Originally Posted by
King of Padoru
Okay, here's an attempt to give feedback that will probably be shit because I'm not precisely the king of critiques.
Caesar was the son of Venus and was deified after dying and has only D rank in Divinity. Also, according to Cleopatra's profile, Ptolemaic Pharaohs have shit-rank Divinity (she gets D rank despite being considered the incarnation of Isis). Considering this, and that Octavius wasn't an official Pharaoh, I say he shouldn't have B rank.
Gil-tier Golden Rule is too much as well. B rank is more than enough, seeing how this is the rank for Darius III, the king that could allow challenging Iskandar a bunch of times. Even if it's something important for Octavius in combat, so it is for Darius and Francis Drake, and they don't have it at A rank.
About the Noble Phantasms... Sidus Iulius was a perfect chance to make a symbolic anti-governor attack in my opinion. Again, the rank may be too high. For reference, Stella's is B++. Then again, Octavius doesn't die after using this NP.
For Pax Romana... I say this is wank. First of all, Reality Marbles outside the Caster class are ultra-rare, and moreso if you didn't know shit about magecraft. Hell, Iskandar can only pull his Reality Marble through the ultimate friendship power. Just popping Reality Marbles because "me rules lol" is no good. With the description you've written, saying it's something like Hanging Gardens of Babylon could have been OK.
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