CROWNLESS (OOC)

[Typhous]

Now that I think about it... maybe I should have submitted that other sheet as well. Ah well.

[Tobias]

You are thinking that sheet would have been more suitable?


:|

[Draconic]

I'm trying not to get my hopes up, but it's looking like I might have actually an unconventional build.

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Anyone feel like sharing what they're guessing their build has been classified as?

[Kirby]

Feedback, for our Sector sheets:

Bloble (4) - One of your strongest sheets. Something about her just clicks, and it’s rare to see an actual Purist submission. The biggest issue would be that she seems a bit difficult to play and come up with scenarios for, if she’s a non-combatant. Investigation is the next logical step, but given her skillset I don’t think investigation makes too much sense for her, either. Unexpectedly moe.


Bloble (5) - Oozes personality. While his archetype isn’t particularly original, he plays that role perfectly. Probably your third best sheet. His powers are more on the simple side, but it’s solid. Has one of my favorite lines I’ve read in any sheet.


Lace - In the land of “Everyone’s Fucked Up”, seeing someone relatively well-adjusted and not fucked over is actually refreshing to see. Your sheet’s shorter than most, but to the point and without any extraneous load, and gets its character across without too much fuss. I saw that you also trimmed down some stuff, so I’m not sure if you meant to remove it entirely (as in, “this is no longer apart of my backstory”) or only to abbreviate it (as in, “this is still a part of my backstory, but removed for brevity”).


Plue - Has my absolute favorite powerset out of every sheet I’ve ever gotten. It’s an inventive and creative usage of Crests, yet it’s not something bizarre or gimmicky, and in the end seems like a logical application of “what would actually happen if we got these things.” The rest of the sheet is solid, but the powerset here is the real carry here.


Race (2) - 200% Edge. Of all the sheets that went a stealth build, I think this is the one that went the most all-in on it. Your usage of light manipulation is interesting, and I like your custom subfaction. If anything’s holding it back, it’s that it might’ve gone too hard on the edge.


Siriel - You already know this, but I think your powers are hilarious. Reminds me more of a idyllic, traditional superhero setting than the Edge Kingdom this setting is, and it’s a charming sheet for that. I also like that you made your own subfaction that’s not a subset of some already existing one.


Raffles (4) - I got this at the last minute, and being what it is I can’t help but compare it to the other hard-boiled cop of the Sector. While Blob’s sheet seems more focused on emulating the noir cop archetype as much as humanly possible, yours seems more focused on the aspect of being an Esper. A nicely flawed character, you don’t see that too often.

[Rafflesiac]

Versus Bloble again, huh?

[Kirby]

Ayy turns out I forgot to put some sheets in the main doc, so we actually have 29 sheets in total, aha ah, ha ha, ha.

Another Sector sheet feedback:

Arkturus (1) - Interesting backstory in that it actually acknowledges the existence of an outside world out of the Sector. A bit sparse on the powers and seems a bit unfocused. I'm not sure if I completely understand what your second function is or how it works, but if it is what I think it is, it's pretty inventive.

[Bloble]

Perhaps this is

destiny

[Frantic Author]

Destiny is destiny

[Tobias]

Maybe they both get in



and then crownless was a buddy buddy cop drama

[Rafflesiac]

Yeah, but who are the perps?

[Bloble]

pvp boys

lets arrest a tobias for puns against humanity

[Katie]

huge flake kirby

[Kirby]

:gun:

[Bird of Hermes]

Dang, if everyone sheets seem that good then I probably haven't gotten in. Shoulda just made more than 1 sheet in hindsight.

Oh well.

[Draconic]

Depends. Would you have been as invested in the second as you were with the first? In my case, doing that would probably have been a bit touch-and-go.

[Lace]

Bloble why did you submit 5 sheets you're dumb

[Snow]

My butt only had time to accidentally type one sheet in the final deadline moments, I'm sad.

[Tobias]

I only went in one sheet.

Well, one sheet and then another version of that guy with a stat change, does that count as 2?

[Lace]

Anyone who made more than two sheets is a big ol dummy

[Draconic]

Bloble why did you submit 5 sheets you're dumb

I want to agree, but we still don't know whether his first through third are unpickable garbage yet, and if they're not, considering that his fourth and fifth sound good, that means he's better than all of us combined. I'll hold off my praise/judgement until we get more intel.

Alternatively, maybe someone else should collab with Kirby and make a second Crownless game comprised of only Bloble and Rafflesiac's characters…

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Anyone who made more than two sheets is a big ol dummy

Not dumb. Just mean.

Actually, until 1 through 3 are rated, it could be debated that Bloble's actually an evil genius.