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    Stage 1-3


    Stage 4

    - Caster -
    Grimm

    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Alias: King of Fairy Tales
    Origin: Germany

    Parameters

    Strength: (E)
    Endurance: (E)
    Agility: (E)
    Mana: (EX)
    Luck: (D)
    NP: (EX)

    Gender: Male
    Likes: Fairy Tales, Legends, Folklore, Mythology, Philology, Germany, Editing and Adapting Stories
    Dislikes: Poverty, Illness
    Talents: Turning Stories into Timeless Masterpieces
    Attribute: Man
    Catalyst: The original Kinder- und Hausmärchen, Deutsche Sagen, or Deutsches Wörterbuch

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation: (C)
    A skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. He does not make a Workshop but rather a ‘Library’ containing a large collection of books.

    Item Creation: (-)
    This skill is lost in favor of his Noble Phantasm.

    Personal Skills

    Discernment of the Poor: (B)
    Insight to see through the opponent’s character and attribute. Caster is not so easily deceived by excuses and deceptions of words. He is likely to grasp the true nature and motive of others in a confrontation. Facing extreme poverty several times, assuming adult responsibilities after his father’s death at age 11, he faced great misfortune. Despite that, Caster pulled through more determined than ever, and learned greatly of life and the value of the weak.

    In a letter written to his aunt at this time, Wilhelm wrote of their circumstances, "We five people eat only three portions and only once a day".

    Eye for Art (Literary): (B+)
    Infatuation to the literary arts. Interested in history and philology, Caster started off studying German medieval literature. From then on, he continued his pursuit of knowledge, reading all sorts of books from legends to folk tales. Should he see a Noble Phantasm possessing literary anecdotes, there is a high chance that he might be able to figure out its true name. In the case that the Noble Phantasm is related to Fairy Tales or German Legends, Caster will undoubtedly determine its true name.

    Librarian of Stored Knowledge: (A)
    Clear recollection of knowledge from memory after a successful Luck roll is possible, even if the information perceived in the past was not consciously acknowledged at the time. At this rank, achieved through having over 200 tales and about 600 legends stored in his mind, Caster can be said to have a perfect memory.

    Hybrid: (EX)
    Denotes one’s condition of being a mixture of two different species. Original Caster was not one but two people; the Brothers Grimm. Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm always stood with each other from the very beginning, facing whatever hardships that stood on their path, making history. Normally, this would result in the creation of a dual servant. However, in the case of the inseparable Brothers Grimm, their roles became so indistinguishable, that it’s as if they acted as one person. As such, Caster becomes a Hybrid of the two brothers, sharing one mind, one body.


    Noble Phantasm

    Kinder- und Hausmärchen * Deutsche Sagen
    A Book of Aspiration for All
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: EX
    Range: 0
    Maximum Targets: 1 person

    The manuscript of Caster, containing the contents of both Kinder- und Hausmärchen (Children’s hand Household Tales) and Deutsche Sagen (German Legends). It is a Reality Marble comprised of magical fairy tales and legends of heroism. The fame and importance of these tales are such that they inspire and move its readers. It teaches the values and morals many follow today through wondrous stories of imagination, changing the perception of how people view the World. Transcending beyond mere fiction, it has become a core part of humanity and the World, materializing into reality.

    The summoning of characters, tools, spirits, and so forth from Fairy Tales and German Legends are possible. The Big Bad Wolf from “Little Red Riding Hood”, the magic mirror and poisoned apple from “Snow White”, the fairy from “Sleeping Beauty”, and the wish-granting imp from “Rumpelstiltskin” are examples of what can be produced. On the Legend side, for an example, Caster can conjure the [Armor of Fafnir] from “Nibelungenlied” and even weapons such as [Gram] and [Excalibur].

    Nevertheless, it should be known that even though Caster is considered to be one of the Three Great Writers, he doesn’t produce his own literary works. He is only an editor and collector that compiles folklore and legend. That reflects into his Noble Phantasm. The true purpose of this Noble Phantasm is not to write or tell stories, but to collect and refine, expanding his collection, turning them into timeless masterpieces. After hearing, seeing, or researching a folk story, Caster can take the opportunity to write and modify it, improving and adding it into his ever-expanding collection. Depending on the story, it could take serval minutes to several hours, to write all the changes down. In a way, the diversity and quality of the stories is a reason why it’s such an aspiration to many, inspiring its readers to strive to become better people, and making the World a better place even if ever so slightly.



    Lore
    One of the Tree Great Authors, Brothers Grimm; Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm were German academics, philologists, cultural researchers, lexicographers and authors who together collected and published folklore during the 19th century. They were among the best-known storytellers of fairy tales, popularizing stories such as “Cinderella” and “The Frog Prince” to “Sleeping Beauty” and “Snow White”.

    The brothers spent their formative years in the German town of Hanau. Their father's death in 1796 impoverished the family and affected the brothers for many years after. They attended the University of Marburg where they developed a curiosity about German folklore, which grew into a lifelong dedication to collecting German folk tales. The rise of Romanticism during the 19th century revived interest in traditional folk stories, which to the brothers represented a pure form of national literature and culture. With the goal of researching a scholarly treatise on folk tales, they established a methodology for collecting and recording folk stories that became the basis for folklore studies. Between 1812 and 1857, their first collection was revised and republished many times, growing from 86 stories to more than 200. In addition to writing and modifying folk tales, the brothers wrote collections of well-respected German and Scandinavian mythologies, and in 1838 they began writing a definitive German dictionary (Deutsches Wörterbuch), which they were unable to finish during their lifetimes.

    Many of the Grimms' folk tales have enjoyed enduring popularity. The tales are available in more than 100 languages and have been adapted by filmmakers including Lotte Reiniger and Walt Disney, with films such as Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs and Sleeping Beauty. During the 1930s and 40s, the tales were used as propaganda by the Third Reich; declaring every household to own their own copy of Kinder- und Hausmärchen. Later in the 20th century psychologists such as Bruno Bettelheim reaffirmed the value of the work, in spite of the cruelty and violence in original versions of some of the tales, which the Grimms eventually sanitized.
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    Grimm: Wow, way to make my own Brothers Grimm sheet look kind of lame in comparison. Seriously though, this is a really good sheet. His NP is a fairly simple "summons stuff from his literary works" idea but the reference to him taking other stories and refining them into NPs definitely helped flesh it out. I'm actually kind of curious as to how he'd get along with other storyteller Servants from canon, like Scheherazade or Andersen.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Grimm: Wow, way to make my own Brothers Grimm sheet look kind of lame in comparison. Seriously though, this is a really good sheet. His NP is a fairly simple "summons stuff from his literary works" idea but the reference to him taking other stories and refining them into NPs definitely helped flesh it out. I'm actually kind of curious as to how he'd get along with other storyteller Servants from canon, like Scheherazade or Andersen.
    Thanks for the feedback!

    Anyways, Grimm would respect them to the point of fanboying over Scheherazade and Anderson. Though he would try hide it...well some of it. Although Grimm appears to be a well-mannered sophisticated gentleman, he is actually a child at heart. He is obsessed over stories, partly because he never had much of a childhood, since he had to take care and support his family at the age of 11. Ignoring the two's personalities, Grimm would practically beg them to tell him their stories...in a sophisticated manner of course. In a way, due to his Noble Phantasm, it could be interpreted that Grimm has an ulterior motive, wanting to know their stories so he can add them to his collection. But in reality, that's not true. He only does so out of passion and respect of the source material. Wanting the whole world to acknowledge and learn from the tales.

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    Your Grimm is really well done. Congrats!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aridwolverine View Post
    Hybrid: (EX)
    Denotes one’s condition of being a mixture of two different species. Original Caster was not one but two people; the Brothers Grimm. Jacob Grimm and Wilhelm Grimm always stood with each other from the very beginning, facing whatever hardships that stood on their path, making history. Normally, this would result in the creation of a dual servant. However, in the case of the inseparable Brothers Grimm, their roles became so indistinguishable, that it’s as if they acted as one person. As such, Caster becomes a Hybrid of the two brothers, sharing one mind, one body.[/SPOILER]
    Even disregarding the rest of the (good) sheet, this is really really clever and cool. Creative, interesting stuff like this always makes me smile when I read these, and I think I should stop and note that. I really like this design choice, and the justification is very well written.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aridwolverine View Post
    Thanks for the feedback!

    Anyways, Grimm would respect them to the point of fanboying over Scheherazade and Anderson. Though he would try hide it...well some of it. Although Grimm appears to be a well-mannered sophisticated gentleman, he is actually a child at heart. He is obsessed over stories, partly because he never had much of a childhood, since he had to take care and support his family at the age of 11. Ignoring the two's personalities, Grimm would practically beg them to tell him their stories...in a sophisticated manner of course. In a way, due to his Noble Phantasm, it could be interpreted that Grimm has an ulterior motive, wanting to know their stories so he can add them to his collection. But in reality, that's not true. He only does so out of passion and respect of the source material. Wanting the whole world to acknowledge and learn from the tales.
    By the way, I didn't even notice to begin with but when looking back over your Grimm sheet I just realized you included a reference to my Rumpelstiltskin Servant in his NP description.

    I appreciate you liked my sheet enough to do that (particularly since I'd kind of forgotten about it).

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    I think I just found the perfect NP for my Soekarno sheet...

    I hope I can finish this shit today... (17 August, Indonesian Independence Day)
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    I hoped they wouldn't feature because not once have I liked Fate's take on ANCIENT ALIENS. It's stupid for beings from humanity's myth and history to be the result of ANCIENT ALIENS all along, even insulting to an extent. Velbers are bad, Alien Trees are bad, Foreigners are bad, stick with humans relating to humans please Nasu.
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    Nasu was always a pen name. It was Georgio Tsoukalos all along

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    Grimm and Gilgamesh fight when?

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    Quote Originally Posted by WhatShouldNotBe View Post
    Grimm and Gilgamesh fight when?
    Why Gil in particular? Because they both have NPs that summon stuff?

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    I think Grimm's NPs is still limited compared to Gil's

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    Also, is it possible that Gil would also have Grimm's NP or something similar in his GoB?
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    I hoped they wouldn't feature because not once have I liked Fate's take on ANCIENT ALIENS. It's stupid for beings from humanity's myth and history to be the result of ANCIENT ALIENS all along, even insulting to an extent. Velbers are bad, Alien Trees are bad, Foreigners are bad, stick with humans relating to humans please Nasu.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Also, is it possible that Gil would also have Grimm's NP or something similar in his GoB?
    In before Gil turns out to have the Epic of Gilgamesh itself stored in there. Cue meta recursion. *shot*

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    GoB in itself is a paradox
    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    I hoped they wouldn't feature because not once have I liked Fate's take on ANCIENT ALIENS. It's stupid for beings from humanity's myth and history to be the result of ANCIENT ALIENS all along, even insulting to an extent. Velbers are bad, Alien Trees are bad, Foreigners are bad, stick with humans relating to humans please Nasu.
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    Nasu was always a pen name. It was Georgio Tsoukalos all along

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    Wow, I actually never thought of Grimm fighting Gilgamesh before.

    And Gilgamesh wouldn't have Grimm's NP...well not all of it. I mean, 3/4 of it uses German Legends, so any item from that Gil would probably have. The other 1/4 are from Fairy Tales, so he wouldn't have those. Keep in mind though that Grimm isn't limited to just items. He could summon the characters too, which would probably give him an advantage over Gil.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aridwolverine View Post
    Wow, I actually never thought of Grimm fighting Gilgamesh before.

    And Gilgamesh wouldn't have Grimm's NP...well not all of it. I mean, 3/4 of it uses German Legends, so any item from that Gil would probably have. The other 1/4 are from Fairy Tales, so he wouldn't have those. Keep in mind though that Grimm isn't limited to just items. He could summon the characters too, which would probably give him an advantage over Gil.
    Still a Reality Marble tho. The question is whether or not Gil would pull Ea...
    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    I hoped they wouldn't feature because not once have I liked Fate's take on ANCIENT ALIENS. It's stupid for beings from humanity's myth and history to be the result of ANCIENT ALIENS all along, even insulting to an extent. Velbers are bad, Alien Trees are bad, Foreigners are bad, stick with humans relating to humans please Nasu.
    Quote Originally Posted by TheSeaDragon View Post
    Nasu was always a pen name. It was Georgio Tsoukalos all along

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Still a Reality Marble tho. The question is whether or not Gil would pull Ea...
    Yeah. The fight depends on whether or not Gil pulls Ea. If he doesn't then Grimm wins. If he does then Gil wins. Though I suppose it is technically possible for Grimm to escape in time if he uses the right abilities with his NP.

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    Please someone remind me to finish my damned Kusuma Bangsa sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    Please someone remind me to finish my damned Kusuma Bangsa sheet.
    Please finish it.
    The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Selamat Hari Merdeka!!

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    Class : Rider
    Alternate Class : Ruler, Caster
    Identity : Soekarno
    Origin : Indonesia (20th Century)
    Alignment : Lawful Neutral

    Sukarno, also spelled Soekarno (born June 6, 1901, Surabaja [now Surabaya], Java, Dutch East Indies—died June 21, 1970, Jakarta, Indonesia), leader of the Indonesian independence movement and Indonesia’s first president (1949–66), who suppressed the country’s original parliamentary system in favour of an authoritarian “Guided Democracy” and who attempted to balance the Communists against the army leaders. He was deposed in 1966 by the army under Suharto.

    PARAMETER
    STR : E
    END : E
    AGL : D
    MGI : A
    LCK : B
    NP : A++


    CLASS SKILLS
    Riding : C++
    A Class Skill of Rider and Saber class Servants, denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Though he is a Rider, his Riding skill is rather low, and Rider can only ride several animals or vehicles with slightly above average skill, he gained 2 plus modifier so that he can use his mount Noble Phantasm.

    Magic Resistance : E
    A skill that grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Rider cannot cancel spells, but magic damage is reduced somewhat. Although he is a modern Heroic Spirit, Rider has some degree of magic resistance due to the reverence of the people of Indonesia towards him.


    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Presidential Privilege : A
    A skill that's similar to a limited version of "Imperial Privilege", denoting one's authority and leadership as a President of a nation. At this rank, skills such as "Charisma", "Golden Rule", "Military Tactics" and other similar skills that are within the (limited) authority of a president can be displayed at C rank, though his Charisma is B-ranked. As the first president of Indonesia that has once been titled "President for Life" and has reigned for 22 years, Rider possesses a high-rank of this skill.


    Incitement : A
    A Skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack. Rider's numerous motivational and nation-rallying speeches that he conducted as the president and war leader of Indonesia has manifested as this skill at A rank.


    Librarian of Stored Knowledge : C
    A skill that denotes the ability that makes it possible for a clear recall of knowledge from memory with a successful Luck Check, even if the information perceived in the past was not consciously acknowledged at the time. Thanks to Rider's precocious mind and photographic memory, he is capable of remembering a wide range of knowledge. He was also fluent in several languages, Indonesian, English, Japanese, Arabic, German, French, Balinese, Sundanese, Javanese, Dutch and possibly some other languages.


    Noble Phantasm

    NOBLE PHANTASMS
    Garuda Pancasila
    The Five Basic Principles
    Rank : A++
    Type : Varies


    O, Garuda Pancasila
    I am your supporter
    A patriot of Proclamation
    I am willing to sacrifice myself for you

    Pancasila the basis of the land
    The people right and prospering
    My nation's character
    Let us go forth
    Let us go forth
    Let us go forth


    A Noble Phantasm that manifested as the sublimation of the 5 basic foundational principles of
    Republic Indonesia, the Pancasila, which was composed by Rider himself as the representation of the common goal and principles of all Indonesian peoples. It is composed of five principles which Indonesian contends are inseparable and interrelated:

    -- A divinity that is an ultimate unity
    -- A just and civilized humanity
    -- Unity of Indonesia
    -- Democracy guided by inner wisdom and representative consensus-building
    -- Social justice for all Indonesians

    As a Noble Phantasm, these principles manifested in the form of a Phantasmal Beast, the Garuda Pancasila, the national symbol of Indonesia that symbolize this national ideology. Unlike the Phantasmal Beast that served as the mount of Vishnu, this version of Garuda Pancasila is a different entity. It is a phantasmal beast born from the foundational ideal of all Indonesian people, the Pancasila, and thus, it has 5 powers based on Pancasila itself.





    Its appearance is similar as depicted in the national symbol of Indonesia, a gigantic golden Javan hawk-eagle, with a heraldic shield on its chest, symbolize the five silas, or principles. The eagle's claw grips a scroll that is inscribed with the text "BHINNEKA TUNGGAL IKA" which means "Unity in Diversity". The eagle also has another symbolistic appearance in the number of its feathers:
    The number of feathers on each wing totals 17
    The number of feathers on the tail totals 8
    The number of feathers below the shield or base of tail totals 19
    The number of feathers on the neck totals 45
    These numbers correspond the 17/8/1945, which is the date of Indonesian Independence Day (which is the day I'm writing this).


    The shield in the chest of the Garuda, aside from symbolizing Pancasila, also serves as the power source of this Noble Phantasm. The badge or symbol inscribed on the shield differs according to the situation, each represents the different 'sila' or 'principle' that serves as the power for this Noble Phantasm. The Garuda can change its "form" depending on the symbol on its chest's heraldic shield.


    Ketuhanan Yang Maha Esa
    Worship Of One Supreme Divinity
    Type : Anti-Unit (Self)





    The star symbol, which represents the first principle: "Belief in One Supreme God". When the shield assumes the form of this symbol, the Garuda will change its attribute and characteristic into a Divine Beast. In this form, the Garuda cannot be harmed by Servants or Weapons with the attribute from the 5 officially acknowledge religions in Indonesia: Islam, Christianity, Hinduism, Buddhism, and Confucianism. They can still damage the Garuda, but their attacks will be just 1/5 of the initial damage. In this form, the Garuda also receive bonus damage against Servants with low religious belief.


    Kemanusiaan Yang Adil
    Lawful Justice Of Civilization
    Type : Anti-Unit





    The chain symbol, which represents the second principle: "Just and Civilized Humanity". Symbolizing the law and justice system of the nation. When the Garuda assumes this form, its golden feathers will turn darker, it's claw will become sharper and longer and two gigantic spiked chains will appear on each of its wings, representing the aspect of Indonesian law. The chain has a special magical property similar to a certain Golden King's chain, but instead of getting more powerful on Servants with Divinity, this chain has a greater effect on those with "Chaotic" or "Corrupt" alignment or attribute, and unlike the Chain of Heaven, there's only a pair of this chain.


    Persatuan Indonesia
    Unity Through Diversity
    Type : Anti-Army





    The Banyan (beringin) tree symbol, which represents the third principle: "Unity of Indonesia". Indonesia is the 4th most populous country in the world, with various religion, cultures, ethics, and languages. Normally it would be impossible to unify such varying group of peoples as a United Nation, but thanks to this principle, Indonesia manages to do it. When the Garuda assumes this form, it will create a "nest" in the form of a gigantic banyan tree, which is known for having expansive above-ground roots and branches, as an ideal conceived by Rider, representing Republic Indonesia as a single country with many far-flung cultural roots. As long as Garuda still nested in the tree, Rider can control and manipulate the gigantic aerial roots of the tree to attack the enemies with its sheer mass and quantity.


    Kerakyatan Terpimpin
    Democracy Under One Leader
    Type : Anti-Unit





    The bull symbol, which represents the fourth principle: "Guided Democracy". This is because Indonesians saw bulls as a highly social animal that always lives in a large group. When the Garuda assumes this form, the eagle will become smaller, into the size of an actual eagle, but at the same time, it will greatly multiply into a formation of hundreds of eagles, each is controlled by one consciousness, symbolizing the concept of "Guided Democracy". With its sheer numbers, it is capable of overwhelming enemies relentlessly from the sky like a rain of swords.


    Keadilan Sosial
    Inexhaustable Prosperity
    Type : Anti-Banquet





    The rice and cotton symbol, which represents the fifth principle: "Social Justice". The rice and cotton represent sustenance and livelihood, and also represents the rich natural resources of Indonesia. When the Garuda assumes this form, it will be able to produce an infinite amount of eggs, which can be used as an unlimited supply of food.



    Personality

    PERSONALITY
    Likes : Unity, socialism, independence, woman.
    Dislikes : Feudalism.
    Talents : Speech, engineering.
    Natural Enemy : Soeharto
    Catalyst : His kopiah
    Although in front of peoples he appears to be a charismatic and noble leader, Rider is actually a flirty, flamboyant and somewhat eccentric man. In his life, he had married to 9 times and had affairs with many other women. However, his dedication and determination to realize the hundred of years struggle of national independence is also genuine.


    Due to his precocious mind and photographic memory, his way of thinking is a bit different from other people. But despite his intelligence, he is really bad at managing economy, he thinks that everyone should fulfill their own needs with their own effort, not with help or interference from other people, a fatal thinking that would eventually lead to his downfall.


    He is constantly haunted by the thought of the mass killing in 1965-1966, a series of massacres of alleged communist, Chinese, aristocrats, and foreigners, that takes place across the nation, it is considered to be the worst massacre in Indonesian history. His wish for the grail is to remove these massacres from history.



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    I was thinking to make a Caster!Soekarno, but then this idea struck me...
    Please forgive this ridiculous and wanked up sheet...


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    Quote Originally Posted by Rafflesiac View Post
    I hoped they wouldn't feature because not once have I liked Fate's take on ANCIENT ALIENS. It's stupid for beings from humanity's myth and history to be the result of ANCIENT ALIENS all along, even insulting to an extent. Velbers are bad, Alien Trees are bad, Foreigners are bad, stick with humans relating to humans please Nasu.
    Quote Originally Posted by TheSeaDragon View Post
    Nasu was always a pen name. It was Georgio Tsoukalos all along

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    Quote Originally Posted by MehKitteh View Post
    Please someone remind me to finish my damned Kusuma Bangsa sheet.
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    "An eye for an eye, a tooth for a tooth, and evil for evil. That is the law of this world."

    Servant Ruler:

    Appearance:

    Official art from Eiyuu Senki

    True Name: Hammurabi "King of Laws"

    Alignment: Lawful Neutral

    Alternate Classes: Lancer, Caster

    Strength- C
    Agility- C
    Endurance- D
    Mana- B
    Luck- A
    NP- B++

    Personality
    A strict and impartial woman, devoting herself to the absolute authority of the law. In her mind those who reject the law are no different then wild beasts in need of discipline. Though she appears indifferent to everyone and everything save an abstract sense of Law, Ruler is in fact a deeply compassionate person. She loves humanity, holding their prosperity and happiness as her highest goal. She believes humans to flourish under Law, and deems chaos anathema to civilization itself.

    Even as she appears ruthless in enforcing the law, there is no sadism in Ruler's actions. She does not enjoy punishing people, but knows that the law would have no meaning if one could break it without fear of consequence. However, Ruler is overly close-minded and severe in her view of the law, refusing to grant any leniency to an offender based on their personality and circumstance. If someone stole to support their starving family then Ruler would judge them just as harshly as a rich man who stole merely for fun.

    Likes: the Law, humanity
    Dislikes: lawbreakers, the strong oppressing the weak
    Talent: eye for an eye justice
    Natural Enemy: Gilgamesh


    Class Skills:

    God's Resolution- N/A
    The privilege of the Ruler presiding over the Holy Grail War. Each Ruler is normally granted two Command Seals for every Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War. Due to being overwritten by her Personal Skill- Architect Of Divine Laws, the God's Resolution of the Ruler Class has been sealed.

    True Name Discernment- C+
    Status information such as true name, Skills and parameters are instantly revealed to Ruler upon encountering a fellow Servant. At this rank, Ruler can instantly grasp all relevant information on a Heroic Spirit with a successful Luck check. In the case where the Servant is one with anecdotes of lawbreaking, then Ruler can bypass the need for a Luck check and glean their identity directly, for not even the most furtive criminal can escape her prying eyes.

    Magic Resistance- A
    Confers protection against magical effects. All spells below A-rank are nullified, making the Servant virtually untouchable to modern Magi. With this level of defense against sorcery, it would scarcely be an exaggeration to call the Servant a "Magus Killer". The naturally high resistance of her Class, combined with the fact that sorcery was amongst the evils forbidden in her Code of Hammurabi, has endowed Ruler with the greatest rank in this Skill.


    Personal Skills:

    Architect Of Divine Laws- A+++
    A Skill for those famous for bringing laws to humankind. As Ruler is widely considered the first in history to establish a truly universal code of law (though this is not in fact true), she wields an absolutely peerless rank in this Skill. Chosen by the gods Shamash and Marduk to bring knowledge of the laws down to humanity, Ruler's precepts and authority are affirmed both by the collective will of all mankind (Alaya) as well as the World itself.

    Every law Ruler creates is enforced as divine authority, bringing drastic consequences to those foolish enough to defy it. The punishment for breaking a given law is entirely up to Ruler's discretion, ranging from temporary rank downs to parameters to sealing Noble Phantasms or even death. However, the law only holds power so long as the individual in question is aware that it exists and of the consequences for violating it- as a law known by no one is surely no law at all. The law must also be "fair"- meaning that it applies equally to all participants in the Holy Grail War (including Ruler herself) and does not unfairly advantage one party over any other.

    It is unknown if the latter condition is a true restriction on this Skill or a self-imposed limit born from Ruler's impartiality as a judge, but seeing as it is Ruler's very mentality as a divine lawgiver which has granted her this Skill in the first place the difference between those two things might be viewed as hair-splitting.

    The penalties imposed by this Skill are unavoidable against those of a Lawful alignment, while Chaotic aligned individuals will be granted a chance of evasion through a successful Luck check. Ruler's laws hold no power whatsoever over beings that exist conceptually apart from human law and morality, such as monsters and true gods.

    Charisma- B
    The ability to inspire others, and lead armies. At this rank, one's charisma is sufficient to lead an entire country. Ruler was a famous king of ancient Babylon, whose fair and just rule and devotion to the prosperity of her kingdom brought the unquestioned adoration of her subjects. As the so-called "King of Laws", a plus correction is applied to this Skill while leading those of a Lawful alignment- for anyone who swears fealty to the law will naturally come to see Ruler as an absolute authority. On the other hand, a minus modifier is dealt with regards to Chaotic aligned individuals, who instinctively balk at Ruler's authority.

    Human Observation- C
    The talent to observe and understand people. At higher ranks, it is not mere observation but hypothesizing the entire life and preferences of a given individual. An ability furnished to Ruler by her current role as a judge of humanity; she is naturally able to see into the hearts of humans and glean their deepest desires. Any crimes that they have committed, even those that lurk only within the target's heart, will certainly be known before Ruler's prying gaze.


    Noble Phantasm
    Code Of Hammurabi
    Heavenly Tablet Of The First Laws


    Rank: B++

    Type: Anti-Unit, Anti-Lawbreaker

    A Noble Phantasm taking the form of the renowned code of laws that Ruler pioneered. Though not in fact the first such code in history (that honor belongs to Ruler's predecessor Ur-Nammu), it is undoubtedly the most famous. Long after her own tablet faded to dust and the golden spires of Babylon became naught but a distant memory, the laws Ruler established continued to exert enormous influence on later societies- even thought by some as a conceptual precursor to the Ten Commandments of Moses.

    Ruler carries this code with her in the form of a large obsidian tablet, her many laws etched all along the surface in exquisite Cuneiform script. Although unreasonably heavy for an ordinary human to bear, Ruler's privilege as a divine lawgiver allows her to carry it as if it were weightless.

    By reciting this Noble Phantasm's true name alongside a mantra proclaiming her authority as a heavenly annointed lawgiver, Ruler calls forth chains of glowing green script that extend from the tablet's surface to reach and bind her foes. Rather then mere physical restraints, these chains are conceptual constructs epitomizing the reign of law. The number of chains summoned increases with each law the target violated, reaching up to a total of 282 chains to match the 282 laws Ruler invented.

    Against those who defied only a few of Ruler's precepts, the amount of chains would be trivial for most Servants to evade or destroy. However, if the target broke a great number of laws then this Noble Phantasm becomes far more dangerous, with even the swiftest Servants having trouble escaping the sheer quantity of chains. The strength of these chains further scales with the opponent's faith in the rule of law, being nearly unbreakable against Lawful aligned enemies but easily shattered by those of the Chaotic alignment, who lived their lives in rejection of the law's authority. As law is a tool which exists to bind [humans] this Noble Phantasm is also ineffective against wild beasts, gods, mindless berserkers, eldritch horrors and all those who for whatever reason fall outside the boundaries of human law.

    Once the opponent is full ensnared by these chains, Ruler may deal upon them a judgement of her own choosing. Should she deign to execute them, her tablet of laws will transform into a fitting weapon to carry out her sentencing- a gigantic obsidian spear, the inscriptions along its surface blazing with emerald fire. Ruler then hurls the spear at her entrapped foe, piercing their heart. As the supreme lawgiver, Ruler's judgement is already tantamount to a declaration of death. Should she deem it so, the opponent's demise is decreed by the World itself as an unavoidable mandate, inflicting a certain kill that ignores every kind of defense.

    This attack is known as
    Lex Talionis
    Judgement Of The Almighty King
    , and is undoubtedly the strongest form of Ruler's Noble Phantasm.

    Although incredibly powerful, this technique is only guaranteed unconditional success if the opponent has already been subdued. Should the target manage to break free after it activates but before the strike itself connects, then it shall merely be treated as an ordinary attack from a rank B Noble Phantasm.

    Incantation to invoke this Noble Phantasm
    "When the lofty Anu, King of the Annunaki and Bel, Lord of Heaven and Earth, he who determines the destiny of the land, committed the rule of all mankind to Marduk, when they pronounced the lofty name of Babylon, when they made it famous among the quarters of the world and in its midst established an everlasting kingdom whose foundations were firm as heaven and earth – at that time Anu and Bel called me, Hammurabi, the exalted prince, the worshipper of the gods, to cause justice to prevail in the land, to destroy the wicked and the evil, to prevent the strong from oppressing the weak, to enlighten the land and to further the welfare of the people. Hammurabi, the governor named by Bel, am I, who brought about plenty and abundance!"
    Last edited by RoydGolden; January 10th, 2018 at 05:40 PM. Reason: Added chant for NP

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