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    Quote Originally Posted by massive_jojo_reference View Post
    Weird reasoning because i always make servants who are really powerful powerhouses, or just have broken niches. but ive never resorted to altering any of them in order pump out more murderjuice from them, I would write alters just as what ifs or different archetypes for story or lore reasons, for example i had an idea of an alter version longinus, as a traveling vigilante who just walks the earth impaling evil and vile people with lancea longini regardless of the weight of their crimes. he is not necesseraly more powerful or weaker than ruler longinus but just with a entirely different personality.
    As I said, my main motive was to have him be the Cu Alter to Belisarius's Medb (or perhaps the Jeanne Alter to her Gilles would be a better comparison). Alter Servants tend to be born from the twisted desires of those closest to them, such as Medb wanting a Cu who'd love her back or Gilles wanting a Jeanne that'd take revenge against those who burnt her at the stake. In Justinian's case, he's twisted by Belisarius's desire for an ideal ruler to bring back the Roman Empire. Making a really OP Servant was just a fun bonus, really (and by and large, Alter Servants do tend to be far more powerful then their normal incarnations).

    And it's funny because I had almost the same idea for a Longinus Alter, only his obsession is specifically with destroying all Pagan gods rather then just random evil people. But I never wrote it up because I couldn't think of how to differentiate his abilities from his normal self.
    Last edited by RoydGolden; March 31st, 2018 at 08:50 PM. Reason: Mixed up Justinian and Belisarius

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    As I said, my main motive was to have him be the Cu Alter to Justinian's Medb (or perhaps the Jeanne Alter to her Gilles would be a better comparison). Alter Servants tend to be born from the twisted desires of those closest to them, such as Medb wanting a Cu who'd love her back or Gilles wanting a Jeanne that'd take revenge against those who burnt her at the stake. In Justinian's case, he's twisted by Belisarius's desire for an ideal ruler to bring back the Roman Empire. Making a really OP Servant was just a fun bonus, really (and by and large, Alter Servants do tend to be far more powerful then their normal incarnations).

    And it's funny because I had almost the same idea for a Longinus Alter, only his obsession is specifically with destroying all Pagan gods rather then just random evil people. But I never wrote it up because I couldn't think of how to differentiate his abilities from his normal self.
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    So after working on it for yesterday and today I finally managed to compile all the entries since page 450 (the last compilation). Hopefully Seika can get around to updating the OP sometime.

    Some of the entries I wasn't entirely sure how to classify, so if you see any problems with how your or another Servant is listed feel free to give me a heads-up. Whew, that took a while...

    Spoiler:
    America:
    Berserker- Buster Keaton by JetKinen
    Assassin- Elizabeth Short by Saron
    Caster- Laura Boulton by Sunny
    Assassin- Austin Axe Murderer by King of Padoru
    Berserker- Tiradentes by pinetree

    Arabic Myth & History:
    Assassin- Hassan of Myriad Voices by 34
    Caster- Zenobia by Shiki-pon
    Assassin- Beastly Hassan by Sunny
    Caster- Saphadin by Kabalisto Koga

    Britain:
    Ruler- James Cook by Sunny
    Saber- Vivianne by the god of world-0
    Caster- Mary Shelley by god of world-0
    Caster- Guinevak by Historia
    Berserker- Boudica by Bird Of Hermes
    Saber- Gwenllian ferch Gruffydd by the god of world-0
    Caster- Freddie Mercury by King of Padoru
    Saber- Rhydderch Hael by venomking
    Caster- Cosmo Princess Mercury-Chan by King of Padoru
    Rider- Cartimandua by Historia (WIP)
    Rider- Edward Teach by Wanderer_96
    Rider- Henry Avery by King of Padoru
    Caster- Roger Bacon by Shiki-pon
    Rider- Godiva by RoydGolden

    Fairy Stories:
    Caster- Santa Claus by 34
    Assassin- Little Red Riding Hood by the god of world-0

    Christianity And Judaism:
    Rider- Adam by Biamwput
    Caster- Moses by Crying
    Archer- Nimrod by massive_jojo_reference
    "Trickster"- Lucifer by venomking
    Caster- Daniel by the god-of-world-0
    Berserker- Samson by King of Padoru
    Rider- Samael by Express
    Ruler- Constantinus by NMR-3
    Avenger- Goliath by Kabalisto Koga
    Saber- Goliath by RoydGolden

    France:
    Caster- Nicolas Flamel by the god of world-0
    Saber- Turpin by Bird Of Hermes
    Caster- Bernhard Von Heuvelmann by Kabalisto Koga
    Rider- Charles Martel by Nine
    Saber- Geoffrey de Charny by SleepMode
    Saber- Jeanne d'arc by Historia

    China:
    Caster- Su Daji by Historia
    Lancer- Hua Mulan by Sunny
    Lancer- Han Xin by SleepMode

    Ireland:
    Lancer- Celtchar Mac Uthidir by Historia
    Ruler- St. Columba by gyrowins
    Berserker- Medb Lily by the god-of-world-0
    Rider- Grace O' Malley by the god of world-0
    Caster- Aoifa by Historia
    Berserker- Celtchar Mac Uthidir by Bird Of Hermes

    Classical Myth & History:
    Lancer- Circe by MoonCell
    Ruler- Marcus Gavius Apicus by AvengerEmiya
    Caster- Tiresias by venomking
    Rider- Medea by Crying
    Lancer- Zagreus by 34
    Rider- Medea by Bird Of Hermes
    Rider- Alaric I by Crying
    Archer- Teucer by RoydGolden
    Assassin- Pompey by Shiki-pon
    Archer- Iphigenia by RoydGolden
    Archer- Eurydice II by Historia
    Caster- Hebe by venomking
    Saber- Justinian by Shiki-pon
    Avenger- Cato the Elder by Shiki-pon
    Lancer- Macelo by Hakuro
    Berserker- Cassandra by the god of world-0
    Saber- Constantine XI Palaeologus by massive_jojo_reference

    Egypt:
    Assassin- Caeserion by Fabuzer
    Saber- Sethos I by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer- Sesostris I by Kabalisto Koga
    Caster- Sobekneferu by Funderfullness

    Post-Classical Italy:
    Caster- Dante Alighieri by Saron
    Caster- Lisa de Giocondo by Bloble

    Japan:
    Grand Caster- Abe No Seimei by venomking
    Caster- Chikamatsu Monzaemon by King of Padoru
    Lancer- Hattori Hanzo by King of Padoru
    Rider- Tsukuyomi by King of Padoru
    Caster- Miyamoto Musashi by zikari8
    Caster- Inari No Okami by King of Padoru
    Saber- Nichiren by Express
    Archer- Raijin & Fujin by the god of world-0
    Assassin- Sasuke Sarutobi by King of Padoru
    Beast V- Amaterasu No Okami by King of Padoru
    Assassin- Kuchisake-Teke by the god of world-0
    Lancer- Usui No Sadamitsu by Bird Of Hermes
    Assassin- Okita Souji (Summer) by King of Padoru
    Caster- Kashan Kouji/Aozaki Touko by zikari8

    Scandinavia
    :
    Saber- Heithrek by Saron
    Rider- Gerda by the god of world-0
    Alterego- Hans Christian Andersen(?) by MehKitteh
    Rider- Gudrun by Historia
    Berserker- Christian VII by Bloble
    Saber- Frithiof by venomking
    Caster- Gudrun by Historia

    Netherlands:
    Rider- Flying Dutchman by Shiki-pon

    The Slavs:
    Avenger- Vlad III by Bloble
    Archer- General Winter by King of Padoru

    Germanic:
    Berserker- Gregor Samsa by Fabuzer
    Saber- Hermann by massive_jojo_reference
    Caster- Maria Mozart by the god of world-0
    Caster- Erwin Schrodinger by King of Padoru

    India:
    Archer- Vishvamitra by SleepMode
    Lancer- Yama by venomking
    Archer- Ghatotkacha by King of Padoru

    Uncategorized:
    Avenger- Jolly Jones by the god of world-0
    Assassin- "Umbra" by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker- Unknown Soldier by Saron

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Portugal:
    Berserker- Joaquim by pinetree
    He's Brazilian. Also it's better to make it Berserker Tiradentes, no one knows him by Joaquim.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    He's Brazilian. Also it's better to make it Berserker Tiradentes, no one knows him by Joaquim.
    I know, but I couldn't find a Brazil section in the OP and Brazil was occupied by Portugal at the time he was alive.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Also I just swapped Padoru's General Winter from Uncategorized to Slavic, as I remembered that's where Russian Servants are categorized.
    Last edited by RoydGolden; April 1st, 2018 at 12:33 AM. Reason: Fixed typo

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    Brazil is in America. There's an America section that even has other Brazilian servants in it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by pinetree View Post
    Brazil is in America. There's an America section that even has other Brazilian servants in it.
    Thanks. I forgot about that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    So after working on it for yesterday and today I finally managed to compile all the entries since page 450 (the last compilation). Hopefully Seika can get around to updating the OP sometime.

    Some of the entries I wasn't entirely sure how to classify, so if you see any problems with how your or another Servant is listed feel free to give me a heads-up. Whew, that took a while...

    Spoiler:
    America:
    Assassin- Elizabeth Short by Saron
    Caster- Laura Boulton by Sunny
    Assassin- Austin Axe Murderer by King of Padoru
    Berserker- Tiradentes by pinetree

    Arabic Myth & History:
    Assassin- Hassan of Myriad Voices by 34
    Caster- Zenobia by Shiki-pon
    Assassin- Beastly Hassan by Sunny
    Saber- Saphadin by Kabalisto Koga

    Britain:
    Ruler- James Cook by Sunny
    Saber- Vivianne by the god of world-0
    Caster- Mary Shelley by god of world-0
    Caster- Guinevak by Historia
    Berserker- Boudica by Bird Of Hermes
    Saber- Gwenllian ferch Gruffydd by the god of world-0
    Caster- Freddie Mercury by King of Padoru
    Saber- Rhydderch Hael by venomking
    Caster- Cosmo Princess Mercury-Chan by King of Padoru
    Rider- Cartimandua by Historia (WIP)
    Rider- Edward Teach by Wanderer_96
    Rider- Henry Avery by King of Padoru
    Caster- Roger Bacon by Shiki-pon

    Fairy Stories:
    Caster- Santa Claus by 34
    Assassin- Little Red Riding Hood by the god of world-0

    Christianity And Judaism:
    Rider- Adam by Biamwput
    Caster- Moses by Crying
    Archer- Nimrod by the god of world-0
    "Trickster"- Lucifer by venomking
    Caster- Daniel by the god-of-world-0
    Berserker- Samson by King of Padoru
    Rider- Samael by Express
    Ruler- Constantinus by NMR-3
    Avenger- Goliath by Kabalisto Koga
    Saber- Goliath by RoydGolden

    France:
    Caster- Nicolas Flamel by the god of world-0
    Saber- Turpin by Bird Of Hermes
    Caster- Bernhard Von Heuvelmann by Kabalisto Koga
    Rider- Charles Martel by Nine
    Saber- Geoffrey de Charny by SleepMode
    Saber- Jeanne d'arc by Historia

    China:
    Caster- Su Daji by Historia
    Lancer- Hua Mulan by Sunny
    Lancer- Han Xin by SleepMode

    Ireland:
    Berserker- Charlie Chaplin by JetKinen
    Lancer- Celtchar Mac Uthidir by Historia
    Ruler- St. Columba by gyrowins
    Berserker- Medb Lily by the god-of-world-0
    Rider- Grace O' Malley by the god of world-0
    Caster- Aoifa by Historia

    Classical Myth & History:
    Lancer- Circe by MoonCell
    Ruler- Marcus Gavius Apicus by AvengerEmiya
    Caster- Tiresias by venomking
    Rider- Medea by Crying
    Lancer- Zagreus by 34
    Rider- Medea by Bird Of Hermes
    Rider- Alaric I by Crying
    Archer- Teucer by RoydGolden
    Assassin- Pompey by Shiki-pon
    Archer- Iphigenia by RoydGolden
    Archer- Eurydice II by Historia
    Caster- Hebe by venomking
    Saber- Justinian by Shiki-pon
    Avenger- Cato the Elder by Shiki-pon
    Lancer- Macelo by Hakuro
    Berserker- Cassandra by the god of world-0
    Saber- Constantine XI Palaeologus by massive_jojo_reference

    Egypt:
    Assassin- Caeserion by Fabuzer
    Saber- Sethos I by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer- Sesostris I by Kabalisto Koga
    Caster- Sobekneferu by Funderfullness

    Post-Classical Italy:
    Caster- Dante Alighieri by Saron
    Caster- Lisa de Giocondo by Bloble

    Japan:
    Grand Caster- Abe No Seimei by venomking
    Caster- Chikatsu Monzaemon by King of Padoru
    Lancer- Hattori Hanzo by King of Padoru
    Saber- Tsukuyomi by King of Padoru
    Caster- Miyamoto Musashi by zikari8
    Caster- Inari No Okami by King of Padoru
    Saber- Nichiren by Express
    Archer- Raijin & Fujin by the god of world-0
    Assassin- Sasuke Sarutobi by King of Padoru
    Beast- Amaterasu No Okami by King of Padoru
    Assassin- Kuchisake-Teke by the god of world-0
    Lancer- Usui No Sadamitsu by Bird Of Hermes
    Assassin- Okita Souji (Summer) by King of Padoru
    Caster- Kashan Kouji/Aozaki Touko by zikari8

    Scandinavia
    :
    Saber- Heithrek by Saron
    Rider- Gerda by the god of world-0
    Alterego- Hans Christian Andersen(?) by MehKitteh
    Rider- Gudrun by Historia
    Berserker- Christian VII by Bloble
    Saber- Frithiof by venomking
    Caster- Gudrun by Historia

    Netherlands:
    Rider- Flying Dutchman by Shiki-pon

    The Slavs:
    Avenger- Vlad III by Bloble
    Archer- General Winter by King of Padoru

    Germanic:
    Berserker- Gregor Samsa
    Saber- Hermann by the god of world-0
    Caster- Maria Mozart by the god of world-0
    Caster- Erwin Schrodinger by King of Padoru

    India:
    Archer- Vishvamitra by SleepMode
    Lancer- Yama by venomking
    Archer- Ghatotkacha by King of Padoru

    Uncategorized:
    Avenger- Jolly Jones by the god of world-0
    Assassin- "Umbra" by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker- Unknown Soldier by Saron
    You mixed me and world-o up again, at Hermann and Nimrod parts, could you fix that?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    So after working on it for yesterday and today I finally managed to compile all the entries since page 450 (the last compilation). Hopefully Seika can get around to updating the OP sometime.

    Some of the entries I wasn't entirely sure how to classify, so if you see any problems with how your or another Servant is listed feel free to give me a heads-up. Whew, that took a while...

    Spoiler:
    America:
    Assassin- Elizabeth Short by Saron
    Caster- Laura Boulton by Sunny
    Assassin- Austin Axe Murderer by King of Padoru
    Berserker- Tiradentes by pinetree

    Arabic Myth & History:
    Assassin- Hassan of Myriad Voices by 34
    Caster- Zenobia by Shiki-pon
    Assassin- Beastly Hassan by Sunny
    Saber- Saphadin by Kabalisto Koga

    Britain:
    Ruler- James Cook by Sunny
    Saber- Vivianne by the god of world-0
    Caster- Mary Shelley by god of world-0
    Caster- Guinevak by Historia
    Berserker- Boudica by Bird Of Hermes
    Saber- Gwenllian ferch Gruffydd by the god of world-0
    Caster- Freddie Mercury by King of Padoru
    Saber- Rhydderch Hael by venomking
    Caster- Cosmo Princess Mercury-Chan by King of Padoru
    Rider- Cartimandua by Historia (WIP)
    Rider- Edward Teach by Wanderer_96
    Rider- Henry Avery by King of Padoru
    Caster- Roger Bacon by Shiki-pon

    Fairy Stories:
    Caster- Santa Claus by 34
    Assassin- Little Red Riding Hood by the god of world-0

    Christianity And Judaism:
    Rider- Adam by Biamwput
    Caster- Moses by Crying
    Archer- Nimrod by the god of world-0
    "Trickster"- Lucifer by venomking
    Caster- Daniel by the god-of-world-0
    Berserker- Samson by King of Padoru
    Rider- Samael by Express
    Ruler- Constantinus by NMR-3
    Avenger- Goliath by Kabalisto Koga
    Saber- Goliath by RoydGolden

    France:
    Caster- Nicolas Flamel by the god of world-0
    Saber- Turpin by Bird Of Hermes
    Caster- Bernhard Von Heuvelmann by Kabalisto Koga
    Rider- Charles Martel by Nine
    Saber- Geoffrey de Charny by SleepMode
    Saber- Jeanne d'arc by Historia

    China:
    Caster- Su Daji by Historia
    Lancer- Hua Mulan by Sunny
    Lancer- Han Xin by SleepMode

    Ireland:
    Berserker- Charlie Chaplin by JetKinen
    Lancer- Celtchar Mac Uthidir by Historia
    Ruler- St. Columba by gyrowins
    Berserker- Medb Lily by the god-of-world-0
    Rider- Grace O' Malley by the god of world-0
    Caster- Aoifa by Historia

    Classical Myth & History:
    Lancer- Circe by MoonCell
    Ruler- Marcus Gavius Apicus by AvengerEmiya
    Caster- Tiresias by venomking
    Rider- Medea by Crying
    Lancer- Zagreus by 34
    Rider- Medea by Bird Of Hermes
    Rider- Alaric I by Crying
    Archer- Teucer by RoydGolden
    Assassin- Pompey by Shiki-pon
    Archer- Iphigenia by RoydGolden
    Archer- Eurydice II by Historia
    Caster- Hebe by venomking
    Saber- Justinian by Shiki-pon
    Avenger- Cato the Elder by Shiki-pon
    Lancer- Macelo by Hakuro
    Berserker- Cassandra by the god of world-0
    Saber- Constantine XI Palaeologus by massive_jojo_reference

    Egypt:
    Assassin- Caeserion by Fabuzer
    Saber- Sethos I by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer- Sesostris I by Kabalisto Koga
    Caster- Sobekneferu by Funderfullness

    Post-Classical Italy:
    Caster- Dante Alighieri by Saron
    Caster- Lisa de Giocondo by Bloble

    Japan:
    Grand Caster- Abe No Seimei by venomking
    Caster- Chikatsu Monzaemon by King of Padoru
    Lancer- Hattori Hanzo by King of Padoru
    Saber- Tsukuyomi by King of Padoru
    Caster- Miyamoto Musashi by zikari8
    Caster- Inari No Okami by King of Padoru
    Saber- Nichiren by Express
    Archer- Raijin & Fujin by the god of world-0
    Assassin- Sasuke Sarutobi by King of Padoru
    Beast- Amaterasu No Okami by King of Padoru
    Assassin- Kuchisake-Teke by the god of world-0
    Lancer- Usui No Sadamitsu by Bird Of Hermes
    Assassin- Okita Souji (Summer) by King of Padoru
    Caster- Kashan Kouji/Aozaki Touko by zikari8

    Scandinavia
    :
    Saber- Heithrek by Saron
    Rider- Gerda by the god of world-0
    Alterego- Hans Christian Andersen(?) by MehKitteh
    Rider- Gudrun by Historia
    Berserker- Christian VII by Bloble
    Saber- Frithiof by venomking
    Caster- Gudrun by Historia

    Netherlands:
    Rider- Flying Dutchman by Shiki-pon

    The Slavs:
    Avenger- Vlad III by Bloble
    Archer- General Winter by King of Padoru

    Germanic:
    Berserker- Gregor Samsa
    Saber- Hermann by the god of world-0
    Caster- Maria Mozart by the god of world-0
    Caster- Erwin Schrodinger by King of Padoru

    India:
    Archer- Vishvamitra by SleepMode
    Lancer- Yama by venomking
    Archer- Ghatotkacha by King of Padoru

    Uncategorized:
    Avenger- Jolly Jones by the god of world-0
    Assassin- "Umbra" by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker- Unknown Soldier by Saron
    Wow, that must have been really tiring. Great job!
    By the way, it's Chikamatsu, not Chikatsu

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    Han Xin: Haven't seen anyone comment on this one (may have just missed it) so I figured I would.

    My only complaint skill-wise is Pioneer of the Stars. I understand your thought processes behind it, but I don't think the skill itself is fitting. I can't really think of a replacement on the fly so my advice here might not be all that helpful. But perhaps if you can't think of a replacement then instead maybe a line saying he only possesses this skill when summoned in China?

    To end on a positive, the Noble Phantasms and characterisation are solid.

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    Class:
    Berserker
    Alternate Class(es): Lancer
    Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
    Region: Ireland – Ulster Mythos

    Height/Weight: 177cm/64kg
    Likes: Dogs, Alcohol
    Dislikes: Cats, Staying Still
    Talent: Savagery
    Natural Enemy: Cu Chulainn (Prototype)
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Humanoid, Servant, Earth, Female, Brynhildr's Beloved?
    Armament: Spear, Fangs, Claws

    Parameters:

    STR: A
    END: B+
    AGI: A+
    MGI: C
    LCK: D
    NP: B

    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Mad Enhancement: C

    The Class Skill that characterises a Berserker, raising basic parameters and strengthens one's physical abilities in exchange of hindering mental capacities and/or in exchange for their sense of reason. In some cases, it also affects and/or seals away some techniques, Personal Skills and Noble Phantasms.

    Rank up for all parameters except Luck and Mana, but in exchange, one can no longer think and speak properly. Berserker possesses an animal-like mindset and acts accordingly.

    Personal Skills:


    Bravery: B

    The ability to negate mental interference such as pressure, confusion and fascination. It also has the bonus effect of increasing melee damage. Not usable under the effects of Mad Enhancement. At this rank, the servant would be highly resistant to all mental interferences, including distractions, emotions, illusions, etc. The servant gains a chance to completely resist mental interference below the level of High Thaumaturgy, and even if they fail, the duration and potency will be reduced.

    Eye of the Mind (False): B

    A natural talent to sense and avoid danger on the basis of an innate 6th sense, intuition, or prescience. The accuracy of this instinct can be augmented by experience. The ability also grants an effect of offering resistance against penalties caused by visual obstructions.
    The difference between Eye of the Mind (True) and Eye of the Mind (False) lies in that the former is an ability that humans can obtain through accumulation of experience. The 'False' version is superficially similar, but in fact represents a natural instinct that cannot be obtained regardless of effort or experience—even though experience can refine its accuracy.

    Gained through many ordeals and adventures, she is capable of calm analysis of battle conditions, by which grasp of the status of the self and the opponent are obtainable even in the midst of danger; utilisation of such to deduce the appropriate course of action that permits escape from a lethal predicament. Even though Berserker’ sanity was lost due to Mad Enhancement, this Skill remained effective as it is nearly an instinct.

    The night before the final battle for Donn Cúailnge, Berserker predicted its outcome based on observations made that day.

    Restructuring: A
    A self-recovery skill that grants one an automatic healing factor. An evolution of the Battle Continuation skill, it exists as a curse that originates from her spear.

    At this rank, Berserker is capable of surviving nearly any damage to her anatomy and able to regenerate it instantly, provided at least that the spiritual core is intact and enough mana is supplied. This does not make her completely invulnerable, though, as the more extreme levels of self-healing like restoring entire limbs take a large amount of reserve energy to perform. However it should be noted that due to the tale of her death, posion bypasses her regeneration.


    Noble Phantasm

    Roaring Spear of the Plains
    Luin of Celtchar


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B+
    Range: 1~30
    Maximum Targets: 9

    An enchanted spear originally said to be owned by the god Lugh in Irish mythology, however as time progressed and mystery lowered in the Age of Man, the cursed spear of Lancer passed onto several others. In the legends of the spear the Luin of Celtchar has been used in many different ways but due to being summoned as a Berserker, only one can be used.

    When the True Name is called, it flies forward of its own volition with the intent of skewering as many as possible. The spear carries an additional curse and wounds in creates will slowly grow and worsen if they are not tended to will cripple the target. Berserker herself cannot choose the targets and the spear will not differentiate between friend and foe, making it poorly suited for group battles with multiple allies. Although enemies are prioritised as targets, the spear may even target innocent bystanders or even Berserker herself, potentially killing her.

    In battle, the weapon tore through the enemy ranks like lightning. After battle, it had to be quenched in a cauldron full of blood to render it safe to handle. When the hero Celtchar hefted it, blood dripped from its tip, landed on their body, and killed them. Proponents of a Celtic origin for the Grail legend have identified the Luin of Celtchar with the Bleeding Lance, which also bled from its tip. In addition, the Luin is associated with a cauldron, which some advocates see as the origin of the Grail.



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    Lore:

    Celtchar mac Uthidir
    , is a character from the Ulster Cycle of Irish Mythology. In Scéla Mucce Maic Dathó he is described as "a grey, tall, very terrible hero of Ulster". Celtchar was one of the wielders of a famed cursed spear ‘Luin of Celtchar’, whose lust for blood is so great it has to be dipped in a cauldron of poison to control it.
    In the Táin Bó Cúailnge, after the Ulstermen have roused from their debility, she and Conchobar mac Nessa rescue eight captive Ulster women from Ailill and Medb's household at Áth Féinne.

    In compensation for murdering Blaí Briugu, who had slept with her beloved, Celtchar had to rid Ulster of three menaces. The first is Conganchnes mac Dedad, who seeked revenge for the death of his nephew Cú Roí, and who has skin like horn, which no weapon can pierce. Celtchar discovered that Conganchnes could only be killed by hammering red hot spits into the soles of his feet which she did. Second was a ferocious dog called Luch Donn ("brown mouse"). It had been found as a pup by a widow, who raised it until it was enormous and uncontrollable. It killed all the widow's sheep and cattle, then her sons, and finally the widow herself, and now it devastates a settlement every night. Celtchar found an alder log, hollowed it out so her arm will fit through it, and boiled it in honey, grease and herbs until it is tough and supple. She approached the dog with the log over her arm, and when the dog bit into it its teeth get stuck, enabling Celtchar to pull its heart out through its throat, killing it. The third menace wass Dóelchú, Celtchar's own dog. It was found as a pup inside Conganchnes's burial mound, and would only let Celtchar handle it, until one day it escaped, and became a menace to the cattle and sheep of Ulster. Celtchar found the dog and called to it, and it comes and licks her feet. Reluctantly, Celtchar dispatches it with her spear. As she lifts the spear, a drop of the dog's poisonous blood runs down it and through Celtchar's body, killing her.

    Character:

    Typically, Celtchar is rather cold hearted. Not showing much emotion and being rather stoic. One could say she’s a little warmer on the inside but she considers them a weakness and constrains herself. Despite considering emotion a weakness, she can get very attached to people and animals alike, even fighting and dying for them.
    That said, she can be bold as Celtchar will probably be the first to run headfirst into battle recklessly. Despite her courage and self control, she does have a temper and when let out she will tear people apart limb from limb, as a result she appears cold unfeeling and murderous to the untrained eye, thus gaining the title “Grey and Terrible Hero.”

    However as a Berserker, she’s a feral dog that eats when it’s hungry and attacks everything it doesn’t like. Despite being a wild beast, some traits may linger…


    Creators Notes:


    Dumping a WIP from my 'half-done' folder here as I'm at a dead end. Did a genderswap as I couldn't find a male FC with the grey motifs and dog ears that suited the character. Also I'm changing my layout again because I'm so indecisive.

    Feel free to hype it up or tear it to shreds.
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    I miss the effect of the spear heating itself before battle, but I assume it's included among the versions of the legend that have been lost.
    In the case that the spear targets Berserker, would it inflict lethal damage, or that's decided randomly too? It'd be a letdown to have your Servant skewered by her own NP, in my opinion

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    I miss the effect of the spear heating itself before battle, but I assume it's included among the versions of the legend that have been lost.
    In the case that the spear targets Berserker, would it inflict lethal damage, or that's decided randomly too? It'd be a letdown to have your Servant skewered by her own NP, in my opinion
    It's included in Dubthach's versions here. He has two versions of the NP with Celtchar having the third.

    The spear would prioritise enemies but there is a chance it might target Berserker, the poison that dripped from it did kill her in legend after all.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    It's included in Dubthach's versions here. He has two versions of the NP with Celtchar having the third.

    The spear would prioritise enemies but there is a chance it might target Berserker, the poison that dripped from it did kill her in legend after all.
    one Question what is Celtchar mac Uthidir capabilties as Lancer and which different ways has Luin of Celtchar actually ?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Celtchar
    Natural Enemy: Zero Two Medb.

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    Celtchar: Since she died from one drop of poison, I feel like that might merit a mention in her Restructuring Skill. Maybe something about how damage from poison will bypass her regeneration?

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    You mixed me and world-o up again, at Hermann and Nimrod parts, could you fix that?
    Dang it, I literally just realized that when I went to bed last night. In any case, fixed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    So after working on it for yesterday and today I finally managed to compile all the entries since page 450 (the last compilation). Hopefully Seika can get around to updating the OP sometime.

    Some of the entries I wasn't entirely sure how to classify, so if you see any problems with how your or another Servant is listed feel free to give me a heads-up. Whew, that took a while...

    Spoiler:
    America:
    Assassin- Elizabeth Short by Saron
    Caster- Laura Boulton by Sunny
    Assassin- Austin Axe Murderer by King of Padoru
    Berserker- Tiradentes by pinetree

    Arabic Myth & History:
    Assassin- Hassan of Myriad Voices by 34
    Caster- Zenobia by Shiki-pon
    Assassin- Beastly Hassan by Sunny
    Saber- Saphadin by Kabalisto Koga

    Britain:
    Ruler- James Cook by Sunny
    Saber- Vivianne by the god of world-0
    Caster- Mary Shelley by god of world-0
    Caster- Guinevak by Historia
    Berserker- Boudica by Bird Of Hermes
    Saber- Gwenllian ferch Gruffydd by the god of world-0
    Caster- Freddie Mercury by King of Padoru
    Saber- Rhydderch Hael by venomking
    Caster- Cosmo Princess Mercury-Chan by King of Padoru
    Rider- Cartimandua by Historia (WIP)
    Rider- Edward Teach by Wanderer_96
    Rider- Henry Avery by King of Padoru
    Caster- Roger Bacon by Shiki-pon

    Fairy Stories:
    Caster- Santa Claus by 34
    Assassin- Little Red Riding Hood by the god of world-0

    Christianity And Judaism:
    Rider- Adam by Biamwput
    Caster- Moses by Crying
    Archer- Nimrod by massive_jojo_reference
    "Trickster"- Lucifer by venomking
    Caster- Daniel by the god-of-world-0
    Berserker- Samson by King of Padoru
    Rider- Samael by Express
    Ruler- Constantinus by NMR-3
    Avenger- Goliath by Kabalisto Koga
    Saber- Goliath by RoydGolden

    France:
    Caster- Nicolas Flamel by the god of world-0
    Saber- Turpin by Bird Of Hermes
    Caster- Bernhard Von Heuvelmann by Kabalisto Koga
    Rider- Charles Martel by Nine
    Saber- Geoffrey de Charny by SleepMode
    Saber- Jeanne d'arc by Historia

    China:
    Caster- Su Daji by Historia
    Lancer- Hua Mulan by Sunny
    Lancer- Han Xin by SleepMode

    Ireland:
    Berserker- Charlie Chaplin by JetKinen
    Lancer- Celtchar Mac Uthidir by Historia
    Ruler- St. Columba by gyrowins
    Berserker- Medb Lily by the god-of-world-0
    Rider- Grace O' Malley by the god of world-0
    Caster- Aoifa by Historia

    Classical Myth & History:
    Lancer- Circe by MoonCell
    Ruler- Marcus Gavius Apicus by AvengerEmiya
    Caster- Tiresias by venomking
    Rider- Medea by Crying
    Lancer- Zagreus by 34
    Rider- Medea by Bird Of Hermes
    Rider- Alaric I by Crying
    Archer- Teucer by RoydGolden
    Assassin- Pompey by Shiki-pon
    Archer- Iphigenia by RoydGolden
    Archer- Eurydice II by Historia
    Caster- Hebe by venomking
    Saber- Justinian by Shiki-pon
    Avenger- Cato the Elder by Shiki-pon
    Lancer- Macelo by Hakuro
    Berserker- Cassandra by the god of world-0
    Saber- Constantine XI Palaeologus by massive_jojo_reference

    Egypt:
    Assassin- Caeserion by Fabuzer
    Saber- Sethos I by Kabalisto Koga
    Archer- Sesostris I by Kabalisto Koga
    Caster- Sobekneferu by Funderfullness

    Post-Classical Italy:
    Caster- Dante Alighieri by Saron
    Caster- Lisa de Giocondo by Bloble

    Japan:
    Grand Caster- Abe No Seimei by venomking
    Caster- Chikamatsu Monzaemon by King of Padoru
    Lancer- Hattori Hanzo by King of Padoru
    Saber- Tsukuyomi by King of Padoru
    Caster- Miyamoto Musashi by zikari8
    Caster- Inari No Okami by King of Padoru
    Saber- Nichiren by Express
    Archer- Raijin & Fujin by the god of world-0
    Assassin- Sasuke Sarutobi by King of Padoru
    Beast V- Amaterasu No Okami by King of Padoru
    Assassin- Kuchisake-Teke by the god of world-0
    Lancer- Usui No Sadamitsu by Bird Of Hermes
    Assassin- Okita Souji (Summer) by King of Padoru
    Caster- Kashan Kouji/Aozaki Touko by zikari8

    Scandinavia
    :
    Saber- Heithrek by Saron
    Rider- Gerda by the god of world-0
    Alterego- Hans Christian Andersen(?) by MehKitteh
    Rider- Gudrun by Historia
    Berserker- Christian VII by Bloble
    Saber- Frithiof by venomking
    Caster- Gudrun by Historia

    Netherlands:
    Rider- Flying Dutchman by Shiki-pon

    The Slavs:
    Avenger- Vlad III by Bloble
    Archer- General Winter by King of Padoru

    Germanic:
    Berserker- Gregor Samsa
    Saber- Hermann by massive_jojo_reference
    Caster- Maria Mozart by the god of world-0
    Caster- Erwin Schrodinger by King of Padoru

    India:
    Archer- Vishvamitra by SleepMode
    Lancer- Yama by venomking
    Archer- Ghatotkacha by King of Padoru

    Uncategorized:
    Avenger- Jolly Jones by the god of world-0
    Assassin- "Umbra" by Kabalisto Koga
    Berserker- Unknown Soldier by Saron
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Han Xin: Haven't seen anyone comment on this one (may have just missed it) so I figured I would.

    My only complaint skill-wise is Pioneer of the Stars. I understand your thought processes behind it, but I don't think the skill itself is fitting. I can't really think of a replacement on the fly so my advice here might not be all that helpful. But perhaps if you can't think of a replacement then instead maybe a line saying he only possesses this skill when summoned in China?

    To end on a positive, the Noble Phantasms and characterisation are solid.
    Thanks for the feedback.

    Eheh, now you've said it, the Skill does feel out of place. Hmm, perhaps I can cook up another Skill to accommodate it...

    EDIT: Changed the Skill to something more fitting. Must give credit to Royd for it.
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    Servant Rider:

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    True Name: Lady Godiva

    Alignment
    : Neutral Good

    Strength- E
    Agility- C
    Endurance- D
    Mana- C
    Luck- B
    NP- C

    Personality
    A gentle and compassionate woman, with a strong sense of justice. Despite being a noble, she cares deeply for the values・well-being of the common people. Although Rider was at first mortified by nudity, it seems that the experience of her legend has led her to view it as empowering instead. While not so shameless as to flaunt her body in public, Rider enjoys being naked when at home and away from prying eyes.

    Maybe because of a certain company borrowing her name in present times, Rider has a strong sweet tooth, loving chocolates and all sorts of confectionaries. Due to her Golden Rule (Body) Skill meaning that her body won't gain weight no matter how much calories are ingested, she often spends her free time gorging on various sweets.

    Rider's wish on the Holy Grail is a simple and compassionate one, to create a world where no commoner has to suffer oppression.

    Likes: fairness, chocolate
    Dislikes: lustful men, oppression
    Talent: exhibitionism?
    Natural Enemy: her husband Leofric



    Class Skills:

    Riding- B
    The ability to ride animals and handle vehicles. At this rank, most mundane mounts can be ridden at an above average degree of skill, but not Phantasmal or Divine Beasts. The figure of Godiva riding through the streets of Coventry naked is depicted in many Medieval and Renaissance artworks.

    Magic Resistance- C
    Confers protection against magical effects. Cancels spells with a chant below two verses, but cannot cope with the likes of High Thaumaturgy or Greater Rituals. Despite being born after the Age of Gods and never encountering Magecraft, Rider possesses a higher rank in this Skill due to the legend of her receiving divine protection.


    Personal Skills:

    Golden Rule (Body)- EX
    Connotes posssession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Due to her Noble Phantasm, Rider possesses an absolutely faultless divine beauty.

    Nature Of A Rebellious Spirit- C
    Rider famously agreed to her naked procession to revolt against her husband's oppressive tax policies. Negates Charisma at the same rank or lower.

    Familiar (Peeping Tom)- A
    Rider can summon and command a familiar in the form of a grotesque gnome-like figure, representing the lustful tailor that spied her naked in legend. Peeping Tom can be sent out to spy and gather information for Rider, having the Skills Clairvoyance and Presence Concealment at the same rank. However, he is pitifully weak in combat and easily distracted by beautiful women.


    Noble Phantasm
    Processionis Mercia
    Unveiling Of A Maiden's Chastity


    Rank: C

    Type: Anti-Populace

    A Noble Phantasm recreating the legend where Godiva rode naked through the streets of Coventry to protest her husband's oppressive taxation. To invoke this Noble Phantasm, Rider need only shed all clothing she possesses (letting her long hair cover what remains of her modesty) and mount her horse. Upon doing so, an aura of heavenly light surrounds Rider, making her resemble an angel. Those looking at Rider's naked body who feel any degree of lust for her will be struck by a divine curse of blindness.

    A high ranking in Mana will allow one to resist this curse to some extent. At E-rank, the individual will be permanently blinded upon sight of Rider. At D or C rank, they will be blinded for ten to twenty turns. At B-rank, their vision will only be briefly dazzled instead of truly blinded. At A-rank, the curse will be entirely powerless to affect them. Even if the target doesn't physically look at Rider, the curse can be conveyed merely by imagining her naked in their mind's eye while this Noble Phantasm is active. However, its effects thankfully aren't spread by recordings in print or film, limiting the risk of Rider accidentally striking a whole country blind.

    Those who simply feel no lust towards Rider to begin with (such as ascetic monks or extremely young children) will also be immune to the effects of this Noble Phantasm. Due to the contract holding between them, her Master is also protected, allowing them to freely gaze upon her naked body without fear of (magical) consequence.

    Joke NP
    Godiva Hair
    Hair That Guards The Maiden's Chastity


    Rank: E

    Type: Anti-Lewdness

    A Noble Phantasm that is Rider's hair itself. It will always fall conveniently over her naughty bits, even if doing so defies physics, logic and common sense. Truly a boon to censors and moralists everywhere.

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    Update: So I swapped out Peeping Tom's Presence Detection with Presence Concealment (more fitting for a spy) and added a "joke NP" just for fun. Any thoughts on the sheet?

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