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    I've been meaning to do more animal Servants, ever since I remembered that one sentence about how Bucephalus is a Heroic Spirit, not just Iskander's mount.

    Amaltheia was originally gonna be a goat or a unicorn, but I couldn't find a good FC. Diogenes was just a dumb joke that turned out to fit eerily well, so I rolled with it.

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    I was expecting Wojtek, the Polish Army Bear, and am only slightly disappointed.

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    =ASSASSIN=



    Artist: 悔悔 [pixiv]

    Possible Alternate Classes: Avenger, Saber
    True Name: Kriemhild - The Queen of Worms
    Height/Weight: 170 cm / 54 kg
    Alignment: Lawful Evil
    Place of Origin: Germany (The Song of the Nibelungs)

    Cigarettes After Sex - Nothing's Gonna Hurt You Baby

    =Parameters=

    Strength: E
    Endurance: D
    Agility: C
    Mana: A
    Luck: D
    NP: E

    =Class Skills=

    - Presence Concealment (C):
    hides one's presence as a Servant completely.

    After her husband's death, Assassin came into possession of his belongings--one of which being his cloak of invisibility.

    =Personal Skills=

    - Into the Blood (E):
    two abilities in one allowing for insight into another's true nature and revitalization of the user through blood.

    By touching another’s blood, Assassin is able to discern the details of their character and gather a disordered view of any and all past events and actions involving them. Rank increases depending on how much interaction she had with whomever it was prior to touching their blood. With each rank gained, she is able to detect deception to a greater degree. Furthermore, her view becomes clearer and she has the capacity to see into what the future has in store for them. Once engaged in combat this first effect is nullified and the second is activated. That is, when the blood of her enemies is shed, Assassin’s parameters increase by one rank for a brief period of time and, if bathed in blood, the greater its duration.

    A reference to the later half of Assassin's legend where every other moment someone 'fell into the blood' during the massacre of her enemies, and her horror-inducing visions and malicious calculations of these events before, during, and after they unfolded. These events were so vicious that the ground beneath everyone's feet was a sea of red before it was done and, Assassin, christened the she-devil of her people, walked amidst the massacre's aftermath as a wildflower dyed crimson.

    - Magical Energy Burst (E):
    a version of the standard that transfers magical energy into the user's weapons and body. Though, at this rank, it is more likely to only startle the enemy than cause any significant harm.

    When her enemies barricaded themselves in her hall, Assassin set fire to it to burn them all alive almost instantaneously, but, many of them survived instead.

    - Golden Rule (B-, Wealth & Body):
    capable of amassing a great amount of wealth. Instead of a boon, it is a curse.

    Under normal circumstance Assassin’s rank with this would be no higher than D due to being unable to recover her wealth, but, as she was also "a maiden of high lineage so fair that none in any land could be fairer", it was increased. Though, any who seeks to earn her affection will succumb to an untimely end or otherwise suffer indefinitely. This, in turn, also applies for any whom Assassin herself grows affection for.

    =Noble Phantasms=

    - So Shall My Sorrows Be Avenged (E, Anti-Unit [self]):
    a unique form of Gradation Air born from the empty, bleeding vessel that long ago used to be a young maiden’s innocent heart.

    Assassin is capable of projecting, shaping, and reinforcing the very concept of vengeance into any weapon or armor she so desires, be it a physical item, mental hindrance, or shell to encase herself in. Rank scales in correlation with 「Into The Blood」 and increases the greater Archer’s hatred grows, sustained as long as she holds a drop of disdain in her heart. In addition to this, whatever she materializes has the potential to ignite on impact.

    Activated in preparation of and during combat.

    - Doomed to Die (E, Anti-Personnel):
    a curse that represents a desire for marked death.

    When someone is perceived as a threat, Assassin is able to place a binding geas upon them which cripples any and all actions and subsequently draining their lifeforce, leaving them vulnerable to attack. The deeper the disdain she harbors, the more severe the affliction; pure hatred resulting in an instant, bloody death of the target at the cost of Assassin’s life.

    The curse itself, upon activation, first, manifests as a field of white blossoms which shortly thereafter wilt crimson and form a pool of blood underneath the intended target. Then, the remains of those Assassin successfully exacted her vengeance upon rise up from the afterlife to hold them. After, they are slowly dragged into the blood and drowned.

    Rank increases the greater the perceived threat and if「So Shall My Sorrows Be Avenged」is still active.

    =Bio=

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    Kriemhild: I take it there was no legendary bow she was associated with? Because it feels a bit odd that despite being an Archer, her only NP has nothing to do with a bow or even projectiles.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Kriemhild: I take it there was no legendary bow she was associated with? Because it feels a bit odd that despite being an Archer, her only NP has nothing to do with a bow or even projectiles.
    Volker's horned sword-bow.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Volker's horned sword-bow.
    I vaguely recall something like that; that's why I commented in the first place. Couldn't you give her the bow as an NP or at least reference it somewhere?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I vaguely recall something like that; that's why I commented in the first place. Couldn't you give her the bow as an NP or at least reference it somewhere?
    Why use a bow when you can use the blood of your enemies?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Why use a bow when you can use the blood of your enemies?
    It just seems strange to give her a pretty cool and unique-sounding bow and then make absolutely no mention of it in the sheet. It's your sheet though, so do what you will.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    It just seems strange to give her a pretty cool and unique-sounding bow and then make absolutely no mention of it in the sheet. It's your sheet though, so do what you will.
    Copying Shirou's projection ability and combining it with the Branches of Sin is more fun.

    Or maybe she just throws cursed gold at people.

    "You get Rhine gold! He gets Rhine gold! She gets Rhine gold! Everyone prepare to die!"

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Copying Shirou's projection ability and combining it with the Branches of Sin is more fun.

    Or maybe she just throws cursed gold at people.

    "You get Rhine gold! He gets Rhine gold! She gets Rhine gold! Everyone prepare to die!"
    You could keep the blood manipulation NP and still give her a bow NP on top of that, y'know. Or heck, just include it under an Equipment section. But whatever, it's not a big deal.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Gally View Post
    Copying Shirou's projection ability and combining it with the Branches of Sin is more fun.

    Or maybe she just throws cursed gold at people.

    "You get Rhine gold! He gets Rhine gold! She gets Rhine gold! Everyone prepare to die!"
    You know, coins can hurt. Especialy if they curse you to death.


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    "In Love and War..."


    Source: (X)

    Class: Lancer
    Alternate Class(es): Rider, Shielder
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Region: Roman Mythos – Aeneid

    Height/Weight: 179cm/60kg
    Likes: Trashy romance stories, loyal men
    Dislikes: Followers of “Minerva”
    Talent: Impulsive decisions
    Natural Enemy: Diomedes
    Attribute: Sky
    Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Roman, Divine, Male(!?)
    Armament: Spear, Shield, “Armour”

    Parameters:

    STR: A
    END: C
    AGI: A+
    MGI: D
    LCK: EX
    NP: A
    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: A
    grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'.

    Personal Skills:

    Deus ex Machina: EX
    A blessing from Divine Spirits. Similar to other skills, Luck is boosted in dangerous situations. Closer to divine intervention in effect - at this rank as long as she is able to make a Luck related roll or check Lancer will automatically pass as long as she acts in favour of the Gods. This can be considered to a "Cheat Skill" that allows for easy victory with minimal effort.

    During her adventures, the gods would often interrupt to assist her along the way many times either by clearing the path ahead or knocking aside armies. Venus herself even fought on behalf of her in many battles.

    Divinity: A
    The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defence" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.
    A child of Venus who was raised to Godhood after death - Lancer possesses among the highest available ranks. As such she possesses good defence against those with connotation of ‘Beauty’.

    Mana Defence: A-
    The increase in performance caused by infusing one's weapons and body with Magical Energy and instantly translating it into defensive power. Lancer in this state could become a sacred wall that could easily protect an entire country. However due to unforeseen circumstances the effectiveness is inconsistent.

    Journey of Flowers: D
    A blessing given to those whose legends consists mostly of them taking the path of a king. The Servants travelling is filled with hope, making the hearts of those who fight along them more proactive. Throughout her journey, she did not overly develop or grow as a person, nor did she attain overt greatness on the field of battle due to reliance upon others to do so. She retains a low ranking of this skill for succeeding in his task of his journey to Italy and becoming precursor of Rome.

    Manifestation of Beauty: C (A+++)
    The fearsome charismatic nature akin to that of a goddess of beauty. It is a power to charm others, originally a composite Skill (gauge absorption, curse, skill-sealing) that had a strong temptation effect at its core. Despite of being in a condition of merely possessing another, it already surpasses the realm of men.
    However due to her current inclination, it’s essentially become a simple Charisma Skill. Lancer is persuasive in conversation. She can command troops as if she were born to it, and can inspire those who do not know her personally. (Originally, it is A+++ Rank, but it has fallen to C)

    Noble Phantasms


    Wrath of Mothers Piercing Blow
    Venus Furor


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B
    Range: 1~40
    Maximum Targets: 30 People

    The spear of and primary combat Noble Phantasm of the Lancer class. A divine construct forged by the gods and used in his final battle against her long standing rival Turnas.

    Legend states that when it was thrown, it got stuck in an Olive tree and Turnas prayed to the local gods it would not come loose and no matter what Lancer did, she could not pull it out. Enraged, her mother Venus appeared and pulled it out for her. After Turnas was nearly beaten, she hid behind his shield which Venus Furor pierced due to the blessing of the Goddess. When thrown, it will appear to always return to her hand. However that is not its true ability. With its name invoked, this spear can move freely with the power of his mind –performing advanced combat techniques without it’s wielder even needing to heft the weapon.


    Divine Forged Armour
    Arma Vulcania


    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Rank: B+
    Range: 0
    Max Targets: 1 Person

    The armour of Lancer. This Noble Phantasm was forged by the God Vulcan upon commission of Venus. It is a predecessor of the armour of Achilles though due to the gap of time being very small in comparison, deminishment is minimal although it possesses less fame. Regardless it is comparable to the sets worn by Achilles and Diomedes by design. Her breastplate, helmet and grieves all function as one defensive duel-functional Noble Phantasm. Its passive effect is deploying a continual, invisible field of energy that fits to her form perfectly so that her armour and entire body cancels out any attack of B rank or lower. If one were not wearing the complete set then non-armoured parts would not receive the protected field.

    In the Shielder class, by calling out its true name due to comparison to the ‘Golden Boar’ armour of Diomedes – the individual pieces will combine into a set of armour that covers her entire body and seal her current skills, replacing them with Mad Enhancement, Monstrous Strength and Scream of Awe. This is due to Diomedes armour being conflated with Tydeus’ arms and the hide of the Calydonian Boar. Regardless, this is still inaccessible in this class as this Heroic Spirit due to being summoned in the 'Wrong Class'.


    Background

    Aeneas. The bridge of Classical Mythology between Greek and Roman. He was also the son of the Goddess Venus and Trojan prince Anchises. He was the protagonist of the Aenied and ancestor of all of Rome.

    The Servant known as Lancer however isn’t Aeneas at all. All that exists of Aeneas is a disembodied voice that accompanies Lancer in her state. The woman called Lancer is in fact Venus herself, the Roman goddess whose functions encompassed love, beauty, desire, sex, fertility, prosperity and victory. However she has hijacked her son’s summoning and acting in his stead. In an inverse of the traditional ‘Favoured Champion’ system the goddess is acting in place of the warrior. While the identity of the servant container is indisputably Aeneas, she’s usurped him.

    In truth Aeneas was an arrogant coward who only ever attained victory through his mother constantly aiding him in his journey, whether it be seducing people for him or even aiding him in combat. So really, history repeating itself shouldn’t be much of a surprise here.

    “Worry not my treasured child; I shall face these vile demons in your place!”

    To which Aeneas replied

    “I beg your pardon?”

    And so in secret relief, Aeneas gladly allowed him to be pushed to the side by his overbearing (s)mother. Now even though she is a ‘Lesser’ goddess not suited in nature for the battlefield by design, she was the lover of the God of War, Mars and has taken after him in a few regards with combat. Even though she has to work with her son’s skills for the most part, she was the reason he overcame many trials and is actually a better combatant than he.Aeneas exists as a narrator-style disembodied voice that has a tendency for giving biased and unhelpful commentary. Being something of a brown nose when it comes to the gods, he is also something of an enabler for Venus’s more callous and airheaded tendencies.

    “I really want to get back at Diomedes so I was thinking of seducing his Master, taking his command seals and ordering him to commit suicide. That should be easy enough, right?”

    “That’s the best idea I’ve heard all week.”


    Creators Notes:
    Y'all remember my drunk Aeneas sheet? It got a sober sequel. The armour NP was intentionally modelled after a certain Berserker!Diomedes that was posted here by Zork Knight as Aeneas himself is a shameless ripoff of him and Achilles and the Aenied was state sponsored propaganda/plagiarism in my book. This was also halfway done when zikari8 posted his Athena so that motivated me to finish this finally.

    Now there's only 7 in the half-completed backlog.

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    Kriemhild: pretty good, but got to agree that gigveign an archer one of the weapons she actually used in legend would be a good idea, thou do keep the blood its actually kinda cool, and you know now i want her to shoot cursed gold at people because that would be amusing.

    Aeneas: pretty good especially loved the noble phantasm but maybe over the rank of Deus ex Machina or lower her luck rank the combination of EX rank luck and EX rank in that way seems way to OP.

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    How did Aeneas change genders between sheets :thinking:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    How did Aeneas change genders between sheets :thinking:
    All explained here kiddo.
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    Background
    Aeneas. The bridge of Classical Mythology between Greek and Roman. He was also the son of the Goddess Venus and Trojan prince Anchises. He was the protagonist of the Aenied and ancestor of all of Rome.

    The Servant known as Lancer however isn’t Aeneas at all. All that exists of Aeneas is a disembodied voice that accompanies Lancer in her state. The woman called Lancer is in fact Venus herself, the Roman goddess whose functions encompassed love, beauty, desire, sex, fertility, prosperity and victory. However she has hijacked her son’s summoning and acting in his stead. In an inverse of the traditional ‘Favoured Champion’ system the goddess is acting in place of the warrior. While the identity of the servant container is indisputably Aeneas, she’s usurped him.

    In truth Aeneas was an arrogant coward who only ever attained victory through his mother constantly aiding him in his journey, whether it be seducing people for him or even aiding him in combat. So really, history repeating itself shouldn’t be much of a surprise here.

    “Worry not my treasured child; I shall face these vile demons in your place!”

    To which Aeneas replied

    “I beg your pardon?”

    And so in secret relief, Aeneas gladly allowed him to be pushed to the side by his overbearing (s)mother. Now even though she is a ‘Lesser’ goddess not suited in nature for the battlefield by design, she was the lover of the God of War, Mars and has taken after him in a few regards with combat. Even though she has to work with her son’s skills for the most part, she was the reason he overcame many trials and is actually a better combatant than he.Aeneas exists as a narrator-style disembodied voice that has a tendency for giving biased and unhelpful commentary. Being something of a brown nose when it comes to the gods, he is also something of an enabler for Venus’s more callous and airheaded tendencies.

    “I really want to get back at Diomedes so I was thinking of seducing his Master, taking his command seals and ordering him to commit suicide. That should be easy enough, right?”

    “That’s the best idea I’ve heard all week.”


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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    How did Aeneas change genders between sheets :thinking:
    In two words: doting mother
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    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?

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    Is Orion-ing the new genderbending?

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    yes!!!

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    At least it makes more sense, a little bit


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    Quote Originally Posted by Bloble View Post
    Is Orion-ing the new genderbending?
    It was a one off for me - I honestly just wanted to make fun of Aeneas. I don't see myself Orion-ing again anytime soon
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