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Pretty cool stuff. I like the insinuations that Beowulf is actually way more scared of the dragon then he's letting on, but hiding his fear behind a valorous façade to inspire his people.
You're welcome. I wasn't quite sure about that actually, since the way it was described ("not wanting people to see" and all) sounded more like fear to me. Though now that I think of it, it also makes sense that Beowulf would want to hide his immense joy for battle when he's surrounded by people who have pretty much lost everything because of it.
It's always nice to read fics on Servants backgrounds and I think you have Beowulf nailed here. The ambiguity of his heart worked well given the fight was his swan song and all - which suits the tone well.
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