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Not as good as my Fabre, but I wasn't that creative and I had not Christmas Servant idea before, so here is it.
*I need to find a FC, I will look for one and may edit here soon*
Class: Ruler
Alternative Classes: Rider, Caster
True Name: The Magi
Title: “The Wise Kings”
Source: Christian Legends
Place of Origin: Multiple Places, probably Asia and Africa
Alignment: Lawful Good
Gender: Male
Likes: Children, Giving Presents, Charity, Traveling
Dislikes: Intolerance, Egocentrism, Avarice
Natural Enemy:
- Any Member of the Avenger Class: For Ruler, the Avenger class is the embodiment of the unfair retribution. Although he understand what made them achieve the feeling of vengeance, he believes one should not give up to it, and the forgiveness is the one of the most important virtues.
- Gilgamesh: The ego and avarice of the King of Heroes also goes against Ruler’s belief of charity and modesty. As one who have an infinite treasure and does not accept the concept of sharing, he could be seen as the inverse of Ruler’s “spirit of Christmas”.
Height: 182 cm
Weight: 84 kg
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Sovereign
Lore:
When the messiah Jesus Christ was still an infant, he was visited by wise men, who then gave him gifts. Gold, frankincense, myrrh. They were not named neither numbered in any of the Holy Scriptures, but different traditions gave identities to them. Since their gifts were three, the most common interpretation is that they were three wise men. Other tradition identify them as kings, because of the prophecies that told that the messiah would be soon worshiped by kings.
In western legends, they were three: Melchior from Persia, Caspar from India, and Balthazar from Babylonia. The three of them followed one star, the Star of Bethlehem; to arrive at the manger were the infant Jesus was with Mary and Joseph, bringing gifts to him. Their act of presenting the new messiah became a tradition of presenting family and friends during Christmastime.
As a Servant, Ruler is a compound of multiple spirits that could be identified with characteristics of the Wise Men. A composite spirit made of scholars, priests and kings from all Asia and Africa whose faith and compassion are similar to a Saint. Because of this nature, Ruler does not possess an evident personality, and just follow the teachings of Christ. Ruler’s existence can be compared to Phantoms or Wraiths, but it is not exactly any of these.
Personality: Ruler is a rightful man who will seek for a noble and respectful battle for the Grail. He will praise the heroes and will admire their dreams and objectives, but he will not let any lack of honor during the war. His speech is mostly mechanic, as he does not use different intonations in his voice. He also does not use the pronoun “I”, always using “We” instead as he is aware of his nature as a composite spirit.
Key Words:
- Gold, frankincense and myrrh: The three gifts given by the Wise Men. In the future, it lead to the tradition of giving presents and gifts during the celebration of Christmas.
- Star of Bethlehem: A star in the night sky, it was used as a compass by the Wise Men to reach the manger where Jesus was. It became a symbol of faith, also a divine symbol.
- Wise Kings: “May all kings fall down before him”. Prophecies made the legend of the Wise Men to evolve, as they become “The Three Wise Kings”.
Catalyst: If in a Holy Grail War a Ruler-class Servant is needed during Christmastime, the date is enough to work as a catalyst to summon Ruler.
Equipment: Ruler is only equipped with a shepherd’s crook.
Parameters:
Strength – C
Endurance – B
Agility – C
Mana – A
Luck – A
Noble Phantasm – A+
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance [A] – Cancel spells of A-rank or bellow. None of the individual spirits that are part of Ruler could be qualified for a Magic Resistance so high, but the summoning as a Ruler-class Servant made it possible to raise this rank to be comparable to a Saint.
True Name Discernment [A] – Information of Servants, such as True Name and Skills are revealed to the owner of this Skill. Besides these data, Ruler also can access information over the Noble Phantasm of the targets.
God’s Resolution [D] – Ruler is granted with one Command Spell for each Servant that participates in the Holy Grail War that he oversees. This Skill rank’s was reduced in function to his own Noble Phantasm.
Personal Skills:
Charisma [B-] – The talent to command armies and countries. Rank-B is a symbol that Ruler is able to lead a country as a king. Since Ruler is a composite spirit and only part of these were kings, this Skill attained a negative modifier.
Riding [C] – As every legend of the Wise Men possess a long travel made by them, most vehicles and animals can be handled by Ruler.
Rule of Gold [A] – Ruler possess wealth accumulated from his many identities. Although, it is expected that he will not use this skill for any kind of personal gain.
Star of Bethlehem [A] – The star that was a guide for the Wise Men. This Skill can be interpreted as an alternative Skill for Revelation, and works in similar ways, as an instinct, or sixth sense during battles, however also to optimize choices made by Ruler.
Noble Phantasms:
Rank A+ / Anti-UnitHoly PresenterThe Gift of Retribution
The crystallization of the act of giving gifts and presents, started by the Wise Man, this Noble Phantasm can act in two ways, according to the judgement of Ruler. It can be a blessing; a power given by Ruler if he finds someone that needs or deserve it. By using the cane on its right hand, it can heal completely someone, even if they were affected by a fatal wound. After the healing, the target will also have all their parameters buffed for the period of an entire day.
Although, this Noble Phantasm can also be used as a Punishment. However, Ruler will not use it as a killing method, but using the same method, it can reduce harshly the parameters of an enemy, and also stunning it temporarily. This Noble Phantasm is used as a mean to control Servant’s acts during a Holy Grail War.
O Tannenbaum, o Tannenbaum,
Dein Kleid will mich was lehren!
Die Hoffnung und Beständigkeit
Gibt Mut und Kraft zu jeder Zeit!
O Tannenbaum, o Tannenbaum,
Dein Kleid will mich was lehren!
Class: Lancer
STR: C+
END: C+
AGI: C+
MGI: D
LCK: D
Class Skills
Magic Resistance (C): Cancels spells two verses or shorter. Lancer is a famed opponent of pagan magic and rituals.
Thor has a particular beef with him, though the thunder god's wrath is lessened around this happy time of the year.
Personal Skills
Apostle of Germany (B+): A unique version of the Saint skill that forms a composite skill of sorts with Father of the Nation. Lancer
became the patron saint of Germany through his considerable role in bringing Christianity to the pagan parts of Europe, unifying a
great deal of Germania under Christendom. Though he cannot be called a "founding father", he nonetheless gains a bonus to recognizing
Servants or Noble Phantasms originating from Germania, as well as defending against their attacks and attempting diplomacy with them.
Christmas Gift (A+): Lancer is able to produce small tokens to give as gifts that grant various buffs to the recipient. Plucked from
his Christmas tree, they are shaped like apples but will reveal their contents when peeled or cut open. Early Christmas trees were
decorated with apples, symbolizing the fruit of the Tree of Knowledge in the Garden of Eden. This tradition would continue until the
Victorian Era, where not a single German household was complete at Christmas without a small, tabletop "tannenbaum" or Yule tree.
Due to his tree's origins, the drop-rate for Yggdrasil Seeds will be higher than normal when hanging around Lancer.
Tree-Feller (C): A skill represented by the axe Lancer carries. It is not a Noble Phantasm, but it has incredible cutting power for
a simple tool. Lancer's only recorded use of it involved cutting down a massive oak tree in one stroke, producing a great shockwave.
As part of Lancer's inventory, it could be called an Anti-Foliage Mystic Code specialized in annihilating plant-based enemies.
Noble Phantasm
O Tannenbaum~Christ Child's Thunderous Fir Tree (B+, Anti-Unit, Support)
The first Christmas tree in history brandished as a seemingly unwieldy spear. Upon cutting down Donar's Oak, a massive tree sacred to Thor,
a small fir sprouted and was grown to maturity by Lancer. In typical Catholic fashion, Lancer assimilated the pagan practice of sacred groves
to help with the conversion of the German tribes, incorporating the mysticism of evergreens to make them a representation of the Trinity,
with the stars and decorations serving as symbols of Heaven. Firstly, the golden star at the tip of the tree serves to make it a holy weapon,
dealing extra damage against evil heathens. Secondly, since it was grown from an oak sacred to Thor and reinvented as a Catholic symbol,
it gives Lancer some of Thor's qualities, most notably amplifying his physical parameters and giving him an attack akin to Prana Burst (Thunder
and Lightning), transforming the physically unremarkable saint into the epitome of a muscled German warrior. Finally, the tree can be planted
in the ground to erect a chapel, identical to the one dedicated to Saint Peter made from the remains of Donar's Oak. Inside the chapel, Lancer's
Christmas Gift skill is boosted to be able to give a much more powerful item to whomever comes inside with peaceful intentions, though it is limited
to one per person. Aside from that, the interior is warm and welcoming, filled with good food, drink and company.
Background
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"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Formatting's borked.
Tis fixed
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Class: RiderFaceclaim
Other Classes: Archer, Saber, Berserker
True Name: Horseman of the Apocalypse: War (Christmas)
Titles/Alias: The Spirit of the 1914 Christmas Truce, Red Horseman of Christmas
Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Place of Origin: Book of Revelation
Parameters:
STR: A
END: D (peace during war is fragile after all)
AGI: C
MGI: D
LCK: D
NP: B
Height: 6'2
Weight: 180 lbs
Likes: War, Humanity, Weapons, Christmas, Peace, Families
Dislikes: People who break peace, ruining Christmas due to wars
Talent: Causing wars, bringing temporary peace to war fronts, keeping soldiers safe on Christmas
Natural Enemy: His normal self, Those who reject the idea of peace on Christmas
Attribute: Heaven
Armament: World War 1 era rifle, and a trench knife
Catalyst: summoned on a battlefield in a country currently at war during the holiday season
Skills
Noble Phantasms
Lore/Personality/Relationships
Creator Notes
Last edited by Bylackbre; December 2nd, 2017 at 03:36 PM.
The Truce is my favorite story from WW1. Really cool idea. When I started reading the RM description I half-expected its effect to be forcing Servants to settle their differences with a friendly game of football.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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I am glad you liked it and well the soccer thing could occur if a soccer ball is found within the marble though War can't keep people in there indefinitely. I was hoping to replicate both the peace that occurred on that Christmas day as well as how deadly No Man's Land can become should the sacred peace be broken.
True Name:Jesus Christ Santa LilyChristkindl
Class: Ruler
Gender: Male
Alignment: Neutral Good
Attribute: Sky
Place of Origin: Germany
STR: D
END: C
AGI: A
MAG: EX
LCK: A
NP: A+
Class Skills:
God's Resolution: EX
Three Command Spells can be used for each Servant that will be visited on Christmas' Eve. This exceedingly high rank is the result of the many miracles performed by the young Jesus with mere words.
Magic Resistance: EX
Virtual immunity to all forms of magecraft and magical effects.
True Name Discernment: EX
Knowledge of all Servants present in the world at a time, their location and their actions since last Christmas. A fraction of the divine omniscience of the Father, borrowed by the Son to be used solely to judge the naughty and the nice and deliver their gifts.
Personal Skills:
Divinity: A+
As part of the Holy Trinity and the manifestation of God in mortal flesh, who later joined the Father and and the Holy Spirit in Heaven, Christ has one of the highest Divinity ranks among all Heroic Spirits.
Miracle: EX
A skill that makes the impossible possible. As the greatest of all Christian thaumaturges and a manifestation of the omnipotent God, Christ can apply this skill to virtually any effect. Healing, exorcism, elemental manipulation, control over animals and plants, multiplication of food, animating objects, death curses and even the resurrection of the dead are all within His power.
Saint's Gift: EX
A traditional Christmas gift-bringer in many countries, He naturally possesses the highest rank in this skill. However, the presents are mostly wooden toys He made Himself, and at this age He was still learning carpentry. Please keep this in mind when receiving your gift.
Noble Phantasms
- Anti-Army, Rank AStar of BethlehemThe Time of Our Lord has Come
The miraculous sign that marked the birth of Christ and lead the Three Wise Kings towards Him. A star above Bethlehem that shone brightest than all others during the Nativity of Jesus, an event that forever changed the world, and is nowadays used to separate eras.
Jesus is able to evoke His star once more, for a total of 7 days, to shine above a location. Serving as a reminder of the beginning of a new era, the presence of the Star of Bethlehem weakens all Servants whose legends are set prior to 1 AD, reducing their parameters and weakening their Noble Phantasms as they struggle to outshine His story. Rather than Magic Resistance or Luck, the only way to resist this effect is through fame - possessing a legend that managed to survive the birth of the Messiah and is still well known in modern times.
- Anti-Army, Anti-Country Rank A+Star of BethlehemApsinthion Prototype
Borrowing some of the power of His other Ruler form, Christ repurposes His Noble Phantasm to deliver punishment to those who have been naughty throughout the year, by establishing a link between the Star of Bethlehem, which signified the beginning of a new age, and Wormwood, the Star of Apocalypse that signifies the end of times.
During the time in which it remains in the sky, the Star of Bethlehem can be made to fall to the Earth as a weapon of mass destruction, releasing all of its remaning brilliance as a destructive explosion capable of razing an entire town; the less time it has been active, the more powerful is the detonation. As it is meant to punish the wicked and sinful, additional damage is dealt to those of Evil Alignment.
Afterwards, the area on which the star fell is temporarily transformed into an uninhabitable hell: the earth burns while covered in hail, water turns to blood and the skies turn dark; a "preview" of the Apocalypse and the woes that await the sinful. Once a total of seven days have passed since the Star was first activated, the area returns to normal, and all traces of this dark future vanish again. This secondary effect serves mostly to warn those that are straying from the right path, or so He claims.
Lore & Personality
Spoiler:
I found one little story and it spiraled out of control from there. I'm posting both my sheets right out the gate mostly out of fear of being sniped.
Class: Caster
STR: E
END: E
AGI: D
MGI: B+
LCK: A
Class Skills
Territory Creation (C+): Caster is able to make a building into her Workshop simply by picking a prominent location and
building a Nativity Scene, the most traditional and important Christmas decoration. It depicts the Holy Family surrounded
by angels, shepherds, magi and animals. The final piece, the baby Jesus, is left until the last moment on Christmas Eve.
Also present in Caster's Nativity are a few Mexican twists including cacti and turkeys, women making tortillas, and even
the figure of Lucifer hiding in the shadows. There is no limit to how large and elaborate the Scene can be; it can stretch
to depict multiple landscapes and entire villages, seemingly making the building much larger on the inside.
Item Construction (D): Capable of making ceramics, painting, weaving and cultivating plants. This skill is vital to the
establishment of her Territory, as its power depends on the size and complexity of the Nativity Scene that she constructs.
Caster is also a wonderful cook, setting up feasts and drinks for the holiday parties to come.
Personal Skills
Affections of the Archangels (B): Affection and protection from the Archangels Michael and Gabriel, who stood on the either side
of the Virgin Mary during the Nativity to witness the birth of Christ. They are the ones who appeared to the poor Caster and gave
her the greatest gift of all that has permeated Mexican and American culture for centuries afterward. MGI and LCK are ranked up.
Guiding Light (A+): The "lighting of the beacon" to give allies a safe journey. The traditional Mexican pastorela or "shepherd's
play" depicts all the characters, Mary and Joseph, the Magi, the Shepherds and the Angels journeying to Bethlehem. But on the
way, they are plagued by the Devil trying to keep them from arriving. They all triumph and arrive by following the light of the
Christmas Star. It is a skill that wards off misfortune from Caster's allies as long as their bond lasts, no matter the distance.
However, Caster's enemies will be hampered by the figure of Lucifer in the Nativity scene, leaving them hopelessly lost unless
they possess high LCK or skills that assist in tracking and navigation.
Christmas Saint (EX): The skill that allows Caster to manifest as an aspect of the Lady of Guadalupe, the title given to the Virgin
Mary depcited in the holy painting in Mexico City. Said to be created by God Himself, the Virgin is the patron saint of Mexico.
Caster recieving the blessing of the archangels allows her to also recieve the blessing of the Virgin, as Mexican Christmas is
kicked off with nine days of celebrations honoring Mexico's patroness. The most important event is a pilgrimage to Mexico City,
with people coming to pay respects, regardless of race or class (for example, hundreds of Japanese-Mexicans make the pilgrimage
in traditional kimonos). As the newly christened (pun intended) patron saint of Mexican Christmas, Caster's power will cresecndo
as Christmas Eve approaches. The celebrations will not end, the food and drink will never run out and no evil will stop her.
Noble Phantasms
Pinata Breaker~Smashing of the Hoarding Devil (D+, Anti-Unit)
A simple wooden stick used to smash a pinata shaped like a seven-pointed star. The star represents Satan who has all the goods of
the world, decorated to attract people, the seven points representing the seven cardinal sins. The stick represents the Christian faith
to defeat evil and release the treasure for all. As Caster's staff, it deals massive damage to Evil-aligned enemies, and siphons off
prana and valuable treasure (read: increases rare item drop rate) from those stuck by it.
Flores de Noche Buena~Flaming Red Stars of the Holy Night (C+, Support)
Known today as the poinsettia, this flower is ubiquitous in Christmas displays all over the world. Originating in Mexico and created
by Caster's childish gift to the baby Jesus. These crimson blossoms cemented themselves in Christmas decorations due to their star-
shaped petals, symbolizing the Star of Bethlehem and their red color representing the sacrifice of Christ. Caster's mere presence is
enough to cause poinsettias to rapidly grow everywhere in sight. The flowers have two functions: to absorb sunlight via photosynthesis
and convert it into prana, and to apply a blessing of damage reduction to Caster and any nearby allies. This quality comes from the
Virgin of Guadalupe's famed ability to resist damage, from simple dust, soot, common wear and tear to even acid and bombs.
La Villa~Basilica of Our Lady of Guadalupe (A+, Support)
A transformation of Caster's Territory into a grand cathedral. While Caster's power increases as Christmas approaches, her basilica
can only be manifested once the figure of the baby Jesus is placed in the manger at the center of the Nativity Scene. It is within this
church where, for twenty-four hours, Caster becomes the true embodiment of the Virgin of Guadalupe, the Patroness of the Americas,
Empress of Latin America and the Protectress of Children. Clothed with the Holy Shroud of Juan Diego, surrounded by red poinsettias
and accompanied by a joyous choir, Caster is all but invincible thanks to the perpetual adoration of Mexican Catholics and the spirit
of Christmas. Under Caster's protection, her allies may eat, drink and be merry to their heart's content, with no fear of molestation.
Background
Alternate, non-Santa FC
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"Hey, Hermes! You better capture my good side with this one!"
Class: Rider
Alignment: True Neutral
Region: Worldwide Fairy Tales
Height/Weight: 137cm/41kg *Horns not taken into consideration
Likes: Carrots
Dislikes: Not getting carrots from kids after flying to their houses
Talent: Adorable
Natural Enemy: Bucephalus, Red Hare, His Boss
Attribute: Earth
Traits: Servant, Male, Humanoid?, Beast, Divine
Armament: Horns, Hooves
Parameters:
STR: B
END: D
AGI: C
MGI: A
LCK: B
NP: B
Class Skills:
Magic Resistance: A+
Grants protection against magical effects. Differing from the Resistance effect that merely rejects Magical Energy, this ability cancels the spells altogether.
Cancel spells of A-Rank or below, no matter what High-Thaumaturgy it is. Furthermore; offensive magic that targets Rider's person is automatically rejected, while protective charms and healing effects have their potency doubled.
Riding: -
Denoting the ability to ride mounts and vehicles. Rider-class Servants will typically possess a high rank. It is said that dragon type mounts are an exception, requiring a different ability other than Riding.
Perhaps because his existence is closer to that of a mount than the rider, his Riding Skill has been sealed in order to increase the effectiveness of his more animistic abilities.
"To be fair, when did you last see an animal ride another animal?"
Personal Skills:
Animal Dialogue (Man): B
communication of intention with animals that do not speak a 'language of words'. In the case of Rider as a beast himself, inversion of the effects occurs in this exceedingly rare case. Rider possesses an intellect that equates typical humans. He possesses perfect grasp of conversational skills though not to the depths of a mastermind who is a master of diplomacy, inspiration, intimidation, etc. Unfortunately he is only limited to a childlike vocabulary due to the…
Curse of Commercialism: E
A skill similar to Innocent Monster that warps the servant dependent on modern view and portrayal. Nowadays even the most famous heroes are not believed to have existed, while Rider is still believed in by children across the world and that Santa gifts them every year and as such is very vulnerable to the whims of the people.
His physical appearance has become that of a mascot. This skill only affects the appearance of Rider and not his physical prowess or abilities as of yet.
"At least I'm not as bad as that poor Orion guy. Who thought that was a good idea?!"
Divinity: C
The measure of whether one has Divine Spirit aptitude or not. At high levels one is treated as a mixed race of a Divine Spirit. It also has an effect which reduces special defensive values called "purge defence" in proportion to the Divinity's Rank. It can break through Skills such as Protection of the Faith and Enlightenment of the Sacred Fig.
Much like how the tales of Santa Clause interweave aspects of the Allfather Odin into her legend, Rider is a cultural descendent of that Gods Divine Stallion, Slepnir.
Monstrous Strength: B
A Skill that temporarily grants a rank-up to one's Strength parameter for a time limit determined by the ranking of this Skill. This Skill is borne from the holder's nature as a monster or Demonic Beast.
As a natural beast, he possesses rather wild power and absolute high spirits of youth!!
Noble Phantasm
Lore & Character
Creators Notes:I know there's a snowballs chance in hell this one will win but after doing Santa last year, I was contractually obliged to make Rudolf. Stay tuned as next year I make Jeanne d'Arc as the Easter Bunny.
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Faceclaim:
Source: jameszapata.deviantart.com/art/Legend-of-the-Cryptids-Bloody-Evil-Santa-Clause-342255950
True Name: Saint Nikolaos -Spoiler:
Aliases: Santa Claus, King of Gifting, Father Christmas, Father Frost,Spoiler:
Region: Greece
Source: History, Legend of Nicholas, Myth of Santa Claus, Nasuverse
Class: Caster
Other Classes: Ruler, Rider, Archer
Alignement: Neutral Good
Traits: Human, Servant, Divine, Earth, Pseudo-Servant
Parameters:
STR: C END: D
AGI: E MAG: EX
LCK: B NP: EX
Class Skill:
Item Construction EX - because of his identity as the origin of Santa Claus and derivative figures, Nikolaos has this skill at A+, but only being capable of making toys, with but a bit of magic properties, but in obscene amounts and at an inhuman pace.Spoiler:
Territory Creation B - Both of Caster’s halfs were competent enough in their own specialties to create and maintain a Workshop. As neither of the two has anything that would add much to the other’s variation of the skill, the resulting combination display no higher rank than either of the halfs’.
Personal Skill:
Divinity E - As a canonized saint, Nikolaos does have some level of divinity, however, Caster does not display it as prominently as fellow saints,Spoiler:
Nicene Creed B - “But those who say: 'There was a time when he was not;' and 'He was not before he was made;' and 'He was made out of nothing,' or 'He is of another substance' or 'essence,' or 'The Son of God is created,' or 'changeable,' or 'alterable'— they are condemned by the holy catholic and apostolic Church”.
This skill denotes Nikolaos being present at the Council of Nicaea when the faith in Christ’s divinity was established as a doctrine. It’s effects come down to inducing a rank down to all parameters of any enemy that denies Christian faith. The enemy is given a Magic Resistance check to resist each parameter individually as the effects are, ultimately, a curse.
Additionally, Caster has a secondary effect whenever an enemy explicitly insults Christ or denies his divinity in front of him: Caster undergoes a strength boost and get a bit uncontrollable, but after the fight is ended, he will lose his divinity and this skill for a single day. This effects stems from how Saint Nikolaos punched Arius, an Arian Bishop, in that very same council, being stripped of his bishophood, only to be forgiven later as Jesus gave him back his belongings as a bishop.
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10 Days to go and 8 entrees in so far. This contest seems a bit quieter than the others, though it will make voting and commentary easier.
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It's not unusual to have a lull in posting; I've noticed the most posts come at the beginning and end of the contest period. But yeah, it's a bit of a harder prompt than the previous ones. I kind of lucked out with my entries cause I expected the theme to be Christmas and had some ideas jotted down.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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"Christmas? A festival of avarice and meretricious sentiment, if you ask me. It seems you all need a harsh lesson on the true spirit of Christmas, ee hee hee. ...You'll understand why that's funny in a minute."Alignment: Lawful Neutral
Assassin of Charity
"Expecting a sweet young girl acting as Father Christmas? Eee hee hee, too bad! You're stuck with this old man Krampus."
STR: D
END: E
AGI: D
MAG: C
LUCK: A
NP: B
Class Skills
Presence Concealment (D): The capacity to hide one's presence as a Servant. It is a common Class Skill of the Assassin class. Hides one's presence as a Servant. Suitable for spying. A low ranking of Presence Concealment unbecoming for an Assassin to the level that a Servant can infer one's presence at once. Although he is in the Assassin class, the act of assassination is near impossible for him.
Personal Skills
Golden Rule (A-): A Skill that refers to the measurement of one's fortune to acquire wealth. As one who most of his life in the pursuit of gathering as much wealth as possible, it is only natural that Assassin has a naturally high rank in this skill, however due to him being a more profligate spender than he was in the past has reduced the power of this Skill a little.
Sinner’s Chastisement (A): The counterpart of the Saint’s Gift skill, this is the ability of a Krampus to punish the wicked at Christmastime. With just a glance, one’s sins are appraised and an appropriate punishment is devised. Though painful and humiliating, the punishments are quite lenient, formed as they are with the sentiment “Learn your lesson and don’t do it again”. When paired with his Noble Phantasm, this is quite the redundant skill, but it is one that every good Krampus must have.
Noble Phantasm
Lore
Yay, finally had a weird little idea. Maybe not the best I've ever done, but an entry I'm satisfied with.
Class: Alter Ego
True Name: Snowflower
Alignment: Lawful Good
"Ah, p-please allow me help with that, milady...!"
"Thank you..! I can't believe this... You too, Mr. Santon...!"
"A santon is a doll, though, Maria..."
".....(Shh. Don't correct her, trash.)"
Parameters:
Strength: E
Endurance: D
Agility: B
Mana: B
Luck: D+
Noble Phantasm: A
Lore:
It is said that Marie Antoinette had many interests. Fashion, theatre, music, gardening, design, and so on. But one held dearly to her heart was riding, in particular the sleigh rides common to the northern courts and her home country of Austria. Back home, she had frequently been a party to sleighing-parties given by her mother and other Austrian nobles, and she regarded them with a particular fondness.
In 1776, during a particularly severe winter, Paris was blanketed in powdery white snow, and it is said the young queen hesitantly, delicately, hopefully entertained a fleeting, nostalgic wish to introduce the Austrian trend to her new home. By luck and circumstance, a number of sleighs had been found in the stables of the palace, and the King had several more constructed for Marie, with other princes and princesses following suit to obtain their own.
For a single winter, the streets of France were flush with drawn sleighs and beautiful song, harnessed with pedigree steed and ringing with bells. Elaborately decorated with elegant plumes and ornamental gild, the unusual sight of a sleigh traveling through the parks and roadways of Paris brought delight both to riders and spectators. It is said that the rides were so charming that the Queen and her companions extended their trips as far as the Champs Elysees and accompanying boulevards.
No one in the court believed that the queen could be blamed for so innocent an amusement. But already her enemies and detractors twisted her every action against her. "The queen traversed the streets of Paris in an Austrian sleigh." It was not long before her sleigh rides in the snow were contrasted against the homeless and destitute freezing in the streets, drawing scorn and criticism to the throne.
When word of the political reaction to her trips reached the Queen, her reaction was swift. On her command, despite the cost that had went into renovating it and the joy it had brought, her beloved sleighs were immediately preserved and put in storage where they would stay for the rest of her time in France. No matter how appropriate the weather, never again would the Queen of France allow herself to resume this one childhood amusement or to celebrate Christmas in the ways of her home.
A memory of her youth, of Austria, of the girl she had once been and would never be allowed to revisit.
An Alter Ego whose greatest sin was wanting a shard of happiness all her own.
----After all, happiness is to the people.
Class Skills:
Christmas Love MAX
Rank: EX
An id_es evolved from Saint's Gift. Originally a skill that enriched hearts by giving presents, as an Alter Ego, Snowflower is able to directly grant happiness simply through her very presence. Within a limited area-of-effect, no matter how abrasive or incompatible the personality, Snow Flower's very presence brings health, cheer, and good will. Disregarding the very concept of affection points, a cheat skill that seeks out the max value automatically.
Personal Skills:
Alluring Nightingale
Rank: A
A mesmerizing skil possessed by those with a beautiful natural voice as well as a declaration of the exercise of power by royalty. A charm magecraft-like effect towards those of the opposite sex, evasive is possible by means of a Magic Resistance skill, but one can abate it to some extent as long as he or she maintains the will to resist. Combined with the bells of her sleigh and the music of a good-for-nothing itinerant composer, the rank of this skill is greatly bolstered over her original, providing a powerful and lovely acoustic attack.
Princess of Loveliness (Snow)
Rank: A+
A Skill representing one's charismatic nature in regards not to leadership, but the ability to charm the people around oneself, particularly in the snow. At this rank, simply by existing, Alter Ego may obtain devoted attendants and drivers simply by existing. In particular, if they are in her vicinity, it is a practical certainty she will obtain the existence of a cute spy, a dirty composer, and a moody noble as part of her holiday attachés.
Pathetic Constitution
Rank B+
A Skill that forces the pathetic nature of the bearer outwards, with all the repercussions of such. The heavy weight of an individual’s tragedy is often too much for a stranger to bear, ignoring the bearer to salvage their own sanity and conscience, however selfishly. However, those that face the bearer’s pathetic nature are compelled to help. In layman’s terms, it is a “moe power that even the most evil villain will be forced to acknowledge."
Because she is so outwardly cheerful, the rank of this skill is somewhat reduced, but to those who see through to the bruised heart underneath her radiant smile, it is a weapon of mass destruction against the walls of their heart. In practical terms, she is granted the equivalent of Presence Concealment at rank B, unless a perception check is passed, at which point the pitying effect will take root deep in their subconscious.
(Credit to Express for the skill)
Noble Phantasm(s):
Crystal Sleigh - Precious Memories are Eternal
Type: Barrier
Rank: B
A bounded field in the form of a hand or harness drawn sleigh sized for two, representing the reconstructed sleighs that Marie Antoinette had built on the one occasion she allowed herself to miss her home and youth. Other than manifesting a powerful protection upon its occupants, the sleigh has no offensive capability of its own, and has no effect if not paired with a mount.
Where this Noble Phantasm shines is in its ability to empower the individual or beast who pulls the sleigh. Whether it is pulled by hand or harnessed to a fine beast, whoever helps Snowflower to pull her sleigh has all of their abilities increased by one rank, and are protected by the same defensive power of the sleigh itself. The "armor class" rank of the sleigh and the one who pulls it are raised by at least a hundred, with additional plus modifiers available based on the depth of their commitment to her.
Nostalgia Breaker - Glory to the Christmas Past
Type: Anti-Army
Rank: A
A Noble Phantasm born from the original Noble Phantasm of Marie Antoinette, itself a representation of the glory of the French monarchy. In the case of Snowflower, it instead represents her longing for the Austria of home, a selfish but still beautiful horse made of tempered glass and enclosed with water and flakes of snow. If the true Noble Phantasm of Marie represents the light of her beloved France, this version is filled with the rose-tinted memories of her cast-aside childhood. To look inside the horse is to see all of your fondest memories of Christmas within.
By unleashing its true name, Snowflower may harness the steed to her sleigh, dashing across the battlefield and scattering snow everywhere she passes. The snow is bitter cold and deceptively damaging if direct contact is made, but the sight of it is nevertheless a source of joy and can't help but inspire happy memories of childhood. Those who witness the sight recover health and mana and negative statuses are cancelled out.
Last edited by Sunny; December 16th, 2017 at 08:24 PM.
Snowflower: Madame, this is amazing, my Marie bias not-withstanding. Alter-Egos are a bit rare here, to my account, so this sheet is by far the best Alter-Ego sheet I've seen (largely because it's the first '-').
... Also, is it true that Marie Antoinette once sleighed in Paris?
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Dreams of swallow cuts.
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summs up a lot of my ironic weeaboo circles
There are accounts of it since she took other ladies with her. Also I've been to Versailles and have seen the room full of coaches and carriages and there was a sleigh in there.
"We don't need martyrs right now. We need heroes. A hero would die for his country, but he'd much rather live for it." -Josiah Bartlet
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Character Source: Google+
Class: Rider
Other Classes: Saver, Saber
True Name: Arthur Pendragon
Alignment: True-Neutral
Place of Origin: Europe
Parameters:
STR: B
END: A
AGI: B
MGI: E
LCK: B
NP: C-EX
Height: 181cm
Weight: 68 Kg
Likes: Christmas, His Daughter and Gifts
Dislikes: Morgrinch
Talent: Gift Giving
Natural Enemy: Mordred
Attribute: Santa
Traits:
Armament: Excalisleigh
Catalyst: Santas Hat
Class Skills:Riding A:
"One who cannot lead their sleigh, has no right to be Santa!"
Taking his Riding to the farthest level, Rider is able to cross from continent to continent in barely moments.
Magic Resistance C-B:
"Guard me tonight, O'frosty winds!"
On the Night of Christmas, Rider gains a boost to his resistance of the mage arts by one rank, this is due to the harsh, yet cold winds of Christmas Eve sooth him more than any other winds.
Personal Skills:
Promise of Gifts (True) B+:
"Rebellion is not the answer, allow us to bless each-other with gifts."
Boosts the users and the receivers weakest stats by one.
Saint's Gift C-A:
"The man who just keeps giving!"
Rider is able to tell clearly what gift belongs to who, but due to his excitement, he is quite prone to getting some of the gifts wrong in the end.
Santa's "Noble" Steed (True) A:
“A King is nothing without the mount that leads his charge!”
Horses seemingly flock to Rider and can be used to replace any lost Reindeers.
Noble Phantasm(s):
Sleigh of Promised Victory
Excalisleigh
Rank: C-EX
Type: Anti-Presents
Range: ???
Max Targets: ???
To protect the noble goal of Christmas is the Sleighs true strength, while normally used as a way to transport gifts around the world, if one is to threaten the Joy of those who Believe, Excalisleigh takes on a golden form that streaks through the night.
It is unknown whether or not one can block such an attack, but it has been stated that a being known as Morgrinch has made a hormunculus out of Rider's DNA as to stop the Santa servant's ability to deliver gifts.
The Bell that Jingles in the Night
Calibell
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit
Range: House Wide
Max Targets: 7.6 Billion (Only within the Area)
The bell that always seems to ring when Santa has arrived, it seemingly sends those who hears it into a sleepy state, just so Rider can deliver the gifts he's meant to deliver.
Rider seems to be affected as well, especially when a child stays awake despite hearing the bell, seems even he feels tired despite his near limitless energy.
Those Who Once Served, Return As Those Who Guide
The Reindeer Table
Rank: A+
Type: Anti-Steed
Range: ???
Max Targets: 1
The Knights that once served as Riders strongest return once again in unlikely forms, these forms allow them to lead him to victory once again!
Instead this time, they lead him as Reindeer and fight as not knights but the beings that lead his strongest Sleigh.
God I feel sorry for them.
Lore:
Once seen with fame as the King of Knights, Arthur Pendragon takes on the name of Santa and the class of Rider as to show the world the true meaning of Christmas, but due to the spoken rule that Santa must never be seen, he is unable to show his face to the world and hides himself away in the shadows as he crosses the world delivering gifts.
Alas it seems someone has plans to destroy the newly anointed Santa in the form of his female clone, Mordred! Who would do such a thing to end Christmas!? Obviously Morgrinch, his salty sister who doesn't understand that she just simply sucks as a Santa.
Personality:
Arthur is originally deeply plagued by his desire to save Britain to form an eternal utopia, and even while recognizing Manaka as potentially evil, he follows her commands to fulfill his wish. However, upon meeting Ayaka in the Garden he realizes that his wishes had already been entrusted to the present, and he becomes determined to protect the present over the past. He becomes a father figure and guardian for Ayaka from that point on until the Second War.
He has the sense of values of a matured man, as well as a strong sense of justice. He will bring things that bring virtue and goodness closer, and will ascertain those that bring atrocity. He is the image of a hero one can feel good about.
In Ayaka's eyes, he is the ideal prince in addition to his station as her protector. However, for a brief period his style of speech was mingled with nihilistic mannerisms. Not only that, but he had his bouts of hypocritical courtesy as he would at times tease or make fun of Ayaka.
He is good at eating, but also good at making (cooking). However, due to his experiences with Manaka and the large breakfasts that she makes, he seems to think that big meals are the staple for Japanese people.
In Japanese, the way he refers to himself differs depending on who he talks to. To Ayaka, he uses 'boku'. To his enemies, he uses 'watashi'.
Astonishing words whose veracity cannot be judged even with the help of Chaldea’s system but, at the very least, he won’t spew lies to his Master. He places his wholehearted trust towards his Master. Deception and betrayal are unthinkable.
As he takes up the title as Santa, Arthur becomes more kindhearted, allowing his somewhat child-like interests to take over as he experiences the joy he brings by traversing the world and delivering gifts to all the girls and boys of the world.
That by all means does not mean he isn't serious though, he retains his somewhat kingly personality when faced with a problem he cannot just barrel through.
Relationships:
Morgrinch:
Riders relationship with Morgan Le Fay, or rather Morgrinch as she is called during Christmas is rather strained, she had freely created a female clone of Rider in the attempt of ruining his rain as Santa, solely because she had not been chosen to wear the soft red "Crown".
Mordred:
A clone made from Riders DNA in the hopes of thwarting his chances at being Santa, unlike Morgrinch, Rider seems to hold a slight fondness of Mordred, going as far as to not truly hurt her in battle if he is given the chance.
The Reindeer Table:
Rider does not strain to say how much he enjoys the company of his "Knights", even going as far as to say he understands them completely despite the obvious lack of comprehensible English that they will never be able to speak.
Creator Notes: (Optional)
This was originally in the Create-A-Servant tab until someone told me this existed, so I decided to edit it to fit this place.
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I hope this is sufficient, not that knowledgeable on making servants profiles.
Whats the use of putting anything here if no one will read this?