IIRC the Avenger skill makes them stronger the more people hate them or smth
Self Replenishment is pretty self-explanatory
Avenger makes it so that when you take damage, you generate Mana more quickly. I mostly didn't bother to write anything there because there was no difference from what the skills normally do. If people want I can put it up.
To Royd: Yeah, the logic behind Counter-Hero was essentially that, as a noncombatant Queen, she's an existence beyond violent reproach with violence being the way heroes tend to operate - which was kind of what I figured the deal was with it being the Saver Class Skill. A Hero wouldn't be willing to fight against a noble Messiah, essentially. And since Scheherazade had it, I felt kind of vindicated lol, but in retrospect I probably should have left it to the Saver Class.
To Bugs: Hm... To be honest, you're probably right on the front that her Territory Creation should've manifested as an NP; I think I was just being lazy lol
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Alternate Classes: Rider, Caster, Alter Ego
True Name: Li Tieguai
Alignment: Neutral Good
Origin: Chinese Mythology
Armament: Crutch, gourd
Parameters:
STR: C
END: A+
AGI: E
MANA: A+
LUCK: A
NP: A++
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Description
Lore
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^ My face when I misread that as "Armament: Crotch"... XD
I enjoyed reading that sheet. The Skills were a little "meh" but the Noble Phantasms were definitely interesting.
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Yeah, I felt the Skills were pretty meh too. I was considering adding stuff like Shapeshift (which he has to some degree in some of his legends) or some vague Taoist power, but decided against it in the end.
Nah man, that's a different saint entirely.
Li is a very interesting servant and you managed to make him unique from the other immortals you made that I can remember. The personality trait of him knowing and admitting he is putting on an act but follows fake it till you make it apparently is great. One complaint is that Laozi Hulu doesn't feel like it is powerful enough or the given rank. I understand that keeping servants manifesting is insane but since the effects don't extend past the insides of the reality marble. I don't know it just feels more like a B-Rank to me.
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Class: Ruler
True Name: 金光聖母 (Jin Guang Sheng Mu)
Alignment: Lawful Evil
Place of Origin: Jin Ao island, China (Investiture of the Gods)
Parameters:
STR: E
END: E
AGI: A
MGI: EX
LCK: A
NP: A
Height: 166cm
Weight: 42kg
Attribute: Sky
Traits: Female, Divine
Armaments: Golden staff
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Personality
Comments for other servants
Creator's notes
Jin Guang: Pretty nice sheet all around. Her personality is quite fun and the NP reminds me of Archi's mirror ray (even before I read that line in her relationships section), but obviously with her own unique twist. Fangirling over Tesla's inventions and wanting to start a detective agency with Holmes definitely added some amusing flavor. Though I'm not sure why you noted her Magic Resistance is sealed but she can replicate a similar result with Taoism, when it would've been simpler IMO just to say she has a high rank because of her Taoistic prowess in the first place. Also I'm not sure why she's a Ruler but lacks two of the Ruler Class Skills.
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Class: Assassin
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True Name: Carlota Joaquina
Epithets: The Shrew of Queluz, Queen of La Plata (Self-Styled), Princess of Brazil.
Alternative Classes: Caster
Allignment: Neutral Evil
Height / Weight: Petite / Flawless
Region: Spain, Portugal, Brazil.
Source: Historical Fact
Likes: Silver, Spain, Power.
Dislikes: Her husband, Brazil, Napoleon Bonaparte.
Background
Personality
[Parameters]
Strength: E
Agility: C
Endurance: E
Mana: B+
Luck: E
Noble Phantasm: C+
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm
Voice Lines: Ascensions
Voice Lines: Bond
Relationships
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The reason for her deal with Magic Resistance I actually planned to explain in another one I'm working on, there's more reason to it and these are tied to each other. As for God's Resolution, she has it but it was lost due to similar reason as Magic Resistance, which I also planned to explain by another one. Didn't put it there cuz...I deleted it from draft lol. One thing I can say for now is: pride. I did mentioned that TND is replaced with Evil Discernment due to her fixating on looking for evil criminals than actually doing her job, it basically got morphed into only work on evil due to her mentality.
Nice Ruler im curious About the second you have in mind Lily ! Some Question :What would be her oppinion of my Dante Alighieri , Goliath ,Loki , my Ada Muso and Jimmu ? would she sees them as evildoer as potencial allies etc ?
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I find that she was friends with Daji to be a hilarious subversion of the norm. Since the fandom is still pretty divided on whether they love or hate the Russian Spy Fox Girl it is nice to see Servants that actually have a good relationship with Tamamo Vitch rather than Vanilla Mikon.
and i have two Questions at the Community ,i plan to write a grailwar Story whichs Plays in Hokkaido and the two protagonists (Master and Saber servant) is already settled do i search for a Pagan slavic and one Ainu servant candidate ,i have for the former in mind one whichs summoning is "Rule-Breaking" similar tothe summon of Enkidu in strange fake as comparison currently have i for the former the Slavic deities Perun ,Veles in mind or alternatively Sviatoslav I of Kiev as candidates would someone have suggestions for them respectively do i for the latter currently search for a Ainu cuulture Servant qualiying being ?
in other words:do i search for Ainu servant candidates and Slavic servants which should like i said a "powerfull Last Battle-type" servant or after one slavic Pagan King,annd i know that some would told me i should Research myself but atleast some starting Points or productive hints would be welcomed in either case thanks beforehand for every Answer !!
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I'm a fan of Koschei the Deathless in terms of Slavic villains.
No idea about Ainu heroes. Oral traditions obviously don't get around as often as cultures that rely on a writing system. Apparently Ainu sagas are called yukar, though.
She is probably neutral to all of them. Evildoers in the past are not of her concerns unless they commit another crime when she's in charge as the judge of a HGW for example, because she herself allied with messy evildoers and did evil herself in the past, which basically prevented her from being given higher divine authorities. A Xian is not allowed to kill or take sides with any faction unless they are ordered by their superiors, and even after no longer being a Xian, she still keep that in mind (also as a form of atonement).