By the way what do you think of his Np, anything I could improve there?
The myths were very unclear about Orion's birth actually. In some stories he was a son of Poseidon like you said, in others he's vaguely mentioned to be "born from the earth" and in still others he's the son of entirely mortal parents (Callimachus and Aristomachus). Yama, on the other hand, is (correct me if I'm wrong here) a god of death in every telling of his legend, so leaving that out just seems odd to me.
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I think it's probably because of Artemis's influence that Orion doesn't have Divinity. I bet if he's summoned 'properly' he'd have Divinity.
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Also, in his profile, if the wiki is to be believed, it is already mentioned that Orion is indeed Poseidon's son.
Ell I fixed it, so still I'm really unsure about the Np so anything I could fix or flesh out about it?
You get Divinity, he gets Divinity, she gets Divinity, everyone gets Divinity...!
I only did it because others did it too
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I've never gone back and looked at an updated placeholder. Just saying. If you're gonna do that you might as well make a post linking back to it when you're actually finished.
Just here to say I do placeholders because I'm lazy about it and don't care enough.
Don't do things just because others do it. Life lesson.
Don't always follow the herd.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
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Okay, okay, I get it. No more placeholders
Anyways, any suggestions?
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Based on a quick Wikipedia search, Shapeshifting (at a pretty high rank, alternatively some kind of compound Skill to represent his other magical powers) and God's Divine Core with a lowered rank (thanks to being part rakshasa, I'd guess). And since there's a mention of his powers growing once its past sunset, maybe some kind of reverse version of Gawain's Numeral of the Saint?
Separate yourself from the herd.
Give Ghatotkatcha Blood Excitation.
"i shall compose something for you, master. It was kinda of a sign of gratitude inside my family to do that"]
Class: Caster
Alignment: Neutral/good
Region: Austria
Height: 173cm
Weight: 63kg
Likes: fantasy, her brother, any genre of music
Dislikes: cynicism, greed, oportunists
Talent: composition, piano playing
Armaments: piano
Natural Enemy: her father
stats
Str: E
End: D
Agi: B
Mna: A
Lck: E
NP: B
Skills
Noble phantasm
Background
personality
craft essence
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here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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Fate / White Memoria
The sheets really good, I like the two Np but maybe lower luck to a two increase rather then a three. And since it's an kingdoms for children, maybe add the effect of turning her into a child or changing her mentality to a child, as other wise the rank should be A or higher. So I would really suggest having it turn her body and mentality to that of a child, deminshing her ability in music or something, just a thought.