Create-A-Servant 2

[Bugs]

If the Round Table of Camelot can become a shield, then who's to say the Sonnenrad (which was explicitly based on it) couldn't too?

While we're on the subject of Nazis as Servants though, I'd like to see someone do a Heydrich sheet just to go full out with Dies Irae memes.

I was working on a Foreigner Miguel Serrano as a Nazi Servant after Tezcatlipoca, but Shielder Himmler might be too good to pass up.

[Lambda-Nu]

Hey, Hermes. Could you please tell me what you think of my Nameless Witch sheet?

[RoydGolden]

Hey, Hermes. Could you please tell me what you think of my Nameless Witch sheet?

Not Hermes, but I'll comment nevertheless.

She's pretty cool. Well-fleshed out personality (I especially like the implication that she's "acting" out the role of an evil witch rather than being innately evil), and simple but fitting NPs. Out of curiosity, were you inspired by the Caster from Fate/Empire of Dirt by any chance? I just looked back on it because I thought the FC would be incredibly fitting, and found the same wording for the Deal with the Devil (False) Skill you used. Coincidence?

[Lambda-Nu]

Not Hermes, but I'll comment nevertheless.

She's pretty cool. Well-fleshed out personality (I especially like the implication that she's "acting" out the role of an evil witch rather than being innately evil), and simple but fitting NPs. Out of curiosity, were you inspired by the Caster from Fate/Empire of Dirt by any chance? I just looked back on it because I thought the FC would be incredibly fitting, and found the same wording for the Deal with the Devil (False) Skill you used. Coincidence?

Thanks, Royd. I started on her a few months before I heard about Fate/Empire of Dirt. She started out as King of Padoru’s Witches of Zugarramurdi idea before it evolved into this. Then, I took some inspiration from FEoD’s Caster, at least as far as the Deal with the Devil (False) Skill goes. But honestly, I don’t really view Caster as “acting out being an evil witch” and more like “psychopath who knows killing is wrong but can’t stop”.

I actually like Empire of Dirt so far, even if I can’t read Japanese or like H-games. Or porn in general. In my opinion, Empire of Dirt would be even better if it didn’t have H-scenes.

[Bugs]

A S S A S S I N

Alt FC?

Alternate Class: Archer/Caster/Rider/Avenger
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Epithet: Lord of Night, We Are His Slaves
Origin: Aztec Lore

Parameters
Strength: C
Endurance: B
Agility: A
Mana: EX
Luck: A
NP: EX

Class Skills
Presence Concealment: A+
Presence Concealment is the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class.

Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. It is possible to disappear completely and become almost impossible to be detected, even against a Servant's perception. However, efficiency will decrease once preparations to attack are taken.

Personal Skills:
Blood-Sucking: A+
Blood-Sucking is the act of absorbing another's blood to replenish their own health and physical and/or magical strength. It is one of the powers of a vampire. As the Rank raises, the power of absorption increases.

The being who created the concept of human sacrifice in Mesoamerica. After he and Quetzalcoatl created the Fifth World from the corpse of the primordial earth monster, Assassin invented the formula of the sacrifice ritual to appease the monster’s spirit. Sacrifice and bloodletting was also a common practice to appease Assassin himself, the belief claimed that the blood of man provided him the energy to rise each day, as his aspect as the sun god. As the lord of obsidian, the sacred material that made up everything from weapons to sacrificial tools, it could be said that all blood extracted with the use of an obsidian blade was an indirect sacrifice to Assassin.

Shapeshift: A+
Shapeshift is a Skill that refers to both borrowing bodies and appearance change. It also one of the powers of a vampire.

God of myriad faces. Assassin’s Nagual--a sort of spirit animal double--is the jaguar, and thus costs next to nothing for him to assume, as it’s a natural process tied to his spirit core. Similarly, the ritual festival of Toxcatl concerns sacrificing young men “possessed” by Assassin, allowing him free and immediate access to their forms as well. He’s been shown to freely exchange bodies, including wearing other gods as a second skin. Famously, he took the form of an old man to trick Quetzalcoatl into breaking her oath.

Godly Divine Core: EX
Goddess's Divine Core is a Skill that expresses one being a perfected goddess from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed.

As with his sister, he is merely a bunrei. Because it is not a possession of a human being, he attains an EX rank.

Noble Phantasm

Pulque Tamoanchan
Devil Fruit, Paradise Lost
Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Divine
Rank: B

The Noble Phantasm relating to the myth where Assassin caused Quetzalcoatl to be expelled from the Aztec pantheon by tricking her into consuming pulque, a highly alcoholic beverage made from the agave plant.

It evokes the concept of the Forbidden Fruit, making it anathema to enlightened higher-lifeforms. It takes the form of a normal-looking agave fruit as its base form with nothing inherently special or seductive about it. However, it’s capable of being rendered irresistible to specific targets if grown properly. The legend of pulque’s creation states that the agave goddess Mayahuel was punished with death for abandoning her divine duties. Upon Quetzalcoatl burying her dead body, the first agave plant sprung up. By burying something held dear to Assassin’s target, the agave that grows out of the corpse will be presented as the strongest caliber of fascination magic.

Once eaten, the agave produces a conceptual drunkenness that removes the concepts of barriers and limiters from the victim’s mind. The victim will find themselves unable to hold back in any regard, be it physically, mentally, or morally. Self-abuse due to a missing “pain limiter” is especially common, as well as instantly consuming all of the Master’s remaining prana as prana efficiency reaches a flat zero.

Tezcatlipoca
The Smoking Mirror
Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
Rank: D+++

When Assassin and Quetzalcoatl arrived on Earth from beyond the stars as the same being, the impact of the Yucatan meteorite split them in two. While bits of Quetzalcoatl’s genetic sequence influenced life, Assassin’s filtered into the earth and stone.

The Smoking Mirror refers to a kenning for obsidian, as well as the physical smokey black mirror that gave Assassin his name. After his costly victory against the Earth Monster, Assassin replaced his missing left foot with one made of obsidian that shone like a mirror. Through this “mirror” Assassin was said to be able to scry the future and his surroundings, a habit picked up by the Aztec shamans.

In reality, Assassin grafted large portions of obsidian onto various parts of his body. A Self-Modification skill raised to the rank of a Noble Phantasm due to the qualities of the parts and the summation of the whole. While Assassin is in the shadows, obsidian will begin to “calcify” and grow on his body, starting from the extremities. The longer he remains in the dark, the further up his arms, legs, and around his head the obsidian will grow. Deadly sharp claws will form on all four of his limbs, and curious protrusions at the top of his head that resemble cat ears. This is the embodiment of the Night Jaguar, stalking through the dark jungle.

However the most potent effect of Tezcatlipoca is its replication of something close to Mystic Eyes. Some sources state that Assassin also grafted a plate of obsidian to the back of his skull--along with his left foot--to have the wisdom of his sorcery closer to his eyes. While in the dark, Assassin is able to “cast” his vision to any connected area of shadow. At night in pitch blackness, he very nearly approaches something like omniscience, completely lacking a blind spot.

Piedra del Tilitic Sol
The Black Sun Stone
Type: Anti-Country
Rank: EX

Piedra del Tilitic Sol is the Noble Phantasm and ultimate trump card of Assassin. The megalith of the ancient Aztecs.The Aztec calendar said to show all the world’s past and present. This megalith with a 3.75-meter diameter appears overhead, this being a “gate”, and it drags out a portion of Assassin’s Authority because of Tezcatlipoca being the great foundation of this very activity. But how can such a thing be, a Noble Phantasm that appears for all intents and purposes identical to that of Assassin’s hated Quetzalcoatl?

The Five Suns myth. The labored process the Aztec gods undertook, creating and destroying the world five times before the present sun and modern humans were finally decided upon. During Quetzalcoatl’s time as the sun, Assassin turned all of humanity into monkeys, prompting his despised sister to destroy the world with a divine hurricane.

Assassin’s version is derived from his time as the very first sun. Quetzalcoatl, believing him unfit to be the sun (due to his deformity, alignment, or plain personal distaste) knocked Assassin out of the sky. Enraged, Assassin loosed his jaguars on humanity; the beasts of darkness and entropy according to the Aztecs.
The jaguar’s cosmic counterpart, the phenomenon known as the black hole, is Piedra del Tilitic Sol’s true power. The natural counterpart to Quetzalcoatl’s own iteration, that which consumes everything: including divine solar winds. However, even possessing his full Divinity, the power is still somewhat lacking as Assassin was said to have only been able to create half a sun.
A symbol of his condescension to his sister, or something else?

Regardless, he’d be hard pressed to ever use it in a regular war due to his pride. Unless his sister shows up, at which point it arrives with concerning speed.

History

Tezcatlipoca was once regarded as the same as the god Itztlacoliuhqui, the Dead God that formed from the heartless corpse of Tlahuizcalpantecuhtli, as well as the Mayan gods Tohil and K’awiil. He created the concept of human sacrifice as a Greater Ritual to appease Tlaltecuhtli (also known as Cipactli), the primordial earth monster whose corpse created the landmasses. Though technically responsible for allowing humanity to thrive at a very small cost of sacrifice, Quetzalcoatl is unable to comprehend the reasoning and resents him for it.

He is an enigma, acting both as a beneficiary and a villain to humanity time and again. In some stories, it is Tezcatlipoca who is responsible for bringing fire to humanity (in his guise as Mixcoatl) rather than Quetzalcoatl. He is also said to have highly encouraged the art of Xōchiyāōyōtl--or “flower war”-- a “play war” that focused less on the killing of enemy soldiers as it did on securing hostages to sacrifice to the gods. As the military-industrial complex can be said to be securely linked to the economy of today, the flower wars of Tezcatlipoca’s time were conducted as a way to secure fresh resources as well as keep soldiers fit outside of a proper wartime.

His birthplace is the Chicxulub crater, the mammoth crater in the Yucatan peninsula created by the meteorite that fell from a system beyond the stars. He appeared to the Maya as the first generation K’awiil at their sacred cave Tollan. In a different class, he would possess a Noble Phantasm relating to his previous state K’awiil’s association with the pan-mythic “lightning axe”, as a special-love lucha axe-kick.

Though he possesses zero patience for his idiot sister, and timewasters in general, he is still a true “South American deity” who wishes for humanity to grow beyond its bounds. He’s fine with taking the pragmatic approach and accepting the scorn of others, but his attitude really is something terrible.

Hello. This took a while, but I'm happy with it. I wanted to create a sort of direct parallel to Quetz, but I hope it doesn't also come off as uninspired.
I had more investment in Tezca than my other sheets, so I might get around to adding a Relationships page or something. He's featuring strongly in a fic of mine so I hope I did him justice.

[gyrowins]

In my opinion, Empire of Dirt would be even better if it didn’t have H-scenes.

Fate was built on the foundation of shitty H-scenes. Without shoehorned H-scenes, we wouldn't even be here right now. o7

[massive_jojo_reference]

We swordsmen from the land of nippon serve our masters with loyalty, but remember, im a samurai, but also Hitogiri, if it comes to it i might even betray you... Just kidding.

Faceclaim

Class: Assassin
Other Classes: Saber
Gender: Male
Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
True name: Kawakami Gensai
AKA: One of the four Hitokiri of Bakumatsu


Weapon: A standard katana
H/W: 172cm/55kg
Likes: Swordplay, Strong opponents
Dislikes: Spineless cowards, Weak opponents
Talent: Swordplay
Wish: To establish the shiranui-ryuu school of swordmanship

Stats
STR: C
END: C
AGI: A++
MNA: E
LCK: E
NP: -

Class Skills

Presence Concealment: EX
Assassin is known for a swordsmanship so fast that he was capable of assassinating targets in broad daylight, His presence concealment doesn't drop even when attacking, only way for him to be seen is with clairvoyance, or Mystic Eyes.

Riding: E
History makes no note on him riding anything special, so he is given a E rank as the class container.

Magic Resistance: D
Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.
He comes from an age where mystery was very thin, the only reason he wasn't given a E rank is his super-fast swordsmanship which was commented by some to surpass the gods.

Personal Skills

Shiranui-Ryuu: EX
A school of swordsmanship created for the sole purpose of moving as fast as possible and creating super fast strikes, as a servant assassin's blade moves so fast it creates small shockwaves as it travels through air, greatly raises his agility, speed and reaction time, as well as allowing the use of clairvoyance on C Level, which allows for precise tracking of fast moving objects up to four kilometers

Manslayer: A+
A skill representing sword techniques created for the purpose of killing
Known as one of the four great hitokiri of the bakumatsu, assassin is capable of killing targets quickly and efficiently, even some of the weaker servants.

Shukuchi: B+
A technique developed for instantly cutting down the distance between opponents, when combined with assassin's super fast swordsmanship it becomes something close to a dimensional leap.

Double Summon: A
A rare skill that gives access to the class skills of two classes, although only limited to extra and cavalry classes, the swordsmanship and assassination aspects of assassin's legend are inseparable. although his class skills of saber aren't high ranked, he says that ''They might come in useful''.

Noble Phantasm

Technique approaching the realm of gods
Musou Hirukiri- Seamless Daylight Assassination
(-) (Effectively A) (Anti Unit Secret Technique)
The deepest form of the Shiranui Ryuu iaijutsu, so powerful assassin only deemed it as a last-ditch attempt at assassination.
When activated, there are no visible changes at first, except that now his sword exists across all eleven dimensions, while existing in the same time and space
This allows for the sword to in effect ignore the laws of physics.
Now that sword ignores laws physics it is possible for the sword to travel instantly between two points in space, while cutting anything that resides in between, the sword also starts ignoring all outside effects, and in extension, causality, because it ignored causality the sword can cut only the inside of things, the cuts will also reside in all eleven dimensions allowing for the effectiveness of each cut to be equal to eleven same cuts., these ''11-Dimensional cuts'' drop down to the third dimension once the blade is sheathed, and the noble phantasm itself is also deactivated when the blade is sheathed.

The technique however has great drawback, as it its only classified as noble phantasm due to the fate system so it is closer to a skill not needing much mana to activate, however as it is actively emulating the second magic using it over and over in short periods in time takes great toll on assassin's mental health due to the fact that what he is holding (the sword) exists within all eleven dimensions at once, this is not the case with the noble phantasm of a certain fake heroic spirit, as Tsubame Gaeshi only needs to exist within three different positions at the same time, but assassin's noble phantasms needs to exist across all eleven dimensions at the same time, witnessing higher dimensions its something that is not possible without magecraft and in this way the world punishes him for abusing it.

Personality/Interactions

CE: Daylight Stained blade
I've cut down many targets
Political opponents, and great swordsmen alike
I've developed a swordsmanship equal to the heavens
Yet here i stand, a mortal cutting down mortals with swordsmanship challenging the gods

considering who he is Assassin is surprisingly calm and collected, although not as cold and calculating as his fellow hitokiri, he makes all attempts to pull out the best course of action for him.
that being said he is a Hitokiri and therefore he cannot be trusted, however he doesn't always seek his own benefit. He is capable of full on betrayal but rarely does this and when he does, the one who he betrayed is usually someone evil and deranged, he also dislikes being sent by master into full on frontal battle, he prefers to stay true to his class but can more than likely challenge great swordsmen

He is also likes to slack, a lot. and will not accept orders from master wholeheartedly, he responds to orders from his master with ''Yare Yare'' but does it anyways.
He is also rarely seen socializing with other servants due to the fact that most servants in chaldea have no concept of personal space whatsoever And not because he is an hardcore introvert
his wish for the grail is simple, to officially establish the shiranui-ryuu as a school of swordsmanship.

Sasaki Kojiro: That swordmanship, it is the same category as mine, something that emulates the gods... (a sarcastic laugh can be heard) IT APPEARS I FOUND A FAIR MATCH!

Okita Souji/Hijikata Toshizo: The shinsengumi huh? some of their members are here, their legendary swordsmen. i'd like to avoid conflict if possible... as much as i would want to challenge both of them...

Okada Izo: We might be comrades but his behavior is hard to deal with! seriously, back when i was alive that guy would constantly nag me about shit like gambling... well... uh... he is still a comrade and a good friend so i don't mind at all.

Reflection

I decided to let loose with the noble phantasm and skills a ''bit''. also anything other than the Himura Kenshin for the faceclaim would be straight up insulting. Also Expect the Daniel Alter sheet i'm currently working on.

[King of Padoru]

Sniped....

- - - Updated - - -

By the way, Double Summon is only for the Four Chivalries and extra classes.

[massive_jojo_reference]

i know that, i did add the justification as why he has it. this skill on him also does very little to further wank him (which i did try to avoid) as just placing him in the saber container which arguably is the inferior container (his class skills for saber are pretty low) and then giving him this skill would yield the same results as just directly putting him into the assassin class which i opted for anyway, in the end i could just remove it and it would yield the same result but i added it for some flavor. besides all he has is his speed, His STR and END stats say that he may hit fast and but not as hard and cannot last very long.

[King of Padoru]

Hm, fair enough. Now I guess it's time for me to look for a better idea for an Assassin.

[Lambda-Nu]

Does anyone have any ideas for what I could do for a Rider and/or a Ruler. Rider is the only one of the “normal” classes I haven’t made a sheet for. Meanwhile, I’ve already made an Avenger, so I figured I should do Ruler. Also, if anyone has any ideas for a Lancer, I’d appreciate that. I’ve only done one so far, but I’m not proud of it at all.

That aside, let’s take a look at some of these new Servant sheets.

Tezcatlicopa: This is pretty good. While I would normally say that three Noble Phantasms is too much, he seems to be a major character in Aztec myths, so it makes a little sense. Aside from that, I think that Contradictory Mind might fit him due to having acted as both a beneficiary and a villian to humanity time and again.

Kawakami Gensai: Firstly, your capitalization needs work (Sorry, I’m a bit of a Grammar Nazi). But that aside, it’s…okay. I think that his Presence Concealment is a little too high. I mean, yeah, he can apparently strike so fast that no one knows what’s going on, but I still feel that maybe EX Rank is too high. Maybe A+ would be more suitable. I mean, come on. The only Servant to have Presence Concealment at EX Rank is King Hassan, the Grand Assassin. My only other gripe is that the whole “assassinating people in broad daylight” thing seems quite out of place in a Grail War.

[Kabalisto Koga]

So to break my Hangover Here is my Krishna (powered by Dragolord) sheet although without Noblephantasm they Arent finished/ready now


Krishna
(Rider)


8^th Avatar of Vishnu/Hindu God of Love and Compassion
Region of Origin: India
Time Period: 8-9^th BC
Qualifying Classes: Rider, Caster,Saber,Archer Grand Servant qualifications: Grand Saber,Grand Caster, Grand Rider,Grand Archer
Weapon: Chakram, Chariot, Flute,Sword Mace and Bow partially depending on the class.
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male

PARAMETERS
Strength B++
Endurance B++
Agility B++
Mana A++
Luck C
Noble Phantasm EX

Background :
He is the Incarnation of Vishnu after Rama according to the Vishnu-Puranas.


Personality: Despite his fame and strenght is he a core pacifist who seeks every possible way to avoid conflicts and confrontations ,but should his Opponent wish to fight he will not ignore the request ,but in the Moment the fight is started he Displays the demeanor of a honored Warrior similar to his Landsmen,however his pacific nature has also some strict borders when they are crossed he will become a ruthless and unforgiving individual like when he must see the slaughtering of innocent bystanders/cvilists or Children then he will lose every hesitation to use Violation to punish the foes .

Towards his Master he seeks a harmonic relationship ,it goes without saying that he prefer a righteous Master,in the case he should get a violent or dishonoric Master or even a (like Ryunosuke like/) insane Master he will under no circumstances backstab his Master ,but in the case his Master would Need his Loyalty in a crucial Moment he will not grant him it,as "his form" of backstabbing (to speak it in his words)

CLASS SKILLS
Magic Resistance A+
Untouchable by modern magic. Even using older magic, is almost entirely unaffected by "storm" magic or "sun" magic.

Riding EX
Even Phantasmal Beasts and Divine Beasts may be used as mounts. However, does not allow him to ride members of the Dragon Kind.


PERSONAL SKILLS
God’s Divine Core A
A Skill that expresses one being a perfected god from birth. A composite Skill that comprises the Skill Divinity, preserves the absoluteness of the mind and the body, repels all mental interference, prevents the body from growth and prevents the figure from change no matter how much calories are absorbed. At rank EX, this skill denotes a god incarnating as a human, making their mind and body absolute and effectively overwriting the mind of the host Body.

Advice of the Strategist A+
A Skill given to military-affiliated Servants. By grasping and analyzing the situation, correct advice can be given to one's allies. The higher the rank, the better the probability of the advice given being correct. Under Krishna’s advice, the Pandavas achieved victory in the Kurukshetra War against their foes.
In practice ist a form of upgraded form of Military tactics and enables Krischna in conjunction with his Noblephantasm

mool saty ka gyaan

Buddhi

to grant his Master or other capable individual also

certain skills like Military tatics or Disengage ...

Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig:E +
As some old sripts and Sources aswell as rumors said that Krishna is the previously incarnation of Sitharta Gautama the Enlightet Budha as such it can be assummed that the seed of Budhas Enlightment was formed during his Times as Krishna.

Mana Blast of the Five Elements:A

Noble phantasm :

Sudarshana Chakra: O Chakra, Slice Through the Air
Anti-Personal Rank EX
One of three weapons forged from the sun dust of Surya, this weapon is circular like a disk with serrated and sharp edges. One its more famous uses was when he beheaded Shishupala with the Sudarshana Chakra at the Rajasuya yagna of Emperor Yudhishthira.Its usage veresatility is adaptable like no other Noblephantasm of his Magnitude ,most commonly ist utilisation is in a anti-unit Slash or in conjungtion with Manavastra a "Enlightment" inducing Mental attack.

These are his three Flute Noblephantasm Characteristics they share are :
Rank A+
Anti-unit

All three are able to produce Soundmagecraft and Krishna is able to utilize certain Astra through them.Each of them are used in certain classes
Venu Saber:
a crocked fourty Zentimeter Long crocked flute with a sharp Edge ,Venu is durable enough to withstand Noblephantasm(weapon) strikes and he can use his Mana blast in conjuction with his produced sounds.

Murali Caster,Rider:
Is his longest Flute (80 centimeters) with it he is able to execute Mantras through the sounds of it and evoke Sound Magic of a other yet not dissimilar variation. examples are like storm calming lullabies .
Vamsi.Archer


Garudastra
rank:EX
Anti-curse
Is the Divine-Soul/spiritual Energy of Garuda its have two usage Methods first: ist can be used as counter move upon the activation of Noblephantasm of malevolant Sources in form of a Phönix like green flame who repels or reflect the attack or hostile Action at the evoker .
second: its can be used in form of a benevolant /healing inducing green aura who can be used through either a direct physical attack ,through on of Krishna s flute as soothing Serenade,or even as healing enforcing Mana blast.

Svetavahana: O Krishna, Bestow me your Protection
Anti-Army Rank A+
The same chariot that Arjuna can call upon when in the Rider class, in the hands of Krishna its rank and power increases , after the casting of its true Name a protecting spehre is envoking who repels any under A Rank Noblephantasm,Krishna is able to bestow the Chariot to a other servant or Human like his Master but its defensive and offensive are being upon receiving the chariot instantly adapted at the new (temporaly) owner conditions .additionally even after Krishna is vanished in the grailwar is remaining the chariot connected to its new owner but then its keeping cost must being payd by the new owner .The new owner iws able to tobestow the chariot at free will (either complete or partially burrowed) and is able to give the Chariot back to Krishna spiritually to request a one-time Intervention of Krishna himself.

Garuda: Mount of the Deity
Anti-Army Rank A+
A creature that glows golden with the arms and face of a man, massive wings and the beak of a hawk, this creature is said to be the main mount of Krishna, the best known incarnation of Vishnu, the Hindu God of Life. This creature, aside from having a razor sharp beak and talons on its feet possesses the arms of man, by which it wields a golden sword and can breathe fire. This is a mythical creature, and as such, requires an EX rank in riding to control, making it ideal for the highly divine Krishna.

Garuda has the abbilty to Change bettween forms at either his own will or the command of Krishna namely bettween a humanoid servant like form where he has the strenght of a Assassin servant ,his phantasmal form and the of a Brahminy kite also is he able to use Garudastra independet from Krishna as green flame mana burst and can chosse between the damaging and repairing effect.

Kaumodaki:EX
a rich ornamental Gada which is the sister Mace of Bhimas Vrigodharam and is able to evoke Impact Shocks during wielding it , also upon by invoking his thrue Name is Kaumodaki clading in blazing Gusts and after Impact are leaking Water out and Lotus plants that having vanished upon the end of the Gods Age are Growing out of the Water ,the PLants are having the same mystery rank as a millenia rank phantasmal beast and their roots are purryfying even the most poluted Water and can Cure almost every non Magical induced desease aswell as Magical induced to a heavy Degree as such like curses or negative Blessings.
Sharanga:EX
Vishnus Mightiest bow.
Nandaka:EX
a indestructable rust-red colored Sword ,Krishna s able to execute attacks of his Five elemental Mana blast (Fire,Earth,Wind,Thunder,Water) ,it has anti Demon properties like that it is able to Slash through demonic scales and unholy baricades additionally are the wounds it cuts insensitive towards healing Magecraft or un-naturally Regeneration capabilities through Krishna is able to instant vanish the Sword made wounds by recite a the Prayer : O Nandaka ,in the name of Vishnu give the flesh you rob your victims back and Refill their spilled blood .


mool saty ka gyaan
Buddhi
Rank:EX
Truth
Buddhi is literally meaning mind or Consciousness or to be exact wisdom.Without doubt ,was Krishna the Person who used and possessed it the most . It is the Sublimation of his clairvoyant mind ,in Praxis offers Buddhi similar effects like Gilgameshs Sha Naqba Imuru ,as with Krishna could foresaw the entire Course of the Holygrailwar and the best Course of Action even without to have to grasp a weapon in his Hands.
As similar he has done at the Ago of Mahabharata where he won almosr singlehandly the great war.


vishnu ka avataar chakr
Rank:Ex
Anti-Rinne

It is his materialisated Concept of being the strongest of the Avatars of Vishnu. and most known Avatar Vishnus it grants him acces to every Vishnu related Astra (be it Vishnu self or the of his other Avatars like Mohini or Parrashurama) with the Limitation of two Noblephantasm and only one weapon at one time ,like Kaumadaki or Parrashu .

as Grand Servant he is able to reach upto four Noblephantasm simultan,but the true Effect of this Noblephantasm is that after the release of ist true namne he transform himself in Vishnu as depicted with four arms equiped with Kaumodaki,Shankha ,the padma Lotus and Nandaka or Chakram he gains property of a Beastclass Servant like their class skills but he can maintain this form only for the Duration of few minutes(similar like Siegs Transformation ) and after his detransformation he gains the fragile constitution(Core) at rank D(at first usage) which is the result of the strains on his Saintgraph and spiritual core and ist effect is that he must bear the Risk of a decreased or atleast dropped Status paramter or that he can be partialy paralyzed for some minutes.however he can only use its true power at three times and after the third time of his Transformation back from his Vishnu form he is becomes greatly decreased in his Parameters.

Other of him usable Astras :

Mana-Astra:
Allows Long distance teleporting bypassing even high Magic rtesitence and is able to induce/ teleport humanity into devil beings.

Vaishnav Astra:
a nearly unstoppable Missile which can only being countered with A > rank Noblephantasm.

Mohini Astra:
dispel any Magecraft and ilussion.
Prajnastra:
Restore the sanity of the target and enables him to form complex thoughts and regain his vocabularic versality.

Sabda-veda astra:
provide after invoking a equivalent of B rankpresence detection.

[Lambda-Nu]

Krishna: As always, your grammar needs a lot of work. If you'd like, you could send the sheet to me before you post it so I can smooth out the grammatical errors. But anyway, this a decent sheet. The Skills are good, but he should not have God's Divine Core. He is only an avatar of Vishnu, so like his predecessor Rama, he should have Divinity A instead. As for the Noble Phantasms... Firstly, this sheet should not have been posted because it's incomplete. Yes, it's only missing one section, but the fact that section is missing still makes you look a little lazy. Secondly, your Noble Phantasm is essentially a combination of several smaller Noble Phantasms. Really, Koga? Really? To be brutally honest with you, that is so utterly ridiculous and stupid. Just pick out one or two of them and give him Vishnu Bhuja. It's one of Rama's Noble Phantasms and allows him to use several of Vishnu's weapons, but Krishna is another avatar of that same god, so giving it to him wouldn't be that oulandish. Admittedly though, it's quite similar to what you have planned. Other than that, it's an improvement from your other sheet, but please take my advice regarding sheet completion and Krishna's Noble Phantasms.

[RoydGolden]

Does anyone have any ideas for what I could do for a Rider and/or a Ruler. Rider is the only one of the “normal” classes I haven’t made a sheet for. Meanwhile, I’ve already made an Avenger, so I figured I should do Ruler. Also, if anyone has any ideas for a Lancer, I’d appreciate that. I’ve only done one so far, but I’m not proud of it at all.

Maybe Domnina, the legendary daughter of Emperor Nero who converted to Christianity could make for an interesting Ruler? Though, it might be difficult reconciling the portrayal of Nero as an evil tyrant in her legend with TM's Nero...

Kawakami Gensai: Firstly, your capitalization needs work (Sorry, I’m a bit of a Grammar Nazi). But that aside, it’s…okay. I think that his Presence Concealment is a little too high. I mean, yeah, he can apparently strike so fast that no one knows what’s going on, but I still feel that maybe EX Rank is too high. Maybe A+ would be more suitable. I mean, come on. The only Servant to have Presence Concealment at EX Rank is King Hassan, the Grand Assassin. My only other gripe is that the whole “assassinating people in broad daylight” thing seems quite out of place in a Grail War.

King Hassan actually has A-ranked Presence Concealment, not EX. The only Assassin with EX-ranked Presence Concealment so far is True Assassin from Strange Fake. Other than that, I agree that such a high rank just from assassinating people in public is quite the stretch. Heck, the historical Hashashin committed most of their murders in public and at broad daylight, yet they don't all have the Skill at EX-rank.

[Lambda-Nu]

Maybe Domnina, the legendary daughter of Emperor Nero who converted to Christianity could make for an interesting Ruler? Though, it might be difficult reconciling the portrayal of Nero as an evil tyrant in her legend with TM's Nero...

Hm... There doesn't seem to be that much to her. But this is just from looking at wikipedia. I'll have to look into her a little more. After that, I might be able to figure out a way to make Ruler Domnina work. Thanks for the suggestion.

King Hassan actually has A-ranked Presence Concealment, not EX. The only Assassin with EX-ranked Presence Concealment so far is True Assassin from Strange Fake. Other than that, I agree that EX-ranked PC just from assassinating people in public is quite the stretch. Heck, the historical Hashashin committed most of their murders in public and at broad daylight, yet they don't all have it at EX-rank.

Wait, what? Oops. My mistake. But thanks.

[RoydGolden]

Hm... There doesn't seem to be that much to her. But this is just from looking at wikipedia. I'll have to look into her a little more. After that, I might be able to figure out a way to make Ruler Domnina work. Thanks for the suggestion.

Yeah, the lack of

lore

meat

is the main issue there. When I considered writing her up as a Servant a while ago, the best I could come up with was a God Hand-like defensive NP based on the legend where she withstood various tortures without feeling any pain, and being able to summon the prison where she converted many others to Christianity as a fortress NP, possibly with a nod to Nero's Aestus Domus Aurea. For Skills, Imperial Privilege (at a low rank since she rejects her imperial heritage), Soul Of The Martyr and a unique Skill to do with how she renounced all the riches Nero offered her could fit. (Negates fascination effects + bonus damage against Servants known for their wealth?)

[gyrowins]

Hm... There doesn't seem to be that much to her. But this is just from looking at wikipedia. I'll have to look into her a little more. After that, I might be able to figure out a way to make Ruler Domnina work. Thanks for the suggestion.


Wait, what? Oops. My mistake. But thanks.

King Hassan doesn't even need to be stealthy to kill you. That's just how good he is at his job.

[RoydGolden]

Does anyone have a good crab-boy FC on hand?

I'm trying to find one for a sheet I'm working on (hint, it's related to one I did for a prior Servant contest) but can't find anything that isn't either A. a girl and B. way too sexual than what I have in mind.

[Dragolord09]

I have some ideas RoydGolden, would you like the links sent over via PM?

[RoydGolden]

I have some ideas RoydGolden, would you like the links sent over via PM?

Yes please.