I always was curious about the classification of fictional heroes, especially when the character's nationality differed from the author's.Originally Posted by RoydGolden
I always was curious about the classification of fictional heroes, especially when the character's nationality differed from the author's.
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I had trouble deciding that one too.I always was curious about the classification of fictional heroes, especially when the character's nationality differed from the author's.
It was either that or India, and with the precedent of Servants like Lancelot and Scathach I decided the country where the hero's legend is told matters more than where they were described as being born in the story itself.
Honestly, that sort of execution for Benedict's NP seems a little bland. The burning and pillaging was aimed at extinguishing a "flame of rebellion", so maybe it could have some sort of psychological effect? I can't think of anything beyond that at the moment, but it's something.
He is going to have a something to do with his turncoat nature (from "bluecoat" to "redcoat", as it were), right?
Yes, I never heard of Lancelot in my life so it will be weird that this Lancelot count as a French hero. He literally have 2 English word fused as his name, you know we have hate boners toward British people hundred years ago so it can't be we have a prince named Lance-a-lot!
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I've already given Arnold an NP based on his legend of betraying the Republic, that lets him disguise himself as whoever his target most trusts (basically a perfect espionage ability), if that's what you mean Shiki-pon. But I wanted to give him a more direct offensive NP as well. Thanks for the ideas in any case.
Well. I didn't expect my sheets to be common favorites. I'll be honest, my favorites are much more selfish...
King of Padoru's Medjed's up there because it just appeals to my deep-seated love of all things Medjed. Roydgolden's Drusilla coincidentally matches up perfectly with a Caligula I statted up before he came out for FGO. Fabruzer's Samael (which seems to be a common favorite here) inspires some jealousy for me in how good it is. I mentioned the Beast Class as one of Crowley's Alternate Servant Classes because I've already come up with part (but not all of it). I've also got half a sheet for a certain individual who I can't decide whether he'd work best as Beast or Berserker. C'est la vie.
Out of curiosity, would you mind posting up that Caligula sheet? I'm pretty sure posting alternate versions of canon Servants is acceptable here (since I did a Rider Caligula a while ago).
While I'd love to, it's a spoiler for something. (However, now that I've said that I've already spoiled the identity. I'm a fool who walked into this trap I laid for myself)
That's fair. I take it you're going to be writing a fanfic with some of your original Servants sometime? I'd love to read it.
And it's not necessarily that much of a spoiler, since it just tells me Caligula will be a Servant in a fic of yours, not which one he'll be.
I never thought Medjed would be a favorite, honestly, but everyone has his own preferences. Glad you liked it.
My next sheet would have a NP of a similar origin (this is a huge hint btw, considering I mentioned before it's a sheet related to Drusilla), but my options to portray it are either big-ass fire or gloriously wanked Satanic beast. Help plz.
Well, that depends on what the fire is supposed to represent, I guess. The fire forming a summon like with my Cromwell is one idea. Another would be to give the fire certain properties, say, similar to the Count of Monte Cristo's black flames. Fire could also dig downward to create a pit/lake of fire if something hellish is what you're going for. Later on you can expand on that idea.
Lets say we're going with the hell pit thingy. After its dug in, you might, say, have it function as a sort of portal to the Reverse Side of the World (a hellish part of it), or maybe have any fire at all spawn salamanders or something.
This is just stream of thought, though. Hard to say anything more precise without more concrete information (which of course would spoil the sheet).
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Twin Sahadeva(Sa) and Nakula(Na) Rider
Height: 181 cm
Weight: 62kg
Alignment: Lawful Good
Attribute: Earth
Origin: India
Weapon:
Alternative classes: Both Rider and Saber (as double or regular servant) Sahadeva also can be summoned as Assassin and Caster and Nakula as Lancer
Likes: Sa:His Wisdom,cattles Na:
Dislikes: in Progress...
Talents: in progres...
Parameters
Background
Personality
Skills
Noble Phantasm
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Yeah, I get it's hard to give advice properly without having the sheet spoiled. The fact that I'm not even sure about what class would the Servant be (Saber, Rider, Berserker, Avenger, or even Alter Ego) makes things worse.
Nakula & Sahadeva: 2-in-1 Servants don't have individual NPs. For more reference, see Anne & Mary or Gān Jiàng & Mò Yé
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I'm back! Geez, I can't believe I just fell off the site for half a month. At least I think it's been half a month. I've spent most of the day catching up on what i missed. I'm gonna post my feedback on the Servants have caught my eye within an hour (hopefully).
And Koga, what did I say about posting skeletons rather than a completed sheet. It makes you look lazy and you can't really improve on them well because people can't give decent feedback. And I second King of Padoru's critique on the Noble Phantasms; combination Servants have one Noble Phantasm.
Now if you'll excuse me, i going to compile my feedback list.
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Quick question, all the Foreigner Class Servants revealed so far seem to have a Class Skill called "Existence Outside of the Domain" which is cool and all... But what does it do?
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Hasn't been explained yet, as far as I know. None of the Foreigners have appeared in the material books yet and their profiles don't say anything about it either.Quick question, all the Foreigner Class Servants revealed so far seem to have a Class Skill called "Existence Outside of the Domain" which is cool and all... But what does it do?
Gain 2 critical stars every turn and increase own debuff resistance by 12%Quick question, all the Foreigner Class Servants revealed so far seem to have a Class Skill called "Existence Outside of the Domain" which is cool and all... But what does it do?
I'm not sure if it does anything lore-wise, it just signifies a Foreigner's existence as belonging to another dimension.Quick question, all the Foreigner Class Servants revealed so far seem to have a Class Skill called "Existence Outside of the Domain" which is cool and all... But what does it do?
I see it as being a purely flavor Skill like Divinity (at least until Divinity was revealed to have some mechanical benefits in later installments of the franchise).
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By the way, Lambda, are you aware the link in your profile that's supposed to lead to your Servant sheets instead goes to a weird old discussion of some user's sister drawing Sakura?
Cool.
As for why I asked - basically I'm still working on that Alter-Ego Servant sheet I mentioned yesterday, but the Lore section for why he became a servant heavily depended on another person and their history together made the Lore entry so bloated that I just decided to split it into two separate sheets - the original Alter-Ego and a Foreigner sheet that creates a pretty cool rivalry in my opinion.
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Barnum: From what little I know of him (I wanted to see the Greatest Showman, but i have a bad habit of procrastination), this seems to fit him perfectly. That Sham Perpetuation Skill seems particularly impressive and I love his Barnum's Circus Noble Phantasm. And his personality is also very fitting. I remember that my parents used to take my siblings and I to see the Ringling Bros and Barnum Bailey circus every once in a while. I liked it quite a bit and it's a shame it got shut down. But with the alleged animal rights issues, it's understandable. However, I still don't understand why people seem to be so fond of throwing hissyfits over animals. If they put that much enthusiasm and effort into solving poverty and hunger, I'm sure that the process would go faster.
Elizabeth I: Way to take the implications that Frances Drake is actually Elizabeth I in disguise and run with them, gyrowins! I'm not appreciative of traps, but this is actually pretty good. Reminds me a slight bit of a reverse Artoria. All in all, it 's a very well thought out Servant. Good job!
Artoria Alter Lily: This is a truly impressive Servant you have here. One thing I love with fiction is when people base a story around a possible alternate outcome of an event. It's why I'm pretty interested in the Lostbelts, possible human histories that are considered improper outcomes. A fairly solid "if" Artoria. One of the upcoming Lostbelts seems to take place in Arthurian Britain and, while there are quite a few possibilities that could arise from this, I'm hoping that something like this is involved in that Lostbelt.
Julia Drusilla: Ah, yes. The psychotic yandere imouto. The characterization is pretty unnerving yet somehow sweet, so its pretty good.
Medjed: This is a rather creepy one. But I like it. It's fairly simple, but there's not that much to Medjed, honestly.
Unnamed Princess: I honestly just really like these "Unnamed" Servants. It's very interesting to see what is effectively a concept be turned into a Heroic Spirit. I don't remember being that much into fairy tales as a kid, but Unnamed Princess uses the tropes commonly associated with fairy tales to great effect.
Ivan IV: Not that much different from Lostbelt Ivan, but at the same time, still different enough that he can be considered separate. His Chornyy Oprichnik Noble Phantasm isn't that much different from Lostbelt Ivan's, but Burya - Svyatoy Prikhod is a nice alternative to Zveri - Krestnyy Khod.
Alter Ego Elizabeth: This is by far on the most interesting things I have ever seen. I also think it's hilarious how her god-awful singing is treated as a method of torture. Blood Prison Čachtice is an excellent Noble Phantasm and it combos well with Sárkány Csont Láncok. Her characterization is also pretty good and fits well with Elizabeth Bathory after being put under house arrest.
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Thanks for reminding me. Could anyone please tell me how in God's name I'm supposed to get that link to work properly?
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