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[Kabalisto Koga]

Oh, I thought the foreigner class was for those who were empowered by those foreign to the world and its reasoning, which would be anything extraterrestrial.

Basically yes although ,although until now it was only with Different Ralities(/Lostbelts) or with a Entity beyond our universe, but also a Person manipulated from a Deity of a other planet would Count as Foreigner i would say .
like a Deity from Jupiter or Demon from Enceladus...

[King of Padoru]

Not this shit again...

[pinetree]

Basically yes although ,although until now it was only with Different Ralities(/Lostbelts) or with a Entity beyond our universe, but also a Person manipulated from a Deity of a other planet would Count as Foreigner i would say .
like a Deity from Jupiter or Demon from Enceladus...

No. Eldritch/Lovecraftian beings only. At least until we get a canon confirmation that the class isn't exclusive to them.

Unless your OC Jupiter gods and Encedalus demons are Lovecraftian as fuck, then carry on.

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Wait that's Koga with a different avvie. Well, I thinks this discussion happened before so meh

[Kabalisto Koga]

Not this shit again...

Do you mean the Story of the Definition of a foreigner ? Well its just my oppinion...but lets leav this Discussion,King of Padoru better.... i dont want to Anger or annoy you or the others if its avoidable..!

[CritHit]

Not this shit again...

Looking at your posts overall, you seem to be a very angreh boi.

[SleepMode]

Looking at your posts overall, you seem to be a very angreh boi.

It’s not anger, but exasperation

[King of Padoru]

Well, I thinks this discussion happened before so meh

Yup. It started with a suggestion about if a Foreigner could be possessed by Indra from a parallel universe in which he's an American deity or something like that

[SleepMode]

I’m sorry, but what

[King of Padoru]

i have just asked because if you think about it you could view stretched out of as example a latin american Anubis or Indra as "Foreign" Deity and also could Count the Demon/daemons as Gods/Deities of their respective World

No. Outer Gods are Lovecraftian entities, not Anubis Gonzalez.

The previous debate about the Foreigner class. It started with this.

[Der Ritter]

That post makes me feel culturally violated.

[Kabalisto Koga]

Pinetree ,okay i have noticed that about the Foreigner-class is waiting announced .... how ever


Here is the Profile of Suhrawardi (9/10)
Critique,oppinions and other Statements are appreciated.I hope i have made him not to overpowerd .

Suhrawardi

Schihab ad-Din Yahya Suhrawardi

Picture

Appearance as Servant:
He wears a Dark Brown cloak not unlike the of Avicebron but instead the metal Spikes he has prismatic Crystal-protrudes.

Title:
Šaiḫ al-išrāq
(Master of Enlightment)
Other names:
Shaikh al-Maqtul
(the Murdered Master)

Height:
173~ cm
Weight: 54~ kg
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Human/Elemental
Origin: Persian
Alternative classes: Archer,Ruler
Likes: Decent faith,the Rays of light(Reflexions)
Dislikes: Religious Fanatism,the shadows of Greed
Talents: Arts of Gnosis,Clear view of the occurances/affairs
Natural enemy: Abu-Bakr Malik al-ʿAdil I.

Parameters

Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Luck: B
Mana: B~
NP: A++

Background

Suhrawardi was a Persian born Sufi and Philosoph.
He learned wisdom and jurisprudence in Maragheh His teacher was Majd al-Dīn Jīlī . He then went to Iraq and Syria for several years and developed his knowledge while he was there.His life spanned a period of less than forty years during which he produced a series of works that established him as the founder of a new school of philosophy, called "Illuminism" (hikmat al-Ishraq).

will be completted..

Personality

He is a wise and idiologic Man, his Charackter Shares similarity with Aviceberon like his Disposition with Humans but visibly less misanthropic and more benevoleent .He consider the state of the modern Islam as "dusted" by the fog of power-greed and self-flagellation or in other words mislead during he sees in the modern Christan believe a Change in a possibly right direction.towards his Master he would act like a Mentor in a similar Fashion like Chiron,He is mostly a fighting avoiding individual but in the case he sees it as the only solution to protect his Master or take down evil tempered Servants and Masters he will become a fearfull Opponent whoose fight without hesitation and mercy but against Servant of noble Manner and Demeanor he knows grace .

Skills

Class skills:
Territory Creation:A
At this Rank the creation off a Temple becomes posible.
He can create a Temple (mostly) a mosque within a complex variety rich workshop.
Item Creation: B He is able to create partiall through his Gnosis of the Stellar Beings able to create Alchemistic potions protection seals,or different types of sukaima but his own spciality of the creation of prism and prismatic objects.
Personal skills:
Gnosis of the stellar Beings (not final name) : A(?)
　Is the through either the favor of celestial Being/Deities or through the spiritual sharping/Training of the mind gained (Primordial) Knowledge.
In Suhrawardis case he received it through either his Mentor and through the studying of Ancient Ciphren and Glyphs and also of the help of ,",;.:;;,.
he aquried Ancient Knowledge of Magecraft ,Myths and truths ,essences of this Knowledges can be seen in his Woorks.
The Magecrafts he gained are:

Old Egyptic/Hieratic Magecraft:
He is able to use Magecraft of the old Kingdom of the Pharaohs and is in possesion of Three to five Glyphs,although it must be noted that in comparison to the old Masters he is a Novize as such he can with one exception of one Spell use only the Basics like some Sand Manipulation or to use the sense of Animals for his use and Control them or making conterfeits of them .
The Exception is/are the Dendera Lights a spell that creates orbs to middle sized Spehers of Light he can use to attack or for defensive purposes.

Hermetic true Magecraft:
Is the Ancient Magecraft that was created of the Magic/Magecraft of Thot and Hermes and is the Ancient ,first if not the first Alchemistic-Sorcery .
Although Suhrawardi is just Little above mediocre/average he is able through the use of primordial Knowledge and means to reach Results of the best modern Alchemists in Terms of
Quality like phillosopher Stones that can grant the Wielder the equivalent of a Servant skill,Medicinal or magical potions ,the creation of up to hougu class B- Mystic codes if the raw materials are available.

Old Persian/Mesopothamian Sorcery:
He is also in possesion of spells of the Age of God with until Mesopothamiac origin like a spell to summon a Manticore,or a spell of Necromantic nature ,or other effects.
Eyes of Clairvoyance:
B++
　He is able to see to a minimal degree in the future and is able to analyze incidents.
Protection of the Faithfull:
B
Due to his pure believe he receiv especially against curses ,mentally interferences a protection and gains a Parameter bost in the combat against　demonic or bestialic opponents.

Noble Phantasm

Š
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Type:
Anti-Unit
Rank: A+
Range: 1~99
Maximum number of targets:
Description:
Is the crystalisation of his Ligh Magecraft .He is able to fire Light Rays/streams or Burst ,he is also able to solidify the Light to create Barriers ,Stavs or Blades,Swords and is able to create Fata Morgana/Reflexion based Illusions.after relase of the Real Name of Nobelphantasm and a Mantra he transform into a Angelic Elemental Being and is able to fly ,can use Elemental Sorcery and gains a Mana selvreplenishment and Elemental Blast Rank B also is he able to burrow for a extreme limited amoumt of time* the power of other related celestial/stellar or divine Beings like :

*for the evocation of one attack
Flame of the Daylight
Sol Invictus
Descrition:


Light of the Divine-Wisdom
Al -ʿel Hubal
Description:
Detail are given later...

　

Relations

Abu-Bakr Malik al-ʿAdil I:"Why have you changed the course of Saladins legacy ?"
Saladin: "You was the iconic light of not only Of our Faith brothers but also the of the other front."
Arthoria: " Please let me see the Holy light of your legendary Sword ? "

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The previous debate about the Foreigner class. It started with this.

Ooooh now i see a writhing error in my comment i meant :" but of as example is for/out of the view of a native American Man/woman Anubis or Indra a foreign Being" .Sorry sincereely for this dumb error.

[King of Padoru]

That's even worse, considering one of Foreigner's class skills is literally about being possessed by something not from this world.

Anyways, I'll refrain from saying anything else before Spartacus starts with his ships again

[Spartacus]

It's already started, sorry.

[Kabalisto Koga]

That's even worse, considering one of Foreigner's class skills is literally about being possessed by something not from this world.

Anyways, I'll refrain from saying anything else before Spartacus starts with his ships again

Okay for our sake let us close the Case :"Foreigner Definition" until official Informations are revealed.

Tss .... dont let being you iritated .,...but please tell me your oppinion about my Suhrawardi Profile/sheet ?

[Kabalisto Koga]

It's already started, sorry.

Tsss....why are you shipping us actually mataku,??

[Spartacus]

Look Zinnia is a dragon trainer, you have a dragon avatar before.

Little one, it's a simple calculus.

[CritHit]

Two Questions to you:first is it wanked/ overpowered,and what is your biggest critiquepoint ??

There's no reason for B-Rank agility. Nor is there a reason for him to have Green Lantern powers.
Edit: To clarify my answer, "is it wanked/overpowered?", YES! And not even in a sensible way. There are plenty of ways to generalize his beliefs/teachings into a reasonably wanked NP, you just went about it the worst way possible.

[Criarino]

Okay, so, this guy Crairino started the self sheet craze I'm guessing?

Woah I did this? Really?! I started a new chain in an online forum... This could be the most important event in my life
But yeah, he was talking about me (just follow the link in my signature to see my list of created sheets if you want to see that one)
I'm late? Sorry my internet connection is a sh

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it
Edit: it's Criarino, not Crairino

[RoydGolden]

I don't have time to give full feedback on Suhrawardi but for now, isn't it a little offensive to have him say that Christianity is a "step in the right direction" from Islam? I'd be fine with him being disillusioned with modern Islam, but taking an Islamic cultural icon and making them a mouthpiece for why Christianity is actually better feels kind of appropriative and gross. I know that wasn't your intention, but that's how it came off to me.

On a lighter note, who/what is the ,",;.:;;,. that you censored out in the description for his Gnosis Of Stellar Beings Skill? Just curious.

[Crying]

Unless I have a RL picture of someone, I tend to picture them as their anime avatars half the time anyways...

Wait, so I'm Shinji? Ew....