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    Lily versions are cancer

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Lily versions are cancer
    Fanservice. After all no one is canon apart from Medea.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    Adlet: Wow, that was a really good Noah sheet. Reminds me a lot of the one I wrote up, though obviously much more detailed (well, mine was actually a touched up version of one of the first sheets I ever made, so...). His personality is very intriguingly fleshed out as well. We both envisioned Noah as kind of an arrogant dick but I more went for a straight-out villainous characterization with few redeeming qualities (again, one of my first sheets, subtlety wasn't my strong suit) whereas you painted a more ambiguous portrayal. Even if a "hero" technically, I could easily see him ending up the final boss character in any Grail fic he were to star in. Because, again, he's a major dick.

    I find it a little odd that Noah doesn't have Voyager Of The Storm given he's most famously associated with a ship, but maybe you left it out since he has four Skills already. Also, Noah probably wouldn't have been that great a ship's captain anyways since it was a role he was forced into rather then training or anything (hence why I gave him the Skill at rank E for my own Noah sheet). I'm also not sure just how he'd end up qualifying for the Archer Class. Would the rainbow of the covenant take shape as a literal bow (and arrow)?
    Well Noah does say some pretty condescending stuff so it's fitting he's kind of like that. Anyway, I didn't give him Voyager of the Storms because he wasn't really a captain who voyaged in life, but instead he only built the Ark and locked himself up in it when the flood came. It didn't really seem fitting to be honest. But anyway why he qualifies for the Archer class is kind of a stretch, I've made it a possibly because you could interpret the Covenant as a literal bow if you wanted to and because his Gate of Beastylon lets him launch beamu (fire) attacks like Gilgamesh launches his swords in long ranged combat. I don't really think he should qualify for Archer, but well he does have means of long ranged combat like that so my friend got me to add it as a potential class.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Daneel Rush View Post
    It says a lot about Celtic warriors if they were expected to be able to perform after being trampled.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Hyperversum View Post
    Fanservice. After all no one is canon apart from Medea.
    I'm sorry to break this to you, but they're all pretty canon.
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    @Adlet, I was forgetting to comment it.

    I like your Noah, and in particular I liked the idea of giving him something as the Rainbow Covenant, something that give him such a interesting limitation had another great power. But my question is: even mount of other Servants would then "betray him"?
    For sure I wouldn't like to be another Rider when facing this guy, but I guess that this is some basic reality when talking about Grands.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    I'm sorry to break this to you, but they're all pretty canon.
    Just is Saber Lily canon? She wasn't like that when she drew Caliburn. But yeah, multiverse and shit. But still, shit.

    But yeah, I forgot Lily Medusa. My bad.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Hyperversum View Post
    @Adlet, I was forgetting to comment it.

    I like your Noah, and in particular I liked the idea of giving him something as the Rainbow Covenant, something that give him such a interesting limitation had another great power. But my question is: even mount of other Servants would then "betray him"?
    For sure I wouldn't like to be another Rider when facing this guy, but I guess that this is some basic reality when talking about Grands.
    Yes, God gave him control over all beasts on Earth and made it so that all would fear him. Even if he doesn't take control of an enemy Rider's beast, he's pretty impossible to beat for other Riders that use animals as mounts. For an example, if Medusa were to use her Pegasus, he'd just pull out a much older, bigger and stronger version from the pre-flood that would rip apart Medusa's. I've made it so that he's supposed to be like Gilgamesh in that regard (just weaker than him), though I'm about 99.9% certain Noah will be the Grand Rider in canon anyway.

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    They're all pretty canon. Even the gag ones.

    Just because you're not supposed to take them seriously doesn't mean they're invalid. I direct your attention to Neco Arc or Jaguarmurasensei.
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    As canon as a younger version of a form of Jeanne that never existed powered by Santa memes or literally an alt costume from a fighting game with backstory thrown at it later.
    Truly memes are the sixth magic.

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    Again, I don't see how that's so hard to swallow when you have a foot tall cat version of a character from an alternate dimension who shoots beams out of her eyes and runs Ahnenerbe and is around to point out that you were dumb in the actions that led to your death.
    Stuff I do for your attention and adulation
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    and runs Ahnenerbe
    For a moment there I thought you were referring to Nazi Germany's institution and was going to ask ''she fucking what'' but then I remembered that's the name of the shop in Carnival Phantasm and other TM stuff. Geez...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ail Don View Post
    Lily versions are the greatest thing about Grand Order.
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    Lily are just younger versions of an Heroic Spirit.

    I don't see whats there to hate about it.

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    EMIYA Lily on Grand Order when.

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    Quote Originally Posted by JetKinen View Post
    EMIYA Lily on Grand Order when.
    See:

    Fate/stay night.
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    Thats the joke.

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    I looked back on Royd's own take on this guy a few months back and thought I'd take a little shot myself. I figured I'd take his core ideas and put my own twist on them/expand on them further. Therefore I'd consider this a companion piece more than a separate sheet personally.


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    Servant: Berserker
    True Name: Bernardo Del Carpio
    Place of Origin: Spain
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Humanoid
    Armament: Halberd

    STR:
    B+
    END: B
    AGI: D
    MGI: D
    LCK: C
    NP: B+

    Height/Weight: 174kg, 70kg
    Likes: Family
    Dislikes: Treachery
    Talent: Hero Killing?
    Natural Enemy: Roland, Alfonso II

    Class Skills:


    Mad Enhancement: E-
    Raises basic parameters in exchange of hindering mental capacities. In some cases, also seals away Personal Skills. The user does not receive the benefits of Mad Enhancement nor do they lose any of their reasoning abilities, and overall they just become a little rougher. He possesses this rank for the sole reason that he has no specific martial feats with weaponry but instead with his own body - making Berserker the only class he can be summoned in despite the fact that he never went mad in his life at all.

    Personal Skills:

    Charisma: C
    The natural talent to command an army, boosts damage of allies in group combat. This rank is suitable for the general of a country's armed forces, most effective in acts of rebellion. His ambition and will to fight on in even the most dire of circumstances gives his allies a strong connection to him. Berserker was renowned as a great knight who lead an army against even the great Paladin Roland who was effectively invincible and possessed a legendary Holy Sword. If summoned in a Spanish sphere of influence, he would likely possess a higher rank.

    Instinct: B
    The power to "feel" the most favourable developments for oneself during battle. Berserker possesses a distinct sixth sense ensuring he is aware of the flow of battle, allowing him to react to a change in the flow before it is too late, granting bonuses to attack and defence. Regardless of the benefits of the skill, his Mad Enhancement causes him to ignore his instincts and fight on a set path regardless.

    Misery of the Future: A

    The repressed memories of Berserkers final days, fallen from glory and discovering the fate of his father. These memories enhance his bouts of anger by randomly increasing his grief and rage. Berserker obtains a '+' modifier to the Strength parameter when fighting unarmed, but fluctuating sorrow and anger makes his spiritual core unstable. The fact that his legend ended before this was resolved only enhances it further which muddies his memories of later life.

    Uncrowned Arms Mastership: -
    Arms competency that went unrecognised due to various reasons. According to the opponent, weapons and Charisma appear one rank lower. After the True Name is revealed the effect disappears.
    Despite being a renowned hero and certainly more than competent with many forms of weaponry, only feats of his physical prowess was recorded as he did not use weapons against his only recorded opponent. Therefore Berserker had no chance to display his abilities.

    Noble Phantasm:

    "Hoh, looks like you're already chocking!
    Witness my POWER!
    MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA MUDA!
    BE CRUSHED!"


    Victoria a Roncesvalles
    To Crush the Paladin


    Type: Anti-Unit
    Rank: B+
    Range: 1~20
    Max Targets: 1

    The crystallisation of Berserker's legendary victory over Roland in Roncesvalles pass and proof of his battle prowess. Roland, who was said to be untouchable and died without being wounded is recorded by contradiction in Spanish lore to have been killed by Berserker's bare hands.
    This Noble Phantasm manifests in materialising a pair of arms forged of pure magical energy in mid air. The arms themselves are not attached to Berserker and float in the air around one foot from his shoulders. They are large and can fully engulf a human within a single fist.

    After entering an effective range, he can attack with these detached magical limbs to deliver a series of powerful consecutive blows and those who are attacked by this Noble Phantasm are treated as if their END had received a 'Rank Down', these strikes bypass defences of an equal rank or below. Much like how Berserker was supposedly recorded to have killed Roland be either strangling him or literally crushing him within his arms if he envelops a target within these additional hands or wrapped in the arms of Victoria a Roncesvalles must make an END check. Massive damage is taken and if failed by a notable margin, the target will find themselves crushed within the mighty grip.

    Lore

    A legendary hero of medieval Kingdom of Asturias, in his prime, his legend was comparable to other legendary heroes like El Cid. He was the national hero of Spain until he was replaced by El Cid.

    The nephew of King Alfonso II. The king was not happy between Count Sancho of Saldaņa courting Alfonso's sister Dona Ximena and refused to give the couple his blessings but they married regardless.Out of pure spite that the secret marriage was against his command, he had Sancho blinded and thrown into a dungeon and forced his sister to join a convent. However Dona was already pregnant with her son who was born and named Bernardo Del Carpio. Alfonso took his nephew as his foster son and made heir due to the king having no wife or children, but kept the fact his father was alive and imprisoned a secret.

    Growing up suspicious of his (adopted) father, he carefully moved around court as he grew older and even though everyone was ordered to not tell Bernardo the truth but he deduced his back story regardless. He confronted Alfonso in secret and attempted to persuade him to release Sancho though Alfonso refused, this action lost him favour with the king. Bernardo was commanded to never speak of the matter again and although the order made Bernardo's heart bleed, he agreed.

    Alfonso conspired to send a message to Charlemagne to ask for the emperor's aid in defeating his enemies and he would name Charlemagne as his heir instead of Bernardo. The emperor agreed but the people did not. Seeing this as a betrayal to the people, many of Alfonso's vassals banded together to resist the insidious king under the leadership of Bernardo. They fought hard and proud with the might of a kingdom that would be subjugated by none. Their resistance forced Charlemagne out of the country and as the foreign army retreated, Bernardo's united forces set upon the rearguard. Here he faced the invincible Paladin in single combat, knowing weaponry would be useless - Bernardo killed Roland with his bare hands. It was not consistent how it was done, either via strangling or outright crushing him in his grip and in truth Bernardo himself cannot recall. This decisive victory ended the conspiracy of Alfonso so in revenge he killed Sancho.


    Personality

    Unlike most Berserkers, he has lost no sanity at all. Berserker is an intelligent and passionate man. He is a bright and mostly innocent lad who just wants the best for everybody. His is prone to some unfortunate moods wings where he becomes more angry and sorrowful, he knows they're certainly not constructive and does his best to control them.

    Not knowing his parents in life, he desperately longs for such a connection and may become emotionally dependent of his master should they fit his category of 'parent' which at times can be a little broad.

    His wish is for an untied Spain to become a world power and guide the future as it should… Don't believe it? Neither does Berserker. His wish is ultimately rather selfish. A world where children don't have to live without their mothers and fathers. Some magi could find this aspect of Berserker easily exploitable.

    El Cid: Berserker's senior. He cannot help but look up to the figure of El Cid. Even though he replaced Berserker as the national hero of Spain, he feels no resentment and respect him greatly for his martial prowess and multiple victories while Berserker himself is famous for only one deed really.

    "Look master. I don't care how much quartz you roll, I'm not calling him Senpai"

    Roland: "Ahh. The great rival returns. You were the greatest opponent I ever faced… Maybe the greatest I will ever face. You seem far stronger than when I last saw you so who knows how this legendary rematch will go? Anyways although we were on opposite fields of battle I can't help but… Pardon? What do you mean you've never seen me before?! I killed you! … That’s not what happened! I KILLED YOU THEN AND I CAN KILL YOU RIGHT NOW!"

    "…Sorry, that was rude of me. You look the same but you seem so different and much more powerful than I remember. May I reintroduce myself?"

    Sakata Kintoki: "Why do you always run for your mother? She just wants to love you! Do you know what it's like to never know the affection of a mother? You really should take them for granted. An overbearing parent is much better than one whose never around!"


    Tactics

    Due to his low level of Mad Enhancement, this Berserker is not as taxing as many of his brethren and far easier to control. Unfortunately as he is less dangerous to the master, he lacks the same level of dangerous unpredictability of other Berserkers.

    He prefers honourable combat but certainly has no qualms with sabotage and cowardly sneak attacks. He is most effective in close combat but possesses no real viable ranged options - leaving him at a disadvantage against Archers, Assassins and Casters. However against these classes, all he really needs to do is to get in range.

    A straightforward, relatively safe and easy-to-use Berserker really.


    Key Words/Craft Essences

    Paradox Eclipse
    "The legend of a certain hero was built around another.
    Specifically that one killed the other.

    However in most legends, this never happened. One met fate another way.
    When a tale is built around one fact that is was false, it all falls apart.
    I think I understand. We come from different worlds where different things happened.
    In his I don't exist… or did and fell.

    But this Quantum Time Lock stuff confuses me, what do you mean some things are 'set'?

    Did I kill Roland?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Arashi_Leonhart View Post
    Again, I don't see how that's so hard to swallow when you have a foot tall cat version of a character from an alternate dimension who shoots beams out of her eyes and runs Ahnenerbe and is around to point out that you were dumb in the actions that led to your death.
    Don't ruin my idea that the Nasuverse is a serious universe.

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    Kara no Kyoukai. Probably most serious title with little in the way of comic relief. Remaining Sense of Pain, probably the most dour story.

    Shiki goes to meet Azaka at Ahnenerbe.

    There are cat people in the kitchens making their coffee. CAT PEOPLE.
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    What's with all the Roland lately.

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