Create-A-Servant 2

[Bird of Hermes]

EMIYA is a magus who uses swords, yet qualifies for the Archer class. Nero only qualifies for the Saber class because of her Imperial Privilege skill and her insistence on the matter.

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Point is the sheet works

[Desuclocker]

EMIYA may possibly qualify for Caster, it just never came up because lol who cares. He isn't a Saber because the primary requirement for that is sword skills he doesn't have. Nero is fine, because thanks to IP she actually can sword good.

[Bird of Hermes]

It's clear we're not going to come to an agreement so it's probably best we leave it.

[Bird of Hermes]

Anyways, to get back on subject

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I was going to say she seems way to strong, but considering she's a vessel for a goddess... I'd say it's mostly justified although I think EX strength may be a bit high. The ranking for the Mad Enhancement certainly works in my opinion. I like the connections between her and Hatshepsut as well, I may do something myself on that.

[Spartacus]

I once have this amazing idea about HGW fanfics, where the conflicts is similar to Apoc (7 vs 7) and he is the Obi Wan to the main characters, Saber (Uesugi Kenshin) and Archer (Baybars). Then I revived him as one of the main villains to a Jerusalem fanfic in my head. Whatever, here is the man!


Class: Rider
Source : Historical facts
Height/Weight : 185 cm/ 80 kg
Gender: Male
Master : -
Alignment: Neutral Good
Attribute : Man

Parameter :
STR : B (A+)
END : C (A)
AGI : C (D)
LCK : D
MGC : D
NP : B

Appearance :
Rider has 2 mode, Ethereal Form and Armored Form, which sports different looks.
In his Ethereal Form, Rider cloaked himself and his horse with massive robes. Rider and his horse emits misty smoke from their bodies.

In his Armored Form, he discard his cloak and reveal a massive crusader armor with many ornamentations. His horse become heavily armored like a war tank.

One thing that didn’t change in either form is his overly long red beard. Also his weapon is hammer mace designed to crush enemy head even they wore helmet.

Class Skill :

Riding B
Most vehicles can be handled with above average skill. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasm Races such as Monstrous Beasts.

Magic Resistance D
Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

Personal Skill :

Charisma B
Suitable for a king of a country.

Rider was known as a good king and won his people’s heart even after many failures.

Military Tactics B
The tactical knowledge used not for one-on-one combat situations, but for battles where many are mobilized.

Rider expertise in the arts of war already reach the highest level.

Shapeshift C
The ability to change his form to mist or armored knight. Extremely useful in close-range combat, but little effective against wide-ranging attacks.

The ability that granted to Rider because his Noble Phantasms. This is linked to many titles Rider had in his life.

Imperial Privilege D
The ability that, due the insistence of the owner, Skills that are essentially impossible to possess can be obtained for a short period of time.

NOBLE PHANTASM :

Konig des Berges : King of the Mountain
Rank : B
Range : 1 Person
Anti-Unit (Self)

The true name of “Ethereal Form” which is the symbol of king of the mountain, a sleeping hero, in other word- a symbol of resurrection. Being attributed with King of the Mountain, Rider receive the power to not leave the world. In the Ethereal Form Rider able to phase his entire body, resulting an untouchable body. The true nature of this Noble Phantasm is the ability to turn Rider into a wraith. As long Rider have an unresolved business he will remain alive even thought he lost his physical body.

Schwere Rustung (Heavy Armour) : My Shameful Steed, The Drowned King.
Rank : B+
Range : 1 Person
Anti-Unit (Self)

The true name of “Armored Form” which is the crystallization of the event where Rider drowned to death. A shameful Noble Phantasm that Rider absolutely despise and hate. Once it activated, both Rider and his steed will be covered in heavy plate armor. Rider STR and END will raise to A, while his AGI will decrease to D. The armor carrying the concept “will drown its wearer no matter what” make the armor will always heavier than the target no matter how strong their physical stats, skills and NPs the target possesses. By jumping in Ethereal Form and crashing in Armored Form, Rider can create a gigantic impact equal to a meteor. However as long there is a water carrying the concept of “river, sea, or lake”, Rider will be drowned no matter how shallow it was. This NP is sealed once Rider turn into a wraith.

bio

Frederick I is a German king during the 12th AD. He had many title like Holy Roman Emperor, the good king, but he most famous title was Frederick Barbarossa (red beard).
Despite known as the best Holy Roman Emperor, his achievement doesn’t always bring a satisfying results. Nevertheless, his ability as an emperor is top notch.

He met his unexpected end in Saleph river where he drowned because of his heavy armor. Some says that Saladin’s stellar achievement will not be the same if he still alive. However, a legend says he still alive as a King of the Mountain and once awake will return Germany to its former glory.

He disappointed to himself that he can’t led the Crusaders till the very end. Thus, he sought the Holy Grail to resume the Crusade.

[Arashi_Leonhart]

That and there's a bit of a consensus that Medea would have been absolutely terrifying if she weren't in the Caster class.

what

[asterism42]

I guess it's a hypothesis centered around the possible combo potential of Rule Breaker and Presence Concealment? Tho I don't think it'd actually work, since PC shuts down when you attack.

[RoydGolden]

I guess it's a hypothesis centered around the possible combo potential of Rule Breaker and Presence Concealment? Tho I don't think it'd actually work, since PC shuts down when you attack.

I think Hermes probably meant as Rider, with the dragon chariot and what not.

[Funderfullness]

About Nyabinghi, it is nice to see more African Servants, and that FC is really awesome also. The link between her and Egypt Pantheon is found somewhere? In Wikipedia there is no mention. But if it was made for the servant, it ended up a very nice lore anyway.

She's actually a product of Rastafarianism. Basically, there was this Amazon-like Ugandan queen named Nyabinghi that was sort of deified after she died, and then they made a priesthood for her and from then on any exceptional warrior women were said to be possessed by her or a reincarnation of her. Then the legend evolved into the original queen being one of many reincarnations of Sekhmet, so I reverse-engineered it from there.

I was going to say she seems way to strong, but considering she's a vessel for a goddess... I'd say it's mostly justified although I think EX strength may be a bit high. The ranking for the Mad Enhancement certainly works in my opinion. I like the connections between her and Hatshepsut as well, I may do something myself on that.

If Euryale and Stheno can have EX Magic, then a goddess of war who was actually an integral part of the pantheon can have EX Strength.

[Lily Emilio]

If Euryale and Stheno can have EX Magic, then a goddess of war who was actually an integral part of the pantheon can have EX Strength.

Apples and oranges. Magic stat measures the amount of magical energy you can handle, not how powerful your magecraft skills are, it's like Andersen rocking EX as well while the King of Magecraft has A++.

[Arha]

If Euryale and Stheno can have EX Magic, then a goddess of war who was actually an integral part of the pantheon can have EX Strength.

I don't think it's really the same thing. Luck and Magic have shown up as EX stats before but the only time we've seen EX stats for physical abilities involves the usage of a NP. Even then there are only two examples that I can think of offhand. Asterios' profile indicates that a strength stat above A+ isn't normally possible with a human body. As I understand it anyway.

[Funderfullness]

OK, I see your point, but those examples prove that EX physical stats aren't outside the realm of possibility, especially when you have Berserker class + insanely high Mad Enhancement + NP that raises the stat in question.

[Lily Emilio]

Cu Alter has A ranked STR. Your servant has EX right off the bat and so far only Kingprotea (an alter ego high servant) got that type of treatment. Sure you can do w/e you like with your fanfiction but it's better to have a good excuse for it being in the base parameters imo.

[Constructman]

OK, I see your point, but those examples prove that EX physical stats aren't outside the realm of possibility, especially when you have Berserker class + insanely high Mad Enhancement + NP that raises the stat in question.

EX literally means off the scale. Remember that parameters translate to numeric amounts. The highest canon strength level so far is 210.

the explainations in the post you quoted
innate fitness at A+ rank is a plus correction so a +
monsterous strength is a rank up
ME is a rank up

Therefore A+ plus 10 plus 10 plus +
70*3 = 210
pardon my former math I guess.

EX strength would be that they can't quantity how strong she is with a numerical scale. She's basically One Punch Man.

[Funderfullness]

Cu's NP raises his Strength to EX, and Spartacus has base EX Endurance. So like I said, there's precedent for having "off the charts" physical stats. It's not that crazy for a war goddess to have that kind of overwhelming power.

[Desuclocker]

Cu's NP also tears his body apart from the strain, Spartacus' EX is special and relies on his NP as well (he isn't rock hard, he just regenerates real good). Yours is just lol EX STR because war goddess with no particular mountain punching feats that I can see.

[Funderfullness]

Alrighty then, I'll put it at A+ or something.

[Bird of Hermes]

I think Hermes probably meant as Rider, with the dragon chariot and what not.

Source (x)
Class: Rider
True Name: Medea
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Place of Origin: Greece
Attribute: Man
Traits: Human, Divine
Armament: Cloak, Dagger
Strength- D
Endurance- D
Agility- B
Mana- A
Luck- A
NP- C

Height/Weight: 163cm/55kg
Likes: Men of few words and sincerity, girls in cute clothes
Dislikes: Muscles
Talents: Plotting, crafting
Natural enemy: Heracles

Class Skills:

• Magic Resistance (D) - Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.
• Riding (A+) - Creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.

Personal Skills:

• Affections of the Gods (D) - Affections from the Gods obtained when committing her justified revenge against Jason, LCK is ranked up.
• Divinity (C) - A grandaughter of a God of Olympus, her divinity has been restored due to the loss of Rule Breaker.
• High-Speed Divine Words (B) - High-Thaumaturgy-level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of One-Line spells. Her innate spellcasting ability has been reduced due to being summoned in another class.
• Item Construction (C+) - Medea specialises in poisons, so she can't make any other types of tools.

Noble Phantasms

Helios Megistos Sky Chariot of the Unconquered Sun (Anti-Army) (A++) - Medea's most powerful Noble Phantasm and the reason she's been summoned as Rider. It's the golden; dragon-pulled chariot granted to her by her grandfather Helios to escape her former husband and an enraged mob that wished to kill her for murdering the princess and king of Corinth.

A glorious flying chariot inscribed with the divine words of the Gods, it is pulled by four golden dragons that breathe shining blasts of sunlight instead of fire. After evoking its name it descends from the heavens in a glorious visage of exploding light behind it. It is capable of flying without Medea holding onto the reigns and responds to her commands. The shining light given off by it is powerful, making it difficult for any aside from Medea to gaze upon it and radiates enough heat to char the earth by simply flying near it. It holds extraordinary power and is capable of charging through battlefields and armies with speeds the gods themselves would envy.

[RoydGolden]

Wow, you're certainly right that she is terrifying. An interesting take on Medea to be sure. Selection of Skills is well-chosen (particularly Hero's Widow) though, I'm not sure if High-Speed Divine Words should really be lowered that much just by being summoned in a different Class. Cu was summoned as Lancer rather then Caster, and his Rune Magic only took one rank down. Not sure about the corruption from the Grail reference, since that isn't mentioned in any other part of her profile. Also kind of odd that the Golden Fleece/Argon Coin isn't included here, given that it's something I imagine she could have as Rider.

Her NPs are very nice, particularly Love Breaker, of which the potential uses are very interesting indeed. Helios Megistos is about as hax as a giant God-given dragon-pulled chariot should be. One thing I can say is that the spoiler tags for the NP section don't work (since you used a hyphen rather then an equal sign).

[Bird of Hermes]

The tag is fixed and as for the corruption part, it was an idea I scrapped from the sheet, I thought i got all of it but I clearly hadn't.

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The reduction was by a far greater amount was there due to balance issues. If it was just the one rank it would have still been too high considering the Noble Phantasms.