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    Quote Originally Posted by cooldownnow View Post
    That's odd because it is working on my end and Royd is right Caster was Charles Darwin while the others were just nameless servants I didn't bother filling in. Does any have any advice. This is my first purposefully super overpowered servant but I tried to not let quality drop because of that.
    No, the FC is definitely not working. I've heard of cases like that before where the image can show up on the poster's end but not on the readers'. Forgot the technical explanation but it was something like the image data is already recorded on your computer so it shows up for you even if you haven't linked it properly. Anyways, are you putting it through Imgur? I've found that's the most surefire way of getting FCs to work properly.

    The sheet itself seems fine. Obviously super overpowered, but it's hard to critique that when it was the explicit intent. I'd naturally want to suggest giving his NP some kind of weakness to make it potentially beatable (aside from having a greater hax like Darwin) but that would kind of defeat the point of this Servant, which is somebody so absolutely overpowered that no one stands a chance of beating him without ridiculous levels of hax.

    I will say I LOLed when I read his last bond line. Reading the first few lines I thought it was going to be the token heartwarming moment where he (like so many douchey Shoujo love interests) admits that even though he acts like an arrogant asshole 99% of the time, he secretly does care for his Master after all. So it was jarring (in a good way) when he just ended up affirming that, no, he really is that much of a selfish asshole and has no intent on changing. Some people are just incorrigible, I suppose. And this guy really seems like an egotist who'd give even Gil a run for his money.

    Surprised you didn't give him a reaction line for Gil actually. It'd be funny to see him throw a temper-tantrum at the sight of another self-proclaimed "strongest hero"...

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    I'll definitely try to fix the face claim and I'm glad that I managed to make you laugh. As for Gil damn going to have to come up with one and add it in when I fix the FC


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    I think I fixed the faceclaim and added a gilgamesh part to the bond section for Indrajit.


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    Ever wonder what a Holy Grail War set in Texas would be like? Well wonder no longer because here is:
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    Become Naunet the next leader of the Atlas Institute and fight your way to the top of a deadly war.

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    Yeah I can see the faceclaim now.

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    I dont know if that is the Right place but due to i have seen El Melloi case filles where their is a Faker servant has someone also seen that ?

    Like i wonder which skills and what here Parameters could/would be :given what i have seen skillwise her Mystic Eyes and it seems that she had potencielly have a degrre of Magecraft abillity ?

    and are having Faker class servants actually a unique classskills or how in which form would it be right to "double the original" which she "copy"?
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    Faker is a unique class that encompasses all of the imitation work Heartless had to do in order to get the summoning working in the first place.

    There are no other Fakers and we don't even know what Class Skills they'd have. My best guess is that they're like Alter-Egos, or something.

    Faker herself is basically complete fanfiction to act as a foil to Waver, and that's about it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bugs View Post
    Faker is a unique class that encompasses all of the imitation work Heartless had to do in order to get the summoning working in the first place.

    There are no other Fakers and we don't even know what Class Skills they'd have. My best guess is that they're like Alter-Egos, or something.

    Faker herself is basically complete fanfiction to act as a foil to Waver, and that's about it.
    Thanks for the Answer have you actually also seen the El Melloi case filles,Bug?

    and apropo fanfiction you didnt specified your impresions About the first chapter of mine i would really hear your oppinion?
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    Yes. I've read what TC has translated so far here as well.

    As for your fic, I'll reply in the relevant thread for it.

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    Caster of the Tempest

    "All hail, great master! Grave sir, hail! I come
    To answer thy best pleasure. Be 't to fly,
    To swim, to dive into the fire, to ride
    On the curled clouds, to thy strong bidding task
    Caster and all his quality."



    Class: Caster
    Alignment: Lawful/good
    Region: England
    Height: 130cm
    Weight: 0,5 kg(due to being mostly made of air)
    Likes: freedom, honesty, just reciprocation
    Dislikes: cruelty, lies, unjust reciprocation
    Talent: singing
    Armaments: wind
    Natural Enemy: Sycorax

    stats

    Str: E
    End: D
    Agi: A
    Mna: A
    Lck: C
    NP: B

    Skills


    class skills

    Item construction(C): Capable of creating magical items, tools, and potions of up to a C rank. Caster has pick up quite some tricks from both their old masters.

    Territory Creation(B): At this level, the creation of a Workshop becomes possible. Another skill gained from their years of serving grand magi.

    personal skills

    Child of Nature(A): A Skill that represents one as a child born in the Reverse Side of the World. Even if they are not naturally occurring life, but living things created by human hands, sometimes even they can receive great blessings from the World.

    Alluring Nightingale(B+): A mesmerizing-kind of Skill possessed by those with a natural constitution of having a beautiful voice. It works as a fascination magecraft-like effect towards the opposite gender, but evasion is possible with a Magic Resistance Skill. Because of Caster's ambiguous gender, this skill can actually work in both males or females.

    Airy Spirit(A): A skill denoting the user as a nature spirit of the wind element. Caster is a high grade sylph, and as such can control the wind to attack or defend itself. They can also pick up rumors in the air, allowing for easy information gathering, and hide in the atmosphere by dissipating her body attaining the equivalent of Rank B in Pressence Concealment.



    Noble phantasm


    Dance of the Wild Winds
    The Tempest

    rank: Anti-vessel, B

    Caster's Noble phantasm is the ultimate demonstration of her powers.
    Caster uses her abilities to summon a huge storm. Inside the storm, the rain is freezing and the wind is sharp, dealing continuous damage to all their enemies.
    Furthermore, the rain is so thick and the sounds are so loud that it causes the targets to become confuse, disoriented and unguarded. Caster has great control over the storm, being able to block the damage, leaving only the confusion effect which is great for unsuspectingly separating the opposing forces.
    Because of anecdotes on Caster's story, this Noble phantasm deals extra damage on ships.



    Background


    Caster is Ariel, a spirit who appears in William Shakespeare's play The Tempest.
    They are bound to serve the magician Prospero, who rescued them from the tree in which they were imprisoned by Sycorax, the witch who previously inhabited the island. Prospero greets disobedience with a reminder that he saved Caster from Sycorax's spell, and with promises to grant Caster their freedom after his plans are over.
    Caster is Prospero's eyes and ears throughout the play, using their magical abilities to cause the tempest in Act One which gives the play its name, and to foil other characters' plots to bring down his master.
    In the final act, Thanks to Caster's work, Ferdinand and Miranda have fallen in love. Prospero is so impressed by Their matchmaking that he says that he would set Caster free for that one act. Thus, having fulfilled Prospero's tasks, and Prospero himself now being free to leave the island, Caster is set free.



    personality


    Caster is cheerful and energetic, and can easily be made friends with. A Master need only to be kind to them, and they'll be loyal to their Master.
    Caster, in fact, places grand importance to the value of contracts, and will usually cary their master's orders to the best of their abilities. However, as a somewhat pacifist, if an order is too nasty or cruel, she will refuse it.
    There is also the fact that they are a wind spirit and, like the wind, likes to live a life of freedom. A particularly controlling or otherwise restraining Master will face problems dealing with them.
    Beyond that, Caster is an admirer of beautiful things, finding beauty even in silly things. They are specially found of music, both singing and listening to it, and will become fast friends with any musically oriented person.



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    Quote Originally Posted by Kabalisto Koga View Post
    and are having Faker class servants actually a unique classskills or how in which form would it be right to "double the original" which she "copy"?
    Quote Originally Posted by Bugs View Post
    My best guess is that they're like Alter-Egos, or something.
    From my point of view, a Faker is similar but dissimilar to an Alter Ego. Alter Egos are fragments of an original self that were separated and modified to be summoned independently, while a Faker is just a plain imposter that pretends to be someone different. So far there are no official data regarding base parameters or class skills, though I made up a skill fitting the main gimmick of the class:

    Saint Graph Forgery:
    The ability to imitate a Heroic Spirit with such perfection that it affects the Saint Graph of the Servant themselves. A skill proper of the artificial class Faker. It allows to acquire certain skills that were characteristic of the figure that the Servant is copying, but the differences of personality with the original may cause irregularities.

    Needless to say, anyone who considers using this skill for their works is more than welcome to use it.

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    Because i Forget nice second Kresnik ! i got the Feeling that the Picture is also from castlevania

    and also quite good Aril as i read that she(?) is one of Shakespears charackters would she view him as Father ? i wonder.
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    Nope,actually. It's kat, the main character of gravity rush (which is an underrated game, one of my favorites)

    And I think that, as something non-human like a nature spirit, Caster would probably lack a concept of family. She would most likely see Shakespeare as someone who she is in debt with.

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    Avenger of lake's bottom

    "i'm Avenger. Don't talk to me, just point me at the enemy"



    Class: Avenger
    Alignment: Lawful/evil
    Region: Europe
    Height: 250cm
    Weight: 130kg
    Likes: Vengeance, blood, her son
    Dislikes: Humans, warriors, parties
    Talent: killing
    Armaments: sword
    Natural Enemy: Beowulf

    stats

    Str: A
    End: A
    Agi: C
    Mna: C
    Lck: D
    NP: B

    Skills


    class skills

    Avenger(A): a skill representing the state of an Avenger as one that gathers people's hatreds and grudges onto oneself. Negative emotions towards her immediately turn into her strength.

    oblivion correction(B): People are creatures that forget many things, but an Avenger never forgets. The critical effect of Avengers who attack from beyond one's memory is strengthened.

    Self-replenishment(mana)(B): Magical energy endlessly gushes forth until revenge is taken. Recovers a amount of magical energy every turn

    personal skills

    Monstrous strength(A): Temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit. As a member of the giant's race, Avenger naturally has a high rank in this skill

    Natural Monster(A): A Skill endowed to those who were given birth as a monster rather than to a hero or god that has fallen down to the level of a Magical Beast.

    Mana Burst(Blood)(B-): Avenger has the ability to mix her Blood into her Prana, allowing her for a power boost to her attacks, as well as granting them a corrosive effect due to her Blood's cursed nature. She can also infuse this into objects, however most of them will dissolve after a short while and even magic constructs and Noble phantasm of rank B or lower will slowly lose integrity.



    Noble phantasm


    The She-devil in the Bottom of the Lake
    Ides Aglaicwif

    rank: anti-unit (self), A

    A Noble phantasm representing Avenger's nature a giant. It is the remnants of the ancient curse of her ancestral that still flows through her veins.
    This continually active Noble phantasm surrounds her body like an armor. Any man-made weapon, regardless of quality or strenght, will fail to hurt her. Weapons of magical nature, like a holy sword for example, can easily bypass this defense, however...
    her cursed blood will eat away almost anything. Even Noble phantasms would eventually crumble to dust if they aren't strong enough, such is the power of her curse.

    The Old Sword
    Ealdswurd

    rank: Anti-unit, B

    A magical sword, made by giants, who belonged to Avenger before it was taken by the hero Beowulf and used to slay her. It is a demonic sword of considerable mystery, although not as well known as the other blades in the poem.
    When wielding the sword, Avenger will usually surround the blade with her cursed blood, drasticaly increasing it's offensive power at the cost of slowly degrading the weapon until it breaks, becoming unusable for the rest of her summon.



    Background


    Avenger's identity is that of the Grendel's mother, whos actual name is unknown. She is one of the three antagonists in the anonymous Old English poem Beowulf.
    She and her son are descendants of Cain. After Grendel is killed, Avenger attacks Heorot in revenge.
    Beowulf then ventures into her cave under a lake, and engages in fierce combat with Avenger. She nearly kills him until he sees an ancient sword, with which he kills her, and beheads the dead Grendel.



    personality

    Avenger is a merciless warrior, who slay her enemies and anyone else who stands in her way. Still she is not one for attacking without provocation.
    She despises humans, but will refrain from harming her Master so long as he doesn't do anything to earn her anger, in which case she will cut him down immediately.
    If she ever comes to faces with Beowulf, she will attack him on sight, without regards for the fact that she will probably die as a result.

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    Beowulf used Hrunting to kill Grendel's mom, iirc. If you wanted to take the sword in a different direction than Beo then that's fine, but it seems curious since Hrunting is one of those few already-named swords.

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    Nope, hrunting broke. The sword that Slays G-mom goes unnamed in the poem (which is odd, since is the only one who actually does something, both hrunting and naegiling break instantaneously). I actually had to make up a name for this sword, so i just called it old sword.


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    Hmm, good to know!
    I like her first NP too, it's basically the Nemean Lion but it explains why Beo had to beat everything else to death barehanded after a while. I did something similar with my Morholt sheet a while back.

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    Oh, I remember that, it was cool.
    Anything on Ariel or Berserk!Kresnik?


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