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    Some thoughts on a few sheets recently

    Uesugi Kenshin (Der Ritter edition): I've seen a few Kenshin's and the majority of them bring at least one thing unique. I've seen unique skills, talking swords, swords that sheet dragons instead of beams and God Modes. Now while this isn't bad by any stretch, there's nothing I haven't seen before. You could perhaps try changing the second NP into creating an 'Ideal Avatar forged by Kenshin's way of life' or whatever and turned it into a Stand because that's something I haven't actually seen before. Also an original skill would be quite beneficial to the sheet. You could look at mine or Spartacus's for inspiration or just merge some pre-existing ones together. Easy one is making a skill called 'God of War' and combining Divinity with one of the other skills yoiu currently have.

    Rider of the Turbulent Times: Red Hare is good to see, the Divinity aspect you combined into it was quite good as well and added another good layer to it.

    St Olga of Kiev: Ah, the edgiest saint of all. I like these kinds of sheets but i've seen a few Avengers of her, Ruler Alter however...

    Balor: I too agree that the Mystic Eye of Death could have a full power release that functions as an NP, it would be better than 'just' a seal NP.
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    Quote Originally Posted by King of Padoru View Post
    I did a shitty sheet of him. Probably Koga meant that
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    King of Padoru i found Ghatotkacha quite good because i like such honorfull Deep Warrior charackters like i ve also made Goliath as one ,but i would give him perhaps more Astras and why has he actually Archer qualfications again ?I will make later also some Indian Servants like some of the Pandavas and a certain Lady.

    But at everyone which was my best Servant until now ??
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    here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)

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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    why has he actually Archer qualfications again ?
    Throws stuff. By the way, he faced Karna without any astra
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    But at everyone which was my best Servant until now ??
    Not to sound too harsh, but as has been stated before, they're all kinda terrible in their own way.
    Still, I'd say the best is "Gladios", not just in comparison but overall. Stats are reasonable, Skills actually have something to do with the myth, and the gladiators don't have laser cannons or some such nonsense. Your only misstep with the sheet was in the Noble Phantasm department, where you decided to give them the ability to summon Spartacus and other famous gladiators and then gave them all Tsubame Gaeshi (kinda loses the uniqueness if some random literally no-name gladiator can pull it off - then again, that description also fits Kojiro to some extent).
    Still, you might want to aim for something more like that one in the future. Just tone down the Noble Phantasms and everything will be fine. It's ok for Servants to be specialized (as opposed to mastering literally everything you can think of).
    Anyways, apologies for the apparent harshness (at least I answered).

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    Throws stuff. By the way, he faced Karna without any astra
    Still loses though.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Shiki-pon View Post
    Not to sound too harsh, but as has been stated before, they're all kinda terrible in their own way.
    Still, I'd say the best is "Gladios", not just in comparison but overall. Stats are reasonable, Skills actually have something to do with the myth, and the gladiators don't have laser cannons or some such nonsense. Your only misstep with the sheet was in the Noble Phantasm department, where you decided to give them the ability to summon Spartacus and other famous gladiators and then gave them all Tsubame Gaeshi (kinda loses the uniqueness if some random literally no-name gladiator can pull it off - then again, that description also fits Kojiro to some extent).
    Still, you might want to aim for something more like that one in the future. Just tone down the Noble Phantasms and everything will be fine. It's ok for Servants to be specialized (as opposed to mastering literally everything you can think of).
    Anyways, apologies for the apparent harshness (at least I answered).
    Thank you Shiki-pon ! I appreciate it very much that (atleast)you gave me your answer !
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