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    Homunculus Jesus actually sounds like a cool concept, and it wouldn't be the first time he's been genderbent in this forum

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    Thanks for all the feedback guys. I've actually made a lot of different Servant Sheets since I became interested in Fate. On that note, is anyone bothered if I post links to the doc I write them on?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper of Remnant View Post
    The edge on this Sheet is like...Shadow the Hedgehog level.
    That is not a level you want to be on. EVER.
    I say that as both a Christian who non-ironically enjoys Shin Megami Tensei and someone who thought up the bizarro idea for a HomunculusGenderbent!Jesus Sheet who had Third Magic and was the original Einzbern Ancestor.
    Also, EIGHT Personal Skills? EIGHT!?
    Woo boy...
    He only has all 8 as a Saver, but yeah, I overdosed the Sheet on edge. Any more advice?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lazy Yog View Post
    He only has all 8 as a Saver, but yeah, I overdosed the Sheet on edge. Any more advice?
    I'll give some advice later because I'm just about to leave work for the day, but I'll note that Buddha, the only other Saver we have at the moment, has two.
    Two.
    And that's the Buddha Himself.
    The most a Servant (Karna) has ever had is five and even Beasts have less.
    Why should Jesus be any different? After all, Servants are supposed to be a weaker copy of the original Saint Graph.

    Anyway, I'll probably give the Sheet another look over when I get home, and let you know some (hopefully) less assholish sounding advice.

    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Homunculus Jesus actually sounds like a cool concept, and it wouldn't be the first time he's been genderbent in this forum
    Really? Huh.
    The basic idea was that the 'miracle of resurrection' was just Third Magic and Jesus was the result of an 'angel's' interference because Mary couldn't give birth.
    It was based on this picture that I stumbled across one day.
    Maybe I'll write it up, but at the minute I'm doing Avenger!Scrooge (Zolgen Pseudo) and Saver!Xu Fu.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lazy Yog View Post
    Thanks for all the feedback guys. I've actually made a lot of different Servant Sheets since I became interested in Fate. On that note, is anyone bothered if I post links to the doc I write them on?
    Why not. Go for it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper of Remnant View Post
    I'll give some advice later because I'm just about to leave work for the day, but I'll note that Buddha, the only other Saver we have at the moment, has two.
    Two.
    And that's the Buddha Himself.
    The most a Servant (Karna) has ever had is five and even Beasts have less.
    Why should Jesus be any different? After all, Servants are supposed to be a weaker copy of the original Saint Graph.

    Anyway, I'll probably give the Sheet another look over when I get home, and let you know some (hopefully) less assholish sounding advice.



    Really? Huh.
    The basic idea was that the 'miracle of resurrection' was just Third Magic and Jesus was the result of an 'angel's' interference because Mary couldn't give birth.
    It was based on this picture that I stumbled across one day.
    Maybe I'll write it up, but at the minute I'm doing Avenger!Scrooge (Zolgen Pseudo) and Saver!Xu Fu.

    Thanks, I know what to do now.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lazy Yog View Post
    Thanks, I know what to do now.
    Having had another look at it, I actually like the Skills and NPs, so the only things I say are:
    Reduce the edgyiness a tad.
    Seperate the Skills more clearly and give him a hard limit of about four to fiveish.
    Raise [Charisma] to A+ rather than C, since he is THE messiah for the World's largest religion and is equal to Buddha (who has A+ in that skill too) unless its an Avenger thing.
    Longius is a canon Servant now and I doubt Jesus would possess his Noble Phantasm (which actually might be a Pillar like Rhon as well) so you could probably remove it.

    Hopefully this helps and that I don't sound too much like an asshole.
    I just write super short and sharpish sentences, so I might come off as a little blunt.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper of Remnant View Post
    Reduce the edgyiness a tad.
    I mean, the whole idea of Jesus wanting to kill God out of revenge for letting him be crucified is already just about maximally edgy. I don't see a way Yog could really tone it down without completely rewriting the concept of the sheet. Frankly, I admire how he decided to go for an unconventional take on the guy, since there's been quite a few Jesus sheets in this thread and elsewhere that come off fairly same-y. (Though Alexcoene did write up a pretty amusing motorcyclist Jesus a while back)

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    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...t?usp=drivesdk

    Archer Nimrod, hopefully this one is better.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I mean, the whole idea of Jesus wanting to kill God out of revenge for letting him be crucified is already just about maximally edgy. I don't see a way Yog could really tone it down without completely rewriting the concept of the sheet. Frankly, I admire how he decided to go for an unconventional take on the guy, since there's been quite a few Jesus sheets in this thread and elsewhere that come off fairly same-y. (Though Alexcoene did write up a pretty amusing motorcyclist Jesus a while back)
    Thanks, man. Regarding the edge, I know it's a little much but I did want to do something different with the Character. Thanks for noticing! Now, I'm definitely editing him to be a little less OP.

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    Nimrod: This one is much better, but given that he's the first man to be killed by poisoning, I suggest giving him Weakness (Poison)

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    I forgot that's an actual Skill.

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    Nimrod: Huh.
    Don't think I've ever seen a Sheet where Nimrod has been sublimated with Ninus, considering the theory that Semiramis is Nimrod's mother and lover is considered absolutely laughable by historians and has no real basis in fact. Somehow you made it work though.
    I like this Sheet a lot, anyway.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Reaper of Remnant View Post
    Avenger!Scrooge (Zolgen Pseudo).

    "Scared Sakura Noises"

    Dank memes aside this sounds like a really cool concept.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Nimrod: This one is much better, but given that he's the first man to be killed by poisoning, I suggest giving him Weakness (Poison)
    Weakness (Poison) is kind of a weird Skill given that loads of heroes who died from poison (Herc, Achilles, Shuten, etc) have nothing of the sort. Since Nimrod has four Skills already, I don't think it's really necessary.

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    Quote Originally Posted by massive_jojo_reference View Post

    "Scared Sakura Noises"

    Dank memes aside this sounds like a really cool concept.
    Thanks! The idea was based on the whole 'I lost Justeaze/Belle, my one true love and became a amnesiac-ridden jackass' thing that they both have.
    He wouldn't be too bad around Sakura though, he's still partly Zolgen in his youth and the kinder Scrooge at the novel's ending.
    I would describe him as kind of like a mix between Dantes and Salieri, hating and acting heartless towards things he knows he shouldn't be, but he cannot help but
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Weakness (Poison) is kind of a weird Skill given that loads of heroes who died from poison (Herc, Achilles, Shuten, etc) have nothing of the sort. Since Nimrod has four Skills already, I don't think it's really necessary.
    Well, other skills like Natural Body or Golden Rule (Body) should appear more frequently too, since everyone in legends was said to be hotter than the Sun (specially women), but they're rather uncommon. I insist that Weakness should be in the skillset, even if it's only for being the "first at something". It could replace Clairvoyance to make the number of skills constant.

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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    Nimrod: This one is much better, but given that he's the first man to be killed by poisoning, I suggest giving him Weakness (Poison)
    In regards to me not including it, I rule that Berserker Nimrod exchanges his Unified Language Skill for it.

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    Assassin
    Ted Bundy


    “You feel the last bit of breath leaving their body. You're looking into their eyes. A person in that situation is God!”

    True Name: Theodore "Ted" Robert Bundy
    Alias: The Lady Killer, The Campus Killer, The World's "First" Serial Killer
    Alignment: Chaotic Evil
    Attribute: Mankind (Human)
    Height: 5'10
    Likes: Murder, Necrophilia, His grandfather
    Dislikes: Religion, his mother, women in general, being 'caged'
    Armament: Varied. Usually blunt weapons and/or knives.

    Parameters:

    STR - D

    END - E

    AGL - D

    MAG - E

    LUK - A

    NP - C~A


    Class Skills:

    Presence Concealment (--) B+: A Skill that allows the capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class. This skill is negligible outside of combat scenarios due to the Noble Phantasm, The Killer’s Anonymity.

    Personal Skills:

    Sadistic Constitution C+: A skill that augments one's aggression in battle. It appears to be a positive Skill, but the longer its owner stays in battle, the more their abusive disposition will grow, causing them to lose their usual composure.
    A Skill that augments one's aggression in battle. It appears to be a positive Skill, but the longer its owner stays in battle, the more their abusive disposition will grow, causing them to lose their usual composure.

    Murderer of the Misty Night C: A skill associated with the Servant's nature as a ‘serial killer’ rather than as an assassin, which permits a pre-emptive strike against all opponents. Most of the victims of Ted Bundy were assailed when unaware and unguarded.

    Youthful Golden Face of the Devil A:
    A skill unique to Assassin, as it allows him to charm both men and woman, but one can abate it so long there is a will to resist. Complete evasion by means of a Magic Resistance Skill is possible. In life, Ted Bundy was an extremely charming and manipulative individual, using his good looks and charm to lure victims to their deaths or convince others to do what he wants or think what he wanted them to think. This skill is especially effective against females.

    Noble Phantasms

    The Killer’s Anonymity
    The Stranger Beside You


    Rank: B+
    Range: ~0
    Self

    One of the Noble Phantasms of the infamous, Ted Bundy. The Noble Phantasm of a bonafide Serial Killer, it is the crystallization of the concept that even the most heinous of killers can hide in plain sight. The person at work you never speak to, the stranger who sits next to you on the bus, the “perfect, normal stranger”. Ted Bundy was this concept personified, blending into society while going about his dastardly deeds with none the wiser. This allows Assassin to blend into society to appear as a ‘normal’ person, even in the eyes of other Servants. Only Servants with high detection capabilities are capable of distinguishing Assassin between a regular human and a Servant.


    The Nature of a Serial Killer:
    The Authority of Murder

    Rank: C~A
    Range: 1~10
    Anti-Unit
    Max Target: 1


    Assassin’s offensive Noble Phantasm. Ted Bundy, while their legend is relatively young, was one of America’s most notorious murderers as well as in the world and is the first to ever be characterized as a “Serial Killer” in history. The serial killer represents the most fearsome embodiment of murder itself. Intellect without heart. Eyes without empathy. The serial killer represents a death that does not respond to pleas for mercy -- a death that has its own agenda, coming for us in its own time, driven by its own inexorable logic. The ultimate serial predator. The ultimate monster in the closet. As a result, Ted Bundy’s status as the “first” serial killer, gives him utmost authority in the act of murder. This Noble Phantasm allows Assassin to murder/harm anyone regardless of defensive capabilities, with the exception of those whose END or Magic Resistance is A+ or above. Under fulfilling certain conditions, the damage rendered receives a large boost in Rank and doubling in power.





    Biography/Lore

    Ted Bundy was an American serial killer and psychopath. One of America's most notorious serial-killers and perhaps one of history's most well-known killers, he was active between 1974 to 1978. He is believed to have committed anywhere up to 100 murders, of which he confessed to at least 30. His preferred method of execution for his victims was bludgeoning and strangulation. He was also a rapist and a necrophile, traits that only served to make him more reviled in the eyes of the public.

    Ted Bundy was eventually convicted of multiple murders and was executed in 1989 by the electric chair -
    however, his legacy continued long after his death, as his name became associated with evil and depravity. He became the foundation for the classic American stereotype of what a “Psychopath” is. Furthermore, the term "Serial Killer" was invented and first used for Ted Bundy as a description of his character and while many before him have committed acts in similar ways, he is retroactively the World’s “First” Serial Killer



    Personality

    Ted was often described as a charming, articulate and intelligent man. However, he is also an extremely narcissistic and cold-hearted individual who lacked any remorse for those he killed. He’d even tell others that, “I'm the most cold-hearted son-of-a-bitch you'll ever meet.”


    Gameplay (FGO)

    “We serial killers are your sons, we are your husbands, we are everywhere. And there will be more of your children dead tomorrow.”


    HP: 9,895
    ATK: 7,785

    Deck:QQAAB
    Quick:3
    Arts:4
    Buster:1
    Extra:4
    NP Hit Counts: 1
    NP Gen Attack: 0.56%
    NP Gen Defense: 4%
    Star Gen: 22.6%
    Star Weight: 97



    Skills:

    Passive:
    Presence Concealment B+ -- Increase Critical Star Generation by 9%.

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    Personal:

    Sadistic Constitution C+ -- Increases party's attack for 3 turns. Further increases the attack of Female allies for 3 turns. (10% to 20% at max) [Cooldown 7- 5 turns]



    Murderer of the Misty Night C --

    Grants self Evasion for 1 turn.
    Increases own Arts performance for 1 turn.

    (15% to 35% at max) [Cooldown 8 - 6 turns]

    Youthful Golden Face of the Devil A
    --

    Charm one enemy for 1 turn.
    Reduces their defense and debuff resistance for 1 turn. (10% to 25% at max)

    Reduces their Arts resistance for 1 turn. (10% to 25% at max)
    Reduces attack (if Female) for 1 turn. (10% to 25% at max)

    Chance to increase own NP Strength for 1 turn. (50% to 80 at max.)

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    Noble Phantasm (FGO):
    The Nature of a Serial Killer: Deals Arts damage to one enemy, ignores defense and evade. Overcharge effect----Deals extra damage to female servants. (50% to 100% at NP5).
    Chance to cause stun (50% to 100% at NP5)

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    Bond CE:

    A Killer’s Tools of the Trade
    Only when equipped to Ted Bundy (Assassin). Increases all damage to Female servants and also increase
    Party’s Quick and Arts damage by 10%.
    ----
    He enters unseen, unheard and by then it’s already too late...



    First post as well as the first servant I've posted here. Credits to Lazy Yog for help with the skills. Now, give it to me hard and your general thoughts.





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    Mega-wank incoming. 95% sure I'll end up deleting this.

    This but with 1,000 arms forming a ring behind her, and a giant lotus blossom under the feet. All of this, over a hexagonal pillar from whose top nectar is constantly overflowing and streaming down the surface.


    Oya-sama
    Class: Saver
    True Name: Nakayama Miki
    Gender: Female
    Source: Historical fact
    Origin: Japan
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Height: 148 + ??? cm
    Weight: 45 + ??? kg
    Theme: Soul Power (Inuyasha) by Wada Kaoru


    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    Endurance: EX
    Agility:
    Mana: A+
    Luck: A++
    NP: EX


    Skills
    Class skills

    Charisma: A+
    Can be said to have achieved the highest rank of popularity ever. This is not a matter of leading a nation or an army anymore, but of being a prominent religious figure worshiped by millions.

    Counter Hero: C+
    Reduces the parameters of heroes faced in combat by one rank. Classification as an Anti-Hero will result in an additional one-rank drop. An extra one-rank drop may happen if the opponent doesn’t bypass a resistance check.

    Territory Creation: EX
    Originally, the rank was A, fitting to the creation of a Temple. However, because one of her Noble Phantasms makes her own body be the displayed territory, the rank becomes immeasurable.

    High-Servant: A
    A skill that denotes being an existence composed from multiple existences of myth. The original Servant is Nakayama Miki, but components of Maria and Guānyīn have been integrated as well.


    Personal skills


    Revelation: C
    A skill to hear the voice of heaven and take optimum action. Unlike Instinct, which is suited only for actions related to battle, all the matters related to achieving a goal are accommodated. Because it’s a skill residing in the soul, the Annunciation wasn’t registered as a revelation when Maria’s body was integrated.

    Clairaudience: EX
    Extremely good hearing. The auditory counterpart of Clairvoyance. At this rank, it’s possible to hear the laments of humanity from the present, past, and future. A blessing from Amitābha to Guānyīn to hear and comprehend the plights of the souls bound to Saṃsāra.

    Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig: EX (–)
    Renders protection to one who has reached the World’s truth or Humanity’s answer. A protection against purging that marks the Servant as a protector of the world.
    Reduces damage dealt through any kind of attack, let it be physical, conceptual, or even interdimensional by a 100%. Mental interference has the same percentage of probability of being shut off.
    However, because of the effects of Mother over us sinners, it has been lost.

    Mother over us sinners
    Ora Pro Nobis
    : EX

    A skill that gives the user a power on the level of Divine Authority, bestowed to the one from whose womb emerges a messiah. It’s a great potency of effects similar to Potnia Theron, with the exception of it being specialized in dealing with humans, for it is a power conferred by man.
    The Holy Mother is worshiped for bearing the one who leads humanity to their desired goal – being freed from all suffering –, yet in the end is relegated to a mere chair for her own child. But even if she is only loved as a seat, she who is plentiful of grace will attend and respond those who beg for her boon.
    Any kind of evil intention on Earth that can be imagined by man cannot harm this body, as she veils over the one who, at the same time, veils over mankind.


    Noble Phantasm

    Regina Caroli Tsukihi
    O Holy Mother, thou art seat of God

    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Unit (Self)
    Range: 1
    Maximum number of targets:

    Regina Caroli Tsukihi. The first Noble Phantasm. Simply put, it’s the transformation of oneself into a sanctuary that still continues living like a human. A massive structure not unlike a statue, the Corporal Shrine, which assumes a sitting pose and becomes a throne. As the name suggests, the structure’s function is that of a shrine that collects prayers and gives blessings from people.

    Because this is the result of one’s self-evaluation as a shrine, it could be considered in Moon Cell terms a high-level firewall protecting the heart, but rather than a wall destined to prevent its exposition, this is a bunker of faith produced by holding strongly to one’s belief. However, movement is impossible.

    Although still technically a Servant, it’s possible to avoid deletion by the Moon Cell in this form, the reason being that it’s fooled into recognizing presence not as that of a Servant, but as that of a firewall.


    Sahasrabhuja Kanrodai
    O merciful Bodhisattva, thou leadest us to redemption

    Rank: EX
    Type: Anti-Rebirth
    Range: 1~999
    Maximum number of targets: 1,000 people

    Sahasrabhuja Kanrodai. A complex Noble Phantasm integrated in the Corporal Shrine that comprises the thousand arms that stretch to reach out all the people in need and the unfinished artifact of the Tenrikyo that would collect the celestial dew to attain salvation. It’s a Noble Phantasm that wasn’t finished in life, and thus appears incomplete.

    The hexagonal pillar over which she’s standing is the Kanrodai, which originally was intended to be built at the spot in which Tsukihi created mankind. According to the Tenrikyo, honeydew would fall from the sky at that exact spot when the hearts of humans have been purified. Those who drink of it would become perfected ideal humans that wouldn’t be affected to sickness, age, or premature death.

    The Bodhisattva’s arms have the purpose of holding the 1,000 pure souls to be collected and add them to the sacred honeydew that overflows from the pillar’s top. When the entirety of the souls has been gathered and poured, the Kanrodai will be complete.

    Since both the first and the second Noble Phantasms are linked, once the latter has been completed, the superstructure that comprises both the Corporal Shrine and the Kanrodai will turn into the sacred vessel from which people will drink to be freed from the pain of Saṃsāra by perpetuating their existence, a Holy Grail of Mankind filled with nectar of immortality.


    Character
    First person pronoun: わたし (watashi)
    Second person pronoun: あなた (anata)
    Third person pronoun: かれ (kare) / かのじょ (kanojo)


    Personality

    Due to the first Noble Phantasm, dialogue is impossible. However, communication through telepathy can be established, even if one doesn’t possess the ability to do so. The words that come from her end are only words filled with love and compassion. It matters not if the one she speaks with is pure or impure, kind or coarse, she’ll treat them in the same way.


    Treatment with the Master

    Another one of the 7 billion souls. However, they winning the Holy Grail War means offering their soul to the Kanrodai. Will they leave her side to achieve salvation, or will they accept their destiny? It matters not. Giving up the ultimate goal all humans aspire to isn’t something anyone can do.


    Dialogue examples

    “All humans are souls bound to the wheel of rebirth. They will wander once and again in an eternal cycle of suffering. But I will free everyone from this nonsense. Rise your voice with joy, for eternal wellness is near.”

    “The thousand pure souls to be offered to the Kanrodai will become part of the Holy Grail of Mankind and of its contents, just like I will become the vessel of this grail. This is by no means a sacrifice, for they won't lose anything.”


    Personal data
    Historical depiction

    The wife of a Japanese farmer from the 19th century. Having learned several sutras in her youth, she desired to become a nun but finally married after her parents were pressured by her aunt.

    At the age of 39, her eldest son experienced a sharp pain in the leg. A doctor was called, but there wasn’t any improvement. The family brought an ascetic monk to heal him with his incantations, but after nine visits over the course of a year there weren’t any results. The following year, both her and her husband started feeling many physical pains. The same monk that treated her son visited the family, but since his medium wasn’t present, Miki assisted him during the ritual. At that moment, it is said that she had a divine revelation. For three days, she stayed in a trance without even budging. Her family asked whatever was possessing her to leave, but that only made the trance intenser and the responses more aggressive. Only when the “divine presence” was accepted, she awoke.

    After this supposed connection with a god, she secluded herself inside a storage, gradually discarded all the family’s possessions, and ordered that the main house was dismantled. She gave sewing lessons until the dismantling was finished, and later sent her daughter to chant the name of the god that possessed her, Tsukihi. Later, she would grant safe childbirth to women through faith healing.

    Revered as Oya-sama, Nakayama Miki founded the new religion known as Tenrikyo. In 1864, the first house of worship was built. During the following years, she did all sorts of preparations for a prayer ritual known as Service. She wrote songs and scriptures about her revelations, and identified the spot in which, according to her, humanity was created. She ordered the construction of the Kanrodai as a vessel to collect the sacred liquid that would deprive men of all harms, but found herself unable to see her dream fulfilled as it was confiscated before its completion.

    During the following years, her family was persecuted by yamabushis, forcing the Tenrikyo rituals, in which she was worshiped as a living shrine of Tsukihi, to be upheld in secret. When she passed away, she was thought to have “withdrawn from physical life” rather than actually dying, leading her believers to consider her immortal. Nowadays, the Tenrikyo is officially recognized as one of the thirteen branches of Sect Shinto and counts with 2 million followers.


    Becoming the Holy Grail of Mankind

    Nakayama Miki was originally summoned as a weak Caster that could barely do anything besides providing some support. In a scenario like the Holy Grail War of the Moon, in which all battles are fought 1 versus 1, she didn’t have any chance to win. At least, if she fought other Servants directly. Her Master, a coward that couldn’t care less about fair play, didn’t allow her to enter battle. Instead, he used dirty tricks to kill the enemy Masters to win every battle. Unexpectedly for everyone, the weakest Servant in the war managed to attain victory.

    Both Servant and Master started with a merely contractual relationship, but over time, they somehow started opening up to each other. By the time they reached the final battle, they were like sworn friends without them really noticing it. Once in front of the core of the Moon Cell, the Angelica Cage, the Master finally asked for Miki’s wish. He was a mage that had battled only to demonstrate that power didn’t matter to achieve victory, someone without any wish in particular, but he felt that it would be a waste to reach the Holy Grail to wish nothing. As a way of thanking her for having been at his side all the time, he wanted her to have her wish granted.

    “My only wish is to free humanity from pain. I’ll wish for the completion of the Kanrodai, and perform the rite that will bring eternal health to all”, was her reply.

    That wish was announced to the automaton of the Moon Cell, but couldn’t be granted. To begin with, if the Kanrodai could be completed with the power of the Holy Grail, she who had it listed as a Noble Phantasm could make use of it in its finished state. Furthermore, even if she managed to perform the Service ceremony, it wouldn’t be enough to save the 7 billion of lives on the Earth. Something different had to be wished. Realizing her lifelong dream couldn’t be achieved even by the power of a wish-granting device, she felt shattered. She had consecrated herself to the Tenrikyo, to be the shrine of a god, but in the end she wasn’t suited to become a messiah.

    “Wait. Don’t start crying yet. There’s a way to have your wish granted. It may be a bit different from what you had in mind, but it can work”.

    Perhaps it was out of pride and wanting to fulfill his promise. Perhaps it was out of pity to his friend. Perhaps it was just because. Whatever the reason, the Master birthed an idea to answer his partner’s plight. Yet he didn’t wish for mankind’s salvation. What his Servant wanted wasn’t just “to have others saved”, but “to save them with my own hands”. Therefore, the wish had to be something that made her become a fitting medium for salvation. That wish was the integration of Spirit Origins from other Servants devoted to freeing men from pain into the Spirit Origin of the Servant that was a failed savior.

    Thus, the Servant Caster Nakayama Miki achieved the form of a true throne-shrine that could realize her wish, becoming the Saver-class Servant, Oya-sama, through fusion with the Holy Virgin Maria and the merciful Bodhisattva Guānyīn. But it wasn’t still enough. This was only the first step. Now that she had finally become a device of salvation, she needed a sort of fuel to work. Again, her Master brought up an idea…

    “Even if you have finally obtained this kind of power, one person alone can’t probably save the 100% of mankind. Like it or not, small sacrifices have to be taken”.

    The ideal fuel for this kind of artifact could only be human souls. What better to save humanity, than human themselves? Thus, the amount of 1,000 souls was suggested as an ideal number to be “sacrificed” in order to finally bring redemption. In order to ensure that the quality of the souls was good enough, the winners of the future Holy Grail Wars would be ideal candidates for the “sacrifices”. 1,000 losses in exchange of 6,999,999,000 lives was statistically an outstandingly good balance, but it couldn’t be tolerated by someone who insisted in saving the totality of humans. After a long discussion, a conclusion was achieved:

    Sacrifice is a wrong concept, for those souls won’t be unable to be saved. Their salvation would come in a different way. By being poured into the vessel of salvation, they will continue existing as part of it, unable to suffer or to die.

    Thus, the next winners of the Holy Grail War of the Moon encountered this Saver, who didn’t oppose them to seize the Holy Grail for herself. They simply were asked to give up their wish in favor of contributing to the salvation of mankind by wishing for the manifestation of their souls. It was fine if they accepted, and it was fine as well if they refused, although only a few cases were the latter, because any desire looked insignificant and selfish in comparison with what humanity has wished since the beginning of its existence.


    Components · Depiction and connection

    Maria

    The Holy Virgin. A chaste woman to whom the archangel Gabriel appeared to announce that she had been chosen by the Holy Spirit to carry the child of God, Jesus Christ. She’s worshiped as the throne of the Messiah by the name of Madonna.

    Guānyīn
    The most known name of the Bodhisattva of compassion Avalokiteśvara. In Japan, she’s revered as Kannon. In order to hear the cries of all who suffer, as well as to reach out to them, she was given 11 heads and 1,000 arms by the Buddha Amitābha. Because of this, she’s been given the title of ‘Senju’ (千手, Thousand Hands).



    Though from completely different origins, both components share a strong connection with each other. The usual depiction of Guānyīn holding a baby was originally intended to represent her as a patron saint of mothers, but it started becoming synonymous to the image of the Holy Virgin when the Spanish brought images of her to Asia. During the Edo period, Japanese Christians disguised images of Maria as Guānyīn to fool the authorities, as Christianity was punishable by death at that period. Such statues are known as Maria Kannon.

    Miki’s role in Tenrikyo as a living shrine of Tsukihi is a position not unlike Maria’s function as a throne for Jesus, and given the relation between Maria and Guānyīn, she has good synergy with them both.


    Related characters

    Shakyamuni
    Kunitokotachi-no-Mikoto. The masculinity of Tsukihi. He ought to approve of this going.

    Sesshōin Kiara
    The intent is somehow similar, but… She is too filthy to become a savior of mankind. Even if she were to qualify for the Kanrodai, her soul would only pollute it.

    Amakusa Shirō Tokisada
    Salvation of mankind cannot be wrong, but to discard the vessel granted to humans that is the body is neglecting Tsukihi’s creation.
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