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    ...I think I'll just work my way backwards from what other Ancient Wonder-type Servants have been created and fill in the gaps from there. That is if Funderfullness and Daneel Rush (among other notable creators) don't beat me to them first.

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    “Through the ministry of the Church, may God give you pardon and peace as through my sword I absolve you of all your sins. In the name of the Father, and of the Son, and the Holy Spirit. Amen.”


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    Class: Saber
    Alternate Class(es): Caster
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    Region: France – The Song of Roland

    Height/Weight: 178cm/80kg
    Likes: Prayer and action
    Dislikes: Needless violence, People unwilling to take action
    Talent: Inability to give up
    Natural Enemy: Shirou Kotomine
    Attribute: Man
    Traits: Humanoid, Male, Servant
    Armament: Sword, Robes, Sacraments

    Parameters:

    STR: B
    END: C
    AGI: C
    MGI: A
    LCK: C
    NP: A

    Skills

    Class Skills:

    Magic Resistance: A
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. In practice, the Servant is untouchable to modern magi, so it would not be an exaggeration to title the Servant a 'Magus Killer'. Despite encountering no mystery in his life, the rank comes from his unwavering piety. However it cannot cope against sacraments of the church.

    Riding: B
    Denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Most vehicles and animals can be handled with above average skill, even vehicles that did not exist in the time period one was alive in, for they are no exception. However, cannot ride the likes of Phantasmal Species such as Monstrous Beasts.
    Despite technically being a man of the church, he fought on the battlefield and presumably had to keep up with all the other paladins who were proficient on mounted horseback.

    Personal Skills:

    Cremation Sacrament: B
    A type of magecraft that changed style into a church form. It is tremendously effective on a physical body. Combining what was originally a rite given to the deceased; it has now been transformed into a combat technique. Due to his life as an Archbishop, he is well versed in these rites which in times of war he used to burn away at his opponents. It should be noted that the Catholic Church only permitted cremation as a means of preserving dead bodies in 1963. Furthermore, the only rite given to dead people is a Mass and some blessings; this was a borderline heretical act of Saber. Usage causes the physical structure it was cast upon to immolate and break down. It is less effective against spiritual bodies such as the Saint Graph of a servant.

    Incitement: A
    A Skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack. Saber is persuasive in conversation. He can inspire troops as if they were born to it, and can inspire those who do not know them personally. He convinced the common folk to become soldiers with a martyr's salvation and absolving them of their sins.

    Oath of the Protector: B
    A skill denoting one pledged to protect others, raises defensive power of all members in the allied camp. At this rank, all allies receive a Plus correction to encampment defence. Saber possesses high ranking of this skill, having performed his duty in securing retreat of his king's main forces with much smaller rearguard of his own against superior forces of enemy.


    Noble Phantasms


    Restraint of the Archbishop
    Holy Mace


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: D
    Range: 1
    Maximum Targets: 1 Person

    A conceptual Noble Phantasm acting as a pseudo sheath for his sword. As men of God were once prohibited from shedding blood, Sabermakes use of a powerful warhammer instead. Its basis is on protection magecraft, forging a physical construct in the form of a warhammer. The weapon is a mediocre-at-best in combat compared to other Noble Phantasms with a weak myth behind it but it’s purpose as a limiter to conserve mana in combat enhances Saber’s longevity in combat, though it is even weaker than the likes Invisible Air and has less applications. Curiously, Holy Mace is incapable of drawing blood.
    However, by calling out the name of his True Noble Phantasm, the construct burns away and is forever sealed to reveal…

    Almighty Sword
    Almace


    Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Army
    Rank: A
    Range: 1~50
    Maximum Targets: 200 People

    In the legendary Song of Roland, Almace is a Holy Weapon forged by the legendary Anglo-Saxon blacksmith Weyland alongside Curtana and Durandal – which was reforged from Hector’s spear Durindana. Of the three sibling swords, Almace was the second most powerful of the three. The etymology of the name is uncertain, but it may be derived from German or from the Old Norse ‘all macht’, meaning Almighty. Although certainly a splendid weapon, it does not stand out aesthetically among its peers and possesses an inferior legend due to not being particularly well renowned and being broken in the hands of an inferior swordsman after it’s true user passed perished.

    As a Holy Sword, it possesses the basis of ‘Amplification’, granting divine combat powers. It thus raises the owner's physical parameters by one rank the moment the sword is drawn. Furthermore he can use the sword to amplify his magical energy – an application that can be compared to Mana Burst (Holy) - then unleashing the loaded magic energy in the sword's blade. The sword then amplifies it and allows it to be launched as an attack. It manifests as golden light manifesting around the user and the sword itself releases blue lighting alongside a peculiar noise that sounds almost like a choir. Upon raising the sword, he releases the radiance upon the enemy as a flash of light, a surging wave crackling with lighting with the simple purpose of destruction – erasing all in its path. Utilising it takes a great deal of energy, giving him intense pain throughout his body due to being the improper way of using the sword.



    Lore

    Turpin is the Archbishop of Rheims. He is a warrior-priest, wielding a sword with great skill in many battles including at Ronceveaux in the Song of Roland. The Song praises him thus: "never did another priest say mass who did with his own strength so great deeds of arms.”

    He was in attendance at the council called by Charlemagne to discuss the peace offer of King Marsile. Turpin volunteered to go to Marsile as Charlemagne's emissary, but Charlemagne angrily rejected the suggestion. Turpin volunteered to join Roland in the ill-fated defence of Charlemagne's rearguard at Roncevals. Before the battle, Turpin offered the sacrament of confession to the French knights; saying they will be absolved of their sins and ascend to heaven.

    He started off on the offensive, slaying famed fighters, commanders and enchanters with his lance. However when the second host of King Marsile's forces make their approach to the battle, Turpin keeps the troops calm and fighting ready even though they were greatly overwhelmed. During the later stages of the battle, he ended the argument between Roland and Olivier over the blowing of Roland's horn. He says that, while Charlemagne's armies will not reach them in time to save their lives, at least they will be avenged. He was also witness to Olivier’s death. With only Turpin and Roland still left standing of the Frankish forces, the two fight so ferociously that the pagans drop back and assault them with javelins, darts, and arrows. While Roland survived these missiles, they shattered Turpin's shield and helm and pierced the archbishop himself four times. His horse felled, Turpin drops to the ground. It was not yet his end, however--Turpin rises, draws his sword and returns to the fight.

    In the end when Turpin’s wounds overwhelmed him, Roland binded him together and manages to retrieve his peer’s bodies. He retrieves all but Oliver; Turpin weeps at the sight and offers a benediction. After Roland again passes out, Turpin takes Roland's horn and attempts to use it to bring water to Roland. However, he is so weak from loss of blood and his wounds that he cannot walk, and he dies.



    Character

    Laidback and seemingly easygoing, Turpin is an imperfect holy man in body, mind and spirit. A man who is reliable, holds an indomitable spirit, and on top of that, tender. Turpin is kind, chaste, and gentle. Even if critically injured, if he says "I'm okay", his companions will believe that he's truly okay.
    False Paragon

    However, he is not a perfect holy man. Turpin’s words, gaze and facial expressions can suddenly turn sharp, and he and the mood around her becomes dynamic and determined. However unlike a certain bare knuckled holy woman, he is not ashamed of this and makes no attempt to hide it. He always strived to be an exemplary paragon but is aware, at times, bloodshed is inevitable. It is not a ‘secret side’, an ON/OFF switch or anything of the sort, just an attitude that developed in war – a former pacifist who has become willing and able to kill.

    This isn’t to say he’s a violent man, far from it. Despite this he is still capable of true kindness and clearly so. He is simply able to bless a man’s wounds at one moment and inflict them upon another but a moment later. He serves God, just with a sword.

    Holy Solider(?)

    In his speeches, he validates what every other knight already believes: that religion and war are natural partners. What's the best way of sustaining Christianity? By conquering non-Christian lands, pillaging their infidel places of worship, and forcing their people to get baptised. Frankish Christianity is definitely not a religion of peace, but a super-buff, absolutist, and violent way of believing. He was wrong in this and admittedly so. It was a step too far and the prize of an army was not worth the means it was gained, becoming a cog in the machine that perpetuated wealth for the rich and death for the poor. It was necessary to ensure survival at the time but Turpin cannot deny that religion should not be used as an excuse to commit atrocity.

    Despite some of his strong beliefs violence only being used when necessary and the lengths he is willing to go to, from his tastes in the modern world, it would be hard to tell the man was an Archbishop. His casual ware is dark clothing styled in the early 00’s, his favourite genres of music ranging from hard rock to metal funnily enough and so on.

    Attitude to the Master

    Depending on the Master’s disposition as a whole, it is also a matter of time before she becomes serious in accepting everything from the Master and without any help from others since in this way, the Master begins to appear as his “younger brother”. However, this may involve playful bullying. Despite enjoying to tease people should the opportunity arise, his Master will have no defence.

    He still holds some of his vows close and any attempt at his otome route will result in a platonic ending. Tragedy.

    Wish

    His wish on the Grail...? "Ah, such a thing is unnecessary. I merely entered this bloodstained tournament for my own amusement, that's all."

    A blatant lie if there ever was one. He is a man like you and me. He has regrets, just like any man who goes to war. Oppression, domination, slaughter. He hates them all.


    Relationships

    Saint Martha: “Holy Sister, the one who defeated the Tarasque and met The Son? Truly a warmonger such as myself is unworthy.”

    He sees her as a superior in mind and body. She is more virtuous, more kindly, more beautiful and achieved more than him. To Turpin, Martha is the ideal he should aspire to be more like. However there are some ‘cracks’ in her persona that he finds comforting. After noticing her more unsaintly side, she will become a target for his teasing. Although he finds her Iron Knuckle style of street fighting a true sight to see and is curious to test his own Executor abilities against her (although mostly tied, Martha has the lead) he is at least at peace with his aggression and wants to help Martha with it. Well, after their next round that is.

    Astolfo: “Hello there Rider, we didn’t have much of an opportunity to speak in our past lives but- Oh, and he’s off again…”

    Turpin doesn’t hold a firm opinion on Astolfo as they never had the chance to adventure together in life. However as a Paladin, Turpin has positive views on him. However, Astolfo is too bouncy and bubbly to keep up with from time to time, leaving Turpin to busy putting out fires as it were to handle Astolfo. Roland was far better at that.

    Nero Claudius: “An utter mad beast drunk on your own delusions and blind to your own failures… You make me sick.”

    Turpin is not a fan of Nero in the slightest. Out of ‘Love’ she has made many a sin and to this day cannot acknowledge them as sins. She doesn’t seem to feel sorry for the acts she’s committed in the eyes of Turpin and doesn’t understand why others are so eager to simply write them off. To Turpin, Nero is one who comes up with excuses for her actions and apparently believes herself to be flawless. To Turpin, this is one of the worst kinds of people.

    Furthermore she’s a terrible singer and finds her overuse of gold and red in architecture to be overwhelming to the senses. To enter the Golden Theatre with Nero would surely be a punishment akin to Hell.

    Berserker!F!Roland: “I have no idea who you are and why you’re claiming to be my friend but please put some clothes on.”

    Pruned timelines are confusing, especially when meeting alternate versions of someone you know. Dealing with a perpetually smashed person strong enough to knock down buildings, borderline indestructible and an apparent exhibitionist who claims to be Roland is quite difficult indeed.



    Tactics

    Turpin is quite odd as he is a Saber who does not use a sword or at the least, waits until the last moment to use it as a trump card. After all, Holy Men in those times were forbidden from shedding blood. Despite this hypocrisy, Saber is undoubtedly the strongest and most compatible class for Turpin. Through the use of Rites and Sacraments, he was closer to a spellcaster than a magus, so he barely qualifies as a Caster.

    In combat, his techniques are familiar to two holy figures with a tendency for close combat. Though his style and weapons, he is uncannily similar to the likes of the Executors of the Church. Despite his own initial protests, he is a combat specialist who defeated great warriors and magi and is used to fighting to the death, so he is used to facing enemies beyond common sense. With fists of iron, Black Keys and the Cremation Sacrament, he is a varied opponent and with a mix of enemies under his belt, he could safely handle near any opponent under the level of a servant, even if they possessed an advantage or a trump card - Turpin could stall them out till he found a weakness or simply outlast them.

    As Sabers go though, he is not the most physically powerful in terms of sheer strength and wide range destructive potential; as a result in a straight up fight it is possible for him to be simply overwhelmed by sheer numbers or AoE attacks which he cannot compete with.

    “You want to defeat me? It is simple my child. Just punch me really, really hard.”


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    Bloody Pass

    “Any man who fights for his country and his God shall be absolved of all his sins.”

    Foolish words.
    Yes, it can create an army but it stirs a dour mentality.
    The most heinous of people can be rewarded in their second life undeservedly, believing a lifetime of cruelty can be solved with a few words with no spirit behind them. Bad people fight, kill, steal and worse, believing everything is forgiven at the eleventh hour so they continue their actions.
    God is many things, but He is not an excuse.

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    Turpin: The Skills all fit and his personality is very well fleshed out, but I'm not a huge fan of his NPs. They feel like very blatant rip-offs of Lancelot's Arondight with only small variations. I understand there might not have been a ton of NP-worthy stuff in his legend to work with though.

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    Turpin also supposedly wielded a mace in combat, as his clerical vows forbade shedding blood (interestingly, that's why D&D's fantasy paladins are often depicted wielding maces). Maybe you could give him an NP based off that?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Turpin: The Skills all fit and his personality is very well fleshed out, but I'm not a huge fan of his NPs. They feel like very blatant rip-offs of Lancelot's Arondight with only small variations. I understand there might not have been a ton of NP-worthy stuff in his legend to work with though.

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    Turpin also supposedly wielded a mace in combat, as his clerical vows forbade shedding blood (interestingly, that's why D&D's fantasy paladins are often depicted wielding maces). Maybe you could give him an NP based off that?
    That’s fair, this is the difference between the famous ‘Drunk Hermes sheets’ and the inferior ‘hungover Hermes sheets’

    Will make the amendments tomorrow at some point.
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    the first NP's BB code seems to have a little mistake, but i like the sheet, cremation secrament is very cool.
    any opnions on my last two sheets, i am specialy curios of what you think of Rider since she was spiritualy inspired by your Caster Elizabeth.


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    I wish Daneel made it easier to read all their stuff... ugh. Anyway;

    Little Red Riding Hood: Its good to see that you've formatted your sheets now, it makes it much easier to read. It would also help to do stuff like capitalize, punctuate, spellcheck, etc... but its usually pretty understandable. Anyway, mixing the character from the fairy tale with the urban legend from Fuyuki is fairly clever but the sheet itself is kind of odd. Looks of Pitifulness is cool, but Animal Dialogue is a little boring and Happy Ending is just strange. Her Noble Phantasms aren't too interesting - one summons teh Big Bad Wolf and the other turns her into a spooky ghost. I agree with 34 when he says that The Hallway probably doesn't deserve A-Rank. Overall this is a marked improvement but it could still use plenty of work.

    Queen of Pirates: Interesting, but flawed. Act of Audacity is a really weird Skill in both concept and effect while her other Skills are expected for a pirate Servant. Her first NP is a 'ship summon' thats rather vague about what it can actually do beyond 'summon some ships that act like ships' and also doesn't seem to deserve an A-Rank. Her second NP is a neat coreplaced by ncept, but doesn't really fit together very well - the first part of it (immunity to royalty-based/derived Skills) seems like it could just be replaced by Nature of a Rebellious Spirit and the second part seems overly strong for such an obscure Servant. As before, this is an improvement over your last sheet but could still use some work.

    Devil's Sailor: Again, interesting but flawed. The basis of his character (a mixture of Davy Jones, the Jolly Roger and Vander Decker) is strange since at least two of those seem like they would be famous enough to qualify as Heroic Spirits, but whatever. The fact that he doesn't have Pirates Honour is strange considering one of his components is "the spirit of piracy". Him having Voyager of the Storms at EX-Rank isn't too bad actually, I don't mind that, but his Golden Rule having a unique (Abyss) attached to it seems unnecessary unless it actually behaves differently than normal Golden Rule. The Locker seems like it should be a Noble Phantasm - oh, and it would be nice if what it actually does could be explained too. Based on its description, the Flying Dutchmen doesn't seem to come anywhere close to warranting an EX-Rank. The fact that he's an Avenger, instead of just a particularly jerkass Rider, is rather odd considering he doesn't actually seem to classify for that Class at all - he's completely unrelated to the concept of vengeance. Still, a good effort and another improvement over your previous sheet.

    Turpin: Why do I keep seeing that 'Weak to Enuma Elish' trait popping up everywhere? Anyway, I'm a little dissapointed to not see Baptism Rite since its a hugely underused Skill but Cremation Sacrament is cool too. I still hate the Incitement Skill (its literally just Charisma) but thats a personal thing, not a problem with your sheet. Oath of the Protector seems like it could be replaced with Dignity of the Rearguards and maybe Guardian Knight, but it doesn't particularly matter. Royd was right when they said that Almace seems like a bit of a ripoff of Arondight - and, of course, the 2nd NP/version lets him use a swordlaser because we always need more of those. For all the personality stuff, however, I have no complaints to make. Maybe because I know nothing of the character.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Crying View Post
    I still hate the Incitement Skill (its literally just Charisma) but thats a personal thing, not a problem with your sheet.
    Incitement strikes me as a more "populist" variant of Charisma, but you're right that it doesn't always seem so clearly distinguished.

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    Based on Caesar's profile, I think Incitement might represents him more as a 'skilled orator' than 'great leader'.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bird of Hermes View Post
    Cremation Sacrament: B
    Combining what was originally a rite given to the deceased; it has now been transformed into a combat technique.
    Fwiw this is incorrect; the Catholic Church only permitted cremation as a means of preserving dead bodies in 1963. Furthermore, the only rite given to dead people is a Mass and some blessings, but this animeland so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    --I would die as a result.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Crying View Post
    Turpin: Why do I keep seeing that 'Weak to Enuma Elish' trait popping up everywhere? Anyway, I'm a little dissapointed to not see Baptism Rite since its a hugely underused Skill but Cremation Sacrament is cool too. I still hate the Incitement Skill (its literally just Charisma) but thats a personal thing, not a problem with your sheet. Oath of the Protector seems like it could be replaced with Dignity of the Rearguards and maybe Guardian Knight, but it doesn't particularly matter. Royd was right when they said that Almace seems like a bit of a ripoff of Arondight - and, of course, the 2nd NP/version lets him use a swordlaser because we always need more of those. For all the personality stuff, however, I have no complaints to make. Maybe because I know nothing of the character.
    Quote Originally Posted by Nuclear Consensus View Post
    Fwiw this is incorrect; the Catholic Church only permitted cremation as a means of preserving dead bodies in 1963. Furthermore, the only rite given to dead people is a Mass and some blessings, but this animeland so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
    Alright, I think I've addressed everything in the changes just now, main NP is a bit less Lancelot-y now.

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    the first NP's BB code seems to have a little mistake, but i like the sheet, cremation secrament is very cool.
    any opnions on my last two sheets, i am specialy curios of what you think of Rider since she was spiritualy inspired by your Caster Elizabeth.
    With Grace O'Malley, she's an interesting one though a few things. Act of Audacity seems like it should just be replaced by Nature of a Rebellious Spirit as they both have the same basis behind them. With the first NP, it's just a simple ship summon with no real special ability. I'd recommend it being like Queen Anne's Revenge, an initial low rank but boosted under certain conditions. For example, B+, with power boosting when up against a more powerful enemy. I think with the second NP, it's nice there's an NP that isn't a ship summon but I don't think you should have the immunity to royal based stuff, just focus on the bonus damage against kings and skill seal aspect.

    Anyways, glad the Caster Elizabeth inspired you!
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    Hey heremes are there any rules for or against creating a new class for servants on this forum? as I'm doing a fan fiction which will be done in a compel of months and I created a new class for it, and would like to create a servant under that class to see how peaple like the idea of the class.

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    Quote Originally Posted by venomking View Post
    Hey heremes are there any rules for or against creating a new class for servants on this forum? as I'm doing a fan fiction which will be done in a compel of months and I created a new class for it, and would like to create a servant under that class to see how peaple like the idea of the class.
    There are no rules against it. People have done it before and, apart from some questions regarding what the class actually is (what qualifies a Servant to be part of it is one of the key questions) there weren't any complaints about them. Of course, people didn't exactly go crazy over them and start using them for their own Servants, either. Apart from maybe the Striker class from the old thread.
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    Alright , well before I make the sheet I think it smart to give a brief explanation of the class in Easton as it would proffide better feed back. So the class I'm creating is the trickster class, simpler to avenger it replaces the caster class. The requisite for becoming part of the trickster class is not one who broke rules in there life, but rather someone who through out their life turned to the rules to there advantage by acting upon every possible loop hole, as well as being someone who committed greate treacherous. For example Loki or lucifer. The class skills are

    trickery: a skill representing the act of not breaking the rules, but rather acting on loop holes. Servants with this skill can possess personal skills at higher ranks then normal, and possess a resistance to command skills. Those With B can Completly null orders given command skills by acting on every loop wheel requiring two command seals to force obedience each rank increases the resistance to more then one command seal.

    Mischief: this skill denotes a servants ability to cause mischief, parameters in luck and mana are increased based upon rank in class skill, and personel skills that are assessets in chasing mischief are Increased in the same way, thou utilsyseing this skill cuases a servant to gain micheivues personality which can inhibit there ability to fight properly, the greater the rank the more the urge to chase mischief increases for the servant.

    So now I'll get to work on the servant for this class.

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    I was thinking in a sheet about the bandeirantes for a while now, but don't know if I will write it... All the energy I had was used in that mage sheet posted yesterday...
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    Alright , well before I make the sheet I think it smart to give a brief explanation of the class in Easton as it would proffide better feed back. So the class I'm creating is the trickster class, simpler to avenger it replaces the caster class. The requisite for becoming part of the trickster class is not one who broke rules in there life, but rather someone who through out their life turned to the rules to there advantage by acting upon every possible loop hole, as well as being someone who committed greate treacherous. For example Loki or lucifer. The class skills are

    trickery: a skill representing the act of not breaking the rules, but rather acting on loop holes. Servants with this skill can possess personal skills at higher ranks then normal, and possess a resistance to command skills. Those With B can Completly null orders given command skills by acting on every loop wheel requiring two command seals to force obedience each rank increases the resistance to more then one command seal.

    Mischief: this skill denotes a servants ability to cause mischief, parameters in luck and mana are increased based upon rank in class skill, and personel skills that are assessets in chasing mischief are Increased in the same way, thou utilsyseing this skill cuases a servant to gain micheivues personality which can inhibit there ability to fight properly, the greater the rank the more the urge to chase mischief increases for the servant.

    So now I'll get to work on the servant for this class.
    In my opinion it would be easier to make a personal skill and call it Silver Tongue or something.
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    "Ah, master your not as disgusting as the rest of YOUR kind, I soppose. Now let us reek havok."

    True name: lucifer Morningstar.
    Class: Trickster.
    Alightment: chaotic evil.
    Place of origin: Europe.
    Catalyst: the drop of his blood kept inside the clock tower.

    paramters:
    strength: C.
    agility: B-.
    Mana: A.
    Luck: EX.
    Endurance: C.
    NP: A++

    Likes: April fools, pranks, jokes, mischief, misfortune, trickery, yesterday, and wine(thou Sakai would suffice I suppose.)
    dislikes: priest(except for that kotomine fellow,i like him.) misconceptions, unintellgence, boredom.
    Natural enemies: the savior class, God, Michael, Gabriel.
    Armament: ancient dagger which appears to be enhanced with high level magecraft.

    Backstory: once God's right hand man, buetifull and greate to all the angels when told that he must obey and protect such inferior creatures as human. He immediately denied valiantly against having to serve such insects, but for some reason he could understand my, err his logic, thus the stubborn old fool just wouldn't listen to him and cats him to earth to live out his life with those insects. Of course he would show him the error of his ways by proving just how disgusting and inferior humans were, not because he found it amusing to torture such humans, after all amusement is bellow such a powerful being.

    Personality: everything you could dream of Hansom, intelligent, witty. Far above the insects that keep festering around me err him. in other words perfect in every way!

    class skills:

    trickery:
    rank: C+
    trickester is commabil of resisting most orders or turning orders around on the master by utislysing any loop hole in his masters command. Also his personal skille are + rank higher then they would normally be.

    mischeif, A.
    Parameters in mana and are increased by a +, as well his rank in illusion and corruption of innocence are increased in the same way, thou when this skill is active his die sire to cuase mischief become uncontrollable, and can interfere in his ability to properly fight and opponent.

    Personel skills:

    Mephistopheles familiar.
    rank: A+.
    mephistopheles acts in the absolute interest of trickster thou is not used for battle, but rather fuast grants the wishes of civilians who upon completion of the wish are turned into scources of mana for trickster.

    Divine art of magecraft
    Rank: A
    A skill denoting tricksters ability to utislysing any curse, or magic at its highest level by combing high speed incarnation, with divine words. This skill often confuses peaple into thinking he is a caster but rather trickster are usefully powerful mages as well, and trickster amidnts the skill would be much higher ranked if he were in the caster class.

    corruption of innocence.
    rank: B+.
    A skill denoting tricksters having been someone who persuaded incocnecnt peaple to commit atrocious crimes, when activated those who do not posses mental pollution or other forms of mental resistencia of the same of the skill are is stanly encouraged to point of almost being mind countrol led to commmit an atrocious act of some form.

    Illusion.
    Rank: C.
    He can create illusions that are realistic enough to make it impossible to tell what is real, thou he can only create illusions about the size of himself, he tends to sue it to hide magic based traps. thou any rank in presence detection renders this skill useless.

    Descerment of the poor.
    Rank: A.
    Trickster will not fall for deception throu words or appearance.

    NP.

    Devilis trick.
    title: the greatest trick the devil ever pulled.
    Rank: B.
    A noble phantasm crystallizing the famous phrase, when activated all information about him is forgotten his skills, NPs, and even identity are forgotten as well for 20 seconds he gains he rank C in presence detection allowing him to escape thou information is rembered upon figuring out his identity, but this would be diifcult as it places a curse that causes servants who do not pass a mental resistance check of B or higher to be unable to fathom the idea that lucifer could ever be summoned as servant and Completly disregard any information to the contrary, however if is bond with his master is not high enough it may also affect his master.

    devils deal
    rank: A++.
    Titke: corrupted deal with the fallen angel.
    Lthou lucifer himself had never granted any wishes he had fuast to do so once, creating the idea that devil granted wishes in exchange for ones soul, when activated Mephistopheles will appear and act as an envoy of lucifer, the servants May use mephestofeles to make a deal with trickster, if trickster completes what is requested that servant enters a dirt if mid scape or illusionary hell were they must fight there worst fears in order to escape or can choose the easy way, entering a mental heaven were everything they ever wanted is achieved although not really thou the cost being they can never leave, while there in this mind scape or Illuisonary trap of sorts there bodies become the complete slaves of trickster and must follow his orders to the letter. Although mephestofeles had nothing to do with trickster in real, due to human misconception the idea that events of fuast had to do lucifer was forever in grained, so the mephestofeles used is not the real one but rather a copy of him.
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    Lucifer: Who on earth is "Fuast"? Assuming you meant Faust, he's the guy who made a deal with the demon in the titular story, not the demon himself. The demon's name was Mephistopheles.

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    And since Mephisto is canon and stuff, Nasuverse Faust probably doesn't have any link with Lucifer

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    Ok fixed it, sorry got the names mixed up. The idea is that the noble phantasm is based on the play which is likely what created the idea of the devil making deals for people's souls

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    Quote Originally Posted by venomking View Post
    Ok fixed it, sorry got the names mixed up. The idea is that the noble phantasm is based on the play which is likely what created the idea of the devil making deals for people's souls
    Hate to say it, but that you apparently got such basic information mixed up bodes rather ill of your capability as a history teacher...

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