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    Quote Originally Posted by Aridwolverine View Post
    I vaguely recall reading somewhere that King Arthur is a girl due to Merlin's magic.
    I don't know where you're getting this from but it's completely untrue. Arturia was a girl from birth in the main Fate timeline, nothing to do with Merlin's interference.

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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    I don't know where you're getting this from but it's completely untrue. Arturia was a girl from birth in the main Fate timeline, nothing to do with Merlin's interference.
    But would it be possible to be Grail Interference? Like someone actually won the Grail War and used its onipotence only to make Arthur a girl?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aridwolverine View Post
    I vaguely recall reading somewhere that King Arthur is a girl due to Merlin's magic.
    Maybe you should learn about the source material. I mean, you can easily find a lp of the vn online.
    Quote Originally Posted by Hakuro View Post
    But would it be possible to be Grail Interference? Like someone actually won the Grail War and used its onipotence only to make Arthur a girl?
    It would be an incredible waste of a wish. No one would enter such a dangerous event just to turn some long dead person into the other gender. In the Nasuverse, King Arthur was a girl, point.
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    Except in the worldlines where she isn't.
    Quote Originally Posted by Sandstorm77 View Post
    He's just putting the bone of his sword into other people until it explodes and lets out parts of him inside them.
    Quote Originally Posted by AvengerEmiya View Post
    Genderswaps are terrible, but I think I and other people would hate them less if Fate didn't keep ignoring actual heroines throughout history and folklore. Like, why bother turning Francis Drake into a woman when Ching Shih and Grace O'Malley exist?
    Quote Originally Posted by Five_X View Post
    Fate Zero is just Fate Stay Night for people who think Shirou is too girly
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    I think Alex IV can eat Goku.

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    And in Prototype.

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    In fact, Merlin magic was actually involved with making Arthur a boy. unless that's wrong, then I'm joking




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    Quote Originally Posted by Ruisu View Post
    In fact, Merlin magic was actually involved with making Arthur a boy. unless that's wrong, then I'm joking
    Wasn't it that Merlin magicked up Artoria a penis so she could create a heir with Guinevere but Morgan used magic to rape Artoria?
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    Quote Originally Posted by RoydGolden View Post
    but Saber Alter was fucking terrifying in the original VN and only became a jokey meme character much later
    so you got around to actually reading it?

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    Rider
    "Perhaps you've never been to Nineveh? Well, of course you haven't! A god like you would never want to go there!"



    Class: Rider

    STR: E
    END: D
    AGI: D
    MGI: D
    LCK: A


    Class Skills

    Riding (E): Rider receives this skill only as a token of his class. Though his legend involves being aboard ships
    and riding a beast, Rider was never actively involved in these acts. It would be fair to say that he is more like
    the reader than the protagonist, and not even a very good one at that. Still, he is placed in the Rider class due
    to the central elements of his story; sailing a ship, riding a beast, and on a figurative level, being carried by
    God to the conclusion of the tale.

    Magic Resistance (D):
    Cancels single-action spells, equivalent to an anti-magic amulet.

    Personal Skills

    Bringer of the Storm (B): Rider's name has cemented him as a long-established expression among sailors meaning a passenger
    who brings bad luck and endangers the ship. A negative skill, an inverse of Voyager of the Storm, Rider's allies suffer a
    rank-down to LCK when aboard sea vessels and a decreased defense against enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasms.

    Self-Preservation (B+): The skill to preserve one's health so that the user can escape. Rider has almost no combat capability,
    but as long as he preserves the safety of his Master to the lowest possible degree he maintains the skill to escape from nearly
    all harm, meaning that he never engages any opponents himself. Despite his position as a holy man, Rider is a product of his
    time and has no qualms about abandoning enemies of the Lord to a bloody fate if it meant saving his own skin.

    Charisma of the Prophets (B): Despite his passive and arguably cowardly nature, Rider is a one of the twelve Minor Prophets of
    the Old Testament and has been blessed by YHWH to deliver his word to the people. Though his rank as a Prophet is relatively
    low, he was able to cause 120,000 Assyrians, including their king, to repent before the Lord. Greatly increases effectiveness
    of oration meant to sway others. It can be resisted by high ranks in Divinity or Protection of the Faith.

    Noble Phantasm

    Rebirth Beneath the Depths~Rejuvenating Belly of the Beast (C, Support)

    When he fled from God's presence, Rider was carried back to his mission by a great sea creature, spending three days and nights in
    its belly. He spent the entire time praising God and asking for forgiveness, and afterwards, he was restored on dry land. The Messiah
    himself compared this to the three days he would one day spend in Hell, after which he too would be restored. This Noble Phantasm
    surrounds Rider with an invisible membrane that gives him the ability to breathe underwater and gives healing when he is totally
    submerged. As long as he remains underwater and his Master is alive, his regeneration is certain, even from death.
    Rider (Alter)
    "Violence is never the right answer, unless used against heathens and monsters."



    Class: Rider (Alter)

    STR: D
    END: B
    AGI: D
    MGI: C
    LCK: B


    Class Skills

    Riding (A+): Can use Phantasmal and Divine Beasts as mounts. Rider is now in full control of his own destiny, no
    longer sitting idly by while evil runs rampant. To that end, he has seized control of the great beast that bore him.

    Magic Resistance (C): Cancels spells two verses or shorter. It should be higher due to his piety, but...

    Personal Skills

    Eye of the Storm (EX): A punishment from God that surrounds Rider. Upon entering combat, a storm of lightning, wind and
    rain swirl around him, battering his opponents while leaving him unharmed. This effectively gives him Prana Burst (Wind,
    Water and Lightning). Though it was a deterrent sent from God, Rider sees the storm as a divine weapon and has turned it
    to his advantage. It does make him a poor ally to have in group battles, however.

    Protection of the Faith (A++): Despite its name, this skill is not a blessing from God, but Rider's absoluteness of body
    and soul, born from faith and suffering greatly for it. At such a high rank though, it takes a heavy toll on Rider's sanity.
    All mental interference effects below an equivalent rank are negated.

    Wrath of the Righteous (A): A skill similar to Enmity of the Gods, it grants Rider a massive increase to damage against
    anyone or anything associated with gods who can be considered "enemies". Rather than a specific deity or pantheon, such
    as the Babylonians he hates so fiercely, his wrath is brought to bear against all who do not follow the Lord. He can be
    called a crusader in this context, bringing calamity to all non-believers and sinners.

    Noble Phantasm
    Appearance
    Rahab~Demonic Angel of the Sea (A+, Anti-City, Anti-Army)

    A Divine Beast created by YHWH to bear Rider to Nineveh. After Rider's arrival it was set free to wander the seas. It has
    since become a mythical sea monster in Jewish folklore, a dragon of the waters, said to be comparable in power to Leviathan,
    Tiamat and Jormungandr. In Alter form, as a "proper" Rider, it has become his mount. Its stomach, which represents the three
    days Christ spent in Hell, has been inverted to be able to expel "the land of the dead" outward though its mouth. By opening
    its great maw, the very essence of Sheol, the land of the dead, spews forth. It is somewhere between a torrent of acid and a
    wave of fire, but it brings death to all it covers, disintegrating all it touches. It is the calamity that was meant for the
    people of Nineveh, the enemies of the Lord, and a catharsis that Rider was originally denied. Aside from this, the beast can
    be called a superweapon, many times stronger, tougher and enduring than a Servant. It can also swim extremely fast, but while
    flying in the air its top speed cannot exceed that of a brisk run. Still, it is a veritable fortress, doling out damage while
    Rider is safely ensconced in its belly.
    Background
    Jonah is a prophet of Israel from the 8th century BCE. He is best known for a tale in which he was swallowed by a giant fish.
    The story of Jonah is a drama between a passive man and an active God. Jonah, whose name literally means "dove," is introduced
    to the reader in the very first verse. The name is decisive; while other prophets had heroic names, Jonah's name carries with
    it an element of passivity. While Jonah flees, God pursues. While Jonah falls, God lifts up.

    God calls Jonah to journey to Nineveh, the capital of Assyria, old enemies of Israel, in order to preach and proclaim judgement.
    Not wanting to deliver a message of mercy to his country's hated enemies, Jonah flees, going in the opposite direction towards
    Carthage. However, God calls a great storm and the sailors, realizing it is no ordinary storm, toss Jonah overboard when he tells
    them that doing so will calm the storm. A great sea creature, identified as some sort of whale, swallows Jonah and over the course
    of three days and nights spews him out on the shores near Nineveh.

    Jonah then preaches to the people of the city, and everyone, even the king, repents and asks for forgiveness, which God grants.
    Jonah is furious, as he knew God would spare his enemies, and asks God to kill him. Instead, God causes a tree to grow over him,
    giving him shade and shelter. However, God then sends a worm to eat the plant and wither it. Seeing Jonah's anger, God replies,
    "You are concerned about the bush, for which you did not labour and which you did not grow; it came into being and perished in
    a night. And should I not be concerned about Nineveh, that great city, in which there are more than a hundred and twenty thousand
    people who do not know right from wrong?" Ironically, the relentless God demonstrated in the first act is shown to be the merciful
    God in the second. Equally ironic, despite not wanting to go to Nineveh and follow God's calling, Jonah becomes one of the most
    effective prophets of God. As a result of his preaching, the entirety of Nineveh repents before the Lord and is spared destruction.

    "Funder, it's 2 AM, why are you watching Veggie Tales?"
    "Important Servant research!"
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    please talk to me about your OCs Saron's Avatar
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    @Jonah: It's a really awesome sheet, seeing how much you did with his legend, and his Alter self is a really interesting idea for an antagonist character.
    My thirst for Antonio grows by the second.

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    Yeah, yeah, Summer Event was 2 months ago, and even here Summer only starts in two months. But I only found this fanart recently, it's like 35 ºC here, and I had ice cream today, so...

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    True Name:
    Euryale
    Class: Rider
    Gender: Female
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Attribute: Sky
    Place of Origin: Greece

    STR: E
    END: E
    AGI: D
    MAG: EX
    LCK: EX
    NP: A

    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance: A
    Though her resistance to magecraft is on part with a Saber's, most offensive spells will be intercepted before they even reach her.

    Riding: A+
    In terms of riding difficulty, a Natural Demon is approximately on the level of a Phantasmal Beast. Euryale's abilty to remain in a large man's shoulder is rivaled only by a certain white-haired homunculus girl.

    Personal Skills:
    Alluring Beauty of the Shapeless Island: EX
    The ability to lure men to their death through looks and voice. Hundreds, maybe thousands of men sailed towards that island, seeking the beauty of the perfect twin goddesses, only to be slaughtered by their guardian. Though, it seems that the guardian is different this time...

    Goddess' Divine Core:
    EX
    Because calorie intake has no effect on her body, she can eat as much ice cream and drink as much soda as she wants. This particular effect is extended to her mount (because he is constantly exercising by carrying her around).

    Guardian Mount:
    A+
    A skill similar to Princess of Loveliness. Protection that comes from her
    boyfriend
    mount
    , the great Greek monster Asterios. As long as he is around, no attack will ever reach Euryale. Bonus modifiers are applied if the attacker is a disgusting perverted otaku.

    Summertime Cooldown: B
    Because of the excessively large mane of Asterios, it can get quite hot up there. Therefore, it is essential for their well-being to consume frozen delicacies every now and then. An ice cream break restores damage and removes negative conditions - or so she claims.


    Noble Phantasms
    Eye of the Euryale, Abyss of the Asterios
    Coup of the Couple
    - Anti-Unit, Rank B+

    A combination attack performed by Rider and her ride. By redirecting the "damage part" of her Noble Phantasm to the "status condition" part, Euryale's arrow is guaranteed to leave any male it strikes not only charmed, but also completely defenseless and vulnerable. Immediately after the arrow is fired, Asterios rushes forward, and by the time he reaches the target, they are ready to receive a "coup de grace" from his twin axes.


    Lore & Personality
    Spoiler:
    Likes: Ice cream, adoration
    Dislikes:
    Having to walk in the sand herself, disgusting perverted otakus
    Talent:
    Chicken fighting with
    Stheno
    herself

    Natural enemy:
    Intense sunlight

    Normally, the middle Gorgon would want nothing to do with the beach. Having spent centuries stuck on an island, she surely has seen enough sand, sun and sea for multiple lifetimes, and her wearing a bikini would certainly draw much unwanted attention from sea-faring creeps. However, a miracle was brought forth by her dear friend's insistence - under the condition that no sand would get on her feet, no cruel sunray would touch her precious face, and no pervert would get within talking distance of them.

    Unlike other cases, where two individuals share the same Saint Graph and are equally Servants, it seems that the only Servant here is Euryale - Asterios is being treated as her "mount". This is most likely one of the possible effects generated by Whim of a Goddess. Or maybe she's just cheating like a certain moon goddess.

    Euryale claims to not need the Holy Grail, having no wish it can grant. Asterios, on the other hand, knows exactly what he wants - "for the friends he made in the Golden Hind back then to enjoy this summer, too."
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    Class: ​Berserker
    Other Classes:
    Rider, Saber
    True Name:
    Baldwin IV of Jerusalem, the Leper King
    Alignment: ​Lawful Good
    Place of Origin:
    Kingdom ofJerusalem



    Parameters:

    STR: C (B)
    END: B (A)
    AGI: C (B)
    MGI: A
    LCK: B
    NP: EX

    Likes: Jerusalem
    Dislikes: People plotting to take the throne
    Talent: Ruling
    Natural Enemy: Salah al-Din
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Determination, willpower
    Armament: A broadsword and shield
    Catalyst: His mask

    Class Skills:

    Madness Enchantment: C
    Berserker lives a life of constant agony and pain. He is was afflicted with leprosy his whole life, and now, even as a Servant, he must endure the constant pain of it. Despite this, his sheer determination and desire to protect the Holy Land drives him to fight on even against the most impossible of odds. Nothing would stop him from defending his kingdom, and so nothing will stop him trying to achieve victory, even if reason dictates it should not be possible. Berserker has a rank up for all skills except Luck and Mana, however, skills which require a keen mind drop down a rank.

    Personal Skills:

    Battle Continuation: A+
    Berserker endured immense pain all his life, yet he never let it stop him from trying to live life to the best of his ability. Even when he was faced with the possibility of losing Jerusalem, surrounded and outnumbered, Berserker simply gathered his knights, broke through the encirclement, and struck upon Salah al-Din's army, inflicting upon him his most serious e

    Noble Phantasm(s):

    Noble Phantasm Name
    Noble Phantasm Title



    Type:
    Rank:
    Range:
    Max Targets:

    WIP

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    Almost had this finished but was logged out for some reason. Will finish later.

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    @Euryale: It is never not a bad time for a summer Servant, and especially one featuring The Best Toll and Smoll ship in the universe. I give it ten fluffy minotaurs out of ten fluffy minotaurs for creativity and the adorableness factor.
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    Faceclaim

    "I may look young, but I promise I’ll be a big help!”
    Source: (X)

    “I only listen to my brother. You keep that in mind mage, and I won’t give you any problems.”
    Source: (X)

    Name; The Faerie Knight and The Black Knight
    Class; Saber/Avenger/Rider
    Armament: Sword
    Alignment: Chaotic Good
    Attribute: Earth
    Traits: Saberface, Fairy, Dragon

    Stats:
    Strength: B
    Agility : C
    Endurance: A
    Mana: B+
    Luck : C+
    Noble Phantasm: B+

    Likes: Their father, Caelia
    Dislikes: Evil women, Regrets
    Talents: Teamwork, Generosity
    Natural Enemy: Bad mothers
    Wish: To resurrect Faerie's mother and their father

    Skills
    Class Skills:
    Magic Resistance: B+
    Grants protection against magical effects. Differently from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether. Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for them to be affected.
    The Faerie Knight is half fairy, his magical resistance is being shared with his brother due to their summoning.

    Riding: B(+)
    At this rank almost any vehicles can be ridden with seemingly natural proficiency and control, though Monstrous and other Phantasmal Beasts cannot be ridden.

    The Faerie Knight receives a plus modifier and the application for the Rider class due to his fame at jousting. He prefers modern motorcycles and sports car for their speed, while Black likes muscle cars for their power and durability.

    "She's a beauty, isn't she Black?
    "This thing looks so fragile I'm afraid if I dent it, it'll fall apart!


    Personal Skills:
    Blessings of the Faeries: A+ (D)
    A blessing from Elementals; the capacity to increase one's Luck in dangerous situations. Activation is limited to battlefields, where it is possible to perform feats of arms.

    The Faerie Knight has blessings from his mother. As Faerie is half-fairy, he blessed his brother but it is low rank due to his halfblood and his own lack of knowledge about how to properly give blessings.

    "By my power as a fairy, I bless you!"
    "I only sneezed, don't go overboard."


    Animal Dialogue: B+
    The ability to communicate with animals that don’t speak with a language or words. Only accessible by the Dark Knight as he had spent time as a wild man and conversed with animals, even a Phantasmal Beast as strong as the unicorn.

    Conversation with animals is easy to obtain, and ordering them to his will is a simple manner. Has a bonus with Saber being able to communicate with people without the ability to properly speak as he can sense their intentions.

    ”Uh, brother? What are you doin-“
    “Shush brother, now, as you were saying Hercules.”
    " ▅▃▃▅■!!!!!”
    “Oh dear, truly a predicament, what do you plan on doing next?”
    "I-I'm just going to leave you two be."


    Blossoming Journey of the Twin Knights: EX
    A Skill that represents the journeys and adventures the two brothers took after meeting together, with limitless possibility for where their journey would take. If summoned individually are in an older state, they would not have this skill, as the journey was only created due to their companionship.

    To them, the Grail War is just a single step on the adventures they will take, and go to every battle expecting a fun and hard fought victory. Those fighting alongside the brothers will be inspired in varying degrees based on their personalities.

    ”Why do you act like we may lose Master? This is just step one!”
    “You are way too optimistic.”

    Noble Phantasm
    Anglitora
    Revenge for my Beautiful Father

    B
    Anti-Unit
    Range: 1~3
    Max Targets: 1

    The Black Knights Noble Phantasm named for his mother, it is a sword technique with the intent to strike the heart. If he does land a blow on their heart, their blood will center in their heart and will pour out as if from a spring. The attack that killed his mother was the first time this technique was used, and he named it after her so that ”If any man who knows of it’s name meets my blade, they will curse my mother as they die.”

    Hermitage Trinity
    Wondrous Treasures of the Hermit

    A+
    Anti-Unit (Self), Anti-Unit
    Range: 1~2
    Max Targets: 2

    Three items the Faerie Knight was granted early in his journey, it is a ring that prevents the wearer from being killed by treason, a vial that if drunken from will make the drinker forget all of their sorrows, and a sword that if is tapped at any closed gate, it will magically spring open.

    If Faerie touches a Bounded Field or other magical protection with his sword, it will open as a “gate” and let him pass safely. If one attempts to betray the brothers, the ring will activate a sleeping curse on the attempted traitors. And if one drinks from the vial, they will forget all of the things that caused them pain or sorrow in life.

    The vial in of itself is a curse, as if one drinks too much without the brother’s permission, they will start to suffer a condition similar to Alzheimers, where they slowly start to forget their entire life, as ”One could say to be alive is to live in sorrow.”

    ”Brother, you should try this remedy I made. It really takes the load off your shoul-“
    “It’s the magical vial you got from that hermit isn’t it.”
    “Noooooo, why would I ever try to get rid of all the sorrow and pain you carry. That’s completely crazy!.......So drink it before it gets cold.”

    Personality
    Faerie: A young, hopeful knight with stars in his eyes and a dream in his heart. Due to his personality and nature, he is summoned as his teenage self, despite being the older of the pair. He loves nature, especially fairies as they remind him of his mother. However, he has a burning hatred for bad mothers after hearing of his brother’s, and will “reeducate” them very…thoroughly.

    “What do you mean I’m being harsh?
    “Brother, the woman’s crying, the kids are crying, you’re actually crying, I’m about to cry, you went overboard ten minutes ago.”
    “Oh……Then that means I’m getting somewhere!”
    “Brother NO!”


    He’s also a major foodie, as the food in his time was so poorly made that he seeks anything with actual flavor.

    ”Brother! You have to try this parfait! It’s the best thing I’ve ever tasted!”
    “You said that the last nine things you ate.”
    “So? It just makes this one the number one out of ten!”


    Black: A pessimistic ”Old farthead!” as his brother calls him, he sees the worst possible outcome and acts like an old man, giving him his appearance as a man in his early thirties. He mostly follows his older(?) brother’s ideas and wants.

    ”Come on we’re a team!”
    “Wanna know who else had a team? Granddad. Remember how he ended up?”
    “…Stabbed by his own so-“ “Stabbed by his own son, half of his friends dead, and his country in shambles. That’s why I don’t like teams.”


    But, he isn’t afraid to voice his opinion and work without his brother’s direct knowledge if it gives them an advantage.

    He cares little for food, resembling his cousin Gawain in his tastes…

    ”Ah. Finally a decent meal.”
    “That’s just ten pounds of baked potatoes brother.”
    “It’s filling.”
    “It has no seasoning! There’s not even salt! It must be so bland!
    “Bland is best brother.”
    "AAAAAAAA!!!!"


    …much to his brother’s dismay.

    Bond Level 1:
    Black: Do right by my brother Master, and you'll do right by me. Don't do right, and there will be consequences, Master or not.
    Bond Level 2:
    Faerie: Sorry if my brother seems overprotective, he's just an old worrywart, and he says you act too motherly to me.
    Bond Level 3:
    Faerie: He's scared that if you act too motherly to me, you'll become like her, but I'm not worried! You're a good person, I can tell.
    Bond Level 4:
    Black: I'm sorry if I'm, overprotective. My brother acts like a kid, especially in his current form. I don't want him to go through what I did before we met, understand?
    Bond Level 5:
    Black: Oi, Master. Me and Faerie were thinking of training later, it would make his day if you came to watch. I couldn't care less though....wha-? I'm not blushing! I just have a cold!

    ...

    You're going to come right?

    Relationships
    Artoria Pendragon:
    F: “Hey Master, do you know the girl who looks like Grandpa's name is? They seem really familiar, but I can’t remember her name.”
    B: “I attempted to tell him that it’s just another world’s version of Grandpa, but he doesn’t listen to me unless it has to do with food."

    Faerie is completely mind boggled that his grandfather is his grandmother, Black couldn’t care less.

    Artoria Pendragon (Lily):
    F: "Hey Master, who's that girl walking around? She's, ah, kinda cute."
    B: "That's Oba-chan's younger self."
    F: "Wh-What?! The only girl near my age and we're related! WHHHYYY!!!"

    Black is mildly amused at seeing the magnificent king as just a little girl. Faerie didn't say a lot for several days afterwards as he was in a horrific state where he realized he had a crush on a blood relative. He recovered quickly afterwards, though there was an awkward silence whenever they were in the same room.

    Arthur Pendragon:
    F: “Brother! You won’t believe who I just saw in the hallway!”
    B: “What, another one of “Oba-chans” clones?”
    F: “I saw Grandpa! Not a girl or a girl who looks like Grandma, actually Grandpa!”
    B: “You were probably just mista-Sweet Virgin Mary on a boat it’s Ojii-san.”

    Faerie is overjoyed at seeing his grandfather and the two quickly start a family relationship, Black, who’s attempting to adapt to the Japanese culture of Chaldea, is fairly neutral to his “Ojii-san”, but seeks him out for spars and possible training for tactics the two haven’t learned.

    Morgan Le Fay:
    B: “T-That woman. She, she feels like…”
    F: “B-brother?”
    B: “She feels like mother…”

    Black absolutely despises her, her very presence reminding him of his vile witch of a mother. If summoned as an ally in Chaldea, Faerie will do anything he can to prevent conflict or even them seeing each other, but if she’s an enemy he’ll gladly take her head for his brother.

    Lore
    The sons of King Arthur's bastard son Tom a Lincoln, they have different mothers, the Faerie Knight being the Fairy Queen Caelia, the Black Knight’s being the noblewoman Anglitora.

    Their father served as a Knight of the Round Table for many years before first marrying the fairy queen Caeila. But the Red Rose Knight couldn’t stay, for his heart called for more adventure, leaving his wife and unborn son, and going back to his father’s knights. He spent years gaining notoriety for leading an invasion on Portugal and slaying a dragon, but only on the King’s death bed did he discover his lineage as Arthur's son.

    His second wife, the beautiful Anglitora, mother of his second son, was horrified that she had opened herself to a bastard. She stole all of her husband’s wealth, murdered him, and abandoned her son.

    The man known as the Black Knight was content to become a wild man, running alongside wolves and unicorns and eating raw meat, until his father’s spirit appeared before him, and told him about his royal lineage, how he was murdered and buried in a dung-hill, telling him to rise up, and take back what his mother had stolen.

    With incredible luck, the Black Knight found his way into the castle of his mother, and without regret buried his blade deep into his step-father’s sleeping heart. Upon her waking from her lover’s groan, she begged her son for her life.

    He prepared to swing his sword to avenge his father, but he couldn’t do it, his love for the woman being too strong, until he saw visions of his father swirling in front of him, his rage growing to the point that he cut his mother down regardless, using the technique that would later become his Noble Phantasm.

    At the same time, the half-brother he didn't know had left the comfort of his home in the fairy kingdom, and went to go find the father he had never met, with just the name Tom a Lincoln.

    With an honorable heart, he helped save a maiden from being raped by a wild-man, decapitating him with his sword. Escorting the maiden home, he was granted three gifts, a magic ring, an enchanted vial, and a magic sword.

    On his adventures, he found the grave of a legendary knight, with a man sleeping on top of it.

    When the man looked at him, he was shocked to see a face so like his own. The man introduced himself as the Black Knight, son of legendary knight Tom a Lincoln.

    At first, the Faerie Knight was overjoyed at seeing that he had family, but was heartbroken when he discovered that his father had been killed so horribly and that his stepmother had died as result.

    The Black Knight revealed that he had been staying at his father's grave ever since he avenged their father, which had been months before hand.

    Seeing his brother overridden with grief, the Faerie Knight offered him the vial, which his brother drank greedily, forgetting his grief over his mother's death. He never touched that vial again in his life.

    The two brothers joined together, and went on many adventures together, eventually retiring together to build a proper memorial for their parents, building homes for the poor and donating their wealth generously, until they passed and were buried in the family tomb.

    At their summoning, they materialize as their younger selves, the Faerie Knight's more childish mind materializing him when he first started his journey as a teenager, while his brother is at his peak power and his truest personality, a man in his thirties with many regrets on his shoulders.

    Key Words/Craft Essence

    Anglitora

    Master, did I ever tell you of my mother?
    She was so kind when I was young, she loved me with her whole heart and I loved her even more

    But when she killed my father
    I forgot who she was.

    It was only when I stabbed her with my sword did I remember, remember my beautiful mother.


    I miss her.

    Do you miss anyone Master?

    *****

    Caelia

    Hey, Master! Did I ever tell you about my mother?

    She was so beautiful,
    The prettiest fairy in all the world!

    But, when I was little, I remember her crying a lot
    She always talked about the man she loved

    It was so quiet when she left
    I waited for her to come home
    But, she never came back


    Why did she leave me?




    Will you leave me too?


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    Sweet Virgin Mary on a boat that was amazing.

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    Shouldn't the lads have Combination if they're both summoned at once?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Shouldn't the lads have Combination if they're both summoned at once?
    I think that might be covered by their Blossoming Journey Of The Twin Knights Skill.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Shouldn't the lads have Combination if they're both summoned at once?
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    I think that might be covered by their Blossoming Journey Of The Twin Knights Skill.
    The Blossoming Journey Of The Twin Knights skill was my way to represent the bond the two shared and the fact that they both had grand adventures after their legend ended, a way to combine Combination and Blossoming Journey.
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    @Baldwin IV

    Funny that this shows up right as I'm putting the finishing touches on a Raynald de Chatillon sheet myself, especially since I attributed Montgisard's victory to Raynald instead of Baldwin. I'd be interested to see what you can do with a completed sheet, but that definitely isn't how Battle Continuation works.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Express View Post
    Funny that this shows up right as I'm putting the finishing touches on a Raynald de Chatillon sheet myself, especially since I attributed Montgisard's victory to Raynald instead of Baldwin. I'd be interested to see what you can do with a completed sheet, but that definitely isn't how Battle Continuation works.
    Yeah, I thought of mentioning that myself. Battle Continuation is specifically the ability to fight through deadly injuries. Just being really determined isn't going to give you it, much less at a higher rank then someone like Cu who fought off a whole army tied to a pole with their guts hanging out. I think something like Spartacus's Unyielding Will or Dantes' Determination Of Steel might be a lot more fitting here.

    Also, Raynald was the guy who led a fleet of ships to burn down Mecca, right? Curious what you'll do with him...

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