I made a Vlad Avenger a while back, though it's mostly a joke sheet. As has been said by others, he's not really a good fit for the class.
I made a Vlad Avenger a while back, though it's mostly a joke sheet. As has been said by others, he's not really a good fit for the class.
If I was gonna make a younger Vlad, the only differences I'd make would have him be a Rider and give him a different NP, probably something like the charge of vampire bats his army used which contributed to the legend of dracula's powers.
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Might still do that at some point
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Bloble and others: I said Dracule Vlad only as Comparison and i made the two Pharaoh based on their importance and significance in their dynasty also inpoint of fame are also Karna and Arjuna quite unknown outside their homeland /culturspehre just like Setgos I and Sesostris I .
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Class: Lancer
Alternative Classes: Caster, Assassin, Avenger
True Name: Macelo
Title: “The Last of the Telchines”, “Genius Demoness”
Source: Greek Mythology
Place of Origin: The Mediterranean
Alignment: Neutral Evil
Gender: Female
Likes: the ocean, cloudy days, thunderstorms
Dislikes: gods, humans, other life beings
Height: 152 cm
Weight: 44 kg
Lore
Parameters and Skill
Noble Phantasm
Last edited by Hakuro; March 18th, 2018 at 10:10 AM.
Macelo: In her lore section, when you say her tribe lacked "apathy" to other life, did you mean empathy? I feel like it would make more sense in that context. I also think that, if you're going to give her an entirely unique Magecraft Skill, it couldn't hurt to give her some detail on what kinds of spells she can cast and what makes hers different then other forms of Magecraft. Other then those minor critiques, it's a pretty cool sheet overall.
Appreciate the BOTW faceclaim by the way. Even if it's a bit ironic seeing the sweet girl-next-door Mipha used to portray what's basically a misanthropic arms-dealer.
Last edited by RoydGolden; March 17th, 2018 at 08:48 PM. Reason: Fixed gender
The thing with Karna and Arjuna is that, with fame boost or not, they were demigods throwing universe busters at each other with the whole Indian pantheon watching them fight. You can't really compare a Pharaoh like Sethos, whose lore would make him quite strong if he wasn't completely overshadowed by Ozymandias, with two of the strongest mythological heroes to ever exist. If you made your Pharaohs have a similar condition to Vlad's, then it'd be other thing.
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Any thing I need to fix with my sheet?
Height: 176cm
Weight: 73kg
Likes: Nature, smoking tobacco, love stories, guns
Dislikes: Monarchy, dictators
Attribute: Man
Alignment: Neutral Good
Catalyst: A bloody handkerchief with his initials embroidered in it, said to have been found by his lover the night after his execution.
Parameters:
STR ◙◙◙◙○ B
END ◙◙◙◙○ B+
AGI ◙◙◙○○ C
MGI ◙○○○○ E
LUC ◙◙○○○ D
NP ◙◙◙◙○ B
Berserker’s true name is Joaquim José da Silva Xavier, commonly known as, he was a soldier, miner and dentist; but most of all he was participant in theToothpullerTiradentes, a conspiracy that aimed to grant the state of Minas Gerais independence when Brazil was still a colony under the control of Portugal. It was a failure, and Tiradentes was ultimately executed in an exaggerated display of the monarchy’s power. He was hanged, but after that his body was chopped and his pieces were scattered around the city.Minas ConspiracyInconfidência Mineira
Berserker bears an astonishing resemblance to Jesus Christ (or, at least, with how the messiah is usually portrayed). He dresses in a white tunic, has long brown hair and beard, white skin and brown eyes.
In life he didn’t have this appearance, however, due to certain circumstances, that is his form as a Heroic Spirit. Because of that Berserker will often prefers to wear modern clothing, tying his hair in a ponytail.
He also carries a blunderbuss and two pistols, the weapons he had when he was captured in life. They, obviously, clash immensely with his holy appearance, and are the only clue to his summoner that no, they did not summon the son of God.
Personality, Lore and Wish
Class Skills
Personal Skills
Noble Phantasm(s)
Bond Craft Essence
Relationships
Last edited by pinetree; January 16th, 2020 at 10:46 PM. Reason: faceclaim
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First of all, I don't think that At the Boundary is justified with your description and explanation. I suppose that the skill is meant for those whose essential existence is linked to Death, or is Death itself. Simply pillaging and killing for survival is not enough to qualify for that Skill, in my opinion.
The other Skills are meh, too many and most of them are placeholder Skills for whatever he did in his legends with bland Ranks. I'd like to see some of them removed (or merged!) while fleshing out the description for why he has that skill. Seriously, it feels like reading a lorem ipsum.
Then his NP. Nice concept. Very buff-y for a rather obscure(?) figure, and the first requirement needs some tweaking. I guess that not all Servants are equivalent to an army, so probably toning down that first requirement by a bit?
Aaaaaaand lastly, it would be very helpful and kind of you if your sheets are as good grammatically as your question.
---Joaquim: Make his First NP revives him after 3 days and he's perfect. Jokes aside, this is a very, very good sheet. Admittedly I have a small bias towards Berserkers with NPs not intended for fighting, but the idea of an unkillable idea is really interesting. Good job!
Last edited by MehKitteh; March 17th, 2018 at 11:34 PM. Reason: Dammit, I double-posted
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Dreams of swallow cuts.
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summs up a lot of my ironic weeaboo circles
I was actually really close to making his first NP like that! It was "an idea that comes back no matter what" instead of "an idea that cannot be killed" until I found out about Perpétua Mineira and decided to change half of the sheet. Also at that point I think the Jesus fake out was hurting the actual Servant.
Also I share your love for NPs not intended for fighting, and not only on Berserkers.
Why is Joaquim's sheet making me cry manly tears?
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Nice.
Best Jesus.
Died to save us from a day of work
You did a good job with the Tiradentes sheet. Good personality, NPs are pretty well tied to his legends. I don't really feel Mad Enhancement (Fake), but it is what it is. I like the Amaranth visual going on on the first NP
Personally if we're speaking about making national heroes, Tiradentes never really seemed to be interesting because lets be frank, the only thing he did was be a scapegoat and later be idealized into a Jesus Figure. I just didn't think it was a compelling dude to write about mechanically-wise.
I think you did the best possible job one could do about Tiradentes. I just don't think even that is much interesting.
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Really love that Martha bit though
I struggled quite a bit with his Mad Enhancement, I knew I wanted him to be a Berserker, but felt like his personality didn't fit with ME EX, and also didn't want him to lose his sanity or speech capability. It's hard to create a character you like just to take away their personality I guess.
Yeah I can get that, my idea for Tiradentes originally came from Siegfried in Apocrypha. I really liked the concept of a servant who was considered a hero in life but didn't achieve his personal standards and objectives in heroism, and for some reason that got me thinking about Tiradentes. Someone who isn't even considered a hero anymore, what if he actually wanted to be one? That's how it started.
Thanks! I thought quite a bit about all those interactions, but in the end the most simple did come out as the best one.
Did he have to be a Berserker though?
If you're using the Jesus imagery, you could've went with him being a very shitty Ruler
The fake savior gets put into the class for saints. Things would be even more awkward for him.
Also, don't you think that something like perpetual, eternal or everlasting would be a better translation for Perpétua? "Always" doesn't really bring the sense of time that word has
Last edited by JetKinen; March 18th, 2018 at 06:09 PM.
I didn't think I would live long enough to see a sheet about Tiradentes, further still one SO good.
As someone from Minas, I have to say: Congratulations
Now I only need to see a sheet about JK, Santos Dummond or any bandeirante