Create-A-Servant 2

**Bird of Hermes** · May 19th, 2019, 12:46 PM

Originally Posted by Historia

Celtchar's spear initial designs,

Going by the designs and descriptions, I’d say 2 and 3 are the most fitting. I lean more towards number 3 myself.

**Dragolord09** · May 19th, 2019, 09:19 PM

Honestly don't know how much this will help, but here's a page filled with weaponry-type Noble Phantasms:

https://drzhoulaboratorio.fandom.com/es/wiki/UBW

**RoydGolden** · May 19th, 2019, 11:13 PM

Originally Posted by Dragolord09

Honestly don't know how much this will help, but here's a page filled with weaponry-type Noble Phantasms:

https://drzhoulaboratorio.fandom.com/es/wiki/UBW

Do you have any idea where these come from? Because I'm pretty sure a bunch were taken from this very thread (including the very first one, from jojo_reference's Arminius).

**Dragolord09** · May 19th, 2019, 11:25 PM

Considering the fact I recognize one of those NP actually coming from this guy: https://tmfatefanon.fandom.com/wiki/...entBloodArthur, along with your own comment, leads me to the conclusion that that collection is a random mishmash of official NPs, fan-made ones gathered from across the net, and his own handiwork. Still I must say, I never knew Arturia and her knights had so many weapons besides the ones they're currently using.

**cooldownnow** · May 20th, 2019, 06:01 PM

My Great Deeds

Class: Saber
Other Classes: Lancer, Rider
True Name: The Brave Little Tailor
Alignment: Chaotic Good
Place of Origin: Grimm’s Fairy Tales

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Parameters:

STR: E
END: E
AGI: E
MGI: E
LCK: A
NP: E-EX

Likes: Himself, Adventure
Dislikes: Nothing much really, he’s a chill dude
Talent: Bluffing
Natural Enemy: Anybody with the skill True Name Discernment
Attribute: Man
Armament: A large sewing needle
Catalyst: Some thread(Any thread)

Class Skills:

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Personal Skills:

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Noble Phantasm(s):

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Lore:

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The Brave Little Tailor is a story written down by the Brothers Grimm in their quest to document local fairy tales. In it the brave little tailor kills seven flies with a swat of his hand protecting his jam and bread. After preforming the deed he realizes that what he did was the stuff of legends. Deciding that the life of a tailor was too small for a man like him created a belt with the words ‘7 In One Stroke’ on it and set off for adventure.

He first came across a giant who he tricked into thinking the tailor was stronger than him and then survived an assassination attempt making them flee in terror of the ‘powerful’ warrior. Next he fell asleep on the side of the road and a crowd gathered to marvel at the man who’s belt proclaimed ‘7 In One Stroke’. Eventually the local king’s knights took notice and the king fearing the power of such a warrior in his kingdom offered to make him general in order to keep him from causing any trouble.

However his reputation got too powerful as the soldiers under his command feared that one day the tailor would get angry and kill seven of them with each stroke. They stated that unless the general was received of command they would quit. The king however feared the wrath that firing the tailor would bring so he sent him on a dangerous journey, kill two giants that were terrorizing the kingdom. In order to make sure the tailor performed the deed the king offered him half the kingdom and the daughters hand in marriage if he succeeded.

The tailor went and managed to defeat the giants turning them on each other with well placed rocks while they slept. Returning victorious the tailor asked for his prize but the king demanded he preform two more tasks, tame a wild unicorn and kill a rampaging boar. The Tailor performed these tasks by allowing the rampaging animals to charge at him and then moving out of the way at the last second causing the unicorn to get its horn stuck in a tree and the boar to get trapped in an abandoned chapel. From there he cut off the unicorns horn and waited for the boar to tire itself before killing it. Now he had completed the tasks and earned the princesses hand in marriage.

Some time passed and the princess hated the tailor thinking him to be uncouth and ill-mannered. Eventually after hearing him talk in his sleep she realized that the tailor was actually a tailor(note he had a name and didn’t just go by tailor probably). After sending out spies to confirm it she old the king and they agreed to hatch an assassination plot. They would have a lot of soldiers enter his room in the middle of the night and stab him to death, the perfect crime. However the night of the assassination they heard him talk in his sleep about all his incredible deeds and reveal that he knew they were outside his door for it turns out he had been warned ahead of time by the kings squire. They did the only logical thing one could do in that situation and ran away ever to be heard from again.

The king and princess were to afraid now to try and assassinate him again and so the Brave Little Tailor lived out the rest of his days as a king.

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Bond:

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Creator Notes: So yeah the brave little tailor. He’s a very fun fairy tale because while he starts off seemingly just an idiot he does do genuinely great deeds and him defeating the unicorn and boar were pure skill. So I decided that the servant would focus on the idea of the Tailor’s journey and get stronger the more deeds he performs. Examples are given in the short story I wrote at the beginning

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You know I've wanted to ask for a while, Shiki-Pon how do you do the thing where when you click on the image and it turns it into another image. I've been messing around trying to do that my self but I'm having trouble. It's a very neat thing to have with a servant sheet.

**Saron** · May 21st, 2019, 03:19 AM

”For God and Glory, face the fury of His eternally loyal servant!”

Name; Jacques de Molay Grand Master of the Last Templars
Class; Saber
Armament: Sword, armor
Alignment: Lawful Good
Source: Historical Fact, France
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Human

Stats:
Strength: B
Agility: B
Endurance: C
Mana: B
Luck: D-
Noble Phantasm: B

Likes: God
Dislikes: Demons, hearsay
Talents: Faith
Natural Enemy: Pope Clement V, King Philip IV of France

Skills

Noble Phantasm

Lore

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Published at 12 at night, after not posting for years, and without proofreading.

**Shiki-pon** · May 21st, 2019, 05:06 AM

Brave Little Tailor: Interesting execution you've gone with, and the sheet's good. The only grumble I've got with it is that Charisma and Mystery Slayer could each be ranked down by a single rank (mostly the latter since he never slew anything named, and there are probably bigger Mystery Slayers around who only get to rank B).

And the way you do the faceclaim concealing is by using collapse tags. Just put COLLAPSE="(image1)" and then /COLLAPSE on the other end with image2 (the one you want hidden) between the tags.

Molay: Are you sure about the faceclaim here? Not only is it scifi (which could be chalked up to demon stuff I suppose), but it also lacks the white mantle and the red cross, both of which were the symbols of the Knights Templar. One would suppose the grand master would go for at least one of these.
As for the sheet itself, I'm not entirely sure why he would have Protection of the Faith at its current rank, since that would probably start showing corruption in his personality (the lack of a personality section kinda hurts here). Also, where's the Templars' vaunted money? I would assume one of the richest people of his time would receive some monetary benefit, even if that stuff was stolen.
Also dunno if the NP should be B++ (since that's Stella's rank too, give or take a few Broken Phantasms). It doesn't seem to do much.

34 · May 21st, 2019, 07:38 AM

What do you mean, the Black Templars Space Marine is the perfect FC for Molay

**Shiki-pon** · May 21st, 2019, 07:45 AM

Originally Posted by 34

What do you mean, the Black Templars Space Marine is the perfect FC for Molay

Only in the sense that one of those Marines has 'Templar' in the name. The sigil spam bearing the wrong sigil is what bothers me the most, really.

34 · May 21st, 2019, 07:50 AM

I mean,

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That, combined with his Innocent Monster demonic shenanigans, makes the FC choice less weird

**Shiki-pon** · May 21st, 2019, 07:58 AM

One wonders what idiot was in charge of coloring that, given that, despite the exact shape of the cross varying wildly, the Templars always had red crosses.

This being the (poor quality) original piece, having been drawn in 1911

White mantles with black crosses would be the Teutonic Order instead (which handily explains the Black Templars' colors).
I mean, the FC could at least be a Dark Angel, which would look more monastic and maybe be more in keeping with the Templar Order (admittedly mainly due to not having visible sigils on their robes in the first place).

34 · May 21st, 2019, 08:09 AM

i stand corrected. iirc the knights of malta also use black crosses.
but still, i think Black Templars are better fit than any other og spechs mahrines chapters

**Shiki-pon** · May 21st, 2019, 09:54 AM

FC Link
Alternate Classes: Saber, Berserker, Avenger
True Name: Tirda Gabaz
Alignment: Chaotic Evil
Origin: Africa (10th century)
Armament: Shotel

Parameters:
STR: D+
END: C
AGI: B
MANA: D
LUCK: B
NP: C

Skills

Class Skills

Self-Concealment - Rank B: A Skill replacing Assassin’s normal Presence Concealment. Rather than erasing one’s presence, one’s ‘self’ is erased instead. This allows the concealment of one’s identity and parameters, even from the user’s own Master, as well as a limited ability to alter how the user’s parameters are displayed.
This Skill is the result of the multiple identities which Assassin used in life. With the many rumors that comprise the account of her life, her ability to obfuscate her identity and abilities is amplified.

Personal Skills

Innocent Monster - Rank C+: An attribute possessed by Servants whose true history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations and gossips they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter, without concern for the actual person's will or appearance. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this Personal Skill cannot be removed.
There are many different stories relating Assassin’s deeds, as well as the nature of her true identity. As she was also known as the manifestation of divine punishment in the Aksumite Empire, her abilities have been altered to suit. Her assumed names have presently come to mean ‘fire’ and ‘destruction’, in the language of her region.

Charisma - Rank D: A composite Skill consisting of a person's charm as well as the natural talent to command or unify an army or country. Increases the ability of allies during group battles. A rare talent, and an ability inherent to Servants of the Saver class.
Despite her background and reputation, Assassin was able to amass many allies for the sake of her conquest, as well as rule in relative peace after taking the Aksumite Empire for her own.

Wrath of God - Rank B: A unique Personal Skill born from the user’s reputation as well as their own anger. It is a curse of burning hatred, manifesting upon the user’s person and weaponry when in combat. However, the effect does not reach the heights of divine fire.
Assassin’s fire is something created to punish the people that she loathes. As such, though behaving otherwise like ordinary fire, Assassin’s flames do not damage buildings. When touching upon a person, however, the flames roar like a conflagration, beginning to consume them as though with intent.

Noble Phantasms

Description

Likes: Revenge, thoroughness
Dislikes: Gold, excessive moralizing
Talents: Destruction, balancing stones
Natural Enemy: Her father

Assassin is known by many names, including Gudit, Yodit, Esato and Ga’wa. Her true identity, however, is Tirda Gabaz, the Despoiler of Aksum.

Tirda is a brooding figure, quick to anger and slow to forgive. The vengeance she claimed in life never brought her happiness outside of momentary satisfaction. As such, she is largely uninterested in worldly affairs, at least when they do not relate to combat. Indeed, in combat she is given freedom to focus fully on her own survival and not to dwell on her distorted past. She also delights in the chance to relive some of her moments of glorious revenge, which she still recalls with pride.
Due to the events that led to her exile, Tirda has a disdain for those of clerical persuasion, as well as members of Abrahamic religions. What she disagrees with the most is their (to her mind) puritanical ways and their moralizing. She regards her as a free spirit in this regard, and prefers to act in opposition to those that exhibit signs of “righteousness”. Tirda also refers to herself as sincerely evil when confronted, believing herself to be one of the few that admits their true nature. Partly due to the effects of Innocent Monster obfuscating her identity, even in her own mind, she clings to categories, 'avenger', 'destroyer', 'evil', in order to possess some stable sense of self.
Unsurprisingly, Tirda is not particularly fond of Heroic Spirits that stem from Abrahamic roots. For the most part, as Heroic Spirits are often heroic in nature, and their tales are sometimes used as moral lessons, she finds it easier to be in opposition to most other Servants. However, she truly loves defensive-natured Servants, especially those with defensive fortresses, for she delights in turning their defenses upon to her own advantage. Fellow destroyers and killers of men, she feels, are something akin to brethren in arms.
Towards her Master, Tirda is largely indifferent. She brooks no argument as to what she desires to do, but does not care enough to menace her Master unless they have done something to deserve it. From the perspective of the Master, Tirda is a tool of destruction that truly enjoys what she does, and as such can be manipulated by someone cunning enough. Naturally, one embarking on the mission of manipulating Tirda ought to tread carefully, as she is likely to punish someone trying to trick her as severely as she can.
Tirda steadfastly believes that her lack of contentment in life was caused by her vengeance not being fully completed. In order to fully take her revenge, she would not only have had to wipe out her family, but all traces of the Solomonic lineage. As such, she wishes for the destruction of the Ark of the Covenant, which was according to legend hidden from her seeking eyes. With the artifact gone, Tirda believes that she will finally be satisfied.

Lore

Tirda Gabaz was born as a princess of the Aksumite Empire. Though she was part of the royal line, her gender and youth made of her to be of lesser importance in matters of court. Out of whimsy, and perhaps out of a desire for attention, she seduced one of the young acolytes of the Church of Our Lady Mary of Zion. In order to please her, the young man snuck into the church’s treasure and cut pieces out of the golden curtains there in order to prepare a gift for his lady. The acolyte’s vandalism was soon discovered, and confronted, she laid the blame on Tirda.
As punishment for her actions, Tirda was stripped of her rank and exiled. She settled near the Aksumite Empire’s furthest borders, now bearing the name Gudit and working as a prostitute in order to survive. Drifting south, Tirda eventually arrived to the kingdom of Damot, whose king had recently met his death in the desert, and the country labored under a succession crisis between the king’s sons.
Tirda seized the opportunity, seducing one of the princes and helping him defeat the other. Her lover met with an unfortunate accident shortly after his coronation, but not before Tirda herself had become queen. As ruler, her takeover of the kingdom was seen by the people as a welcome reprieve from the bickering princes and their warmongering father, the former king. Tirda took the time to establish good relations with her neighbouring countries, including the Aksumite Empire, who were none the wiser as to her true identity. As her reign carried on, she began to prepare her forces, supposedly pacifying the borders of her kingdom.
Deeming her army strong enough, Tirda launched an invasion of the Aksumite Empire. As a terror tactic, she had her soldiers pile rocks on top of each other where they made their camp, and with each soldier placing a single stone on the pile, the pile grew into a veritable mountain. She faced the emperor of the Aksumite Empire, her elderly father, in battle and crushed his forces. From there, she embarked on a spree of destruction, burning churches and destroying funerary markers, as well as imprisoning the rest of the royal line in a fortress before burning it down with them inside. As a show of force, she plugged the watering holes in the most luxurious area of the Empire, turning it into a desert. Unsurprisingly, Tirda’s actions were seen as though they were the wrath of God.
With her vengeance achieved, Tirda settled in to rule over her newly expanded kingdom, taking the regnal name Esato, ‘fire’, from her subjects. She was pleased to find that her subjects also began to see the identity of ‘Gudit’ as equivalent to ‘destruction’.
Tirda reigned for the rest of her life in relative peace, ruling the land for four decades and establishing a new, if short-lived, dynasty. She occupied some of her reign searching for the fabled Ark of the Covenant, which had reputedly been kept in the same church from where is erstwhile first lover had stolen the gold sheets that began her journey.

Notes

**Vance** · May 21st, 2019, 10:07 AM

Has anyone made a sheet for Marie Curie cause I haven't seen one yet. Also I had the idea to fuse her with the phantom of the Chernobyl Suicide Squad.

**King of Padoru** · May 21st, 2019, 10:20 AM

Look at the index on the first page. There are two Madame Curies (both of them very well done in different manners, btw) already, but you're more than free to do another one. I'm curious to see how the Phantom shenanigans would work with her. Perhaps she'd have the Elephant Foot as a NP similar to the Ark of Covenant?

Tirda: I can't comment much on the sheet because the quality is as good as usual, but come on, you should have directly made her an Avenger

**Vance** · May 21st, 2019, 10:33 AM

Can't find her. Can you give me a page.

Also how about a sheet for Cesario/Viola form Shakespeare's Twelfth Night. I can't imagine her as anything but a Saberface.

**King of Padoru** · May 21st, 2019, 10:36 AM

Here and here. By any chance, were you looking in the France section instead of the Slavs? It may explain why you couldn't find her

**Vance** · May 21st, 2019, 10:42 AM

I actually checked both and thanks for the help.

Also I have a bit of a joke servant:

The Google Search Engine personified by Void Shiki

34 · May 21st, 2019, 10:56 AM

Originally Posted by King of Padoru

I'm curious to see how the Phantom shenanigans would work with her. Perhaps she'd have the Elephant Foot as a NP similar to the Ark of Covenant?

I think my Berserker Marie Curie already has everything the Chernobyl Suicide Squad has--as in, her body can literally turn as radioactive as the Elephant Foot.

My idea of a fusion for Marie Curie is with Lise Meitner (who, by the way, has exactly the same birthday as her), so that she can be radioactive and create nukes at the same time.

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Originally Posted by Vance

The Google Search Engine personified by Void Shiki

wat

**Shiki-pon** · May 21st, 2019, 11:33 AM

Originally Posted by King of Padoru

Tirda: I can't comment much on the sheet because the quality is as good as usual, but come on, you should have directly made her an Avenger

But this was a rare chance to make an actually stabby Assassin... Sorta sneaky too.

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