
a skill which is the composite ones intent to kill, it would require extreme intent to kill it is a passive skills that insights fear and muddles judgement thou in exchange it makes them more noticable and makes the servant who uses this skill act more rash and violent similar to the affects given by mad enhancement, normally Ajax would not posses this skill but if he were to fight Odysseus in combat he would gain this skill at a rank of A++ which would heavily muddle Odysseus reaction time.
Strength which overcomes skill , B.
a skill given to those who fought far more skilled oppenetens and not came close to or succeeded or would have succeeded if not for outside intervention it gives one boosts in strength and endurance when face ing off against an opponent who was more skilled then they were in life, do to having fought hector as equal despite hector at this rank he gains a plus modifier to his strength and endurance, althou there are very few servants who would be more skilled then he was life.
NPs:
the sword of hector, B-A.
this was the sword hector used in his first duel in Ajax as he was afraid that if he somehow lost teh duel not wanting teh Greeks to posses durandale he instead used this NP, for every missed strike the sword becomes more enduran and sharper after enouogh attacks have been blocked or missed the sword increases by a single rank and can use a slice that bypasses a
Parry or block, by temporally cutting threw reality to slice the oppenetens thou ones this occurs it looses its gained sharpness and endurance, it's other abilty is to make its wounds more deadly for a example a simple scratch turns into a horrible gash that a servant can't shrug off.
Rio ais, A+.
The shield used by Ajax in the majority, it can block any A rank attack, but it's special ability only shows when faced with a thrown weapon, do to human over exaggeration I has turn from a shield that can block almost all thrown weapons to a shield that can bloc all thrown weapons, and therefor it gains a rank of Ex when faced with a thrown weapon and can block any thrown weapon even if said thrown weapon can destroy a planet.
The spear of Ajax, A+- A+++
it an 8 foot spear that is incredibly endurance and posses a the specail abilty is to send a physical force of of phantasmic level equal to the users own strength, it does so by useing a closer which charges with mana and slowly increases rank equal to the users strength and then in an extreme burst of burst of speed launches forward sending out a phantasmic level of force, it act aired by one putting into the thrust position and hold it there one can also release early for a quicker less powerfull launch of power, in order to use this spear and must give up his shield and sword, he gained this weapon after larding for a weapon that would fill the loss of his rio ais so that he could hector by also opting not use his treasured weapon, the gods agreed and sent him the spear with a curse that keep him from useing anyother weapon then the spear while actively useing the spear this includes kicking and hitting.
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