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    gues who back, back again.

    This will probably be a pattern, leaving the site for periods of time them sudenly come back, life is hard...
    But wharever, here it is! The saddest sheet i will ever make!
    Avenger: satsuki yumiizuka
    Str:B, End:B, Agi:A
    Mna: C, Lck:E, Np:EX
    Aligment: chaotic/good
    Gender: female
    Height:161cm
    Weight:45kg
    Place of origin: misaki,japan
    Armament: claws
    Likes: heroic boys, Be recognized, parodies
    Deslike: heroines, be forgot, unhappy endings
    Talents: magic?
    Natural enemies: vampire princesses, little sisters.

    Skills
    Avenger(B): a class skill for avengers servants, satsuki is a special case where the more shell is ignored, the more damage she will do.

    oblivion correction(D):another class skill of avengers, she never forgets people faults. She can, however, be apeased by a significant big or selfless act to her.

    Self-Replenishment(mana)(B): avenger class skill, she recovers a little bit of mana with time. her high level is probably because her inate magical capabilities.

    battle continuation(A): the abilitie to keep fighting even when badly wound. It comes from her nature as a vampire, but is strenght by her powerful will.

    Blood-Sucking(C): being a vampire, she is a rare case of not needing to much blood and being capable of survive by other means, she will still gain a lot of mana if she choose to do so.

    Monstrous Strength(A-): capable of strength augmentation for period of time, it can lose power if she stop seeing herself as a monster.

    Mystic Eyes(B): her mystic eyes are a commun type betwen vampires, but still capable of hypnotize beings without mental protection

    Noble phantasm
    Depletion garden: garden of blight and thirst(A):
    The manifestation of avenger's origem in the form of a reality marble.
    Once deploid, it takes the form of beutiful garden, before rapidly destroy the mana in the area, turning into a wasteland. It is a very dengerous technique that will affect everybody inside, enemy or ally.

    Ultimate satsuki: puella magi sacchin magika(EX):
    The ultimate power, achive by the pity of god(nasu), A divine form that manipulates fate(plot) to reach victory(true ending).
    Avenger herself does not know of this noble phantasm, it will activate under certain conditions(event flags) similar to a defence mechanism(deus ex machina).
    However, if certain conditions are not met, it will in defeat(bad ending).

    Lore:
    Avenger is satsuki yumizuka, the protagonist of a sad tale of misfortune. A normal high-schoolgirl with a unrequired crush, she was bite by a vampire before having the corage to confess.
    Most people simply die or possibly turn into a weak zombie when bitten, but Satsuki was an extremely rare exception who not only became a vampire, but quickly gained control over her powers as well. yet , this wound be suficient to give her a chance of happiness.
    While her destiny is different in every tale, all of then end in her being alone, truly someone who was born to have a happy ending, but was neve able to reach it.

    Personality:
    she has a tendency of develop crushs on heroic-type boys, she is shy and has somewhat of an inferiority conplex, but is also quite popular between yonger people, but she does not seem to care about it.
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    and i realy feel that we have a LINK

    here is a list of my servant sheets(that anybody care...)

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    I am so confused right now.

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    Shouldn't this be in the Modern Fiction Thread?

    EDIT: Nvrmd, was too tired to think
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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    Shouldn't this be in the Modern Fiction Thread?
    I think Nasuverse stuff is fine


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    Yeah, forgot the Nasuverse section existed.

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    I totaly forgot that there is new people that dont know me now
    Hello everybody, this is yours truly god of world-0, just a random protector of cˇsmical order and crazy depresive person
    I like long beach walks and sherlocks sheets and my hobbies are hibernation and claiming that anything that moves is a beast-class

    and i realy feel that we have a LINK

    here is a list of my servant sheets(that anybody care...)

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    "Behold, I will do something new, Now it will spring forth; Will you not be aware of it? I will even make a roadway in the wilderness, Rivers in the Desert.” (Isaiah 43:19)

    Faceclaim
    Class: Ruler
    Alternate Class: Caster
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Alias: King of Prophets
    Origin: Christianity and Judaism



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    Stats and Skills
    Parameters
    Strength: (D)
    Endurance: (E)
    Agility: (D)
    Mana: (A)
    Luck: (A+)
    NP: (A++)

    Height: 178cm
    Weight: 57kg
    Gender: Male
    Likes: Humanity, Lord Sabaoth (God), religious individuals
    Dislikes: The Unfaithful, self-destructive fools
    Talents: Prophecies, literary arts
    Natural enemy: King Manasseh
    Attribute: Sky
    Traits: Human, Divine, Male
    Armament: Book of Prophecy
    Catalyst: The Book of Prophecy, holy water from Mount Sion

    Class Skills

    Magic Resistance: (A)
    Measures one's capability in defending against anything containing magical properties. Different from abilities that resist magical energy, as it cancels spells all-together. At this rank, it is entirely possible to cancel spells of A rank or below, regardless of what form of high-thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is essentially untouchable by modern Magi and can therefore be called an effective ''Magus Killer''.

    Ruler possesses high Magic Resistance due to his unwavering piety. His faith was such that God revealed himself to him through a vision. Inviting him to his heavenly throne, soon making Ruler one of his greatest Prophets.

    True Name Discernment: (B)
    Status information such as one's identity, Skills and Parameters are automatically revealed when directly encountering a Servant. If summoned as a Ruler, during a direct encounter, a Servant's true name and entire status information will be automatically revealed. Regarding Servants with concealment abilities, a luck check is required.

    God’s Resolution: (A)
    The privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. Two Command Spells can be used for each Servant participating in the Holy Grail War. Cannot re-purpose the Command Spells of others.

    Personal Skills

    Revelation: (EX)
    A skill equivalent to Instinct, a sixth sense regarding battles. However, ‘Revelation’ accommodates all matters related to the achievement of a goal (for instance, choosing the most suitable path while traveling). Because there is no basis to it, it cannot be explained to others clearly.

    At this rank, Ruler gains a complete detail understanding of future events. Seeing centuries of history as though they were all a single vision. In life – Ruler left behind a Book of Prophecy. Within the book, he predicted the captivity of the Jews and their return from captivity during the reign of the emperor Cyrus. The destruction and renewal of Jerusalem and of the Temple. He also predicted the historical fate of the other nations bordering Jerusalem.

    Unlike other prophets who predicted the coming of the messiah, Ruler saw visions from God, revealing practically the entire life story of Jesus Christ to him. Experiencing events, from another’s perspective, about 700 years before it even happens. The visions foretell that the Messiah would be born from a Virgin. And that the Messiah would grow up to burden the sins of the world and suffer. He foresaw his death and Resurrection and the universal spreading of His Church.

    Protection of the Faith: (EX)
    A skill possessed only by those who have sacrificed themselves for a religious view. Despite being a form of divine protection, it is not a blessing from a higher existence. It is only the absoluteness of one's body and soul, which is born from faith. But if it is too high, it causes abnormalities in the personality. Ruler achieved this rank through his unrivaled piety towards God.

    His potential of faith was so great, God chose him to be His greatest prophet, revealing His true form, and showing Ruler the existence of Heaven before the resurrection of Christ. At this rank, Ruler’s personality has distorted his personality on the highest possible level. Though he loves humanity with all his heart and soul, next to God, and desires nothing but the advancement of mankind, he cares very little for the individuals and their problems. His role as a prophet is to simply observe the humans, preferring to keep his distance from getting to involved, and spread news of the visions he deems necessary to share. Although Ruler understands the hardships of human society, he will not show sympathy for them. Only disappointment when they exhibit foolish and self-destructive behaviors. Due to his pure state of mind, Ruler is immune to any mental interference.

    Miracle: (C)
    A skill that makes the impossible possible. Although it has some similarities with the skill Pioneer of the Stars, it is something essentially different.
    Although minor, Ruler was blessed with a gift of ‘wonderworking’. Demonstrating several miracles in life, he could summon miraculous water from the ground, cure diseases, restore sight to the blind, and prolong the lifespan of others.

    Divinity: (C)
    Measure of whether one has divine aptitude or not. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called 'purge defense' in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. In Ruler’s case, although originally human, this skill is at such a rank due to the close relationship he has with God. Handpicked out of all the pious individuals to be the first major prophet, becoming a significant importance to the Lord. Ruler’s demonstration of divine miracles only furthers cements his divine nature.


    Noble Phantasms

    Book of Prophecy
    Type: Support
    Rank: D
    Range: 0
    Maximum Target: 1 person
    Also known as the [Book of Isaiah] or [The Revelation of Isaiah], it holds a record of the visions seen by Ruler. Considered by scholars as “the great masterpiece of Hebrew Literature”, the versatility of expression and brilliance of imagery in Ruler’s writing is said to have no superior. Not even a rival. Those who gaze at its contents become immersed in it. The simplicity, imagery, and details fills the mind, causing the reader to see visions of the future, almost like a revelation.

    Before it can be read, Ruler must first write down the visions. Taking a few minutes up to hours, depending on what he’s writing. For example, in the context of the Holy Grail War, can record visions of an upcoming skirmish in a few minutes. Those who read it, say a master, will be granted foreknowledge of the event, knowing every detail that is about to happen. Of course, it depends on said master’s abilities to change the outcome, or exploit these visions. Another example would be recording the entire Holy Grail War to every single important detail. Said feat would require several hours to do, however, those who read it will acquire a full understanding of the war, from every event to every action. Again, it depends the reader’s mindset to heed these visions and their abilities to change the outcome.

    Unlike most other Noble Phantasms, this one is almost completely useless to Ruler. Since he has the [Revelation] skill, he would personally have no need of this book. The true purpose of this Noble Phantasm is to give it to those he deems necessary. As a prophet of the Lord, it is sworn role to inform the masses, to teach and guide them. Warn them of any tragedies that could spell ruin for the fate of human society. On a side note, the true Noble Phantasm is not necessarily the book itself, instead it is the very act of transcribing the visions into words. Thus, anything he can write on - such as a journal, diary, piece of paper, or even a wall – can become a [Book of Prophecy].


    Lord Sabaoth
    His Glory Shall Fill Heaven and Earth
    Type: Anti-Evil, Barrier
    Rank: E~EX
    Range: 10~100
    Maximum Targets: 1000 people
    Ruler’s very first vision that called him into the prophetic service sublimed into a Noble Phantasm. Upon invoking its True Name, a [Bounded Field] is casted around the area. Within it, a spiritual body of light, taking the place of the Lord God in His stead, sits in a majestic heavenly temple upon a high throne. Six-Winged [Seraphs] encircles the throne. With two wings covering their faces, two wings covering their feet, and with two wings they fly around crying out one to another, “Holy, Holy, Holy Lord Sabaoth, heaven and earth are filled with His glory!” The shouts shake the pillars of the heavenly temple, and within the temple rises the smoke of incense.

    The [Bounded Field] sustains itself through utilizing the sins of the people within as a means of anchoring its existence. If there is no evil, it will lose its purpose, thus it can no longer exist. Inside this [Barrier], everything undergoes purification. Those within the [Barrier] will soon be cleansed of their sins and will have their iniquities taken away. With their iniquities gone, they become unable to perform any sinful or immoral behavior. Everyone affected by this is bestowed with the [Protection of the Faith] skill at rank A, as well as having their alignment changed to ‘Good’.

    On the other hand, those who deny repentance shall face the judgement of God. As punishment towards the unrepentant, the [Seraphim’s] will seek and destroy them. Continuously spawning for as long evil is present with the [Bounded Field]. Displaying great power against sinners and ‘Evil’ alike. The Eviler the target is, the more powerful the [Seraphim’s] become. To the point that a single strike can purge Evil doers from existence, just like how through absolution, sin is cleansed from this world. Though it is possible to escape the [Barrier] by crossing its borders, it will be no easy task.

    In the case of a holy or pure hero, they are not forced to seek repentance, due to already being ‘Good’ or ‘Pure’. Against the likes of Jeanne d'Arc and Saint Martha, this Noble Phantasm serves nothing than a "minor inconvenience" to them, allowing them the opportunity to literally walk away unscathed.

    Seraphim

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    His name meaning “YHWH is salvation”, the Prophet Isaiah is widely regarded as one of the greatest prophets in the Bible, in addition of being the first major prophet.

    Born in Jerusalem and son of Amos, he was raised in the fear of God and in the Law of the Lord. According to Jewish tradition, Isaiah was said to be of royal lineage. Implying he might have been the cousin of King Uzziah. Giving him access to the kings of Judah in Jerusalem.

    Once at the age of maturity, Isaiah married a prophetess and they had two sons whose names had prophetic meanings. Shear-Jashub which means “a remnant shall return” and Maher-Shalal-Hash-Baz which means “speed the soil, hasten the booty”. Isaiah and his family would be for “signs and wonders in Israel”.

    One day, during this time, Isaiah had vision of God. Cowering in the presence of the Lord, he confessed he was an “accursed man” with “impure lips” living amongst “impure people”. In response, God sent a Seraphim holding a red-hot coal with tongs and touched upon Isaiah’s lips, taking away his iniquities and cleansing his sins. After this, God asked him who shall he send to aid these “impure people” and Isaiah answered he would go.
    60 years later, at the end of his journey, Isaiah was eventually killed by being sawn in half by King Manasseh, the son of King Hezekiah.

    Aside from his origins and death, very little is known about the Prophet Isaiah’s personal life. Ultimately, Isaiah was an individual known not for his life story, or legend but for the teachings he left behind and the impact he made towards humanity.

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    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    Class: caster.
    likes: peace, honor, virtue, and atoning for one's in sins
    Dislikes: war, unnecessary death, human sacrifice, chaos.
    Alternate classes: ruler, saver

    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    agility: C
    mana: A
    endurance: E
    luck: A

    background(this is ganna be a brief background sorry): ce was the born to mixc┼Źatl and chimalman, during his reign he ended human sacrifice and started many groups and brought peace to toltecs, while king he was loved by and was a priestly King,believing that the sacrificing of humans was a sin and instead sacrificed animals and offered human blood rather then human death, after leaving his people he began a long journey and began setting up many villages which he taught his views towards, although unknown even to him when he died, his people still remembered him and many used his name claiming relatives of him to ensure their rule.

    Personality: he detests most violence but understands it's necessity, he also a kind caring individual if not a bit pushy, he hates all forms of drinking and refuses to ever to enjoy things, while he will try to help and make his master a better person through wisdom and guidance he will never try to save him self, and in truth he doesn't wish for the grail and doesn't care as to whether he wins or not, his only goal is to either keep the grail from People who wish to use it do harm and if that becomes unnecessary he will do all he can to guide his master to be a better person regardless of there character before the war.

    Class skills:
    Item crafting A.
    Similar to Medea he was an excellent practitioner of magic do to being a high priest and used many charms and such to help him fight a dark God, at this rank hem could craft functional charms such as charms of strength or good luck.

    territory creation, N/A.


    Personal skills:

    fire resistance, B
    do to being the child of a God of fire he was born with an unnatural resistance to flame, This skills creates a resistance to fire and at this rank it would require high class fire magic or phantasm flame to damage him with fire.

    charisma, A.
    a skill that defines ones ability to rule or lead and allows one to pursued others,
    do to being so famous enough that many rulers used his name to legit is there rules, and who was famous enough amongst the entire Aztec empire his rank is extremely high and at this rank he could lead an entire empire.

    Divinity, B.
    due to being born to a powerfull war god, he has a high rank in divinity.

    Blessings of mixc┼Źatl, A.
    due to being a child of mixc┼Źatl he was blessed by his father, and has an extreme abilty with sealing, fire, and attack based magecraft, so much that if in a magic dual with Medea he could probably easily beat her.

    Tolkien magecraft, A++
    his magecraft is strong and fast enough to not only survive a god but to also push it back, and in fact he was so powerful that the God had to trick him in order to even beat him, tolken magecraft focuses more on binding and attack. His variations of it also include fire, it's looks like magic circles but instead of the normal luanguage the circles are filled with Tolkien symbols and its appearance is that of a snake opening its mouth.

    Acholic weakness, C.
    due to his fall bringing brought by alcohol he is more likely to make rash and unintelligent descions when in the direct presence of any alcoholic beverage.

    NPs.

    the city of tollan, A++, anti army.
    An extension of territory creation, it allows him to claim a land and turn into his city of tollan, while no one realized it, as its power was useless without caster is it in truth a fortes of casters design capable of easily fending of a powerful god it acts as extension of acatls magecraft to phantasmal levels, and has glowing circles on every building which only appear when Acatl is present, it can shoot large beams of magic Energy equating to C rank phantasms if caster is willing to use his own mana in the attack it ranked to a B rank, but it's most useful feature is its shield which negates all attack based magic, and physical attacks must be of a B rank or higher to have any affect on the shield
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    Quote Originally Posted by venomking View Post
    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    This is actually a pretty good servant sheet.
    How do you think he'll react to my Hernan Cortes?
    Last edited by ThirtyFour34; August 4th, 2017 at 07:03 AM.

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    Suprised no one did this guy So im gonna try with my limited expirience at servant-making


    武田信玄 Takeda Shingen
    甲斐の虎 The Tiger of Kai


    Nasu nickname: King of Cavalry Charges (Kiheitai-Ou)
    Class: Rider
    Alternate Classes: Ruler (No fascination with grail, thus qualifies)
    Alignment: Neutral Good
    Weapon: Katana
    Place of Origin: Japan
    H/W: 185cm/80kg
    Sumoning Catalyst: His helmet
    Natural Enemy: Oda Nobunaga
    Wish for the grail: None

    Appearance: Tall, mildly muscular man, Clad in full samurai armor expect for helmet hiding his somewhat muscular build but his huge stature still present.

    Personality: Fit for a fair leader, Ruthless but not too much. He enjoyed fighting more than anything but has a clear moral code, Also has an obsesion with crimson color

    Stats:
    Strenght: B
    Agility: C
    Endurance: A
    Luck : B
    Mana: D
    Noble Phantasm: A++

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: (C+)
    Cancels speels of three verses and lower, Rider never ecountered any magecraft in life, But because of his devotion to buddhism (High Piety) this skill is raised by one rank.

    Riding: (A+)
    Can ride anything up to the level of phantasmal and divine beasts, but this does not apply to Dragons.

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: (B)
    Was greatly respected by not only his troops but by his own rivals, Reportedly his rival Uesugi Kesnhin cried when he recived the news of his death.

    Resistance to Heavens: (A)
    Given to those who could fight on par with a divine warrior, but had no divinity themselves, this grants him slight boost against Servants with Divinity and its effect increases the higher rank of divinity his enemy has and vice versa. He actively fought His greatest rival Uesugi kenshin, Who was considered an avatar of bishamonten, a shinto god of war.

    Eye of the mind (True): (A)
    He was one of the most insightful and wise generals of the late sengoku period, Even though he lived by the samurai code of honour, He never did anything remotely reckles unless he was sure there was no other way.

    Noble Phantasms:

    Tessen, The iron war fan that leads the armies: (B-) (Anti-Fortress)
    Summons His Iron War fan Which he used to lead armies with in place of a more conventional weapon, Even though it wasn't used as a weapon, the symbolic Value it held to rider is enough to Give it considerable power, Although its nowhere near the power of legendary Weapons such as Excalibur or Ea.

    Takeda Cavalry, Mounted Army of the Tiger of Kai: (A++) (Army)

    This noble phantasm Bring to life his Army of Horsemen as well as his personal horse, Each individual One a heroic spirit, The army then charges forward, Crushing anything and anyone that stands in its way and obliterating any heroic spirit with a low Luck Rank, The only way to survive this is to have a high luck rank, Or an anti army noble phantasm, Rider Can hold this Noble Phantasm for about 15 minutes but every two minutes a hungred horsemen will dissapear from his army until he is the only one left



    Brief Backround: His Childhood was simmilar to Oda nobunaga, A highly rebellious child, He rebelled against his father because his brother was to be named the next head of the clan, And he succeded. as he grew he pursued a pabbajja life of a buddhist, So he was given the name of Takeda Shingen, He gained his fame after Practically inventing the Cavalry Charge In japan, And during the sengoku Period Takeda Cavalries were the most powerful in all of japan.
    His life Came to an end in 1572, During his final battle, But the exact circumstances of his death arent known Some say he died of an infection, Other that say that an Oda Shinobi assassinated him.


    On the matter of holy grail: A wish must be earned by the actions of man and a mere item cannot grant it!! No matter how holy or divine it is.
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    Uh sorry dude, no Furinkazan NP? That is the most famous Shingen's thing.

    But Resistance to Heavens is a cool skill.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    Uh sorry dude, no Furinkazan NP? That is the most famous Shingen's thing.
    To be honest i wanted him to be more realistic rather than legendary kinda like Iskander, So his symbolic war fan and his OP-plz nerf cavalry is what i went with.
    thanks for the complimenting his skill though
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    who are all these new people

    and every servant sheet i look at now ends up appearing the same to me

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    Caster wouldn't hate Cortes as he would likely see what Cortes did as punishment from the gods for continuing the sin full act of human sacrifice, he would also like his hi table personality, but would hate his willingness to war and counquer and his greed and would confront Cortes about it and the two might have battle of ideals and Cortes might be highly offended being called a weapon of Aztec gods so the battle would go on for some time with neither side able to gain any headway, since no amount of magic can destroy his a a NP it would really come down to if Cortes were able to get close and use physical strikes. Thou the battle is almost guaranteed to end in a stale mate.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    This is actually a pretty good servant sheet.
    How do you think he'll react to my Hernan Cortes?
    Wait, wait, wait...

    Ce Acatl Topiltzin Quetzalcoatl was "Toltec"...whose nation/culture was dead and gone for centuries by the time the Aztecs even showed up.

    The Aztecs may have claimed a connection to their predecessor civilizations in an attempt for legitimacy (they didn't by the way) but Ce Acatl Topiltzin should care exactly jack and shit about what happened to the Aztecs.

    This is like asking Rameses II whether what happened to the Ptolomaic Dynasty bothered him. Actually there's even less connection than that.
    Last edited by Theoneandonlyz; August 4th, 2017 at 06:44 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    Wait, wait, wait...

    Ce Acatl Topiltzin Quetzalcoatl was "Toltec"...whose nation/culture was dead and gone for centuries by the time the Aztecs even showed up.

    The Aztecs may have claimed a connection to their predecessor civilizations in an attempt for legitimacy (they didn't by the way) but Ce Acatl Topiltzin should care exactly jack and shit about what happened to the Aztecs.

    This is like asking Rameses II whether what happened to the Ptolomaic Dynasty bothered him. Actually there's even less connection than that.
    Maybe thats as a heroic spirit. On one hand its all historicaly accurate expect gender and appearance.
    On the other hand you can have Takeda shingen And John III Sobieski swearing rivalry to each other and charging at each other with army noble phantasms to see who is the best rider.

    I mean its nasu logic.
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    Quote Originally Posted by massive_jojo_reference View Post
    Maybe thats as a heroic spirit. On one hand its all historicaly accurate expect gender and appearance.
    On the other hand you can have Takeda shingen And John III Sobieski swearing rivalry to each other and charging at each other with army noble phantasms to see who is the best rider.

    I mean its nasu logic.
    Sure there is that...and there are situations like the time that this one guy in my tabletop group who, when describing a NPC in a game he was hosting, wonderfully put it "This man was Asian, he's speaking Asian"...

    In his defense he was very sleep deprived at the time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Theoneandonlyz View Post
    Sure there is that...and there are situations like the time that this one guy in my tabletop group who, when describing a NPC in a game he was hosting, wonderfully put it "This man was Asian, he's speaking Asian"...

    In his defense he was very sleep deprived at the time.
    I dont get what you are trying to say but i laughed way to hard at that.

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    He was made more famous by Aztecs so it's kinda simler to corruption he sees the Aztecs as the same as to Tolkien, and even identifies as Aztec as he just sees them as another name for Tolkien so Aztecs, so yes he does care about teh Aztecs, but thx for reminding me I need to change Aztec magecraft to Tolkien magecraft.

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    So, just on a whim I decided to give a spelling check to Venomking's Acatl sheet. Normally I wouldn't bother, but since its actually fairly decent otherwise I'd hate for it to get buried in a murk of typographical errors.

    Also, note that this only includes spelling errors. There's still a lot of run-on sentences and commas that really should be periods, but to be honest correcting all those would probably take me all day.

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    True name: ce Acatl topiltzin Quetzalcoatl
    Class: caster.
    likes: peace, honor, virtue, and atoning for one(')s sins
    Dislikes: war, unnecessary death, human sacrifice, chaos.
    Alternate classes: ruler, saver

    Parameters:
    Strength: E
    agility: C
    mana: A
    endurance: E
    luck: A

    background(this is ganna be a brief background sorry): ce was the born to mixc┼Źatl and chimalman, during his rein (reign) he ended human sacrifice and started many groups and brought peace to toltecs, while king he was loved by and was a priestly King,believing that the sacrificing of humans was a sin and instead sacrificed animals and offered human blood rather then human death, after leaving his people he began a long journey and began setting up many villages which he taught his views towards, although unknown even to him when he died, his peaple (people) still remembered him and many used his name claiming relatives of him to ensure there (their) rule.

    Personality: he detests most violence but understands it's necessity, he also a kind care ing (caring, one word) individual if not a bit pushy, he hates all forms of drinking and refuses to ever to enjoy things, while he will try to help and make his master a better person throu (through) wisdom and guidance he will never try to save him self, and in Ruth (truth) he doesn't wish fir (for) the grail and doesn't care as to weather (whether) he wins or not, his only goal is to ether (either) keep the grail from Peale (people) who wish to sue (use) it (to) do harm and if that becomes unnecessary he will do all he can to GUIs (???) his master to be a better person regardless of there (their) character before the war.

    Class skills:
    Item crafting A.
    simler media (similar to Medea) he was exactly practitioner of magic do to being a high priest and used many charms and such to he,o (help) him fight a dark God, at this rank eh (he) could be functional charms such as charms of strength or good luck.

    territory creation, N/A.


    Personal skills:

    fire resistance, B
    do (due) to being the child of a God of fire he was born with an unatrul (unnatural) resistance to flame, This skills creates a resistance to fire and this rank it would require high class fire magic or phantasm flame to damage him with fire.

    charisma, A.
    a skill that defines ones ability to rule or lead and allows one to pursued (persuade?) others,
    do (due) to being so famous enough that many rulers used his name to legit (legitimate) is there rules, and who was famous enough amongst the entire Aztec empire his rank is extremely high and at this rank he could lead an entire empire.

    Divinity, B.
    do (due) to being bored (born) to a powerfull war god, he has a high rank in divinity.

    Blessings of mixc┼Źatl, A.
    do (due) to being a child of mixc┼Źatl he was blessed by his father, and has an extreme abilty with sealing, fire, and attack based magecraft, so much that if in magic dual with media (Medea) he could probably beat her.
    tolken magecraft, A++
    his magecraft is strong and fast enough to not only survive a god but to also push it back, and in fact he was so powerful that the God had to trick him in order to even beat him, tolken magecraft focuses more on binding and attack. His variations of it also include fire, it's (it) looks like magic circles but instead of the normal language (language) the circles are filled with Aztec symbols and appear as (a) snake opening its mouth.

    Acholic weakness, C.
    do (due) to his down bringing (downfall would make more sense here) by alcohol he is more likely to make rash and un intelligent (unintelligent, one word) descions (decisions) when in the direct presence of any alcoholic beverage.

    NPs.

    the city to tollan, A++, anti army.
    Amd (an) extension of territory creation, it allows to claim a land and turn into his city of tollan, while no one realized and it (its) power is useless without caster it in truth a fortes of ces (???) design capable of easily fending of a powerful god it acts as extension of acatls magecraft to phantasm pic (???) levels, and has glowing circles on every building which only appear when Acatl is present, it can shoot large beams of magic Energy and shield that negates all attack based magic.

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