I dont know, it looks preaty purple too me
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Okay, maybe is more like a deep red
I dont know, it looks preaty purple too me
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Okay, maybe is more like a deep red
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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Thx I'll take your advice.
Class: Assassin (also qualifies for Saber, Archer, Rider, and Caster)
True Name: Juan Manuel, Prince of Villena
Alignment: Neutral Good
Parameters:
Strength: D
Endurance: D
Agility: B
Magic: D
Luck: A
Noble Phantasm: C
Skills
Noble Phantasm
Description
Lore
Relationships
Last edited by Bloble; January 18th, 2018 at 04:56 AM.
Theme song wasn't Emperor's New Clothes?Gotta say I'm appalled. 0/10
But nah, for real that's another good one. Pretty unorthodox too, seems like you're nailing a niche in servant creation.
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alight i think if fixed most of the grammar problems anything else i need to work on for the sheet?
Lol. The whole idea for the sheet came from this AMV, so the song might've been picked before anything else.
Servant Berserker:
Appearance:
Source is here
True Name: Tydeus
Alignment: Lawful Mad (originally Lawful Good)
Alternate Classes: Saber, Lancer, Shielder
Strength- B
Agility- C
Endurance- A
Mana- C
Luck- D
NP- B
Personality
Class Skills:
Mad Enhancement- D
Strength and Endurance parameters are ranked up. In return, language ability is simplified and Berserker has difficulty continuing complex thoughts over long periods of time. For some reason, he is obsessed with devouring his opponent's brains, requiring a Command Seal to restrain him from partaking in the horrid act.
Personal Skills:
Enmity Of The Goddess- B
A Skill for those hated and cursed by the divine. In Berserker's case, enmity is from the goddess of wisdom Athena, who favored the hero in life only to spurn him in disgust when he madly devoured the brain of his opponent Melanippus. An inversion of the Affection Of The Goddess Skill he would possess as Saber or Shielder, increasing damage from Berserker's attacks against people, creatures or buildings associated with the goddess Athena.
Innocent Monster- D
Due to his legend having some traits in common with the modern-day zombie archetype, Berserker has gained some abilities of that archetype, such as inhuman tenacity and the ability to continue fighting even when his body is mangled beyond recognition. Only the severing of his head or the complete destruction of his body (such as by incineration) can insure Berserker's demise.
In other Classes where his legend was not tainted by the sin of cannibalism, Berserker would possess in place of this Skill Battle Continuation at rank B. This represents how he was dealt a mortal wound by the Theban champion Melanippus, but managed to survive and slay his opponent before finally succumbing to his injuries.
Thousand Slayer- B+
Famed for challenging all the generals of Thebes to single-combat and winning, Berserker gains a + modifier to his physical parameters while fighting two or more Servants without support from his Master. Furthermore, a mental geas compels enemies to fight Berserker one-on-one, rather then simply ganging up on him. This can be negated if the enemy has a mental resistance Skill ranked B or higher.
Sadistic Constitution- C
A Skill augmenting one's aggression in battle. The longer he remains immersed in combat, the more Berserker's bestial fury is unleashed, completely abandoning his dignity as a warrior. When sufficiently enraged, Berserker may even throw away his sword and shield to savagely punch and tear at enemies like a wild beast.
Noble Phantasms
Last edited by RoydGolden; October 20th, 2019 at 11:08 PM.
So between my Rider!Diomedes, “Athena” and now your Tydeus it looks like we’re forming the whole Athena fan club. We haven’t seen a full on zombie in a while but it’s certainly an enjoyable (albeit horrific) take on the guy. The first NP is certainly a good take on the curse and the only thing I would have done different myself would have been to have the first skill be a curse, or ‘negative skill’ that causes him to take damage instead.
Also so I need to add to my Diomedes relationship section.
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Whats with greek deities and butting in?
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Let me continue on the roll of greek servants.
Berserker: Agave
Str:B, End:B, Agi:B
Mna:D, Lck:E, Np:A
Gender: female
Height: 224cm
Weight: 252kg
Place of origin: greace
Armament: bow,thyrsus, her hands, anything at disposal.
Likes: wine, music, sex, dionysus
Deslike: clothes, silence, dionysus
Talents: beast hunting, dancing
Natural enemies: dionysus, boring people
Skills
Mad enhancement(EX): parameters are ranked-up, but it is deprived of most reason. Berserker is fixated in self-satisfaction and will never pass a chance to eat, fight, copulate or ano other thing she feels like doing.
Blessing of alcohol(B): an skill that allows the recovery of health and mana through the consumption of alcoholic drinks at the price of lowering cognitive functions.
Divinity(D): berserker has a low level in divinity for being the daughter of a a minor goddess, this level is even more decreased because of her current state.
Beast killer(false)(C): a skill recive for berserker's feat of slaying her son with her own hands while seeing him as a lion, she gains an rank up against any enemy she percives as a beast despite the enemies actual possession of said trait.
noble phantasm
Anthesteria: grape vines are blooming, festival of madness (anti-unit: A):
A noble phantasm representing berserker's role as the leader of the maenads and named after the sacred festival in dionysus honor. It is a divine curse/bless that channels the god's power into her body, as seem in the purple flames in her eyes.
When activated, both berserker's strenght and speed recives a great boost and she becomes indiferent to pain in exchange for the rest of the little sanity she had. Also since this is a form of divine possession, her Divinity skill also increases to rank A.
Originaly this skill also allow to comunication with the souls of the dead, but she cannot use this way.
Backstory: berserker's identity is Agave, the daughter of Cadmus, the king and founder of the city of Thebes and of the goddess Harmonia. She was also the mother of king pentheus and more importantly, the aunt of dionysus.
When dionysus mother was destroyed by the sight of the splendor of Zeus. Berserker spread the rumor that she had only endeavored to conceal unmarried sex with a mortal and her destruction was a punishment. After he became a god, dionysus send the womans of thebes mad (Agave incluse) and made then celebrate rituals in his honor, When her son tried to stop then, they killed him, with Agave herself desmenbering him with her bare hands
Personality: berserker does not have any inhibitions, she likes pleasure and freedom and dislike anything that stops her from getting those things. She has a love/hate relationship with dionysus as he made her kill her son but also showed her this style of life.
She does not like wearing clothes and will prefer to walk around naked, but she can be bribed with some effort.
Last edited by the god of world-0; January 22nd, 2018 at 09:01 PM.
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
Come explore the White Library, and reach the bottom of this Abyss
Fate / White Memoria
Agave: Interesting sheet for a very obscure mythical figure. Getting stronger the more inebriated she gets is a fun concept, and definitely fitting a follower of Dionysus. Anthesteria is a very generic buffing NP though. I think it'd be more interesting to give her an NP that makes other people go mad and lose their inhibitions (possibly spread through some kind of alcoholic mist), rather then just acting as Mad Enhancement on steroids.
Thanks for the tip, i alredy started working in another sheet with this
here is a list of my servant sheets(new and improved format for my servant sheets)
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Fate / White Memoria
@Tydeus
I think the innocent monster skill is a bit contrived, and subsequently the focus on brains. I can blame the later on ME so that’s fine but I think the jump from “Ate a guy’s brain once” to zombie is a leap across the valley. Also, I din’t think Tydeus had Hephaestus armor. His was just blessed by Athena, Diomedes got his own cuirass instead of just hand me downs. I may be wrong though. I do like the idea of a zombie servant but I think Tydeus isn’t it.
Thanks for the feedback man. I admit making him a zombie was a bit of a stretch (and he is a very one-note character in terms of personality), but I didn't have that much else to go on since his legend is otherwise fairly sparse. I do think the armor is the same though. I read that Diomedes's armor was passed down from his father and both armors even had a boar design on them. Seems a bit too much to be a coincidence.
true name: urban legend
class: assassin.
alignment: neutral.
appearance: it appears as shadowy presence often taking the form of a small child or old man, with a voice thats sounds of a thousand whispering voices as if a thousand people were telling some kind of hushed story. assassins form is on definite when it uses its noble phantasm.
parameters:
strength: C
agility: C+
mana: B
luck: C
NP: A+
backstory(sorry its so short) : since humans have first spread rumors it could be said that assassin as existed, making him older then Gilgamesh. he exists in sort of phantom form not and could be said to be very similar to war, his backstory is that of thousands lies, half truths, and over-exaggerations that become believed by the general populace in one time or place, making him a being who's history is both truth and lies.
personality: assassin is cold and calculative preferring manipulation over direct confrontation, it could be said the only emotion it can feel is deep love for its master a love it will hold onto at all costs, but yet even that love is sort of logical love and not sentimental love in a way, its love is best described as a cold, possessing love void of compassion yet somehow fool of what could only be called desire yet not in a will to procreate but simply to have. it will be perfectly willing to hurt its master to keep its master. in one case it even took the limbs of its master so she could never leave its side, it is not directly interested in the wars and simply sees the holy grail as way to stay by its master side for there rest of there lives, if another method came to stay by its master side it would take it if it happened to be easier. anything that attempts to harm its master is treated with extreme prejudice and will do everything in its power to kill it, if anything even touches or inconveniences its master in anyway regardless of circumstance it will kill it in the violent and pain full way possible. it is unknown exactly why it gains a psychotic love for its master as it shouldn't be able to feel emotion in the first place, however it likely has something to do with the master servant pact or something to do with its summoning .
class skills:
presence concealment, A.
a skill which allows a servant to hide ones presence or conceal ones presence, this is rank if fitting of assassin being that it is the embodiment of urban legends and myths like any urban myth or legend it is unnoticed tell it is everywhere, in this way assassin is able to hide it presence until the moment it attacks.
personal skill:
Innocent Monster(D) : is an attribute possessed by Servants whose history and existence have been distorted by the monstrous reputations they accrued across the course of their life and thereafter. As a consequence, the Servant's abilities and appearance have been rendered to conform to the specifications of their legend. Incidentally, this personal skill cannot be removed. it is not that assassin has been represented as a monster but rather that that urban legends have essentially been often confused with horror stories, this mass misunderstanding has changed its appearance and voice buts its skills have not been as greatly affected.
mental pollutions(C) Mental Pollution makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference Thaumaturgy, due possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes impossible to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution. (In the condition that the Servant's master is of Evil alignment, and perpetrates acts of cruelty against the Servant, Mental Pollution will increase in rank, further increasing defenses against magecraft. However, as the Servant's psyche is inherently broken, this may result in irreversible deterioration) Provides a probability (roughly 50%) that mental interference magecraft will be rendered ineffective. do to assassin possessing only one psychotic emotion he posses a moderate rank in this skill.
NPs:
Name/title: the tales of society yet proven( better name please!!!)
Rank: A+
Range: about the size of the town or city the war is being fought in.
Type: Anti army.
the noble phantasm allows assassin to turn urban myths such a ghosts, serial killers, secrete societies, cult, etc. and use the places and people or groups as familiars which become extensions of assassins own will, thou none of them are power full enough to be servants when combined and used right they become dangerous to even the most elite of servants, the groups, buildings, and people all will possess presence concealment of C rank and abilities based on there urban myths and legends.
...Is this TATARI?