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    "Behold, I will do something new, Now it will spring forth; Will you not be aware of it? I will even make a roadway in the wilderness, Rivers in the Desert.” (Isaiah 43:19)

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    Class: Ruler
    Alternate Class: Caster
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Alias: King of Prophets
    Origin: Christianity and Judaism



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    Stats and Skills
    Parameters
    Strength: (D)
    Endurance: (E)
    Agility: (D)
    Mana: (A)
    Luck: (A+)
    NP: (A++)

    Height: 178cm
    Weight: 57kg
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Humanity, Lord Sabaoth (God), religious individuals
    Dislikes: The Unfaithful, self-destructive fools
    Talents: Prophecies, literary arts
    Natural enemy: King Manasseh
    Attribute: Sky
    Traits: Human, Divine, Male
    Armament: Book of Prophecy
    Catalyst: The Book of Prophecy, holy water from Mount Sion

    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance: (A)
    Measures one's capability in defending against anything containing magical properties. Different from abilities that resist magical energy, as it cancels spells all-together. At this rank, it is entirely possible to cancel spells of A rank or below, regardless of what form of high-thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is essentially untouchable by modern Magi and can therefore be called an effective ''Magus Killer''.

    Ruler possesses high Magic Resistance due to his unwavering piety. His faith was such that God revealed himself to him through a vision. Inviting him to his heavenly throne, soon making Ruler one of his greatest Prophets.

    True Name Discernment: (B)
    Status information such as one's identity, Skills and Parameters are automatically revealed when directly encountering a Servant. If summoned as a Ruler, during a direct encounter, a Servant's true name and entire status information will be automatically revealed. Regarding Servants with concealment abilities, a luck check is required.

    God’s Resolution: (A)
    The privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. Two Command Spells can be used for each Servant participating in the Holy Grail War. Cannot re-purpose the Command Spells of others.

    Personal Skills

    Revelation: (EX)
    A skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles. However, ‘Revelation’ accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no basis to it, it cannot be explained to others clearly.

    At this rank, Ruler gains a complete detail understanding of future events. Seeing centuries of history as though they were all a single vision. In life – Ruler left behind a Book of Prophecy. Within the book, he predicted the captivity of the Jews and their return from captivity during the reign of the emperor Cyrus. The destruction and renewal of Jerusalem and of the Temple. He also predicted the historical fate of the other nations bordering Jerusalem.

    Unlike other prophets who predicted the coming of the messiah, Ruler saw visions from God, revealing practically the entire life story of Jesus Christ to him. Experiencing events, from another’s perspective, about 700 years before it even happens. The visions foretell that the Messiah would be born from a Virgin. And that the Messiah would grow up to burden the sins of the world and suffer. He foresaw his death and Resurrection and the universal spreading of His Church.

    Protection of the Faith: (EX)
    A skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view. Despite being a form of divine protection, it is not a blessing from a higher existence. It is only the absoluteness of one's body and soul, which is born from faith. But if it is too high, it causes abnormalities in the personality. Ruler achieved this rank through his unrivaled piety towards God.

    His potential of faith was so great, God chose him to be His greatest prophet, revealing His true form, and showing Ruler the existence of Heaven before the resurrection of Christ. At this rank, Ruler’s personality has distorted his personality on the highest possible level. Though he loves humanity with all his heart and soul, next to God, and desires nothing but the advancement of mankind, he cares very little for the individuals and their problems. His role as a prophet is to simply observe the humans, preferring to keep his distance from getting to involved, and spread news of the visions he deems necessary to share. Although Ruler understands the hardships of human society, he will not show sympathy for them. Only disappointment when they exhibit foolish and self-destructive behaviors. Due to his pure state of mind, Ruler is immune to any mental interference.

    Miracle: (C)
    A skill that makes the impossible possible. Although it has some similarities with the skill Pioneer of the Stars, it is something essentially different.
    Although minor, Ruler was blessed with a gift of ‘wonderworking’. Demonstrating several miracles in life, he could summon miraculous water from the ground, cure diseases, restore sight to the blind, and prolong the lifespan of others.

    Divinity: (C)
    Measure of whether one has divine aptitude or not. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. In Ruler’s case, although originally human, this skill is at such a rank due to the close relationship he has with God. Handpicked out of all the pious individuals to be the first major prophet, becoming a significant importance to the Lord. Ruler’s demonstration of divine miracles only furthers cements his divine nature.


    Noble Phantasms

    Book of Prophecy
    Type: Support
    Rank: D
    Range: 0
    Maximum Target: 1 person
    Also known as the [Book of Isaiah] or [The Revelation of Isaiah], it holds a record of the visions seen by Ruler. Considered by scholars as “the great masterpiece of Hebrew Literature”, the versatility of expression and brilliance of imagery in Ruler’s writing is said to have no superior. Not even a rival. Those who gaze at its contents become immersed in it. The simplicity, imagery, and details fills the mind, causing the reader to see visions of the future, almost like a revelation.

    Before it can be read, Ruler must first write down the visions. Taking a few minutes up to hours, depending on what he’s writing. For example, in the context of the Holy Grail War, can record visions of an upcoming skirmish in a few minutes. Those who read it, say a master, will be granted foreknowledge of the event, knowing every detail that is about to happen. Of course, it depends on said master’s abilities to change the outcome, or exploit these visions. Another example would be recording the entire Holy Grail War to every single important detail. Said feat would require several hours to do, however, those who read it will acquire a full understanding of the war, from every event to every action. Again, it depends the reader’s mindset to heed these visions and their abilities to change the outcome.

    Unlike most other Noble Phantasms, this one is almost completely useless to Ruler. Since he has the [Revelation] skill, he would personally have no need of this book. The true purpose of this Noble Phantasm is to give it to those he deems necessary. As a prophet of the Lord, it is sworn role to inform the masses, to teach and guide them. Warn them of any tragedies that could spell ruin for the fate of human society. On a side note, the true Noble Phantasm is not necessarily the book itself, instead it is the very act of transcribing the visions into words. Thus, anything he can write on - such as a journal, diary, piece of paper, or even a wall – can become a [Book of Prophecy].


    Lord Sabaoth
    His Glory Shall Fill Heaven and Earth
    Type: Anti-Evil, Barrier
    Rank: E~EX
    Range: 10~100
    Maximum Targets: 1000 people
    Ruler’s very first vision that called him into the prophetic service sublimed into a Noble Phantasm. Upon invoking its True Name, a [Bounded Field] is casted around the area. Within it, a spiritual body of light, taking the place of the Lord God in His stead, sits in a majestic heavenly temple upon a high throne. Six-Winged [Seraphs] encircles the throne. With two wings covering their faces, two wings covering their feet, and with two wings they fly around crying out one to another, “Holy, Holy, Holy Lord Sabaoth, heaven and earth are filled with His glory!” The shouts shake the pillars of the heavenly temple, and within the temple rises the smoke of incense.

    The [Bounded Field] sustains itself through utilizing the sins of the people within as a means of anchoring its existence. If there is no evil, it will lose its purpose, thus it can no longer exist. Inside this [Barrier], everything undergoes purification. Those within the [Barrier] will soon be cleansed of their sins and will have their iniquities taken away. With their iniquities gone, they become unable to perform any sinful or immoral behavior. Everyone affected by this is bestowed with the [Protection of the Faith] skill at rank A, as well as having their alignment changed to ‘Good’.

    On the other hand, those who deny repentance shall face the judgement of God. As punishment towards the unrepentant, the [Seraphim’s] will seek and destroy them. Continuously spawning for as long evil is present with the [Bounded Field]. Displaying great power against sinners and ‘Evil’ alike. The Eviler the target is, the more powerful the [Seraphim’s] become. To the point that a single strike can purge Evil doers from existence, just like how through absolution, sin is cleansed from this world. Though it is possible to escape the [Barrier] by crossing its borders, it will be no easy task.

    In the case of a holy or pure hero, they are not forced to seek repentance, due to already being ‘Good’ or ‘Pure’. Against the likes of Jeanne d'Arc and Saint Martha, this Noble Phantasm serves nothing than a "minor inconvenience" to them, allowing them the opportunity to literally walk away unscathed.

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    His name meaning “YHWH is salvation”, the Prophet Isaiah is widely regarded as one of the greatest prophets in the Bible, in addition of being the first major prophet.

    Born in Jerusalem and son of Amos, he was raised in the fear of God and in the Law of the Lord. According to Jewish tradition, Isaiah was said to be of royal lineage. Implying he might have been the cousin of King Uzziah. Giving him access to the kings of Judah in Jerusalem.

    Once at the age of maturity, Isaiah married a prophetess and they had two sons whose names had prophetic meanings. Shear-Jashub which means “a remnant shall return” and Maher-Shalal-Hash-Baz which means “speed the soil, hasten the booty”. Isaiah and his family would be for “signs and wonders in Israel”.

    One day, during this time, Isaiah had vision of God. Cowering in the presence of the Lord, he confessed he was an “accursed man” with “impure lips” living amongst “impure people”. In response, God sent a Seraphim holding a red-hot coal with tongs and touched upon Isaiah’s lips, taking away his iniquities and cleansing his sins. After this, God asked him who shall he send to aid these “impure people” and Isaiah answered he would go.
    60 years later, at the end of his journey, Isaiah was eventually killed by being sawn in half by King Manasseh, the son of King Hezekiah.

    Aside from his origins and death, very little is known about the Prophet Isaiah’s personal life. Ultimately, Isaiah was an individual known not for his life story, or legend but for the teachings he left behind and the impact he made towards humanity.

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    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    Class: caster.
    likes: peace, honor, virtue, and atoning for one's in sins
    Dislikes: war, unnecessary death, human sacrifice, chaos.
    Alternate classes: ruler, saver

    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    agility: C
    mana: A
    endurance: E
    luck: A

    background(this is ganna be a brief background sorry): ce was the born to mixc┼Źatl and chimalman, during his reign he ended human sacrifice and started many groups and brought peace to toltecs, while king he was loved by and was a priestly King,believing that the sacrificing of humans was a sin and instead sacrificed animals and offered human blood rather then human death, after leaving his people he began a long journey and began setting up many villages which he taught his views towards, although unknown even to him when he died, his people still remembered him and many used his name claiming relatives of him to ensure their rule.

    Personality: he detests most violence but understands it's necessity, he also a kind caring individual if not a bit pushy, he hates all forms of drinking and refuses to ever to enjoy things, while he will try to help and make his master a better person through wisdom and guidance he will never try to save him self, and in truth he doesn't wish for the grail and doesn't care as to whether he wins or not, his only goal is to either keep the grail from People who wish to use it do harm and if that becomes unnecessary he will do all he can to guide his master to be a better person regardless of there character before the war.

    Class skills:
    Item crafting A.
    Similar to Medea he was an excellent practitioner of magic do to being a high priest and used many charms and such to help him fight a dark God, at this rank hem could craft functional charms such as charms of strength or good luck.

    territory creation, N/A.


    Personal skills:

    fire resistance, B
    do to being the child of a God of fire he was born with an unnatural resistance to flame, This skills creates a resistance to fire and at this rank it would require high class fire magic or phantasm flame to damage him with fire.

    charisma, A.
    a skill that defines ones ability to rule or lead and allows one to pursued others,
    do to being so famous enough that many rulers used his name to legit is there rules, and who was famous enough amongst the entire Aztec empire his rank is extremely high and at this rank he could lead an entire empire.

    Divinity, B.
    due to being born to a powerfull war god, he has a high rank in divinity.

    Blessings of mixc┼Źatl, A.
    due to being a child of mixc┼Źatl he was blessed by his father, and has an extreme abilty with sealing, fire, and attack based magecraft, so much that if in a magic dual with Medea he could probably easily beat her.

    Tolkien magecraft, A++
    his magecraft is strong and fast enough to not only survive a god but to also push it back, and in fact he was so powerful that the God had to trick him in order to even beat him, tolken magecraft focuses more on binding and attack. His variations of it also include fire, it's looks like magic circles but instead of the normal luanguage the circles are filled with Tolkien symbols and its appearance is that of a snake opening its mouth.

    Acholic weakness, C.
    due to his fall bringing brought by alcohol he is more likely to make rash and unintelligent descions when in the direct presence of any alcoholic beverage.

    NPs.

    the city of tollan, A++, anti army.
    An extension of territory creation, it allows him to claim a land and turn into his city of tollan, while no one realized it, as its power was useless without caster is it in truth a fortes of casters design capable of easily fending of a powerful god it acts as extension of acatls magecraft to phantasmal levels, and has glowing circles on every building which only appear when Acatl is present, it can shoot large beams of magic Energy equating to C rank phantasms if caster is willing to use his own mana in the attack it ranked to a B rank, but it's most useful feature is its shield which negates all attack based magic, and physical attacks must be of a B rank or higher to have any affect on the shield
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    Quote Originally Posted by venomking View Post
    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    This is actually a pretty good servant sheet.
    How do you think he'll react to my Hernan Cortes?
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    Suprised no one did this guy So im gonna try with my limited expirience at servant-making


    武田信玄 Takeda Shingen
    甲斐の虎 The Tiger of Kai


    Nasu nickname: King of Cavalry Charges (Kiheitai-Ou)
    Class: Rider
    Alternate Classes: Ruler (No fascination with grail, thus qualifies)
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Weapon: Katana
    Place of Origin: Japan
    H/W: 185cm/80kg
    Sumoning Catalyst: His helmet
    Natural Enemy: Oda Nobunaga
    Wish for the grail: None

    Appearance: Tall, mildly muscular man, Clad in full samurai armor expect for helmet hiding his somewhat muscular build but his huge stature still present.

    Personality: Fit for a fair leader, Ruthless but not too much. He enjoyed fighting more than anything but has a clear moral code, Also has an obsesion with crimson color

    Stats:
    Strenght: B
    Agility: C
    Endurance: A
    Luck : B
    Mana: D
    Noble Phantasm: A++

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: (C+)
    Cancels speels of three verses and lower, Rider never ecountered any magecraft in life, But because of his devotion to buddhism (High Piety) this skill is raised by one rank.

    Riding: (A+)
    Can ride anything up to the level of phantasmal and divine beasts, but this does not apply to Dragons.

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: (B)
    Was greatly respected by not only his troops but by his own rivals, Reportedly his rival Uesugi Kesnhin cried when he recived the news of his death.

    Resistance to Heavens: (A)
    Given to those who could fight on par with a divine warrior, but had no divinity themselves, this grants him slight boost against Servants with Divinity and its effect increases the higher rank of divinity his enemy has and vice versa. He actively fought His greatest rival Uesugi kenshin, Who was considered an avatar of bishamonten, a shinto god of war.

    Eye of the mind (True): (A)
    He was one of the most insightful and wise generals of the late sengoku period, Even though he lived by the samurai code of honour, He never did anything remotely reckles unless he was sure there was no other way.

    Noble Phantasms:

    Tessen, The iron war fan that leads the armies: (B-) (Anti-Fortress)
    Summons His Iron War fan Which he used to lead armies with in place of a more conventional weapon, Even though it wasn't used as a weapon, the symbolic Value it held to rider is enough to Give it considerable power, Although its nowhere near the power of legendary Weapons such as Excalibur or Ea.

    Takeda Cavalry, Mounted Army of the Tiger of Kai: (A++) (Army)

    This noble phantasm Bring to life his Army of Horsemen as well as his personal horse, Each individual One a heroic spirit, The army then charges forward, Crushing anything and anyone that stands in its way and obliterating any heroic spirit with a low Luck Rank, The only way to survive this is to have a high luck rank, Or an anti army noble phantasm, Rider Can hold this Noble Phantasm for about 15 minutes but every two minutes a hungred horsemen will dissapear from his army until he is the only one left



    Brief Backround: His Childhood was simmilar to Oda nobunaga, A highly rebellious child, He rebelled against his father because his brother was to be named the next head of the clan, And he succeded. as he grew he pursued a pabbajja life of a buddhist, So he was given the name of Takeda Shingen, He gained his fame after Practically inventing the Cavalry Charge In japan, And during the sengoku Period Takeda Cavalries were the most powerful in all of japan.
    His life Came to an end in 1572, During his final battle, But the exact circumstances of his death arent known Some say he died of an infection, Other that say that an Oda Shinobi assassinated him.


    On the matter of holy grail: A wish must be earned by the actions of man and a mere item cannot grant it!! No matter how holy or divine it is.
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    Uh sorry dude, no Furinkazan NP? That is the most famous Shingen's thing.

    But Resistance to Heavens is a cool skill.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    Uh sorry dude, no Furinkazan NP? That is the most famous Shingen's thing.
    To be honest i wanted him to be more realistic rather than legendary kinda like Iskander, So his symbolic war fan and his OP-plz nerf cavalry is what i went with.
    thanks for the complimenting his skill though
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    who are all these new people

    and every servant sheet i look at now ends up appearing the same to me

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    Caster wouldn't hate Cortes as he would likely see what Cortes did as punishment from the gods for continuing the sin full act of human sacrifice, he would also like his hi table personality, but would hate his willingness to war and counquer and his greed and would confront Cortes about it and the two might have battle of ideals and Cortes might be highly offended being called a weapon of Aztec gods so the battle would go on for some time with neither side able to gain any headway, since no amount of magic can destroy his a a NP it would really come down to if Cortes were able to get close and use physical strikes. Thou the battle is almost guaranteed to end in a stale mate.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    This is actually a pretty good servant sheet.
    How do you think he'll react to my Hernan Cortes?
    Wait, wait, wait...

    Ce Acatl Topiltzin Quetzalcoatl was "Toltec"...whose nation/culture was dead and gone for centuries by the time the Aztecs even showed up.

    The Aztecs may have claimed a connection to their predecessor civilizations in an attempt for legitimacy (they didn't by the way) but Ce Acatl Topiltzin should care exactly jack and shit about what happened to the Aztecs.

    This is like asking Rameses II whether what happened to the Ptolomaic Dynasty bothered him. Actually there's even less connection than that.
    Last edited by Theoneandonlyz; August 4th, 2017 at 06:44 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    Wait, wait, wait...

    Ce Acatl Topiltzin Quetzalcoatl was "Toltec"...whose nation/culture was dead and gone for centuries by the time the Aztecs even showed up.

    The Aztecs may have claimed a connection to their predecessor civilizations in an attempt for legitimacy (they didn't by the way) but Ce Acatl Topiltzin should care exactly jack and shit about what happened to the Aztecs.

    This is like asking Rameses II whether what happened to the Ptolomaic Dynasty bothered him. Actually there's even less connection than that.
    Maybe thats as a heroic spirit. On one hand its all historicaly accurate expect gender and appearance.
    On the other hand you can have Takeda shingen And John III Sobieski swearing rivalry to each other and charging at each other with army noble phantasms to see who is the best rider.

    I mean its nasu logic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by massive_jojo_reference View Post
    Maybe thats as a heroic spirit. On one hand its all historicaly accurate expect gender and appearance.
    On the other hand you can have Takeda shingen And John III Sobieski swearing rivalry to each other and charging at each other with army noble phantasms to see who is the best rider.

    I mean its nasu logic.
    Sure there is that...and there are situations like the time that this one guy in my tabletop group who, when describing a NPC in a game he was hosting, wonderfully put it "This man was Asian, he's speaking Asian"...

    In his defense he was very sleep deprived at the time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    Sure there is that...and there are situations like the time that this one guy in my tabletop group who, when describing a NPC in a game he was hosting, wonderfully put it "This man was Asian, he's speaking Asian"...

    In his defense he was very sleep deprived at the time.
    I dont get what you are trying to say but i laughed way to hard at that.

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    He was made more famous by Aztecs so it's kinda simler to corruption he sees the Aztecs as the same as to Tolkien, and even identifies as Aztec as he just sees them as another name for Tolkien so Aztecs, so yes he does care about teh Aztecs, but thx for reminding me I need to change Aztec magecraft to Tolkien magecraft.

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    So, just on a whim I decided to give a spelling check to Venomking's Acatl sheet. Normally I wouldn't bother, but since its actually fairly decent otherwise I'd hate for it to get buried in a murk of typographical errors.

    Also, note that this only includes spelling errors. There's still a lot of run-on sentences and commas that really should be periods, but to be honest correcting all those would probably take me all day.

    Quote Originally Posted by venomking View Post
    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    Class: caster.
    likes: peace, honor, virtue, and atoning for one(')s sins
    Dislikes: war, unnecessary death, human sacrifice, chaos.
    Alternate classes: ruler, saver

    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    agility: C
    mana: A
    endurance: E
    luck: A

    background(this is ganna be a brief background sorry): ce was the born to mixc┼Źatl and chimalman, during his rein (reign) he ended human sacrifice and started many groups and brought peace to toltecs, while king he was loved by and was a priestly King,believing that the sacrificing of humans was a sin and instead sacrificed animals and offered human blood rather then human death, after leaving his people he began a long journey and began setting up many villages which he taught his views towards, although unknown even to him when he died, his peaple (people) still remembered him and many used his name claiming relatives of him to ensure there (their) rule.

    Personality: he detests most violence but understands it's necessity, he also a kind care ing (caring, one word) individual if not a bit pushy, he hates all forms of drinking and refuses to ever to enjoy things, while he will try to help and make his master a better person throu (through) wisdom and guidance he will never try to save him self, and in Ruth (truth) he doesn't wish fir (for) the grail and doesn't care as to weather (whether) he wins or not, his only goal is to ether (either) keep the grail from Peale (people) who wish to sue (use) it (to) do harm and if that becomes unnecessary he will do all he can to GUIs (???) his master to be a better person regardless of there (their) character before the war.

    Class skills:
    Item crafting A.
    simler media (similar to Medea) he was exactly practitioner of magic do to being a high priest and used many charms and such to he,o (help) him fight a dark God, at this rank eh (he) could be functional charms such as charms of strength or good luck.

    territory creation, N/A.


    Personal skills:

    fire resistance, B
    do (due) to being the child of a God of fire he was born with an unatrul (unnatural) resistance to flame, This skills creates a resistance to fire and this rank it would require high class fire magic or phantasm flame to damage him with fire.

    charisma, A.
    a skill that defines ones ability to rule or lead and allows one to pursued (persuade?) others,
    do (due) to being so famous enough that many rulers used his name to legit (legitimate) is there rules, and who was famous enough amongst the entire Aztec empire his rank is extremely high and at this rank he could lead an entire empire.

    Divinity, B.
    do (due) to being bored (born) to a powerfull war god, he has a high rank in divinity.

    Blessings of mixc┼Źatl, A.
    do (due) to being a child of mixc┼Źatl he was blessed by his father, and has an extreme abilty with sealing, fire, and attack based magecraft, so much that if in magic dual with media (Medea) he could probably beat her.
    tolken magecraft, A++
    his magecraft is strong and fast enough to not only survive a god but to also push it back, and in fact he was so powerful that the God had to trick him in order to even beat him, tolken magecraft focuses more on binding and attack. His variations of it also include fire, it's (it) looks like magic circles but instead of the normal language (language) the circles are filled with Aztec symbols and appear as (a) snake opening its mouth.

    Acholic weakness, C.
    do (due) to his down bringing (downfall would make more sense here) by alcohol he is more likely to make rash and un intelligent (unintelligent, one word) descions (decisions) when in the direct presence of any alcoholic beverage.

    NPs.

    the city to tollan, A++, anti army.
    Amd (an) extension of territory creation, it allows to claim a land and turn into his city of tollan, while no one realized and it (its) power is useless without caster it in truth a fortes of ces (???) design capable of easily fending of a powerful god it acts as extension of acatls magecraft to phantasm pic (???) levels, and has glowing circles on every building which only appear when Acatl is present, it can shoot large beams of magic Energy and shield that negates all attack based magic.

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    "Everyone has a Fate. A drama without a script. What about you Master? Are you in control of yours?"

    True Name: Natsume Sōseki
    Title: "Literary Master of Japan"
    Origin: Historical
    Region: Japan (19th Century)
    Catalyst: A 1000 ą Note with his face on it
    Armament: Pens (They are mightier than the sword)
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Likes: Cycling, Reading
    Dislikes: Criticism, Unfinished Business
    Talents: Languages, Poetry
    Natural Enemy: The British

    Personality:
    Natsume is very much aware of his talent and success, to the point of narcissistically demanding his Master refer to him as only "Sensei". He would even flamboyantly declare his own name to his enemies. However, he is loathe to do anything resembling actual work and would rather laze around doing nothing than fight - he doesn't even have a wish upon the Grail as he is satisfied that he wasn't forgotten over the years. His only redeeming quality is that he never forgets his debts, and if his Master helps him to finish his unfinished work "Light and Darkness" then he would do everything in his power to help them.


    Parameters:
    STG (D), END (C), AGI (D), MGI (B), LCK (B), NP (A)

    Class Skills:
    Item Construction: (No Rank)
    It is the Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Also, this Skill requires time to gather components and manufacture items. However at the cost of acquiring the "Kokoro" Noble Phantasm, this Skill is lost.

    Territory Creation: (C)
    It is the Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. Natsume does not make a Workshop but rather a 'Study', where he can spin stories that give his "Kokoro" Noble Phantasm a plus modifier while inside.


    Personal Skills:
    Eye for Art (B)
    The infatuation with works of art. Natsume became a Professor of literature at the Tokyo Imperial University where he taught literary theory and literary criticism. If he happens to see a Noble Phantasm that possess literary anecdotes, there is a high chance that he might be able to figure out its true name.

    High-Speed Incantation (E)
    The ability to speak magical incantations at an accelerated speed. As he was not a Magus, instead of spell recitation, Natsume instead writes at intense speed allowing him to write out entire sentences in a second. This plays a large part in his "Kokoro" Noble Phantasm. His hands are just about the only thing about this man that knows the concept of "haste".

    Human Observation (A)
    A technique to observe and understand people. At this point it is no longer simple observation but seeing straight through people, revealing their personalities and intentions. Just one glance is enough to determine whether a person is an enemy or not and can even see past any attempts at physical disguise. He gained this high a Rank via learning from a certain English Detective while living in London in exchange for teaching the Gentleman the art of Baritsu.


    Noble Phantasms:
    Wagahai - I am a Cat (C) [Anti - Unit]
    A power that allows him to transform himself into a Calico cat called "Wagahai". All abilities are sealed but ones presence as a Servant is completely erased as well so this form is suitable for spying...or just lazing about the town when he can't be bothered to fight. But wait, if he doesn't actually have any magical power is he really turning into a cat or...?

    Kokoro - Sensei's Testament (C) [Anti - Unit]
    Words have power, especially in the hands of a "Literary Master" like Natsume. This Noble Phantasm takes the form of a very special pen that any words written by it will produce a certain wavelength. Anyone who gazes upon these words will have these wavelengths transmitted to their brain and will feel a strong compulsion to follow what they say. These can range from simple commands like "X cannot move" to more complicated ones like "Standing on the floor causes you intense pain so you must stay off it". Obviously there are limits to such commands - they have to be easily understandable, they cannot make the target do anything physically impossible for them, nor say anything that they themselves do not know etc etc. Since it's not the result of magecraft, magic resistance cannot defend against it. But rather the target's mental strength will determine whether or not they are able to break free from the spell. Much more potent against enemy Masters as Heroic Spirits aren't typically weak of will.

    Light and Darkness - This is what I saw in my Dream (A) [Anti - Army]
    A book of unfinished dreams. This book creates a wide Bounded Field which puts everyone caught in it into a deep slumber. Everyone affected finds themselves in a shared dream taking place in a shadowy nightmare version of wherever the Bounded Field was set up. Natsume then appears before them all and declares that he has hidden said book, called "Light and Darkness" within the area and that it is the key to their salvation. The books contains the ongoing adventure of those trapped inside the NP...save for the final page which is blank and writing a happy end where you escape will end the nightmare. To find the book, one must solve a series of riddles, each one's answer pointing to the location of the next until the tenth and final riddle's solution reveals the location of the book. Since this is a dream, all powers of both Humans and Servants are sealed, thus giving everyone a fair chance to win. However, the dream only lasts an hour and anyone who does not escape in time will never wake up again. It's a race against both time and the other dreamers, as whoever gets to the books first has the power to control who wakes up - everyone or just themselves. This Noble Phantasm is a huge gamble for Natsume as it represents his inability to finish his masterpiece before his death, and should even a single person escape the dream then this Noble Phantasm will take his life as forfeit.


    Lore:
    Born in 1867 to a family that didn't want him. Nevertheless he tried his best in his studies and attended Tokyo Imperial University and even went to study in Great Britain as "Japan's first Japanese English literary scholar". Upon returning to Japan in 1903, he began to contribute haiku, renku, haitaishi and literary sketches to literary magazines before embarking on his satirical novel I Am a Cat in 1905 that won him wide public admiration as well as critical acclaim. From then on, he started writing one novel a year until his untimely death from a stomach ulcer in 1916, leaving his final novel "Light and Darkness" unfinished.

    ***
    Creator's Notes:
    Hmm...yet another Caster that wasn't a mage in life. I seem to have a thing for these. Anyway, this way a quick sheet I knocked up in a couple of hours. I got the inspiration for this one from a series called "Bungou Stray Dogs" which is all about people based on famous authors with superpowers themed after their works. Natsume Sōseki was a recent character to be revealed and he was so awesome that I just had to put him in Servant format. Somehow a bit of Rohan Kishibe seems to have made its way into the sheet from the personality to one of the NPs. Huh, looking back on the sheet, despite being a "Caster" Natsume works a lot like an "Assassin" in combat, especially if he cleverly uses his Wagahai and Kokoro NPs. As always, comments and criticisms are welcome. ^_^
    "We do not know what kind of people we truly are until the moment before our deaths. As death comes to embrace you, you will realize what you are.
    That's what death is, don't you think?"

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    Aw, has voting already begun? And I was just about to upload my sheet too...

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    Quote Originally Posted by chem24 View Post
    Aw, has voting already begun? And I was just about to upload my sheet too...
    Voting is tomorrow I think. And you're in the wrong thread.

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    "I will try to get you in bed at some point. You can't avoid it, just be ready. Also, I must insist on going shirtless at all times."



    Class: Rider
    Alternate Classes: Lancer, Shielder, Caster, Berserker

    STR: B
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: C
    LCK: B

    Class Skills

    Riding (A+): Can use Phantasmal and Divine Beasts as mounts.

    Magic Resistance (C): Cancels spells two verses or shorter.

    Personal Skills

    Divinity (C+): As a Roman Emperor, Rider and his family received divine status. Rider himself is granted a high rank due to
    his syncretism with the god he is named after. He also had a habit of commissioning paintings of himself and then draping
    them over statues of gods and goddesses, particularly Victoria, so that those who made offerings to the gods were in fact
    making offerings to him. Rider insists that his high rank comes from his pure physical perfection.

    Golden Rule (Debauchery) (A): Rider possesses a natural and perfect god-like body, though it does not alter his parameters.
    Unlike other excessively attractive heroes, Rider takes this a step further. In combat, he appears muscular, clad in armor,
    the quintessential Roman soldier. Out of combat, he appears more slender and feminine. Either way, he oozes raw sex appeal
    no matter who he interacts with. Rider was most famous for his sexual antics, abandoning himself to the grossest pleasures,
    even to the point of prostituting himself to both men and women in his own palace.

    Imperial Privilege (A): The ability to, at Rider's insistence, demonstrate skills that would normally be impossible for
    him to possess. At such a high rank, even skills inherent to the body such as Divinity can be gained. As a Roman Emperor
    and the head priest and avatar of Baal, Rider was tantamount to a god, especially in his head. Rider's skills include
    Riding, Charisma, Divinity, Military Tactics, Eternal Arms Mastership, Protection of the Faith, and Seduction.

    Equipment: Rider's claim to his class is his chariot, a tall throne on wheels, surrounded by gilded shields. It is pulled
    by six massive, pure white horses. Decked with every precious metal Rider can get his hands on, it is a formidable tool
    of war and a luxurious vehicle for his pleasure. When he is in a particularly good mood, the chariot can be seen rolling
    languidly down the road, flanked by two dozen men and women, dancing naked and throwing flower petals.

    Noble Phantasms

    Elagabalium~Marriage to Minerva (B+, Support)

    Named for the grand temple Rider built to El-Gabal. However, in order to legitimize the worship of his patron as the first and
    foremost god of Rome, he declared El-Gabal was to marry, taking Minerva as his consort. As the avatar of the new head god, Rider
    is able to "appropriate" his "wife's" armaments as his own. In combat, Rider manifests Minerva's armor, shield and spear, all of
    which are powerful god-forged Noble Phantasms in their own right. As if this weren't powerful enough, Rider can extend this to
    "appropriate" the Noble Phantasms of any Servant that he defeats and declares to be his husband or wife. Rider will most likely
    refrain from doing so unless he meets an opponent he deems worthy of joining his harem. Given his sordid lifestyle, there is no
    limit to how many "spouses" he can have at one time. The restrictions are that the subjugated Servant must be kept alive to use
    their weapons, and that he can only "marry" Servants who possess Divinity. Rider claims that this restriction exists to ensure
    his unions only produce the most god-like children, but it's really a mental block created by his own narcissism.

    Baetylus of El-Gabal~Meteorite Chariot of the Undefeated Sun (B+, Support, Anti-Army)

    The most holy relic of the Syrian god El-Gabal was a black meteorite fragment carved into the shape of a sun. Every chance Rider
    got, he paraded this stone, the earthly representation of his patron deity, around Rome as part of lavish celebrations. Rider was
    posthumously named after El-Gabal, and thus the activation of this Noble Phantasm transforms his skin into jet black armor. While
    in this form, Rider is immobile but virtually indestructible. To compensate for this, he uses his chariot as transport. If moving
    at great speed, Rider can dismiss his chariot and use his momentum to carry himself forward. Compressing the air in front of him,
    he becomes a superheated living bullet that slams into his target. This attack is highly destructive, but inaccurate.

    Background
    Elagabalus was Roman Emperor from 218 to 222 BCE. His regnal name was Marcus Aurelius Antoninus Augustus, but after his death he
    was called Elagabalus after the Syrian sun god, of whom he was a priest.

    In 217, Caracalla, the Roman Emperor and cousin to Elagabalus' mother, was assassinated by the commander of his Praetorian Guard,
    Marcinus. During his brief reign, Elagabalus' mother and grandmother began plotting and using what little wealth they had to sway
    the Army and the Senate into supporting the fourteen year old as the true Emperor.

    Before the title could be officially transferred, the youth held a triumphant parade as he entered the city of Rome, in a massive
    chariot flanked by dozens of naked women. To help Romans adjust, paintings of Elagabalus were draped over the statues of Victoria,
    placing senators in the awkward position of making offerings to the Emperor while the made offerings to Victoria and other gods.
    It was when the senators and the commanders of the army met the Emperor that his eccentricities became apparent. Obsessed with sex and
    decadence, he pushed even more boundaries when he declared El-Gabal as head of the Roman pantheon. The god was renamed Deus Sol
    Invictus and married to Minerva. Furthermore, he forced senators to attend worship ceremonies of the sun god as he danced around the
    altars. During such festivities, the sacred stone of El-Gabal was placed in a chariot and paraded around the city. All of Rome's most
    sacred artifacts were transferred to the Elagbalium, the temple that housed the stone.

    Elagabalus' reign was rife with sex scandals. He married and divorced five women, one of whom was a virgin priestess of Vesta. His
    reasoning was that they would produce god-like children, and pardoned her for breaking her vow of celibacy. However, historians
    tell us that his more stable relationships were ones with men, including slaves and athletes. He would also paint his eyes, have
    all his body finely plucked, wear wigs, and then prostitute himself in taverns, brothels and the Imperial palace.

    After four years of this shit the Emperor slowly began to lose favor with the army and the Praetorian Guard. The final straw was
    Elagabalus' blatant attempts to undermine and assassinate his heir, his cousin, Severus Alexander. After inventing a rumor that
    Alexander was dying, the Praetorian Guard rioted and demanded to see Elagabalus and Alexander both. Upon their arrival the Guard
    cheered for Alexander and ignored Elagabalus. He responded by ordering the arrest and execution of those who were insubordinate,
    and was promptly surrounded and stabbed to death.
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    Elagabalus: Marrying his opponents and then using their NPs as his own. Truly the greatest harem protagonist. *shot*

    Seriously though, that's a pretty cool Servant. I especially like how you made his second NP more then just a generic "flaming chariot charge", like I saw for one other Elagabalus sheet.

    - - - Updated - - -

    I just noticed one point of critique though; I don't think he needs Divinity as well as Imperial Privilege, since the justification for it (I'm a god because I say so) is pretty much already covered by the latter Skill. Especially since Nero and Caligula were both emperors famous for deifying themselves and yet had their respective divinities folded under IP, it feels odd that he'd have the Skill on its own.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Funderfullness View Post

    Elagabalus
    Good sheet, but I think there's some things worth commenting about.

    Riding : I think it's too high, but then i realized that it's probably because of his... errr 'other' riding skill ( ͡░ ͜ʖ ͡░)

    Divinity : This is probably too high. Even Caesar--who is said to be Venus' descendant, and is more famous compared to this guy--only has D-rank

    Imperial Privilege : This is also too wanked up. Seriously, the same rank as Romulus?

    2nd NP : I suggest lowering the rank, it's not that impressive compared to other A+ ranked NPs, it also needs more description or limitations if you insist to keep its rank.

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