Last edited by RoydGolden; June 9th, 2018 at 08:05 PM. Reason: Forgot about Marie's Skill
Disappointed at the lack of a beauty skill for Nakula, Nature of Duality is a wanked version of Combination (mind you, double Servants die even if you've killed only one of them), Riding is too high, and part of the skillset could be replaced with Clairvoyance, Medicine and things like that. Besides, Ashwinastra is totally made up as far as I know and looks too OP even by Indian standards if you ask me.
But well, it's still much better than your first sheets
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Also, although there are negative skills about curses (Evaporation of Reason, for example), not every curse is a skill (see Sumanai having his back always exposed )
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Where do you get all this though? Why does Japan hold monopoly on the concept of "paper folding"? Origami in the English language is just a loan word to denote a broad category of different activities. Plus it's used like only once. Loan words are about timing of adoption rather than origins.
No one outside of China even uses "ZheZhi" so people just chose the closest word to it. Even Europe developed its own napkin folding art. Are you saying that that's not theirs either?
Where is this "blurring" of Japanese and Chinese Techniques? The NP is very clear about denoting the differences between the 2 styles actually. Is this about the paper crane? That's like one thing. If it really bothers you think of it this way...riding cranes is what Xian and powerful Sorcerers do. The NP makes things with paper. Go from there.
Last edited by Theoneandonlyz; June 9th, 2018 at 08:54 PM.
I never said Japan had any monopoly on the paper folding thing, but perhaps I was wording it out wrong, so forgive me for any sort of misunderstanding.
I was trying to say that as a Chinese Servant with strong connections with well, paper, having access to Japanese techniques is a bit... Odd. Well, you can say that 'origami is more famous so he can use them because pop cultural osmosis', so it's kinda justifiable, but I really expected a more... Chinese exploration of the paper folding world. But, I can't demand that, that's just unfair, so I'm sorry.
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Assassin of the Church
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Alternate Classes: Caster
True Name: Abraham van Helsing?
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: ?
Armament: Black Keys
Parameters:
STR: C
END: D
AGI: A
MANA: C
LUCK: B
NP: B
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How many seconds would it take to ban me if I made Bucephalus a cute horse girl that is hard to approach because she's shy and kicks people when she gets nervous/scared?
"Helsing": I like the idea of him not being the actual Helsing, but someone that fits the role, and the parameters are fitting for a relatively recent Servant. Good job
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Well, given the other... questionable sheets that have apparently been posted here, I think you'll be fine. I wonder if this Bucephalus might also have, say, a mace with the top being shaped like a horse head (as a reference to the name - apparently Bucephalus had a very large head). Just a thought.
If I do the sheet in the future, I may add the mace. This was a random toilet thought tho, so probably won't happen. Besides, I must try to focus on the goddamn summer sheets already.
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On the subject of Buchepalus, if I'm not mistaken, there was a Buchepalus Rider sheet a few hundred pages ago.
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Yes, I've had a look at it, but he was a "normal" horse rather than a horse girl (friendly reminder about Nasu's genderbend mania affecting horses too)
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i must really admin that made them as dual servant was difficult ,and i understand for the future that to make dual servants booth must share a almost inseperable legend lik you said with Ann and Mary,but to be honest i had hoped that the Nature of Duality skill is enough ,About the personalities i will add some interaction in the profile later.
i think also now i should writhing them seperate .
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I think this will be my last sheet for the weekend.
Viking
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Servant Class: Saber
Alternate Classes: Rider, Berserker
True Name: Viking Vifilsson
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Iceland (8th century)
Armament: Angervadil, shield
Parameters:
STR: B+
END: A
AGI: B
MANA: B
LUCK: D
NP: A
Skills
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Last edited by Shiki-pon; June 15th, 2018 at 04:57 PM.
puh Shiki-pon you must now worked you whole list down ,huh ? i think so . please say have you had them halv finished in your Folder ?(i dont want to Insult you now) because i cant imagine that in this (quite) few days you made them from the start !?
nevertheless i must admin that you make high Quality profiles ! About qualities ,although my last profile is not a reall dual servant but beside that how do you find it ?
just out of curiousness where would you say is your weakness in the profile making?
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Well, I still have a dozen or so in various stages of completion. As I've mentioned before, I work on them bit by bit until I've got a pretty solid idea of what the sheet should be like, and then I just finish them when I'm inspired enough to do so. Viking and Bölverk were pretty much blank when I started on them though. I only had the NP names in mind at the time.
And honestly, my sheets aren't all that great. And my weakness as far as profiles go is giving them personality.
As for your latest, other than the spelling errors, sorta overblown parameters and the fact that you gave way too many Skills (and some of those with little to no justification), its at least going in a better direction. I also agree with the others that they probably shouldn't be a combined Servant, though I haven't really gotten into the Mahabharata.
One Question at all which would be your top five lists of Servant(Canon official ones or beast lair communuity made ) fights .
Myself :Justinian Alter(Royd Golden) vs Goliath ,Sahadeva(Caster) vs Chiron,Shiki-pons Thutmosis Archer vs my Sesostris Archer,Mbutco vs Spearfinger,Olympias (asterism42) vs Nakula(Rider),Alcides vs Goliath(Archer),Bhima vs Spartacus(both saber),Gladios vs Hundred face Hassan.
any bet ,oppinion Expression and Fighting scenaries are more than welcome !
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Mercury-chan vs Graham Chapman "Arthur ", please. Now seriously, Philip Alter vs trap Elizabeth would be quite cool
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Was casually reading some Joan of Arc material and stumbled upon several lines that might be good for an alternative take on an Avenger / Alter servant,
"Joan, known as the Maid, was guilty of schism, idolatry, the invocation of demons, and many other crimes. She had abjured her heresy, and the bosom of the Holy Mother Church had opened to her once more, but she had returned to her sin, like a dog returning to its vomit."
"... she had failed not because her inspiration came from heaven, but from hell."
"... , 'by the renown of Joan the Maid the hearts of the English were greatly changed and weakened, and, they saw, as it seemed to them, that Fortune was turning her wheel harshly against them.'
From these and taking her the time between her ten months spent as a shackled, beaten, dogged prisoner of the Burgundians + English to her execution where she was, burned alive...
Clearly Avenger / Alter Jeanne is actually this.