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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    Best alternative is Loki's tricky illusions blurs his form and movement to the point it looks like he's teleporting.
    No i meant a real Teleportation but i dont think of that Teleportation is limited to second Magic because we dont know the specific chaacteristics of Age of Gods Magic so i think as Old Deity that has created alongside with Odin and Hönir the "Rune-system" Futhark. Aswell as his famous Skinwalker Attributes.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    No i meant a real Teleportation but i dont think of that Teleportation is limited to second Magic because we dont know the specific chaacteristics of Age of Gods Magic so i think as Old Deity that has created alongside with Odin and Hönir the "Rune-system" Futhark. Aswell as his famous Skinwalker Attributes.
    Or you could just handwave it and say he's "merely" doing spatial displacement/substitution rather than "true" teleportation.

    Same logic as Medea's teleportation inside her temple, the way Servants appear when summoned by a Command Seal and the Ainsworth family's Flash Air technique.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Or you could just handwave it and say he's "merely" doing spatial displacement/substitution rather than "true" teleportation.

    Same logic as Medea's teleportation inside her temple, the way Servants appear when summoned by a Command Seal and the Ainsworth family's Flash Air technique.
    That would be quite that i meant then he teleport by mark a certain Location and is able through either beforehanddrawn runes or through a chant be able to create a Gate towards the Point.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    That would be quite that i meant then he teleport by mark a certain Location and is able through either beforehanddrawn runes or through a chant be able to create a Gate towards the Point.
    Sounds like the same principle as Ishtar's warp gate, so I'd say that's fine.

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    Fake Rider


    Rider
    Identity: Vajrapāṇi
    Also known as: Vajrasattva, Mahāsthāmaprāpta
    Height: 253 cm
    Weight: 311 kg
    Alignment: Lawful Neutral
    Attribute: Sky
    Origin: Mahāyāna Buddhism, India
    Armament: Vajra, lasso
    Natural enemy: Sesshōin Kiara

    Parameters:
    Strength: A
    Endurance: A+
    Agility: B
    Luck: C
    Mana: A
    NP: B++

    Background
    One of Shakyamuni’s three protector deities. While Mañjuśrī represents the wisdom of the Buddha and Avalokiteśvara is a manifestation of his compassion, Vajrapāṇi embodies the power of the Enlightened One and of the five tathāgatas. Despite his early appearance in Mahāyāna Buddhism, where he acts as a Bodhisattva and a Dharmapāla, Vajrapāṇi’s figure is a strange one in Buddhism, showing a wrathful and aggressive aspect that contrasts with the serenity of other Bodhisattvas.

    Having accompanied Shakyamuni since his birth, Vajrapāṇi assisted him as a guardian that protected him from all harm. He helped him escape from palace when he gave up his status as a prince, and escorted him when he returned to his hometown, taking the form of a troop of Devas. When a group of Nāgas desired to attend the sermons of the Buddha, Vajrapāṇi distracted them by turning into a bird, so that they weren’t attacked by their enemies, the Garudas.

    When the prince Ambattha refused twice to answer Shakyamuni’s questions, thinking that he was from a low caste, Vajrapāṇi appeared ready to crush his head, as it was said that the heads of those who refuse to answer the questions of an enlightened one three times will explode in seven pieces. Although he never managed to accomplish such a thing, the sole presence of the angry-faced spirit frightened Ambattha and made him join Buddhism.

    Vajrapāṇi, as a Bodhisattva, never in his life held a regret. Representing one of the virtues of the Buddha, he firmly followed the beliefs of the man he protected. Despite that, even someone like him acted improperly, even if it was only once. When Shakyamuni attained Mokṣa and was freed from the cycle of life and death, Vajrapāṇi lamented the going of the person at whose side he had been his entire life. Unable to stand the idea of what he could truly call a friend leaving, he dropped his weapon and pathetically rolled over the ground while crying.

    The reason for Vajrapāṇi’s unusual appearance is his origins. Depicted with a vajra in his hand, as his name indicates, it’s believed that he was based on the Hindu god Indra, known as Śakra in Buddhism. The most assumed theory is that the figure of the Greek hero Heracles reached India through the Silk Road and thence was transformed into Vajrapāṇi. His muscular build and description as a force impossible to vanquish further consolidate this last theory. Mostly in Japan, Vajrapāṇi is associated with the protective Acala, also known as Fudō Myōō (The Immovable), and at the same time, with the bulky guardians known as the Niō.


    Personality
    Being a Bodhisattva, Vajrapāṇi is a man whose mind is peaceful, and therefore doesn’t resort to violence unless it’s completely necessary, unlike what his appearance suggests. What he actually is, is an almost Spartan instructor that doesn’t tolerate cheating and failure. Putting a face apparently filled with wrath, his presence alone inspires fear. Despite that, Vajrapāṇi’s intentions aren’t evil. By scaring others, he wants them to hold tight to their training and to avoid slacking. The path to Bodhi is arduous, and requires severe discipline, he believes.

    Treatment with the Master: Since his Master has requested his help, Vajrapāṇi assumes that they want to be instructed into Buddhism. Therefore, he takes the role of a strict teacher that trains them inflexibly, without accepting failures and distractions. No matter if the Master is actually willing to walk the path to enlightenment, or if they’re an insane psychopath that doesn’t believe in any form of salvation, Vajrapāṇi will never give up and will persist in his teachings, since Bodhi is available to everyone. Unfortunately for his Master, they will be forcibly moved to square one if they commit even the slightest mistake.

    Since one of his Noble Phantasms makes him be always close to his Master, Vajrapāṇi will make sure to constantly supervise their training. That’s kinda scary…

    Likes: “Newcomers are always welcome to Buddhism. Although slowly, the ideal of the Tathāgata must become real.”

    Dislikes:
    “There are no easy ways to attain Bodhi! If you think there are, you must restart from zero!”

    Wish for the Grail:
    “A true Bodhisattva is free from desires! Don’t dare asking me if I want to wish for anything!”


    Skills
    Class skills
    Magic Resistance A
    Cancels spells with a rank of A or lower. Practically untouchable by modern mages, and even by large scale spells from the Age of Gods.

    Riding –
    Currently lost due to one of Vajrapāṇi’s Noble Phantasms.

    Personal skills
    Divinity A
    Measures status as a Divine Spirit, and allows to break through guards like Protection of the Faith or Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig. Depicted either as a bodhisattva or as an avatar of Indra, Vajrapāṇi having a high rank of divinity is out of the question.

    Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig C++
    Renders protection to one who has reached the World’s truth or Humanity’s answer. A protection against purging that marks the Servant as a protector of the world.
    Reduces damage dealt through any kind of attack, let it be physical, conceptual, or even interdimensional by a 33%. Mental interference has the same percentage of probability of being shut off. Through the effects of his Noble Phantasm, it’s possible for Vajrapāṇi to bestow the effects of this skill to his Master.

    Niō Stance C
    A firm stance in which the user firmly plants their feet on the ground and acts as a meat shield, forcing the enemy to concentrate their attacks on them. Originally, this skill belongs to a different entity and would act as a Noble Phantasm. Vajrapāṇi doesn’t really have any connection with that figure, but due to the connotations of the skill’s name, he’s able to obtain it, although severely degraded.

    Shapeshift A
    The ability to change forms and borrow bodies. A power of vampires, as well as of spirits of tanukis and foxes, like Tamamo no Mae. Vajrapāṇi is a skilled shapeshifter, able to assume forms that not only are powerful, like a Garuda, but also complex, like a troop of Devas.


    Noble Phantasm

    Jñānavajra
    Adamantine consciousness pounder

    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B+
    Description:

    “You lack training! Receive your punishment and start from zero!”

    The weapon that gives Vajrapāṇi his name that means “with Vajra in his hand”. The same kind of armament as the one held by
    Indra
    Śakra
    , Vajra symbolizes Jñāna, the awareness of the true and the false, of knowledge and ignorance, opposed to Vijñāna, the absolute self-knowledge that makes no distinctions, the awareness of everything becoming one.

    Being struck by Vajra means being struck not only by lightning, but also by Jñāna, resulting in the need of bypassing an enlightenment check. Failing the check results into losing the grasp of consciousness that Vijñāna is and embracing the analytical character of Jñāna, sealing Mystery, Divinity, and magecraft. In the case of monsters and the mindless Berserkers, the check will be certainly failed. Enlightened figures, like future Bodhisattvas or the Buddha himself, can easily pass it.

    ––––– That’s how it should be, but the effects are restricted since Vajrapāṇi isn’t currently summoned in the Lancer class. Instead of it, the failure of the enlightenment check translates into a larger damage output than usual.


    Achal – Chakravarti Bala
    Acala – Strength of the turner of the wheel

    Type: Anti-Army, Anti-Fortress
    Rank: B++
    Description:

    “O Tathāgata, although unworthy of it, I request you to lend me your power.”

    Vajrapāṇi is the power of Shakyamuni and the Tathāgatas, the immovable force that smites the enemies of the enlightened ones. Because of that, it’s possible for him to tap into a portion of the immense energy of the Buddha and attack with it. That portion of power is way larger than what other people that have been blessed by the Buddha can use, and while usually released in the form of a giant palm strike, Vajrapāṇi can liberate it as a punch, a kick, or even a body blow, without it affecting the total output.

    Despite its usefulness and relatively low mana cost, Vajrapāṇi prefers not to rely too much into this Noble Phantasm, as he – unlike a certain monk that has the bad habit of screwing everything up with her hunches – considers it something that only an inexpert rookie would do and an offense for the Buddha. If paired with Shakyamuni, it’s possible for Vajrapāṇi to use the energy stored with the Saver’s Noble Phantasm.


    Oṃ Vajrapāṇi Hūṃ
    Protection of the holder of Vajra

    Type: Support
    Rank: C
    Description:

    “You who summoned me have requested my assistance. Therefore, I shall stay at your side at all times.”

    A Noble Phantasm that represents how Vajrapāṇi was the guardian of Shakyamuni, and how he grants protection to those who request it. A continuously active support-class Noble Phantasm, the target of the support is Vajrapāṇi’s Master themselves. Replacing the Riding skill, Vajrapāṇi’s “mount” as a Rider is his own Master. He resides and is bound to the body of his Master, acting as a guardian spirit that protects them from all harm. Manifesting only when it’s necessary to attack or defend, Vajrapāṇi’s Master is granted constant protection. While this is useful to avoid situations in which the Master is left unprotected and the attention of the enemy can be drawn by making them think that the Master is actually without their Servant, it limits Vajrapāṇi’s own capabilities in battle.

    Since this Noble Phantasm forces Vajrapāṇi to stay close to his Master, he can’t go too far. Should he step outside an ideal range of 5 meters, Vajrapāṇi’s parameters will drop one rank for each additional meter. This puts him in a great disadvantage specially against Archers, who specialize in long-ranged attacks. The only way to avoid this handicap is by temporarily breaking the Noble Phantasm’s restrictions through the usage of a Command Spell.


    Relations
    Heracles: “The Greek hero that inspired the Acala is just a maddened pile of muscles?! What a disappointment!”

    Shakyamuni:
    “O Tathāgata, O World-honored One… For me to feel joy to see you once more… Someone who pathetically cried your going like me is unworthy…”

    Minamoto no Yorimitsu (Lancer):
    “Woman! If you truly are related to Śakra, show some modesty and cover your body!”

    Xuanzang Sanzang: “You still require more training, Jīn Chánzĭ! You use excessively the power of the Tathāgata, and your personality leaves much to be desired for a Bodhisattva!”

    Sesshōin Kiara: “This selfishness, this lust…! Everything about you is unacceptable! And you still dare calling yourself a Bodhisattva?! START FROM ZERO!!! RIGHT NOW!!!”

    Miyamoto Musashi: “Woman! Before reproducing such an image with the pressure of your swords, first perfect that sword technique!”

    Dharmapāla Girl Shuten-dōji: “A figure like you, a Dharmapāla? Refrain from saying such a blasphemous thing and start by changing that alignment of yours! We can talk about your garments and fondness for sake after that!”

    Tamamo no Mae: “This goofy woman is Vairocana, you say?! Impossible! I refuse to believe it!”


    Third fake Servant here. Thanks to Shiki for helping with this sheet. Also, I don't know for sure if I got my Buddhism terms right or not.

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    Vajrapāṇi: This is a pretty good sheet. For some reason, his tendency to tell people that they need more training is pretty funny. And his "start from zero" line makes sense when you consider that reincarnation is a central concept of Buddhism. He is quite literally telling them "I am going to kill you, so do a better job in your next life". In turn, his use of this in his interaction with Kiara basically means he's telling her to kill herself (though, she really should). And his third NP... So, he's basically a Stand, right? Does he also repeatedly punch things really hard and really fast while yelling "ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA" or "MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA"?



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    Vajrapāni: Best spiritual drill instructor.
    Stand Mode
    Om Vajrapani Hum
    is an especially amusing move in both a narrative and visual sense - - making it a really nasty surprise when fighting other Masters or just simply Rider protecting them. That said, is the Rider's low ranking in Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig due to his designation under a non-Saver class container? Just curious, 'tis all.

    It's going to be one of the few times I'm asking this, but as fellow Bodhisattvas and admirers of the Shakyamuni, how would Vajrapani regard Ksitigarbha?

    ---

    Additionally, being a protector of Dharma, wouldn't Vajrapani possess some sort of bonus when going against Chaotic-aligned targets?
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    This really has nothing to do with any new OC Servant and I'm not really working in one of them, but I'm completely baffled by the lack of mentions to Quijote in this entire franchise.

    This entire series is built on quixotic characters. Whenever I look back at it, is there a bigger character than Quijote that is still not in this series? And one that fits the theme of this franchise like Quijote does? Is Don Quijote simply not big in Japan?

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    Given the biggest Don Quijote-related thing in Japan is the discount chain, probably not as big
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    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    I'd say having a big store chain named after Quijote tells that it's pretty big.

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    Yeah, I should've inferred that. Now that you've mentioned it, it is rather peculiar that such an archetypal character didn't make way into a series seemingly bursting with ideals.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    And his "start from zero" line makes sense when you consider that reincarnation is a central concept of Buddhism. He is quite literally telling them "I am going to kill you, so do a better job in your next life". In turn, his use of this in his interaction with Kiara basically means he's telling her to kill herself (though, she really should).

    Hm, I hadn't really thought to make him mean "you're going to die" when he says "start from zero", except in Kiara's case, but well, now that you say it, it really works.


    Quote Originally Posted by Lambda-Nu View Post
    And his third NP... So, he's basically a Stand, right? Does he also repeatedly punch things really hard and really fast while yelling "ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA" or "MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA"?

    Yup. The idea was to make him like a Stand. Makes sense, considering that his relation with Buddha is "buff spirit that is a manifestation of your power and appears near you". His Stand cry is "HŪṂ!!!"

    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    That said, is the Rider's low ranking in Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig due to his designation under a non-Saver class container? Just curious, 'tis all.
    Yes, but I lowered the rank that much mostly because he'd be too tanky and he'd be almost invincible in a regular HGW otherwise.

    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    It's going to be one of the few times I'm asking this, but as fellow Bodhisattvas and admirers of the Shakyamuni, how would Vajrapani regard Ksitigarbha?
    He'd be very satisfied with her job and devotion, but would find it annoying that she cries so much.

    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    Additionally, being a protector of Dharma, wouldn't Vajrapani possess some sort of bonus when going against Chaotic-aligned targets?
    Good point there.

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    So, having lurked around for many years, I thought it was time to get an account and start posting. I wrote some Servant sheets over on Spacebattles, and this is the most recent one I've done, so its coming across first. On that note, it's nice to meet you all, hope I can stick around for many more years to come!

    Class: Lancer

    Alternate Classes: Rider, Berserker, Caster
    Master: Waver Velvet
    True Name: Ferenc Nádasdy II
    Titles: The Black Knight of Hungary, The Black Captain, The Black Bey, High Captain of Transdanubia, Piggy
    Sex: Male
    Origin: Hungary (16th Century)
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Attribute: Man
    Armament: Kazıklı Bey
    Manifestation Cost: Medium




    Likes: Elizabeth Bathory, Vlad III
    Dislikes: Rumours, Klara Bathory
    Talents: Warfare, Torture, Justice
    Natural Enemy: Klara Bathory
    Holy Grail Wish: To Survive His Illness

    Parameters:

    STR: C
    END: C
    AGI: B
    MAG: D
    LUK: E
    PHA: C


    Biography and Keywords
    Biography:

    Bond 1: Ferenc Nádasdy II.

    A Hungarian lord who married Elizabeth Bathory in the 16th Century –– when she was just fifteen years old. Famous for his achievements in the Hungarian-Ottoman wars during that time, he became known as the 'Black Bey' –– a nickname ironically alike the weapon possessed by his great grand-uncle-in-law, Vlad III.

    Kazıklı Bey.

    Bond 2: A naturally charismatic person who rose to great fame within Hungary, Ferenc's greatest exploits included wrestling control of cities like Esztergom, Waitzen, Visegrád, Székesfehérvár and Győr away from Ottoman territory with his armies.

    This led him not only gain the seat of trusted advisor for the Hungarian king and later, Holy Roman Emperor, Matthias II, but also the title of 'High Captain of Transdanubia' –– the greatest of honours for any Hungarian.

    By the middle years of his life, those achievements had risen him to fame as the third greatest baron of his era, enabling his family to become a significant influence over the country of Hungary. This would also see him gain further favours along with the respect of his fellow countrymen –– so much so, that when he married into the even more influential and wealthy Bathory family, his noble status rose much higher.

    Bond 3:Yet, countless legends which both tarnish and blacken the legacy of Ferenc suddenly sprung up over the centuries –– acting in a similar manner to those obtained by his wife's dearest ancestor. Within several of those tales for example, he was whispered to be just as cruel and as wicked as his wife was during her quest for eternal youth; punishing servants who were not up to his high standards or impaling those he had taken prisoner during battle.

    There was even one horrific rumour, in which, having found his fiancee-to-be impregnated by a mere peasant, he had the man castrated, then fed to wild hounds –– before taking the newborn babe to be murdered.

    –– however, that is not the complete truth.

    Bond 4: He wished only for a world in which his beloved wife and children could live in peace, without fear that their lives would one day be lost. A 'utopian' world, where the innocent would be protected by God and the guilty punished for their sins equally –– no matter the crime committed.

    Sparing no woman, man or child that stood in the way of his dream after coming to that conclusion; he struck out against the scum of the earth, the lowlifes, murderers, cheaters and godless men, whom he believed threatened not only the peace but also the Lord's Will –– the perfect reflection of that so-called Hero of Justice, born some five hundred years into the future.

    In the end, he did not reach that goal before his death. Struck down in his prime by a terrible illness, he never lived to see the terrible actions his darling Elizabeth later wrought upon the people he had once so lovingly defended.

    Bond 5: And still, he would forgive her for every cruel misdeed she has ever committed. The man who took down, slew and brought to justice anything he saw as evil, can only ever pardon that one person –– the woman he so dearly wishes to see again.

    An action like that belies his true nature; a kind, gentle figure that loved his family deeply, who protects his Master from harm and who always saves the world from evil. In a Holy Grail War, he would portray the stature of a man in authority, one that gives and takes advice, while fighting honourably alongside allies –– at least in battles against Servants he considers on the side of God.

    Speaking about Elizabeth of course, his love for her endured each passing century and his passion can never fade –– so really, his only actual fault in knowing her, is that he genuinely enjoys her singing voice.

    Keywords:

    Elizabeth Bathory: The beloved wife of Ferenc Nádasdy II and perhaps, the most prolific female serial killer in the world. According to historical records, the number of young girls she killed during her lifetime reached at least six hundred, before she was found guilty and imprisoned until the day she died.

    Aside from those horrific crimes, she and Ferenc were said to have produced a healthy, loving relationship between themselves, especially surprising when considering Elizabeth not only frequently attended countless orgies hosted by her aunt, Klara Bathory, but regularly cheated on her husband with other women in the household.

    Of course, since they were also able to procure several children of their own blood, with Ferenc speaking fondly of her, those tales might not be true after all.

    Vlad III:The Impaler Prince. A famous hero in Romanian history, he fought in a war against the Ottomans, who he perceived as the enemies of God. During that war, he earned himself a monstrous reputation for impaling those unlucky enough to cross his path –– then displaying them as warning for others. It was such a scene that terrified his greatest rival, Mehmed II once, who afterwards, proclaimed Vlad III as the incarnation of the devil, before fleeing for his life.

    Another title of his is ‘Dracula’ –– a nickname which is derived from the fictional story of the same name, written by literary author Bram Stoker in 1897. This tale, despite showcasing many examples of historical inaccuracy, is what further helped to destroy Vlad III’s reputation as a hero, through entwining his legend with that of the titular vampire.

    Thus, just like his great grand-niece, Elizabeth Bathory, who was herself, portrayed as a vampire in a number of books and films, his existence has been completely changed by the perception of the people.

    His relationship to Ferenc Nádasdy II is one made through marriage.


    My Room Dialogue
    Bond Lines:

    [Bond Level 1]: Good morning, Master. I was hoping you'd gotten up early, especially since we have much training to do! After all, as they say; the early bird catches the worm!

    [Bond Level 2]: What I like? Well, that would have to be my wife, no doubt! She was an exceptional woman of course! Why, she was able to read AND write! It's normal for women to do that now, but back then, you could call it a rarity.

    [Bond Level 3]: Klara Bathory? I have not heard that name in a long time, and I have no desire to hear it again. It was by her actions that my Lizzie was corrupted so. As such, if we ever meet again, I shall kill her with my bare hands. No spear required!

    [Bond Level 4]: I have seen many horrors in my life, Master. I dedicated myself to rid the world of them, but I see they exist even now. No problem! Let us head out at once and strike them down in the name of God! My trust in you is absolute!

    [Bond Level 5]: Elizabeth will appear here one day, I can feel it. When that day finally comes, I shall dash straight to her side and take her in my arms. Then she'll cry out; 'Piggy, Piggy, put me down!' It's rather hilarious thinking about her acting so cute isn't it?

    Relationship Comments:

    [Elizabeth Bathory (Lancer)]:
    I already know what you are going to say. But, that does not matter, because I will always forgive you, my darling. Let us talk about different things instead. There is no need to dwell on your past deeds.

    [Shakespeare]: Mr Shakespeare was a contemporary of mine, you know. I never saw his plays, but my wife often enjoyed reading them to me when we able to spend time with each other. She was, after all, the one who could read in the household.

    [Elizabeth Bathory (Brave)]: Elizabeth!? Why on earth are you wearing the armour I bought for our role ––! Nevermind. Just, stop wearing that in public, please? Private use only, understand?


    Craft Essence
    Craft Essence:

    Wedding Portrait

    I still remember the day of our marriage with perfect clarity. You, looking so pale and young, gazed across at me from amongst the churchyard, while I looked across at you from my side at the altar; a young man far older than you were at that time.

    I'd always thought that someone as smart and graceful like you would never love someone as stupid and as unkempt like me, but I guess we made it work in some way, somehow. Our children did grow up in a loving household and you and I spent many wonderful memories together, so I won't forget those moments ever again.

    And even then, I shall forgive all that you did and all that you've done.

    You do not need to beg or cry, just know that I will always stay at your side; as we appear within this picture, because no one should be left alone or feel abandoned. After all, we vowed to keep each other under check, whether for better or worse, in sickness and health, till death do us part.

    That is proof enough that I still feel something towards you, which means I shall forgive all that you did and all that you've done.

    I love you with all my heart, my darling Lizzie. Let us spend eternity together instead of dying old, alone.


    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: B


    Magecraft, Charms and other magical effects are defended against. Depending on the ranking, it is possible to resist spells or cancel them altogether.

    Allows Lancer to invalidate of magic at (or below) B-rank, while reducing effects from higher-level spells –– a higher ranking beyond the norm, derived in his case, not from any sort of encounter with magic, but from the draconian blood found within his wife's ancestry and the fluids that were mixed together between them in their moments of passionate heat.

    An astutely fitting level for a man who 'tamed, rode and thusly conquered that dragon.'

    Personal Skills:

    Torture Techniques: A


    Represents one's possession of outstanding torture techniques, where plus modifiers are added when using torture tools to deal damage. Because it strengthens bloodshed and agony, further damage is continuously added after the ordinary damage as well.

    Born from the anecdotes wherein he dealt out 'justice to evildoers'; via juggling bodies with his sword, playing sports with decapitated heads, impaling his victims with wooden spikes, torturing his servants with oil, or castrating his wife's lover, then murdering the resulting baby –– Lancer's plus modifiers are further increased when dealing damage towards those considered 'criminals.'

    Military Tactics: B

    Tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized. Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing against an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm.

    The Black Bey of Hungary –– the people's hero; he is the man who conquered castle after castle during the Ottoman-Hungarian Wars, the man who gained the favour of his king so as to become the most trusted military advisor in the land, and the man who obtained the highest prestige for a Hungarian through achieving the title of 'High Captain of Transdanubia,' under that name. That is, his actions in bringing armies overwhelming victory during the unlikeliest scenarios denote Lancer's immense strategical knowledge –– proof of his talent in this skill.

    As a side note –– no doubt to the story told in which he rode into battle with such ease once, that only eleven of his troops fell down on the field against an army of more than one thousand and three hundred Turks –– Lancer is also provided with particular bonus modifiers during siege battles or surprise attacks in addition to his regular bonus modifiers.

    Unwarranted Affections: C+

    Disposition of a pretty boy who somehow attracts disturbing women –– a fascination-type magic that charms members of the opposite sex, obsessed with sadism, murder or other such qualities, unless they possess the will to resist or an equal level of Magic Resistance. Rather than a blessing however, it can be considered more of a curse –– surrounding one with a quintessential harem of Yanderes.

    Regarding Lancer, this skill is simply a freakish mutation of his natural charms, his own sadistic nature, his marriage to Elizabeth Bathory and the deep love she shared with him –– where it was said that his death lay down the foundations for her approaching insanity. A handsome appearance that attracts the attention/affections of those who share a similar fascination with blood and youth –– the very definition of an accidental ladies-man, so to speak.

    The plus modifier on the other hand, marks a specialized bonus parameter that takes effect when encountering Servants named Elizabeth Bathory; charming them absolutely. In other words, so long as he meets an individual identifiable as 'being Elizabeth Bathory,' they, without question, obsessively seek out his attention/love –– until he returns it.

    –– honestly, it does not work that way at all. That woman just wishes he would come home and be happy with her at his side. A red string of fate which ties those two together forever; for better or for worse, in sickness and in health, till death do them part.

    Noble Phantasms
    Noble Phantasms:

    Distant Ancestor's Wedding Gift
    Kazıklı Bey

    Rank: C
    Type: Anti-Unit
    Range: 1-5
    Maximum Number of Targets: 1


    A thick iron spear, bound together by bloodied wire and blackened steel. A Noble Phantasm crystallising the horrific scene showed to Mehmed II regarding the impalement methods of the Impaler Prince; Vlad III, the curses born of the hated story of Dracula, and a twisted form of that prince's seal of approval, metaphorically given away when Lancer married his beloved grand-niece, Elizabeth Bathory.

    Sublimating those anecdotes alongside Lancer's own legend as the infamous hero of Hungary; the Black Bey who struck down and tortured his many enemies as if he were continuing the legacy of his great grand-uncle-in-law, that spear has now become a transforming-type Noble Phantasm, allowing him to fight opponents using a variety of different means, such as increasing his range or creating a territory of 'no man's land' around himself.

    In essence, when thrown or simply handled, Kazıklı Bey transforms into a long mass of blood-encrusted chains –– and wrought iron balls –– under Lancer's complete control. Capable of strengthening itself proportionate to the size of a target's misdeeds, even those who have committed just a single crime find that each attack dealt is equal to a devastating bone-shattering blow of titanic destruction, crafted to best bring out the maximum amount of pain in each victim.

    By way of explanation, someone who has committed the evilest crimes would be effortlessly crushed under the physical weight of their own crimes –– as long as those chains were to be wrapped around or used against them. Those who have never committed any crimes at all, on the other hand; a figure portraying a clean, innocent soul, would henceforth need only to contend with pain caused by the chains themselves –– without receiving additional damage.

    Presenting those specialised qualities along with the talents he grew into on the battlefield has allowed Lancer's skill with that spear to reach the realm of mastery, wherein the weapon is best used to rain down the judgement he deeply desires, downwards into an attack even the fastest enemies would find hard to avoid –– except, of course, those exceeding a distance of five meters from the tip. No doubt can be taken though, that Kazıklı Bey is a divine punishment set down for those that do evil, formed from the righteous judgement that Vlad III inflicted upon the Ottomans, and the similar actions that Lancer achieved against his own enemies as the Black Bey.

    A torture device used sometimes upon the innocent, but always upon the guilty.

    'Kazıklı Voyvoda - Impaler Prince Dracula.'
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    Ferenc Nádasdy II: What's with medieval Slavs and blood, anyway?

    Remarks aside, this is a good introduction of a Servant. The reasoning behind his high-ranking MR is lewd but certainly creative, not to mention fitting for Ferenc's character as the #1 Eli fan. However, given his ruthless crusade against the "scum" of the world, wouldn't it be more fitting for his alignment to fall under Lawful Evil? Mechanically, I'm also guessing Ferenc won't benefit from the "No-Man's Land" created by Kazikli Bey, right?

    That said, the imagery of a Bathory harem via Unwarranted Affections is rather amusing: especially with the inclusion of the Mecha-Elis.

    To conclude, welcome to the forum.
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    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepMode View Post
    Ferenc Nádasdy II: What's with medieval Slavs and blood, anyway?

    Remarks aside, this is a good introduction of a Servant. The reasoning behind his high-ranking MR is lewd but certainly creative, not to mention fitting for Ferenc's character as the #1 Eli fan. However, given his ruthless crusade against the "scum" of the world, wouldn't it be more fitting for his alignment to fall under Lawful Evil? Mechanically, I'm also guessing Ferenc won't benefit from the "No-Man's Land" created by Kazikli Bey, right?

    That said, the imagery of a Bathory harem via Unwarranted Affections is rather amusing: especially with the inclusion of the Mecha-Elis.

    To conclude, welcome to the forum.
    Thanks! Yeah, them Slavs loved the sight of blood (and slaughtering Ottomans...)


    I went with Chaotic Good, because I saw him as a 'Good' guy, like how Arturia Lancer is still considered a 'good person.' As for Kazikli Bey's' No Man's Land, it would function as wrapping chains around everything, kind of like that scene in Jojo Part 3, where Dio gets trapped on the building's with all those things around him. Anyone that touches one, gets snared by a spring trap essentially. But, in any case...Ferenc isn't really complaining about the Eli's at all. He gets a Harem of the same person so he's pretty much set.

    Now Carmilla on the other hand...that's when it gets weird.

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    First a Heartly welcome to you Anju !

    That is a very creative Servant especially using the Remnants of Vlad as Spear on their own and working in Vlad believe as Damage Multiplier. Really does i dont wonder why many Wiedergänger(Vampires included) legends have roots from there if the Slavs are so conversant with blood.

    Although his Yandere magnet skill i think that could not end well in chaldea specially if Berserker Minnamoto Raikou Yorimitsu and Kiyohime are near (that would be a good base idea for a Yandere grailwar when i think About it?) why do i get cold shivers on the back now?
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    You know, I would love to see an Otzi sheet.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Spartacus View Post
    You know, I would love to see an Otzi sheet.
    The iceman from the Alps? I wonder what class he'd qualify for though.

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    Probably Archer/Lancer due to nature as hunter-gatherers, or Berserker for having a non-stardard human mindset.
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    Coffee would be nice, though.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    The iceman from the Alps? I wonder what class he'd qualify for though.
    If we assume it on the objects that was found alongside him which included a Spear and a Bow he could qualfy for Archer or Lancer and if we equalize the mind of a pre civilization with a maddened Warrior also Berserker.
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