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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    I agree wiith her ,i mean Philosophic/Inventors as Caster yes but this ,no offense this is a Idea for the waste paper bin.He wouldnt even hit the minimal definition to be seen as Hero.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    I agree wiith her ,i mean Philosophic/Inventors as Caster yes but this ,no offense this is a Idea for the waste paper bin.He wouldnt even hit the minimal definition to be seen as Hero.
    But this thread has Jimi Hendrix too...
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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    But this thread has Jimi Hendrix too...
    Oh i didnt knew that ,sorry ! it was just my own oppinion about what can be stretched to be a caster.

    One Question on all:when you could summon seven servant each one per class as your Faction regardless "official" or fanmade who would it be?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    Oh i didnt knew that ,sorry ! it was just my own oppinion about what can be stretched to be a caster.
    Don't worry, it's fine. The selection method for Heroic Spirits is weird and some guys that should be Servants, like Jason and Michelangelo IIRC, can't be summoned, so I wouldn't be surprised if they added people that don't really hit the requirements as Servants.

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    Assassin of the Republic
    "After all, if they can do it, why not me?”


    Servant Class:
    Assassin
    Alternate Classes: Saber, Rider
    True Name: Pompey the Great, the Hero of the Republic
    Alignment: True Neutral
    Region: Europe (1st century BC) - Historical Fact
    Armament: Sword

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: D
    AGI: C
    MGI: D
    LCK: B+
    NP: B

    Skills
    Class Skills

    Presence Concealment - Rank D: Hide's one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying.

    Personal Skills

    Acclaimed Privilege - Rank A+: A skill similar in effect to ‘Imperial Privilege’. Due to the self-aggrandisement of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time. Or so it would seem.
    In effect, relevant Skills can be acquired at Rank B for a short period of time, but there is a small chance of the Skill failing to function. The chance of failure starts small, but rises the more his enemy gets to know and understand Pompey’s abilities.
    The relevant skills are ‘Charisma’, ‘Golden Rule’, ‘Clairvoyance’, ‘Disengage’, swordsmanship and others.

    Incitement - Rank A: A Skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack.

    Military Tactics - Rank D++:Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.
    Pompey’s greatest asset is his ability to capitalize on his opponent’s weaknesses and drive them into a corner. While he has no forces with which to utilize these kinds of tactics as a Servant, he can apply bits of his tactical aptitude to other situations.


    Noble Phantasms

    Furta Gloriae:
    Stolen Glory

    Anti-Legend, Rank C

    Through Pompey’s habit of stealing the glory of others, he can gain the usage of certain Skills and Noble Phantasms belonging to other Heroic Spirits. Furta Gloriae can only be used in relation to Skills and Noble Phantasms based on deeds.
    To use Furta Gloriae, Pompey must first witness the Skill or Noble Phantasm in question being used. Once this condition has been met, Pompey can then manifest the witnessed ability, but only against those who have not witnessed the true holder using said ability.
    No matter the effect Pompey seeks to replicate, its strength will be lessened to a great degree. In addition, repeated usage both increases the prana cost required to manifest Furta Gloriae’s stolen abilities as well as reduces the power of said abilities further.

    Vindicta ex Gravis:
    Vengeance from Beyond the Grave

    Anti-Unit, Rank A

    Based on the legend of Gaius Julius Caesar’s assassination occurring in front of a statue of Pompey himself, Pompey can strike at his killer from beyond the grave.
    Should Pompey perish during a Grail War, his killer will become marked by Vindicta ex Gravis’ effect. As long as the killer lives, his Luck will receive a severe rank-down. The effect is magnified in life-or-death situations.
    In addition to the above, Pompey himself can strike at his killer once. This one attack appears as if from nowhere, and when properly used should seal the target’s death. Once the attack is dealt, the effects of Vindicta ex Gravis vanish, along with any remnants of Pompey.


    Description
    Likes: Himself, boasting
    Dislikes: Barbarians, young people on the rise
    Talents: Foul play, brokering alliances
    Natural Enemy: Gaius Julius Caesar, Quintus Sertorius, Alexander the Great

    Pompey manifests in a youthful aspect as a handsome young man, befitting his personal philosophy. More people worship the rising sun than the setting sun, after all. His eyes and hair are both brown, with his wavy hair having small amounts of red dye worked in.
    Bedecked in gleaming armor and wearing a great crimson mantle, ragged with age but well cared for. It is said that the mantle once belonged to Alexander the Great. Whether or not this rumor is true, Pompey is very protective of it. His appearance could be likened to that of a young, conquering general or perhaps that of a future emperor.
    He arms himself only with a gladius, the weapon of a humble legionnaire. The weapon itself is ostentatious, though, with a gilded, bejeweled hilt.

    Pompey is a cunning, ambitious man by nature, but conducts himself nobly. On the surface he acts in a magnanimous, if pompous fashion and speaks politely, choosing his words with care. However, clear cynicism, unbefitting his youthful appearance, shines through.
    In truth, however, Pompey will do whatever he sees as necessary, acting with honour only to break his conduct at a moment when it would give him an advantage. He prefers not to fight at all if he can help it, and would much rather manipulate others to do things for him. Finding common enemies to ally against is a favorite tactic of his. Thanks to his way of thinking, Pompey is very hard to betray.
    He is supremely confident in his own capabilities, but is willing to acknowledge an opponent as superior to himself. Naturally, in the case of such an acknowledgment, he would immediately turn to whatever foul methods he has in his arsenal. All is forgiven to the victorious, after all.
    Pompey has a special hatred for those he deems as ‘upstarts’, young people whose stars are on the rise. Even having a history of that sort is enough to earn his ire. The full brunt of his fury, however, is reserved to Gaius Julius Caesar, the merest mention of whom is enough to bring Pompey to a frothing rage. An exception to all of this his great idol, Alexander the Great, who he even styled his title after. If faced with Alexander, Pompey would be brought to his knees before the great conqueror. Perhaps Pompey would also trouble him with an autograph?
    As for his relationship with a Master, Pompey expects to be treated with respect worthy of his ego. He won’t mistreat his Master, but regards them as ultimately subservient to his glory. A Master embodying some of his own qualities, however, might be regarded as an equal. Or a threat.


    Lore
    Awarded the title of “Hero of the Republic” for his resistance to Gaius Julius Caesar, who brought the Republic of Rome to an end. Pompey is (according to himself, anyway) the greatest rival of Caesar, but ironically their ambitions were very similar.
    Enjoying a meteoric rise in social status in his early life, Pompey eventually grew to be a lauded general, gaining the credit for putting down Spartacus’ rebellion, leading successful campaigns against pirates as well as bringing Judea under Roman rule.
    Later in life, he and Caesar became part of the First Triumvirate, and eventually fought one another in a civil war. The civil war ended with Pompey’s assassination.


    Notes
    I hope this one flashy enough to get people's attention.
    I'd imagine him Pompey looking like an idealized version of Caesar. Since Pompey in his later life is depicted as fat, it might’ve been one final act of vengeance against his hated rival to switch their appearances.

    Revised as a splendid Shinji- I mean Assassin (the similarities were pointed out elsewhere).


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    This feels much more like an Assassin Pompey sheet than a Rider. And Furta Gloriae is just a knockoff of Reincarnation Pandora.
    The skills are fine, it's really only the NPs that kind of bug me and don't seem to mesh.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    This feels much more like an Assassin Pompey sheet than a Rider. And Furta Gloriae is just a knockoff of Reincarnation Pandora.
    Not really. His doesn't keep the target from using the original, for one thing. You're right though that he does seem more like an Assassin then a Rider.

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    So y'all know, I just gave Teucer a second NP; a lesser version of Rho Aias that represents how he'd often hide behind his brother's shield in battle. Eat your heart out, EMIYA!

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    "Hm? Oh, my apologies, Master. Your eyes say you were expecting someone else."




    Class
    : Caster

    True Name: Lisa del Giocondo

    Alignment: Neutral Good


    Parameters:

    Strength: E
    Endurance: E
    Agility: C
    Magic: B+
    Luck: E
    Noble Phantasm: D


    Skills
    Class Skills

    Territory Creation: E
    The Skill to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana.
    Because she's not a proper magus, it goes without saying that her rank in this skill is nearly nonexistent. Still, if she goes through the motions, any household chore can be finished in record time.

    Item Construction: -
    The Skill to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use.
    Caster tried knitting once and was awful at it. Perhaps she can patch up the holes in someone's clothes.

    Personal Skills

    Golden Rule (Body): B+
    A Skill that denotes the possession of a natural and perfect goddess-like body, preserving beauty. Unlike the Natural Body Skill whose body shape does not change despite how much caloric intake was taken, there is no effect on the Skill owner's Strength parameter.
    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. If Caster's appearance were to be perfectly reconstructed or improved upon, even by a genius, something immaterial would surely be missing. After all, "the smile he loved was the only one in his heart, so he couldn't acknowledge other expressions even until the end".

    Affections of the Prodigy: D
    A Skill that denotes one being loved by a person whose talent surpasses the gods.
    It appears to be advice whispered from above by a supposedly omnipotent Heroic Spirit. If Caster listens closely, that person will relay whatever knowledge she needs, from complex spell formulas to tips for maintaining good health and shiny skin.


    Noble Phantasm
    Everpresent Feeling
    Sfumato Sorriso

    Rank: D
    Type: Anti-Unit

    The first impression is the most important. When a new person is encountered without prior knowledge, they are painted onto a fresh canvas in the mind. This image is not eternal, but it is brighter and more enduring than any which might come after. Be it true or false, it is wholeheartedly accepted.

    Because a certain impression of Caster is so prominent into the public eye, her image is engraved into the unconsciousness of humanity. It is nearly impossible for a first impression to occur, even with a fellow Servant, because she is someone who, on sight, will immediately be recognized. That lingering impression of a placid, smiling woman does not fade, and instead covers up reality. No matter what Caster does, she will only be perceived in that singular way, as still and perfect as a painting.

    For someone to see her as she truly is would take a miracle.

    Such is her curse, born not from hate but from adoring love.


    Description
    A below-third-rate Heroic Spirit that would have been better off staying away from any battles. Why was she summoned?

    Caster declines to answer.

    "Master, it's the height of rudeness to intrude upon the privacy of a married woman. This is something I decided on myself. Thanks to that overzealous perfectionist, there's a misunderstanding that ought to be corrected."

    How does she plan on winning, then?

    Her dazzling smile surfaces once more, as if she is pleased by the question.

    "Now look, it’s because at any rate, I am ‘beautiful’, right?"


    Lore
    Lisa del Giocondo, also known as Lisa Gherardini, Lisa di Antonio Maria Gherardini and Mona Lisa, was a member of the Gherardini family of Florence and Tuscany in Italy. Her name was given to Mona Lisa, her portrait commissioned by her husband and painted by Leonardo da Vinci during the Italian Renaissance.

    Little is known about Lisa's life. Born in Florence and married in her teens to a cloth and silk merchant who later became a local official, she was a mother to five children and led what is thought to have been a comfortable and ordinary middle-class life. Lisa outlived her husband, who was considerably her senior.

    Centuries after Lisa's death, Mona Lisa became the world's most famous painting and took on a life separate from Lisa, the woman. Speculation by scholars and hobbyists made the work of art a globally recognized icon and an object of commercialization. In 2005, Lisa was definitively identified as the model for the Mona Lisa.


    Relationships
    Stheno/Euryale/Medusa:
    "Aren't you just adorable! Please forgive the familiarity, but you so resemble of one of my daughters..."

    Medea:
    "Isn't she amazing, Master? So strong and intelligent... I'm sure her life was a grand adventure. Eh? It wasn't?"

    Hokusai:
    "A portrait? Of me? W-well I... oh, would you look at the time! So sorry, have to be going! Some other year, perhaps!"

    Leonardo da Vinci:
    "You're that artist my husband commissioned, right? Do excuse me, but I think mathematics suits you better. Really, I don't get what people see in that painting..."


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    da vinci chan wore it better

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    Her NP looks more like a skill, but I guess it's okay since she's a third-rate Servant
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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    This feels much more like an Assassin Pompey sheet than a Rider. And Furta Gloriae is just a knockoff of Reincarnation Pandora.
    The skills are fine, it's really only the NPs that kind of bug me and don't seem to mesh.
    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Not really. His doesn't keep the target from using the original, for one thing. You're right though that he does seem more like an Assassin then a Rider.
    The resemblance to Reincarnation Pandora did cross my mind. Still, Pompey did have a reputation for stealing the credit for the deeds of others, so I'd say there's enough basis for some sort of theft-based NP.
    As for his class, I had considered Assassin, but didn't figure he qualified based on his deeds (he did use assassinations but never really got his hands dirty personally AFAIK). As for why he's Rider, it might be due to my personal impression of most generals, commanders etc. qualifying for the class.

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    AFAIK Cleopatra and Wu Zetian didn't kill with their own hands, but still qualify as Assassins, so you could have made him an Assassin as well
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    True enough. I'd argue that Cleo did kill herself, though. Not that that's much of a qualification for an Assassin either...

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    Zetian ordered the assassination and torture of her enemies. With Cleo's suicide she ended the line of pharoah's, 'assassinating' the lineage if you will. If you think about it, Assassin is actually Cleo's most fitting class.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    True enough. I'd argue that Cleo did kill herself, though. Not that that's much of a qualification for an Assassin either...
    Or the Assasin qualification of Mata Hari and Sanson or even Herakless is said to be summoneed as Assassin in/under the Fuyuki-system which capability set would he actually have as Assasin?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Zetian ordered the assassination and torture of her enemies. With Cleo's suicide she ended the line of pharoah's, 'assassinating' the lineage if you will. If you think about it, Assassin is actually Cleo's most fitting class.
    My point is that, although they're involved with murder, they didn't grab a knife and kill others directly
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    Then again, I suppose spies, thieves and other stealthy types also qualify for Assassin. Sometimes by simple virtue of not really qualifying for anything else.

    Edit: anyways, Pompey's been revised as an Assassin now.
    Last edited by Shiki-pon; March 4th, 2018 at 12:38 PM.

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    You didn't need to change his class if you saw him fine as a Rider. It's your sheet after all.
    Anyways, I think you should put Riding on Personal skills now, since it's not granted by the Assassin class, and change the class on the title to Assassin
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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    You didn't need to change his class if you saw him fine as a Rider. It's your sheet after all.
    Anyways, I think you should put Riding on Personal skills now, since it's not granted by the Assassin class, and change the class on the title to Assassin
    I feel that Assassin fits him better anyway. I just hadn't considered the class qualifiers carefully enough.

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