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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Some thoughts on a few sheets recently

    Uesugi Kenshin (Der Ritter edition): I've seen a few Kenshin's and the majority of them bring at least one thing unique. I've seen unique skills, talking swords, swords that sheet dragons instead of beams and God Modes. Now while this isn't bad by any stretch, there's nothing I haven't seen before. You could perhaps try changing the second NP into creating an 'Ideal Avatar forged by Kenshin's way of life' or whatever and turned it into a Stand because that's something I haven't actually seen before. Also an original skill would be quite beneficial to the sheet. You could look at mine or Spartacus's for inspiration or just merge some pre-existing ones together. Easy one is making a skill called 'God of War' and combining Divinity with one of the other skills yoiu currently have.

    Rider of the Turbulent Times: Red Hare is good to see, the Divinity aspect you combined into it was quite good as well and added another good layer to it.

    St Olga of Kiev: Ah, the edgiest saint of all. I like these kinds of sheets but i've seen a few Avengers of her, Ruler Alter however...

    Balor: I too agree that the Mystic Eye of Death could have a full power release that functions as an NP, it would be better than 'just' a seal NP.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    You havent reacted/ said anithing about my Gladios,Suhrawardi or Herodot(halfversion),Bird of Hermes ! ��
    He didn't comment on world-0's sheets either. It's not like he's obligated to comment on every single sheet in this thread (especially ones like Gladios that are quite a few pages back by now).

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    He didn't comment on world-0's sheets either. It's not like he's obligated to comment on every single sheet in this thread (especially ones like Gladios that are quite a few pages back by now).
    Nor is he capable of enduring such thing.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Some thoughts on a few sheets recently

    Uesugi Kenshin (Der Ritter edition): I've seen a few Kenshin's and the majority of them bring at least one thing unique. I've seen unique skills, talking swords, swords that sheet dragons instead of beams and God Modes. Now while this isn't bad by any stretch, there's nothing I haven't seen before. You could perhaps try changing the second NP into creating an 'Ideal Avatar forged by Kenshin's way of life' or whatever and turned it into a Stand because that's something I haven't actually seen before. Also an original skill would be quite beneficial to the sheet. You could look at mine or Spartacus's for inspiration or just merge some pre-existing ones together. Easy one is making a skill called 'God of War' and combining Divinity with one of the other skills yoiu currently have.
    I've actually not seen alot of Kenshin sheets ourside Spartacus', and one on SB, so I guess it's fair that my Kenshin would unintentionally end up being a little on the generic side. Admittedly, one idea I had ehile making my Krnshin was to either make her a child of Seiryu, or to go with the Supa Robo theme of my Shingen, given her a transforming dragon mecha. I'll take these suggestions in consideration for when I decide to revise it in ghe future.
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    Can we just agree that we already cover the most interesting part of Kenshin-sama and we can't go any further?

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    Update!

    Added a Lore part on my Alterego sheet. that may or may not make my sheet more bearable, in addition to some edits and changes. Also, new sig!
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    Aleister Crowley


    Class: MoonCancer
    Other Applicable Classes: Alter Ego, Beast
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Sex: Male
    Height: 178 cm
    Weight: ??? kg
    Armament: Mask, Robe, Syringe-Tipped Claws


    STR: C
    CON: D
    AGI: E
    MGI: A
    LCK: A+
    Noble Phantasm: EX

    Legend


    A
    virus formed in the Moon Cell by the self propagation of errors allowed to accumulate within its billennia of continuous runtime. Currently, it has appropriated the personality and legend of the infamous mystic Aleister Crowley. By “concealing” itself within the form of Crowley, the virus is able to be summoned as a Servant during Grand Orders which take place in the Moon Cell. It cannot be said, however, that the virus is simply wearing the image of Crowley as a disguise. The charisma of the man is enough that he still maintains his will entirely, despite the countless digital voices that cry out within him.
    An endless stream of junk code that lost its purpose. This accumulation of digital sin has meshed nicely with the self-proclaimed Beast of 666. To him, the glitches are not failures in processing but simply the natural result of the Moon Cell’s True Will. As a Pseudo-AI infesting the Dark Side of the Moon, he manages to consume excess data without raising the Moon Cell’s suspicion. It is not cowardice, but a calculated decision to increase his power until he can assault the Near Side. He has gained the role of a “Gamemaster,” though only in a forgotten corner of the Dark Side of the Moon due to the extent of his integration into the system.
    At present, he has made a Devil’s Bargain with the Moon Cell in order to be summoned as a servant. In exchange for allowing the Moon Cell to run its refresh cycle properly, he has decided to take a sabbatical as a Servant. This, of course, is simply a ruse. During this free time outside of the Moon Cell, he has arranged for a “visit” from a demon of the Ars Goetia, essentially borrowing one from a willing King Solomon, and using its might to drag the Moon Cell into a world ripe for assimilation. The demon pillar, Asmodai, has been made subject to Crowley’s Absorption and is wholly under his control. The once mighty king of demons becomes just another beast under the purview of To Mega Therion.


    Tactics


    An archetypal evil genius. Crowley has a tendency to busy himself with more lurid matters than to deal with things himself. Of course, he still fosters an immense hunger for the rest of the Moon Cell, but he is content with sending out minions to fight for control on the fringes. When it does come down to it, he is not opposed to fighting (even if it is a bother), but he will vocally complain about having to get his own hands dirty. He is most serious when confronted with the impossible or with insurmountable obstacles. His current task, the assimilation and destruction of the Moon Cell, is not a fate he chose but simply the natural result of his existence. The fact that he has a very low chance of actual success simply makes him more willing to continue.
    Crowley loves humanity. He adores every merit and every fault of the species to which he used to belong. He finds things that "emulate" humans, such as a certain alien visitor, extremely interesting. He gets along swimmingly with any master that might pick him up somehow, but he is undoubtedly a "bad influence" on them.


    Class Abilities


    Magic Resistance: A
    Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer.'

    Item Construction: D+
    The skill to manufacture magical implements. The skill is rather low due to Crowley specializing in magical treatises and formalcraft rather than proper item creation. Still, he can project parts of himself outward and create objects using that, though their functionality afterwards may be suspect.

    Territory Creation: A
    The skill to build terrain advantageous to oneself as a magus. The creation of an “Abbey,” which is superior to a workshop, becomes possible. Crowley’s rank in absorption is increased while within his Abbey. Perhaps the lurid nature of his abbey reduces the opponent’s ability to resist?

    Personal Skills



    Charisma of an Evil Genius: A
    An unnatural Charisma possessed by those few who become true forces of Evil. The charm required to commit great evils and cultivate a following. At this level, it is as though a subtle force conspires so that all of the Servant’s schemes come to some fruition. Otherwise, it functions identically to Charisma of the same rank, though with some bonuses when commanding hordes of minions.

    To Mega Therion: A
    A skill nearly identical to the “Ten Crowns” skill possessed by a certain A.I. Rather than the Authority of a primordial earth goddess, it is the savage vitality of the immortal monsters from the forgotten past. Additionally, through the consumption of these dormant beasts sealed away on the Dark Side of the Moon, Crowley has acquired many of their traits, and is even able to summon facsimiles of them.

    The compression of Crowley into a Servant container has severely reduced the level of this skill. As such, damage is not nullified but reduced.

    Absorption (Virus): C++
    The nature of the Virus that formed this Servant. As long as he exists within the Moon Cell, Crowley is able to introduce a virus into it that seeks out information or a desired parameter. This virus then breaks down its target and transfers it to Crowley. This process is not particularly fast, which is why it is typically used against multiple dormant targets at once.


    Noble Phantasms

    ↄↄↄ - CCC Inverse
    Choronzon Chambre des Cauchemars




    Rank: A
    Type: Anti-Unit ~ Anti-City Noble Phantasm
    Range: 1 ~ 90
    Maximum Targets: 777 people


    A powerful curse that functions as a conceptual weapon of “Undone Repression.” It forces an opponent’s mind to establish a “Nightmare Chamber” using their deepest fears as a base. The psyche is then fragmented and forced to experience a closed loop of time for what feels like an eternity before returning to normal in a broken state. It is in this form that Crowley finds people most susceptible to his “salvation.” While in the Moon Cell, this psychic onslaught becomes into reality itself. The battlefield becomes the stage for playing out an opponent’s nightmares. The body is subject to the pain the mind would go through, with absolutely no hope for escape. Worlds are undone by the pain of it all.
    By invoking Choronzon, True Demon of Dispersion and Lord of the Abyss, Crowley was able to manifest this Noble Phantasm’s Anti-Mind version in life. However, as a Moon Cancer servant he is able to utilize it by his own power. The invocation of the demon serves a different purpose: the opening of the abyss behind the Nightmare Chamber. A timeless eternity behind the veil of reality where Crowley is both God and Devil. Those who break free of the dream only find themselves in yet another hell, “The Destruction of Information - Event Horizon.”
    As a Servant within a faltering Moon Cell, however, CCC Reverse is only able to manifest a “communal fear” in the form of a giant cataclysmic image of Crowley that floods the arena with a flood of matter-dissolving viruses. While not as powerful as it's true state, it is nevertheless a destructive move. It’s more like comparing a flood to a high pressure water jet.

    Author's Notes
    I was going to save this for later but someone mentioned Alter Egos. Have a Moon Cell related servant! This one was going to be in an FGO CYOA I never got around to writing. I'll probably package that into an RP at some point. Or an independent fanfic. One or the other.

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    That's an awesome Crowley.

    His NP sounds hilariously overpowered in its true state though. Is there literally any way to counter or escape it once it's been invoked? (If it'd be a spoiler for a future fanfic, feel free not to mention it)

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    What are actualy the conditions/qualifications for a Mooncancer servant ?
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