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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Cortes would despise him for being the inspiration of all pirates, which would be a great thread for the Kingdom of Spain. I think.
    While we're at it, any thoughts on how he'd get along with my Pedro de Alvarado Servant?

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    While we're at it, any thoughts on how he'd get along with my Pedro de Alvarado Servant?
    Well, in his life, he considered him as a valuable ally and comrade and he would get along well with his fellow Spanish Conquistador, but when he committed the massacre which caused the rebellion of the Aztecs (which eventually, Cortes would get the blame) he would think of him as a dangerous person which would threaten his own reputation.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Well, in his life, he considered him as a valuable ally and comrade and he would get along well with his fellow Spanish Conquistador, but when he committed the massacre which caused the rebellion of the Aztecs (which eventually, Cortes would get the blame) he would think of him as a dangerous person which would threaten his own reputation.
    That sounds fair enough. Thanks!

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    Oops, forgot to thank you for the reply, Thirtyfour!

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    My 3rd Servant Sheet. A particularly OP servant, which will put Iskandar to shame.

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    Class : Rider
    Identity : Genghis Khan, Conqueror of Kings
    Origin : Mongolia
    Alignment : Chaotic Evil

    Parameter

    STR : B
    END : B
    AGL : B
    MGI : B
    LCK : A
    NP : A++


    Class Skills

    Magical Resistance : B
    The skill which grants protection against magical effects by canceling the spells altogether. At this rank, spells with a chant below three verses will be canceled. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for Rider to be affected. He gained rather high magical resistance because of the blessing and support of his numerous priests.

    Riding : A+
    The skill which represents one's ability to ride mounts and vehicles. At this rank, Rider can ride pretty much all vehicles and creatures, including those of the Phantasmal and Divine Beasts, except Dragonkind. Rider gained high rank of this skill because he is the symbol of the Mongols, which is famously known as the masters of horsemanship.


    Personal Skills

    Conqueror of the Continents : A+
    A composite skill which is unique only to a few Conquerors. This skill grants the servant the knowledge, skill and determination needed to become a Continental Conqueror. Rider has a very high rank of this skill because of his most famous feat of conquering most of the Eurasian Continent, building the largest contiguous land empire in history. The skills which composed this skill is the essential skill for being a Continental Conqueror, like logistics, military tactics and mobility. In a Normal Holy Grail War, this skill doesn't have much use, but in an actual War between armies or nations, it's really useful.

    Exterminator : A++
    A skill which represents the servant's feat of exterminating population. Rider has obtained very high rank for this skill for causing one of the most brutal and bloody massacres in the human history, along with dozen others bloody massacres throughout the Eurasian continent. This skill gives Rider a slight bonus in combat ability for each person he killed since he was summoned. After exterminating 1000 peoples, Rider's combat parameter will be raised slightly.

    Dread : A+
    A skill which is a subversion of Charisma. Instead of ruling and drawing people by charm alone, Rider rules and influences his men and peoples around him with fear and dread. At this rank, his mere presence may inject people without sufficient mental defense around him with overwhelming sense of dread, forcing them to succumb to his will.

    Military Tactic : B+
    A skill which gives the person the knowledge, will and tactic needed to win a battle between armies. At this rank, Rider can command even an inexperienced mob of villagers to conquer an Nation. Rider has high level of this skill due to his accomplishment of using and adopting various tactics to conquer dozens of nations.


    Noble Phantasms

    Heaven's Cavalry
    Trampling Stampede of the Great Horde
    Rank : A+
    Type : Anti-Army

    This Noble Phantasm is the manifestation of the strength and fame of the Mongolian cavalry under Rider's command. with various technique and weapons, the horde of Rider's skillful horsemen has overcame many armies.

    When activated, Rider will call forth a high-level phantasmal horse which represents these aspects. A horse with the strength, endurance and agility of a Servant. When Rider charges at the enemy, spirits of hundreds of his mighty cavalry, each armed with weapons equals to E to B Rank Noble Phantasm, will be materialized to support him, overwhelming the enemy with their combined attacks.


    Heaven's Punishment
    I Am the Flail of God
    Rank : A++
    Type : Anti-Country

    This Noble Phantasm is the manifestation of the devastation caused by Rider's Conquest. Which leaves dozens of cities to ruins, erased hundred of villages from the map, and reduced the total population of earth by approximately 5%.

    When activated, a gigantic divine Flail with ancient Mongolian fonts inscribed on it will be materialized. This Flail has the hidden power to unleash a great divine energy wave, capable of bringing destruction to a large city. This power can be used up to 5 times, but the Flail can be continuously used as a flail Noble Phantasm with great destructive capability even without the hidden divine power.


    Ikh Mongol Uls
    Grand Empire of The Great Khan
    Rank : EX
    Type : Anti-Continent

    This Noble Phantasm is the manifestation of the size and influence of the Great Mongol Empire at its peak under his authority. The Empire which is the 2nd largest empire and the largest contiguous empire in human history, which greatly influenced the world.

    When activated, Rider will synchronize himself with the land itself, spreading his dominion of the entire land in which the War takes place, until he synchronized with 24 million km square land, which is the size of his Empire. He will gain access to the 1/4 magical energy of the land, which Rider can freely use and manipulate. With this, he can even change the shape of the land itself. He needs a really huge magical energy to activate this Noble Phantasm, but when activated, he will have near infinite magical energy.


    Lore


    Genghis Khan (c. 1162 – August 18, 1227), born Temüjin, was the Great Khan and founder of the Mongol Empire, which became the largest contiguous empire in history after his death. He came to power by uniting many of the nomadic tribes of Northeast Asia. After founding the Empire and being proclaimed "Genghis Khan", he launched the Mongol invasions that conquered most of Eurasia. Campaigns initiated in his lifetime include those against the Qara Khitai, Caucasus, and Khwarazmian, Western Xia and Jin dynasties. These campaigns were often accompanied by large-scale massacres of the civilian populations – especially in the Khwarazmian and Western Xia controlled lands. By the end of his life, the Mongol Empire occupied a substantial portion of Central Asia and China.

    Before Genghis Khan died he assigned Ögedei Khan as his successor. Later his grandsons split his empire into khanates. He died in 1227 after defeating the Western Xia. He was buried in an unmarked grave somewhere in Mongolia His descendants extended the Mongol Empire across most of Eurasia by conquering or creating vassal states in all of modern-day China, Korea, the Caucasus, Central Asia, and substantial portions of Eastern Europe and Southwest Asia. Many of these invasions repeated the earlier large-scale slaughters of local populations. As a result, Genghis Khan and his empire have a fearsome reputation in local histories

    Beyond his military accomplishments, Genghis Khan also advanced the Mongol Empire in other ways. He decreed the adoption of the Uyghur script as the Mongol Empire's writing system. He also practiced meritocracy and encouraged religious tolerance in the Mongol Empire, and unified the nomadic tribes of Northeast Asia. Present-day Mongolians regard him as the founding father of Mongolia.

    Although known for the brutality of his campaigns and considered by many to have been a genocidal ruler, Genghis Khan is also credited with bringing the Silk Road under one cohesive political environment. This brought communication and trade from Northeast Asia into Muslim Southwest Asia and Christian Europe, thus expanding the horizons of all three cultural areas. His name is pronounced Çingis hán.




    Personality


    Likes : Butchering his enemies, trampling his enemies, crushing the bones of his enemies.
    Dislikes : Long sieges, defensive position, naval expedition.
    Talents : Spreading terror to the heart of his enemies, besieging a city.
    Natural Enemy : Whoever opposing him.

    Rider is a destructive and cunning man who loves conquest and winning. He has an insatiable lust for blood of his enemies and is very aggressive and murderous towards them. Rider also really cares about his subordinates. His allies fears but respect him, and he in turn treat them well.

    He hates losing, and and spent most of his time to think about how to utterly destroy and win over his foes. He also spent most of his times outside on horseback and likes to tend his horse.

    Rider will treat his Master as his subordinate, if they obeys him, he will treat them well, but if they defy or dare to oppose his will, then he will make them dearly regret it. His wish for the Grail is to be given additional 60 years in life, so he can conquer the entire world.



    That's it I think. Any comments or reviews will be greatly appreciated.
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    Is it bad to make an overly OP servant?

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    Is it bad to make an overly OP servant?
    Depends on how it's done and if it's justified

    Genghis: Not too bad for your third sheet, but I do have a few corrections.

    Conqueror of Continents has a confusing description. What does it actually do? You talk about it like it's super awesome, written, it seems fairly pointless.

    Dread should be replaced with E rank Charisma, they are functionally identical

    First NP is boring

    Second needs more description. Also, its limitations are unclear. 5 times total or 5 times before putting it away? If the former, why? If the latter, tone it down from Anti-City

    Third NP needs additional description and limitations. What's to stop him from just doing it immediately, to begin.

    Stats are probably too high, personality could use more description.

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    Okay, I'm back from a hiatus and have started another sheet.

    Get ready, because the leader of the Shinsengumi is coming!
    "Life is a serious battle, and you have to use the tools you are given.
    It's more important to master the cards you're holding rather than complain about the ones your opponent was dealt."

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    Well... I was busy, sorry. I won't be looking over every sheet since I came back but they all seem pretty cool in general.
    These are my Servant and Master sheets I hope you enjoy reading them:
    Servant And Master Sheets

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4score7years View Post
    Depends on how it's done and if it's justified

    Genghis: Not too bad for your third sheet, but I do have a few corrections.

    Conqueror of Continents has a confusing description. What does it actually do? You talk about it like it's super awesome, written, it seems fairly pointless.

    Dread should be replaced with E rank Charisma, they are functionally identical

    First NP is boring

    Second needs more description. Also, its limitations are unclear. 5 times total or 5 times before putting it away? If the former, why? If the latter, tone it down from Anti-City

    Third NP needs additional description and limitations. What's to stop him from just doing it immediately, to begin.

    Stats are probably too high, personality could use more description.
    Thank you for the review.

    About the Conqueror of Continents : Yes, it is actually pointless in a Holy Grail War between 7 Servants, it's only useful on war between armies or nations.

    About Dread : Uhh... No. Gawain has E Charisma and it doesn't work like that. I know Altria Alter has it too, but it doesn't work quite like what I imagined.

    About 1st NP : Yes, cavalry charge is boring, and I intend to keep it that way.

    2nd NP : It's the former, i think.

    3rd NP : Yeah, I will add the limitation.

    Other : I personally don't like making too much description, i prefer to make it as simple as possible.

    The sheet is now updated. Thanks again.
    If you don't mind, can you review my Cortes sheet as well?
    Last edited by ThirtyFour34; July 20th, 2017 at 06:58 PM.

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    Democracy’s First Defendant...Prince of Argos...Meal of the Erinyes

    Source: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust....st_id=62907182
    Class: Lancer
    Alignment: Lawful Good
    True Name: Orestes
    Origin: Greece

    Parameters
    Strength: C+
    Endurance: C
    Agility: C
    Mana: D
    Luck: E
    NP: B

    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance: (D)
    Magic Resistance grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
    Cancels Single-Action spells. Magic Resistance of the same degree of an amulet that rejects magical energy.

    Personal Skills:

    Evaporation of Sanity: (C)
    Evaporation of Sanity is a Skill that denotes that one's reasoning is disappearing, making it impossible to keep any secrets.
    A Skill forced onto Lancer due to the incessant pursuit of the Furies. A madness that quickly wore down his wits, none of the people who heard his screams for help believed him, as the Furies were somehow invisible or else went unnoticed by others the entire time.
    A paranoia that causes Lancer to voice his concerns about enemy movements no matter his environment, is forgetful of important things, etc. Luckily, the Skill also functions as Instinct. One is able to, to a degree, feel the optimal course of battle. Because Lancer’s “prime” could be considered to include the time after his madness was alleviated, this skill can be sealed through a Command Spell; however with the obvious loss of the secondary Instinct effects.
    If summoned as a Berserker, this skill would be sublimated into Lancer’s Mad Enhancement.

    Monstrous Strength: (D)
    Monstrous Strength is a Skill that permits the augmentation of its holder's Strength parameter by one rank for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. This Skill is borne from the holder's nature as a monster or Demonic Beast.
    During the time of the Battle of the Fetters (circa 550 BC), the Spartans consulted the Oracle of Delphi for advice in conquering Arcadia. The Oracle stated that the Spartans would lose unless they moved the bones of Orestes to Spartan soil. Upon discovering the body, Heracles’ servant Lichas describes the skeleton as well over 10 feet tall, proving that Lancer had a modicum of giant blood in him. Whether this was simply a mutated physical exhibition of Lancer’s “drop in the bucket” Divinity he received from his great-grandfather Tantalus is unknown. Because it was never mentioned outright in any of the works featuring Orestes, and the tendency to make all major Greek heroes giants posthumously, Lancer’s rank is low. He can augment his strength for only a very short time.

    Tipping the Scales: (A)
    A Skill earned by being the prototype of all stories involving committing atrocious deeds under extenuating circumstances, and indirectly helping to create the Athenian judicial system.
    So long as Lancer is able to keep his actions justifiably under what a “Lawful Good” alignment would consider appropriate--be it combat or decisions outside--Lancer can pass Will, Saving, and potentially even Luck checks with absolute ease. At this rank, it also functions as a passive increase to combat power.
    However, the instant he strays from the path of Lawful Good, be it on accident due to his deteriorating sanity or through the machinations of his Master, this Skill is sealed instantly. Should Lancer’s knowledge of modern law fail him and his actions can be proved by implicit loophole, the Skill’s effects can be regained numerous times.

    Noble Phantasm

    Labrys Clytemnestra: (A Viper’s Retribution)
    (Anti-Unit, B)

    The two-sided axe that once belonged to Hippolyta, before Heracles stole it along with the more famous girdle to give to his then-master Omphale. An heirloom of the Lydian kings, Aeschylus is reputed to have given it to Clytemnestra as the instrument of Agamemnon’s murder. After Lancer murdered Clytemnestra, he took the axe for himself. If asked, he’ll say it’s because he wanted a constant reminder of the two-faced nature of his mother, much like the two-faced nature of the axe.
    A weapon that’s become cursed by being soaked in the blood of revenge schemes, using it is not without risk. Upon activation, any stroke that Lancer makes with the axe will be mimicked by a “ghost” of the axe, made of potent curse magics. While the downswing of the actual axe is able to affect physical beings and Servants, the cursed backswing is able to affect magical beings more potently as a whole, eating away at whatever it comes in contact with like acid.
    True to the tragic circle that was Lancer’s life, even his own Noble Phantasm will inevitably cause him pain. The more he uses the activated form of his axe without making contact with anything, the closer the cursed shadow backswing will get to Lancer himself, like a pendulum. Eventually, if he finds no prey to satisfy it, it will strike him down.
    The axe also carries a small passive bonus against [Mother] type Servants.

    History

    Orestes, tragic protagonist of the Oresteia, was the son of Argive “hero” Agamemnon and Clytemnestra.
    After the incident involving his parents and his elder sister Iphigenia, he was exiled from Argos by Clytemnestra and her new lover Aeschylus so he could safely replace Agamemnon. Orestes eventually made his way back to Argos (or Mycenae depending on the source) on the orders of Apollo to murder his mother, accompanied by his sister Electra. After systematically murdering his mother and her new consort, Orestes begins hallucinating that the Furies are after him for the crime of matricide. Fleeing to a temple of Athena, Apollo pokes his head down and helps out by making the Furies fall asleep so Orestes can take a much needed nap. Once Athena finds him there, Orestes and the Furies explain their stories. Deciding the situation is too complicated even for Athena, the goddess creates the Athenian judicial system to sort everything out, with both Apollo and Athena acting as Orestes’ defense attorney. Using a loophole and a tie-breaking vote, the two gods proved Orestes’ innocence, and he went on to become king of Argos in Agamemnon’s stead.
    A postscript to the story is that the Furies had a change in job title courtesy of Athena, becoming the Eumenides, or Kindly Ones.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ThirtyFour34 View Post
    If you don't mind, can you review my Cortes sheet as well?
    Kay

    No Voyager of the Storm? He wasn't as much a sailor as some in that period, but I mean if you're giving him a boat...

    also no Magic Resistance?

    What's Conquistador do? Same kind of issue as that other one with Genghis. You say it enhances MT and Charisma, but more info would be good

    Re: 2nd and 3rd NPs

    2nd: IMO, Noble Phantasms should have flash. They're usually meant to be highlights, one of the ways that sheets stand apart from one another, the trump cards of their Servants. A damage upgrade to another NP is kind of...boring? I feel that there's gotta be more you can do there.

    3rd: There are a couple of NPs that start to seem a little played out after a while here. This is an example of one of those, for me. It works for Gil, but it's not that interesting to see it done here. Perhaps more condensation would be better? As in, perhaps all that plundering could be condensed into a single item acting as the crystallization of all that somehow? That would give Cortes himself a little more to do, as well. I dunno, food for thought.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Columbus Profile
    Conquistador - EX

    The Skill of one who had conquered the unchartered lands at the end of their voyages during the Age of Exploration. In Spain, it means "conqueror". Denotes the ability of invading, ruling, pillaging, and enslaving an undiscovered land.
    Strictly speaking, a conquistador refers to those who had conquered the "American Continent" at the end of their voyage, but as its origin—as the first progenitor who generated the concept of "a conqueror from Spain", Columbus was endowed with this Skill at EX Rank.
    it's a canon skill, and that's literally all we know about it atm

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    Its gameplay effect is Buster Up + Crit stars, so infer from that what you want
    Quote Originally Posted by Sandstorm77 View Post
    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.

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    Quote Originally Posted by 4score7years View Post
    Kay

    No Voyager of the Storm? He wasn't as much a sailor as some in that period, but I mean if you're giving him a boat...

    also no Magic Resistance?

    What's Conquistador do? Same kind of issue as that other one with Genghis. You say it enhances MT and Charisma, but more info would be good

    Re: 2nd and 3rd NPs

    2nd: IMO, Noble Phantasms should have flash. They're usually meant to be highlights, one of the ways that sheets stand apart from one another, the trump cards of their Servants. A damage upgrade to another NP is kind of...boring? I feel that there's gotta be more you can do there.

    3rd: There are a couple of NPs that start to seem a little played out after a while here. This is an example of one of those, for me. It works for Gil, but it's not that interesting to see it done here. Perhaps more condensation would be better? As in, perhaps all that plundering could be condensed into a single item acting as the crystallization of all that somehow? That would give Cortes himself a little more to do, as well. I dunno, food for thought.
    Thank you again.

    About Skills : Yeah, no Voyager of Storm skill, the skill to operate a ship falls in Riding skill instead, he's mainly using a horse as rider. Conquistador skill is, like what I said in Conqueror of Continents, pretty pointless in a Holy Grail War of 7 Servants, it would be more applicable in a war between armies or nations.

    About 2nd NP : Uh, yeah, i feel it's kinda dull as well. But it also activates the weaponry of his Expedition Ship, so that too.

    3rd NP : Yeah, I have thought about it, but Cortez's Treasure is legendary, it's said that his treasures are so plenty that many games and movies about treasure hunting features his treasures. So, I give him that NP.
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    Quote Originally Posted by asterism42 View Post
    it's a canon skill, and that's literally all we know about it atm

    - - - Updated - - -

    Its gameplay effect is Buster Up + Crit stars, so infer from that what you want
    For my own Conquistador Servant, I went with a "rank up to parameters in enemy territory, plus against enemies with the Golden Rule Skill" effect.

    As you said though, the actual effects haven't been described in canon so really you can fit in whatever you want as long as it more-or-less fits the flavor text.

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    Here's my 4th servant sheet, this time is an Indonesian National Hero.



    Class : Berserker
    Alternate Classes : Saber, Assassin
    Identity : Cut Nyak Dhien
    Origin : Aceh, Indonesia
    Alignment : Lawful Neutral

    PARAMETER
    STR : C+
    END : C
    AGL : B+
    MGI : D
    LCK : B
    NP : C

    CLASS SKILL
    Mad Enchantment : D
    Is the skill that characterizes the Berserker Class. Raising parameters, but hindering mental capacities. In some cases, in can also affect or even seal some skills or Noble Phantasms. At this rank, combat parameters are slightly raised, but conversation capability is limited, but still possible to some degree thanks to one of her personal skill.

    PERSONAL SKILLS
    Zealotry : B+
    Is the skill that gives the person high mental strength and defense through a strong religious faith in something that is beyond the understanding of normal human. Berserker gained this skill because of her devotion and zealotry to the teaching of Islam, which fueled her will to resist the Dutch Colonialism. With this skill, she can resist and overcome various mental attacks, ranging from trauma to mental interference magecraft. At this rank, it is even possible to negate the effect of Mad Enchantment after reciting specific Qur’anic verse.

    Subversive Activities : C
    Is the skill to reduce or weaken the enemy forces before the battle even begin. A skill for those specialized in setting traps or guerrilla warfare. Berserker gained this skill because of the methods of resistance she attempted in her life, guerrilla warfare, using ambushes and traps to weaken the heavily armed Dutch Forces. The rank of this skill is actually higher, but was slightly lowered because of Berserker’s Mad Enchanment.

    Battle Continuation : D++
    Is the skill that allows continuation of combat after sustaining an injury, also reduces mortality rate from injury, which represents the ability to survive or the mentality of not knowing when to give up, consisting of one's resistance to predicament. Berserker gained this skill because of her determination to resist and fight the Dutch Colonialist even with her old age and various physical ailments.

    Independent Action : C+
    Is the ability to remain independent even when rejecting the Magical Energy supply from one's Master. At higher ranks, it is also possible to remain for extended periods of time in this world without an established contract. It is both useful and troublesome depending on the disposition of the Servant and the rank of Independent Action. Berserker gained this skill because of her continuous resistance against the Colonialist even with the lack of supplies, the decreasing soldiers and the death of her husband.

    NOBLE PHANTASMS

    Rencong Cot Lantring
    Blade of Firm Resistance
    Rank : C+
    Type : Anti-Unit

    The special blade that Berserker uses as her main weapon. Rencong is the traditional weapon of the Acehnese, It’s used in their martial art and needs some degree of training to be used properly. This Noble Phantasm’s main strength is it’s speed combined with Berserker’s Agility.

    The rencong is worn sheathed on the left hand side of the bearer. When it is used as a weapon, then it is usually drawn with the left foot forward so that by a quick short step forward with the right foot, the thrust of the knife receives added impetus. The blade is withdrawn from its sheath, cutting edge toward the enemy. It is then whipped to the right by a snap of the hand which brings the palm upward; the elbow is held fairly close to the body. The thrust is made by extending the right arm almost to full extension and turning the palm downward just prior to penetration of the target. In the hand of this Servant, it’s like a rapid, continous slashing and thrusting.

    Acehnese say that the rencong takes the shape of the invocation, "Bismillaah In the name of God, the merciful and compassionate." The component parts of the rencong is likened to individual letters of the formal Arabic script huruf gundul, literally bare lettering, of the phrase Bismillaah (Basmala). As result, this weapon has some sort of divine blessing as result and is effective against demonic or maleficent beings. The spiritual nature of rencong also means it may only be used to defend against enemy attacks or to fight in the cause of Allah.

    This Noble Phantasm has a special relation with it’s owner, when danger is nearby or Berserker is about to be attacked, the Rencong would give her an insight about the threat. This is from the legend and belief about the Rencong itself, which is believed by the Acehnese to have mystical powers and have spirit of its own.

    History

    Cut Nyak Dhien or Tjoet Nja' Dhien (1848, Lampadang – November 6, 1908, Sumedang) was a leader of the Acehnese guerrilla forces during the Aceh War. Following the death of her husband Teuku Umar, she led guerrilla actions against the Dutch for 25 years. She was posthumously awarded the title of National Hero of Indonesia on May 2, 1964 by the Indonesian government.


    Cut Nyak Dhien was born into an Islamic aristocratic family in Aceh Besar in VI mukim district in 1848. Her father, Teuku Nanta Setia, was a member of the ruling Ulèë Balang aristocratic class in VI mukim, and her mother was also from an aristocrat family. She was educated in religion and household matters. She was renowned for her beauty, and many men proposed to her until her parents arranged for her marriage to Teuku Cek Ibrahim Lamnga, the son of an aristocratic family, when she was twelve.


    On 26 March 1873, the Dutch declared war on Aceh, beginning the Aceh War. During the first part of this war, the First Aceh Expedition, Aceh was led by Panglima Polem and Sultan Alauddin Mahmud Syah II. The Dutch army sent 3,000 soldiers led by Johan Harmen Rudolf Köhler to take the Sultan's palace. The Sultan, however, received military aid from Italy and the United Kingdom, and the Aceh army was rapidly modernized and enlarged from 10,000 to 100,000 soldiers. Dutch forces were successfully pushed back, and Köhler died in action.


    In November 1873, during the Second Aceh Expedition the Dutch successfully captured VI mukim in 1873, followed by the Sultan's Palace in 1874. In 1875, Cut Nyak Dhien and her baby, along with other mothers, were evacuated to a safer location while her husband Ibrahim Lamnga fought to reclaim VI mukim.


    Teuku Ibrahim Lamnga died in action in Gle Tarum on June 29, 1878. Upon hearing this, Cut Nyak Dhien swore revenge against the Dutch.


    Some time after the death of her husband, an Acehnese hero Teuku Umar proposed to her. Although she rejected him at first, she accepted his proposal when Umar allowed her to fight, and they were married in 1880. This greatly boosted the morale of Aceh armies in their fight against the Kaphé Blanda, or Dutch infidel. Teuku Umar and Cut Nyak Dhien had a daughter together named Cut Gambang. Dhien was very determined to stay in the war that so took her daughter in with her.


    The war continued, and the Acehnese declared a holy war against the Dutch, engaging in guerrilla warfare and attacking with traps and ambushes. Undersupplied, Teuku Umar surrendered to Dutch forces on September 30, 1893 along with 250 of his men. The Dutch army welcomed him and appointed him as a commander, giving him the title of Teuku Umar Johan Pahlawan. However, Teuku Umar secretly planned to betray the Dutch. Two years later Teuku Umar set out to assault Aceh, but instead departed with his troops, heavy equipment, weapons, and ammunition, using these supplies to help the Acehnese. This is recorded in Dutch history as "Het verraad van Teukoe Oemar" (the treason of Teuku Umar).


    Teuku Umar and Dhien kept resisting the Dutch with their new equipment until the Dutch sent the Maréchaussée. The Acehnese found these troops extremely difficult to resist and many people were killed.


    The Dutch general Johannes Benedictus van Heutsz took advantage of the condition and sent a spy to Aceh. Teuku Umar was killed during battle when the Dutch launched a surprise attack on him in Meulaboh. When Cut Gambang cried over his death, Cut Nyak Dhien reportedly slapped her and then she hugged her and said:"As Acehnese women, we may not shed tears for those who have been martyred."


    After her husband died, Cut Nyak Dhien continued to resist the Dutch with her small army until its destruction in 1901, as the Dutch adapted their tactics to the situation in Aceh. Furthermore, Cut Nyak Dhien suffered from nearsightedness and arthritis as she got older. The numbers of her troops was also keep decreasing and they suffered from lack of supplies.


    One of her troops, Pang Laot, told the Dutch the location of her headquarters in Beutong Le Sageu. The Dutch assaulted, catching Dhien and her troops by surprise. Despite desperately fighting back, Dhien was captured, although her daughter Cut Gambang escaped and continued the resistance.


    Dhien was brought to Banda Aceh and her myopia and arthritis slowly healed, but in the end she was exiled to Sumedang, West Java because the Dutch were afraid she would mobilize the resistance of Aceh people. In May 2, 1964 she was posthumously proclaimed a National Hero by President Soekarno.


    Personality

    Personality
    Likes : Reciting Qur’an, Acehnese traditional food
    Dislikes : Oppressors, cowards
    Talents : Making traps, housewife stuffs.
    Natural Enemies : Dutch, Colonialist, Blasphemers.

    Due to being Berserker, her personality is slightly different from her normal self and become more simplistic in nature. She's very zealous and and often aggressive towards infidels, especially blasphemer, and more especially oppressors and invaders.

    As Berserker, she has a heavily biased black and white view on the world, and may judge people based on her religion and nationality. Though she can tolerate peoples from other nationality and religion if she doesn't consider them as a kind of oppressor or blasphemer.

    She is also very stubborn and her Master may find it difficult to order her around, although she will eventually follow the order as long as it doesn't offend her religion. Her wish for the Grail is to live as a normal muslim women along with her husband and children in her own homeland peacefully.



    As always, comments or reviews will be greatly appreciated.
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    Man, now you've started to pump out these servant sheets a real lot. Although I think Lawful Zealous is stretching it a bit, since even Zealot has her alignment as "Lawful Good".

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