The Egyptian servants we already have are a much better example for you to follow than the Foreigners, as said before, regular Divine Spirits are not related to the class at all.
The Egyptian servants we already have are a much better example for you to follow than the Foreigners, as said before, regular Divine Spirits are not related to the class at all.
It is indeed mentioned that Maahes might be similar to Apedemak, a deity from the Kingdom of Kush. Too bad, however, that the Kingdom of Kush is first mentioned in history 500 years after Khufu kicked the bucket. Having Khufu (who, as mentioned, might have banned the worship of gods altogether during his reign) be connected to deities that might've appeared 500-2000 years after his time is... Well, here is a picture of similar accuracy as far as timeline goes:Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga
Spoiler:
Also, Foreigners aren't possessed (the whole deal being that they avoided that), Foreigners are connected. And wasn't it specifically stated that the things Foreigners are connected to are Outer Gods, ie. gribbly, eldritch, extraterrestrial horrors the last time you asked about this?
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To further prove a point, this is the initial profile for Foreigners:
"Those who wield power drawn from outside human boundaries. Entities from different dimensions that are foreign to human comprehension."
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
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I wound up running out of ideas on this, but it can be considered finished at this point.
Class: Caster
True Name: Karl Marx
Gender: Male
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: D
Mana: A
Luck: B
Noble Phantasm: A
Class Skills
Territory Creation D
The Skill used to build a special terrain that is advantageous to oneself as a magus, such as for the purpose of collecting mana. Due to having not been a magus in life, Workshops generated by Marx using this Skill will be low in quality.
Item Construction D
A Skill representing the capability to manufacture magical items, from implements of war to items for daily use. Marx was not a magus in life, therefore items created using this Skill will have almost no magical properties.
Personal Skills
Incitement EX
Skill that functions as the acquisition of the words and gestures to lead the citizens and the masses. Especially, when employed against an individual, it functions as a sort of mental attack.
In Marx’s case, this Skill is more effective with leading the lower-class peoples.
Innovation: Communism A
An ideology promoting the idea of a classless society where all are equal. This Skill grants a plus modifier when attacking those who were members of the upper class in life. In addition, it also has the effect of powering the user and their allies if they coordinate as equals. If there's one ally whose power level is higher than the others, theirs will be distributed until the team's strengths are equal to each others.
Weak Constitution A
Marx is accompanied by the risk of a sudden status drop at any time of every action. The probability of risk is not high, but when it is invoked in combat, it is immense.
In life, Marx was noted to have poor health, which his biographer attributed to liver and gall problems he had in 1849 and stuck with him for the rest of his life. Various other authors and historians have sought to describe and explain these problems.
Noble Phantasms
ACommunist ManifestoThe History of All Hitherto Existing Society is the History of Class Struggles
Type: Barrier
Range: 50
Maximum Number of Targets: 1~50
This Noble Phantasm is named for the book published by Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels commissioned by the Communist League and tied to a copy of it. It is the manifesto of the Communist Party. The Communist Manifesto presents an analytical approach to the class struggle (historical and then-present) and the conflicts of capitalism and the capitalist mode of production, rather than a prediction of communism's potential future forms. It also briefly features their ideals that capitalist society will eventually be replaced by socialism.
As a Noble Phantasm, it will deploy a Bounded Field upon True Name Release that attacks the concept of property. Within this Bounded Field, Noble Phantasms will be unusable unless the holder made it themselves (i. e. Medusa’s Bellorphon) or the Noble Phantasm is based on an achievement (i. e. God Hand) or technique (i. e. Nine Lives).
This Noble Phantasm is pretty much the bane of Gilgamesh’s existence.
Personality:
Relationships:
Another one of Crying's ideas. In my opinion, the relationships seem very lackluster, but I had no other ideas.
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Our sheet looks great
For Cheops/Khufu, based on how he supposedly banned the worship of gods you could give him a Skill that negates abilities derived from divinity below a certain rank. You could also give him Innocent Monster or a similar Skill to represent how he was demonized by later Greek historians like Herodotus.
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...What do you mean by "our"?
Communism. Jokes.
Marx: For the good of the people, Comrade.
Personally, I think the Innovation: Communism is a bit too bland. Maybe add the effect of powering the user and their allies if they coordinate as equals; and if there's one ally whose power level is higher than the others, theirs will be distributed until the team's strengths are equal to each others.
Perhaps change the Skill name to Innovation: Universal Strength, but that's just me being carried away.
The Act of dozing off in the afternoon is a luxury indeed.
Coffee would be nice, though.
[Collection of my Servant Sheets]
Now Revamped!
As a side note relating to Egyptian Foreigner-class Servants, Apep is mentioned in the Cthulhu mythos. So someone who had made a connection with him (or rather D'endrahh, the Outer God who Apep is an alias for) could feasible be a Foreigner. It must be noted, though, that Apep was actually worshipped against, so the Servant candidate in question would most likely have to be some super-heretic or otherwise infamous person (there was however one Egyptian ruler actually named after Apep, known as 'Apepi - that's more or less the extent of what is known about him, though).
SleepMode: Okay. That effect sounds like a good idea.
NASTROVIE!
Good i will keep it in mind .
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When you wake a Dragon in his Lair...
In some esoteric interpretations, the biblical king Herod was equated to Herut, an evil serpent in Egyptian mythology that was itself syncretized with Apep/Apophis. So... could a Foreigner Herod, channelling the power of Herut/Apep/D'endrahh make sense, or would that be too much of a creative reach even for the Nasuverse?
Seems legit. Apep/Apophis is an alias anyway, so it stands to reason that he'd have more, Herut among them.
It could also be that Herod had no connection to D'endrahh in life, but forged some sort of connection from the Throne of Heroes thanks to the connotations. I mean, Abigail was also not a Foreigner originally, so people who became Foreigners after their time are fair game as far as I can tell.
Made a few adjustments to Marx.
That sounds cool. I've been thinking of making a sheet off of the Herut/Herod connection for ages, so this might be enough inspiration for me to actually write it up sometime. Thanks for the info!
I just ask has no one ideas of Nickola Tesla as Caster , Saladin or a better Bernhard von Heuvelmanns profile for the three i have some ideas but would prefer to hear the tips and suggestions here .
My ideas of Tesla as Caster instead Item/Territory creation a seperate "Enginer" skill that owns properties of both crestions and two to three initial/basic Nobelphantasm ,ssystem kraunos included(please can someone explain me its exact power-range and use varieties so that i have a idea of it) .
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And here is showing "Everything is connected witheach other be it heaven /sky , hell/Ground and the beings between (of our very paradox world)"
Self interpretation of a Budhistic Wisdom
Last edited by Kabalisto Koga; May 6th, 2018 at 04:08 PM.
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Do your own research sometimes (and learn to at least spell names properly). Short versions:
For Tesla, there's already a Skill called Item Construction (False) which denotes the use of Item Construction without magic being involved. This Tesla might also be the post-nervous breakdown version, being less physical than the Archer one. Check the System Keraunos bits yourself (also, make it different from the Archer one somehow - I suggest changing the abilities instead of adding a thousand new ones).
As for Bernhard, my suggestion involves a lot of the letter E. He's also a Heroic Spirit more modern than Mata Hari (besides being a lot less famous - keeping in mind that the age and fame of a Heroic Spirit greatly affect their strength), so I dread to see what you of all people will make him into.
Seriously though, do your own research. We know you can read (or at least we can assume).
Caster Tesla just seems boring to be honest, and I'm pretty sure they made Tesla an Archer just to prevent yet another Caster inventor/writer/non-magical person.
Do Elon Musk instead of Tesla
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